Date: 25 Aug 2016 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 20
I do love Emmett. Wonderful job.
Date: 25 Aug 2016 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 19
Edward being selfless.......hmm. I guess there is some sense left in him.
Date: 25 Aug 2016 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
Aww, Jakey and Leah. I don't usually like that idea, but in this fic it totally makes sense. Now, can someone kick Rose's ass?
Date: 24 Aug 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
I don't trust Rose one bit.
Date: 24 Aug 2016 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
Sooooo worth it.
Date: 24 Aug 2016 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
lascivious.....naughty Bella..... is perfect for Emmybear
Date: 23 Aug 2016 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh Emmett, you are so adorable. I love how you capture his sense of humor, hoping to see more interaction with the wolf pack as well.
Date: 23 Aug 2016 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love your Emmett, you maintained his essential character while giving him enough backbone to not be Rosalie's doormat. The story flows nicely, characters are developing nicely and I can see myself getting more intrested in where this is going. What is distracting though is the frequent typos - nothing a good proofreader wouldn't catch. it's easy to miss our own mistakes, I think in part because when you have heard the characters in your head and then go back to look for errors, you tend to read what you know is there and mis the mistakes. If that makes any sense...... Anyway, on to the next chapter.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 20
thtat was good
Author's Response:
Great! I am happy you liked it!
~Juliet