Date: 08 Mar 2013 8:16 PM Title: Tripping the Veil
As a rule I generally dont read scary stuff,but this was intrigueing. Well done.
Date: 25 Sep 2012 7:48 AM Title: Tripping the Veil
Really intriguing story--wow. I went back to read it again to catch all the small but significant details. Great job!! :)
~Cassandra :)
Date: 02 Nov 2010 5:50 PM Title: Tripping the Veil
SUCKY!!!!!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 2:31 AM Title: Tripping the Veil
That was freaky. It gave a major flashback from when I nwas young. I grew up in Philly and we had a mental hospital byberry that did a lot of the things that you described.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:57 PM Title: Tripping the Veil
Fun story to read! And that Felix seems one creepy dude..
Ow, and your writing was great btw :)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:12 PM Title: Tripping the Veil
I loved this story, all I could remember as I read it was how much I was sucked into it...even betaing it, I had to read it twice to make sure I was actually editing instead of letting myself get lost in the story. Well done, love!
Date: 17 Oct 2010 1:31 AM Title: Tripping the Veil
Excellent! This could stand on its own or begin a longer story. No matter how you look at it, the originality and just plain smnarts, stands out a mile! Go you!
Date: 16 Oct 2010 7:55 PM Title: Tripping the Veil
WOW! just that! I really wanna see what's next!
Date: 16 Oct 2010 7:00 PM Title: Tripping the Veil
OOH that gave me chills. that was good though. I can't believe you didn't win. :( great work.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 5:17 PM Title: Tripping the Veil
omg............whoa........
Date: 16 Oct 2010 3:15 PM Title: Tripping the Veil
Oh what a fun story! Great for Halloween. Well written ... thanks!