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Date: 02 Dec 2020 11:31 PM Title: Everything I Never Knew I Wanted...

Loved it!

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Date: 01 Dec 2020 4:53 AM Title: Anger Management for the Insecure

Loved it!

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Date: 01 Dec 2020 1:03 AM Title: A Trip to Paradise for the Newly Wed

Loved it!

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Date: 30 Nov 2020 5:14 AM Title: A Love Worth Waiting For

Loved it!

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Date: 27 Nov 2020 4:06 PM Title: A Prelude to Forever

Loved it!

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Date: 23 Nov 2020 7:27 PM Title: Boys Will Be Boys

Poor Alice!

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Date: 22 Nov 2020 8:36 PM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

Poor drunk Edward! Hilarious chapter

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Date: 22 Nov 2020 6:43 PM Title: On The Road Part 1

Loved it!

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Date: 22 Nov 2020 5:02 PM Title: Empire Builder to the Windy City

Loved it!

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Date: 22 Nov 2020 3:45 PM Title: A Shiner for the Birthday Boy

Loved it!

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Date: 22 Nov 2020 2:53 PM Title: Tying Up Loose Ends

Loved it!

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Date: 21 Nov 2020 7:25 PM Title: A Watershed Moment for the Rap Star

Loved it!

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Date: 21 Nov 2020 6:59 PM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

Loved it

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Date: 21 Nov 2020 4:31 PM Title: The Stuff of Nightmares...

Poor Edward!

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Date: 21 Nov 2020 3:13 PM Title: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

Loved it!

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Date: 21 Nov 2020 1:53 PM Title: Male Bonding for the Contrite

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2020 12:18 PM Title: Two Steps Forward, Three Steps Back

Loved it! Poor Edward!

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Date: 20 Nov 2020 12:18 PM Title: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged

Loved it!

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Date: 20 Nov 2020 11:11 AM Title: Sage Advice For The Overworked

Loved it!

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Date: 20 Nov 2020 10:23 AM Title: A Breath Of Fresh Air For The Punk'd

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Date: 06 Nov 2020 9:28 AM Title: Sweet Torture For The Lovesick Fool

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Date: 06 Nov 2020 6:35 AM Title: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed

Loved it!

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Date: 05 Nov 2020 10:09 AM Title: Prelude To A Proposal

Loved it!

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Date: 05 Nov 2020 9:23 AM Title: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist

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Date: 05 Nov 2020 8:41 AM Title: A Perfect Plan Comes Together

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Date: 04 Nov 2020 2:27 PM Title: Symbol Of Eternity For The Anxious Suitor

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Date: 03 Nov 2020 3:43 PM Title: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler

Loved it!

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Date: 03 Nov 2020 3:05 PM Title: The Ugly Truths

Loved it!

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Date: 28 Oct 2020 11:56 AM Title: Return To The Scene Of The Crime

Great chapter

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Date: 27 Oct 2020 1:14 PM Title: A Boisterous Farewell To SoCal

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2020 8:49 AM Title: Karaoke For Cavemen

Awesome

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Date: 25 Oct 2020 6:32 PM Title: Day Trip For Bird Watchers

Great

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Date: 25 Oct 2020 6:32 PM Title: Day Trip For Bird Watchers

Great

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Date: 25 Oct 2020 3:25 AM Title: Copious Amounts of Alcohol For The Bilingual

Bella is hilarious when she's drunk

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2020 2:38 AM Title: That Which Doesn't Kill Us...

Amazing!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2020 5:49 PM Title: Crash And Burn

Stupid Edward!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2020 10:44 PM Title: Warm Love For The Impatient

Great!

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Date: 11 Sep 2020 10:19 PM Title: Valentines For The Enamored

Amazing!

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Date: 11 Sep 2020 10:09 PM Title: Setback To A Full Recovery

Excellent

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Date: 11 Sep 2020 9:57 PM Title: A Long Awaited Reunion

Great!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2020 9:57 PM Title: A Long Awaited Reunion

Great!

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Date: 11 Sep 2020 8:38 PM Title: A Prelude To Aspen

Awesome

Reviewer: snowbutterfly32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2020 3:54 AM Title: Karaoke For Cavemen

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowbutterfly32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2020 2:58 PM Title: Perfect Dates For The Redeemed

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2020 8:36 AM Title: The Flipside of Despair For The Undeserving

Loved it! 

Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2020 5:12 PM Title: A Narrow Escape for The Born Skeptic

Sweet chapter!  I don't like Simone or Camille! 

Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2020 5:17 AM Title: CPR for The Dead Heart

Loved it! 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2015 8:14 AM Title: Everything I Never Knew I Wanted...

thanks for sharing this epic duo on here with us ;) please come back and complete the sequel asap ;D

Reviewer: smurff88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 2:03 AM Title: Copious Amounts of Alcohol For The Bilingual

I just want to let you know that I like this story as well as the first.

I like that i can get to hear what was going on in Edwards head when certain

things were going on. L. Jacox

Reviewer: mamarobsten Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2013 6:25 PM Title: CPR for The Dead Heart

:)

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2012 12:05 PM Title: Everything I Never Knew I Wanted...

Brilliant!!



Author's Response: Thanks very much! glad you liked it.

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2012 4:22 PM Title: Everything I Never Knew I Wanted...

Well, I loved LRM.. I always like hearing from Edward. And I can't wait for sequel. I cant really pick favorite moment.. i just love when these two are together! So thank you for sharing



Author's Response: Thank so much! the first chapter of the sequel is almost ready to post!

Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2012 3:10 AM Title: Everything I Never Knew I Wanted...

Love it!!! fabulous story and look forward to more.



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Stellarrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:57 AM Title: Everything I Never Knew I Wanted...

Loved this story!  Can't wait for the sequel.



Author's Response: the first chapter of the sequel is almost ready to post. Thanks very much!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2012 12:00 AM Title: Everything I Never Knew I Wanted...

 I have to agree....your favorites are my favorites. I also loved their 1st time, the honeymoon & the make up sex!

Great chapter & story. I look forward to the sequel!



Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2012 10:26 PM Title: Everything I Never Knew I Wanted...

Beautiful ending. Can't wait to read the sequel.

The best parts for me were Edward's hilarious views of Emmett's behaviour. I couldn't stop myself from laughing out loud.



Author's Response: first chapter of sequel is almost ready to post. Thanks very much! I promise a lot more Emmett!

Reviewer: felix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2012 10:07 PM Title: Everything I Never Knew I Wanted...

I loved reading V&V and LRM looking forward to the sequel.This has to be my favourite chapter.xx

Author's Response: THank so much! I love to hear that.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2012 9:54 PM Title: Everything I Never Knew I Wanted...

This was an awesome read. I loved V&V but getting it from Edwards pov was something else entirely. Theres only a few stories that i have read that I was like i would love to have the others pov, and this is one of them. GREAT JOB. Now with the sequel are you going to do it like you did these two? or are you just going to throw both of their povs in the story? Im looking forward to the sequel.



Author's Response: for the sequel, I've decided to only do one story, but will bounce back and forth between B and E's perspective. I will try to keep it at one pov per chapter though...we'll see. Thanks! sequel will start posting very soon.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2012 5:39 PM Title: Anger Management for the Insecure

Great to see this update.



Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2012 5:44 AM Title: Anger Management for the Insecure

OMG I laughed my ass off at Emmett! That was priceless! I have sooooo missed this story. So glad you got the chapter done.
Shannon

Author's Response: Thanks very much! the sequel will start very soon.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 11:12 PM Title: Anger Management for the Insecure

Loved it!  I'm glad you didn't "retell" the story. Edward was so wrong to tell Bella he wishes she was afraid of her own shadow. Big mistake....huge!



Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you like the story

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:48 AM Title: A Trip to Paradise for the Newly Wed

Oh, you made me tear up at the end.  I love how much E loves her.



Author's Response: thanks very much!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 4:32 PM Title: A Trip to Paradise for the Newly Wed

great update !!!



Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 3:26 PM Title: A Trip to Paradise for the Newly Wed

Edward is adorable!!  I know most men aren't as introspective but he gives us all hope & sighs!

Great job!



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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 2:44 PM Title: A Trip to Paradise for the Newly Wed

It seems like a very long wait for updates recently but this was a great chapter. I really enjoyed it. Hopefully one or both will be back before Christmas



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Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 2:42 AM Title: A Trip to Paradise for the Newly Wed

Love it and look forward to more. Love horndog Edward!!



Author's Response: me too! lol Thanks!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 1:36 AM Title: A Love Worth Waiting For

Wow, I seriously want  a redo of my honeymoon because I am pretty sure you just wrote a hotter story than my wedding night.  No, wait I know you did.  Great job.  Loved the emotion and closeness these two share.



