Date: 14 Jan 2018 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 6
Please update and finish story.
Date: 14 Jul 2011 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 6
Good Chapter.....i believe it is bella just with blonde hair
Author's Response:
thank you, maybe ;-)
Date: 13 Jul 2011 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
I like Tanya. i like how Edward feels like he has to take care of her and Rose. Great chapter. Can't wait for an update.
Author's Response:
Me 2, we get to see a bit of the old Edward when he is with them. Thank you bb
Date: 13 Jul 2011 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
well im excited that they are undercover now and to see what happen next
Author's Response:
thank you bb
Date: 13 Jul 2011 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
Yes! please keep going:)
Author's Response:
thank you, i will
Date: 13 Jul 2011 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love the chapter. Tanya is a sweet kid. cant wait till next chapter i have a feeling that runner was Bella, i hope so anyway
Author's Response:
lol, I hope your right too. I'm glad you like Tanya :-)
Date: 13 Jul 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
Close, very close :) Thanks for update!! x
Author's Response:
lol, close indeed, thank you
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hum! I hope soon!!!!!
Author's Response:
:-)
Date: 13 Jul 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 4- Dragons & Punishment
Bella POV!!!!
Author's Response:
Most people didn't want an BPOV, but I'll see about one later maybe. :-) thank you
Date: 14 Jun 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Smart man
well i hope that he figures it out soon !
Author's Response:
:-)
Date: 14 Jun 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Smart man
just found this story , so sad about the subject matter but that is real life, hope he finds Bella and saves her from this life, you a good writer. How often to you update?
Author's Response:
thank you, i will add in some happy chapters later, it's not all sad lol, i just updated when i can but no i don't have school right s i hope to update once a week, fingers crossed.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Smart man
Estou gostando muito de sua história, ela aborda um tema melindroso de nossa sociedade e de importante repercusão, acho que você é bem corajosa em expor para nos leitores. Parabéns e pode contar comigo para continuar a ler.
Date: 13 Jun 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Smart man
Interesting chapter. You're right, the chapter was a little icky due to subject contanet but hey, you warned us, right?
I'm guessing who ever the narrator is is the guy or knows who took Bella years ago. I'm also guessing it's for sex trafficing? Intersting twist if i am right
Great chapter and I can't wait to read your next chapter!
Congrats on finishing school for the summer!
Author's Response:
thank you, i know it's not easy to read, i like your theory ;-) bb
Date: 13 Jun 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Smart man
I think Edward would kill him, without thinking! ... or he would suffer ???.. thanks for update! :) .. x
Author's Response:
hmm, i agree :-)
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 4- Dragons & Punishment
Continue for EPOV. If you tell BPOV then we will know before E. The mystery is the best part. I just found this and I am truly enjoying it.
Author's Response:
thank you for reviewing, I am writing a chapter from bpov and discuss it with my beta, I'm glad your like the mystery part.
Date: 15 May 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 4- Dragons & Punishment
Here from Bella! I am dying to find out where she is and what she has been doing! Keep writing, Love the story.
Author's Response:
thank you, I'm happy you are still with me :-)
Date: 15 May 2011 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 4- Dragons & Punishment
Good Chapter....
i would like to hear some in bella pov
Author's Response:
thank you, I will take your opition into consideration :-)
Date: 14 May 2011 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 4- Dragons & Punishment
still here... can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
thank you ;-)
Date: 13 May 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 4- Dragons & Punishment
Please keep going! Very interesting so far!
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 13 May 2011 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 4- Dragons & Punishment
Do you want to hear from Bella pov? And what she has been up to or do you want the entire story told through Edwards’s pov. Let me know.
Um, I'd like to vote a, "Hell Ya," on getting a Bella POV... sneaky girl throwing that in there, but I still love ya... ;)
Author's Response:
lol, thanks,
Date: 12 May 2011 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 4- Dragons & Punishment
Love the chapter. I like the story in E POV, but it wouldnt hurt to give us something about what Bella has been up to
Author's Response:
thank you, I think you have made a good point, thank you
Date: 12 May 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 4- Dragons & Punishment
i think a bella pov would be intresting to see whats been going on! cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 12 May 2011 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
yes please continue the story! great job so far!
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 12 May 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 4- Dragons & Punishment
Keep going!!!! Bella's POV would be nice, but it's your story so go with whatever you feel!!! Just don't give up!!
Author's Response:
thank you, I will follow your advice, thanks :-)
Date: 09 Apr 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
great chapter
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 09 Apr 2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
poor edward
Author's Response:
I know, hopefully things will start to look up for him. Thanks you for reviewing
Date: 26 Mar 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
I HAVE READ YOUR THREE CHAPTER YOU HAVE UP SO FAR AND I LIKE IT A LOT. I DO FEEL SORRY FOR EDWARD HE IS SUFFERING SO MUCH AND I UNDERSTAND EDWARD'S NEED TO BE WITH A WOMAN FROM TIME TO TIME BUT IF HE LOVES BELLA SO MUCH HOW CAN HE BE WITH TAYNA IS IT JUST FOR SEX OR DOES EDWARD REALLY LOVE HER ARE THEY MARRIED OR WHAT?
