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Reviewer: Ariah Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

i really enjoyed this story .. too bad it was a oneshot as i would have liked to know what happened after they rescued Bella ... ever consider continuing it?

Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

So, is this the basic plot for the other Mate and Mother?  If so, or if, not, I would love to see it updated.  I like this.

Reviewer: mimigrace Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

trippy. but nawww, baby edward was so adorable <3

Reviewer: raro Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

I think this one shot has amazing story potential and it would be great if you did continue it.

 

Reviewer: emmeylou Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like this a lot! Wish it wasn't just a one-shot... the mother-bond thing between Edward and Bella is unique and it would be very interesting to see how it develops, as well as her relationship with Carlisle and the rest of the "children".

Reviewer: Zamar22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is a very interesting premis.  I think you should continue the story!!!

I would really like to see some interaction between Carlisle and Bella.  How does she handle the whole suddenly your a mate and mother thing?  Is it instinctual or does she have a hard time.  What about the Volturi?  So many questions.  I really hope you consider continuing - it really is a good story idea.

Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting story. I think one more chapter would be nice to explaine more of what happens with Bella and the Cullens.

Reviewer: Webbie298 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

This would make such a wonderful story.  Maybe one more chapter so we can see the relationship form between Bella, Carlisle and the others?  Please!!!!!

Reviewer: shandra Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

I liked it. You know you could make this one-shot into a story

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

I want more!!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

You have an interesting idea- tell me more!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was good. question though: was Edward in love with her because he treated her a LOT like she was HIS mate instead of his mother. I liked it though. thanks again bye

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