Author's Response:
don't worry you will find out about tanya soon enough
Date: 22 Mar 2011 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm liking a lot of your story , thanks for sharing
but I have a doubt, who really is Tanya in your story ? is she the girl that he first found or a friend with benefits of Edward ?
Author's Response:
don't worry you will find out about tanya soon.
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2011 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
I gotta say i do like the story and cant wait for him to find her.
I also have read a few of the reviews and I am with alot of the other readers when i say having Edward be a manwhore is not to my liking if he is so much in love with Bella,doesnt realy make alot of sense. and your answer of boys will be boys?
on another note, I think tanya is the girl he found not his lover. hope I am right.
Author's Response:
I can't tell you if your right about Tanya but you will find out soon. The reason I answered that comment for Edwards behavior is that I don't really want to change or influence others opitions right now. I want you to have your own view and if i'm successful, then most people's view and understanding will change as Edward changes himself. I also don't want to give to much away, I know some things are confusing right now but it will all make sense the further we get into the story. I hope my answer makes sense, sorry for rambling and thank you for reviewing.
Date: 21 Mar 2011 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
Is there going to be a problem between tanya and bella when he finds her? thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
I can't give to much away, But I ca say that Tanya is not bad or evil in this story.
Date: 21 Mar 2011 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
i think i'll like this story as it goes along few more chaps for me to understand the real plot.
Author's Response:
Yeah, It is a little confusing right now, but i promise it will come toghther.
Date: 21 Mar 2011 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
well i hope he gets help!
Author's Response:
me 2, the boy needs it ;-)
Date: 21 Mar 2011 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ok so much going on here .Pleae let him find Bella soon.
Author's Response:
yeah i know there is some information to process. Bella will appear maybe soon, maybe after next 2 chapters
Date: 21 Mar 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
I don't hate Edward...he is lost, completely and utterly lost. His behavioar is self destructive and totally understandable. However, Rose is right-he needs help, badly! He's swirling around above the drain ready to go down.
Question: I assumed that Emmett and Edward were brothers. However, when Rose was thinking about Emmett and Edward growing apart and Edward being "like another son to Charlie" I got the feeling that Emmett is Bella's brother/Charlie's son. Who does Emmett belong to?
Author's Response:
I'm glad you can see how lost he is. Most reader don't understand his action right now, I'm happy you do. Emmett is Bella's brother, charlies son. We will find out about him as we go on. I hope I answered your questions enough :-)
Date: 20 Mar 2011 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
I can't wait to read more of this story. I wonder how Bella might reappera in their lives again. Great chapter, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
thank you, i'm glad you are enjoying it
Date: 08 Mar 2011 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
Waite Im confused he is so in love with BELLA but he is with Tayna and all these other women I hear u about men being men but something just isnt adding up>>>>>>
Author's Response:
is he with Tanya? you'll ahve to wait and see
Date: 08 Mar 2011 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
More Please :)
Author's Response:
thank you, update soon hopefully
Date: 08 Mar 2011 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Seriously, how can he say he is still hung up on Bella when he is acting like a 'man whore' his words, not mine. Doesn't even make sense... If he still really loved her he would not be fucking everything in sight and taking blow jobs from the office whore!
Author's Response:
All I can say is that he very confused and messed up. Hopefully he will be explain himself over time. Remember he is jus human and a men as well. lol, thank you for reviewing I love hearing what you think :-)
Date: 07 Mar 2011 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love the story so far, I cant wait for him to find Bella. Im dieing to know who Tanya is to Edward cant wait for next chapter
Author's Response:
thank you, i'm happy you are enjoying it.
Date: 07 Mar 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
Excellent chapter, I liked flashback and Edward's talk with Charlie on New Years. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story so far
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 05 Mar 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
WOW I like but gee how much can he be missing her if can't keep it in his pants at all.....
Author's Response:
lol, boys will be boys.
Date: 05 Mar 2011 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Definitely interested and will check out the next couple of chapters. One thing that was a little off-putting was some contradictions in Edwards character/life - respected and wanting to climb the ladder but unapproachable wrecking his office (which he seems to love). And punching alot of colleagues seems a very unrealistic - surely he'd be shown the door given that he's so new?! All that said, I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next. C x
Author's Response:
lol, yes I agree with your commments, but you will find out how he has managed to achieve some of the things he has so far as the chapter go on. Thanks for reading nd reviewing.
Date: 05 Mar 2011 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very intense beginning. I like it.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I hope you enjoy the rest :-)