Author's Response: believe me, it was hotter than mine too. lol. especialy since hubs caught a stomach virus as the wedding reception... spent a lot of time hugging the toilet. during the honeymoon.. i laugh now...well actually I laughed then as well. Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 10:15 PM Title: A Love Worth Waiting For

I gave it up (in my dreams) to him a long time ago!
That was beautiful!

Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 9:18 PM Title: A Love Worth Waiting For

I love him :)



Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 1:58 PM Title: A Love Worth Waiting For

Don't worry about responding, just write more chapters. Love it.,

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 3:48 AM Title: A Love Worth Waiting For

Loved this from his point of view.  I can't wait to see where they go on their honeymoon.

Thamk you for the update.



Author's Response: Thanks very much. as you can see, it's taken me forever to catch up with reviews. there was a glitch that kept my responses from appearing...but i finally figured out how to get around that. I've started writing the sequel and the beta says the first chapter will be back to me by Tuesday.

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 4:35 PM Title: A Prelude to Forever

this chapter was great.  I'm surprised Charlie kept his cool when Edward didm't think he could "protect" Bella for 1 night - too funny.  I enjoy the "guy's" pov regarding the wedding.  thanks for writing

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 9:24 PM Title: A Prelude to Forever

Oohh....cannot wait!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 8:29 AM Title: A Prelude to Forever

I just cant get over how much I love that you did this companion story to V&V I love his pov.

Reviewer: tiina Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 12:07 AM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

Hello Emmamama,

this was the funniest thing I ever have read! Thank you very much and please go on.

Lol - Tiina

 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2011 6:24 AM Title: Boys Will Be Boys

:-D)

Reviewer: bookonabeach Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2011 4:13 AM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

excellent chapter, loved EPOV so much better, so emotional. Well done.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 9:43 AM Title: Boys Will Be Boys

Got to love emmett to funny.

Reviewer: leesmee Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 2:17 PM Title: CPR for The Dead Heart

This looks good so far ... fingers crossed ;)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 9:46 AM Title: Boys Will Be Boys

;)

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Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 11:15 AM Title: Boys Will Be Boys

I am enjoying both of the stories very much!  I am glad Jasper got the drop on Shawn!



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Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 7:31 PM Title: Boys Will Be Boys

you make me smile!



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2011 4:09 PM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

bout fell out my chair to funny.  Emmett and Edward bonding OMFG  and Cris to funny

 



Author's Response:

lol Thanks very much!

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2011 12:06 AM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

That was some really funny stuff.. Can't wait for more..



Author's Response:

Thanks!  glad you liked it!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2011 11:20 PM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

I've been away on vacation without internet access- LRM was the first update I read.  So glad....it made my day!  I think it was a tie between the Tantra chair and Edward/Chris when Edward called the woman in Pennsylvania as my favorite parts!



Author's Response:

i liked Chris hiding in the closet myself...and Edward's inner drunk musings.  lol.  Thanks so much!  the next chapter is up now.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2011 7:46 PM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

Edward's version is always the best. It is always funnier. The boys were so funny. I don't think Charlie could live through another bachelor party. He at least won't take a rest during one. I love Christopher. He is so funny.



Author's Response:

poor charlie will probably opt out of Edward's bachelor party.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2011 2:50 AM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

Oh, my gosh, I loved this chapter, LOL!

So many details of the bachelor party and the day before - hilarious!

And yes, I'm applauding the wedding is quickly approaching, but as an Emmett lover, I'm hoping for good coverage of his nuptials as well. ;)

Til next time... :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! we're going to miss Emmett while he's on his honeymoon...i think.  lol 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 5:28 PM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

ONG - these gusy will have hangovers that they will remeber for life.  Great Chapter.



Author's Response:

haha...true!  Thanks , glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: mflow Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 12:24 PM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

I really enjoyed Christopher in this chapter, he was too funny!

Author's Response:

thanks!  I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 6:41 AM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

This was a hysterically funny chapter! Edward is so cute when he screws up & begs for forgiveness! Drunkward is even better!!
Great job!

Author's Response:

i love me some drunkward.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Stellarrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 5:34 AM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

TMZ would sell their souls for video of that bachelor party!!!!!  Can you imagine getting drunk dialed by RPatz?  It would be the highlight of my year!

 

LOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

mine too!  although i'd probably cuss him out only to realize my mistake later.  Thanks!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 3:52 AM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

AWW!!! I love drunk Edward! he's adorable and clingy. I can't wait to read more. thanks again bye for now



Author's Response:

haha   poor Edward!  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 2:43 AM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

Yes, I enjoyed reading this chapy. Thanks for writing;D)



Author's Response:

you are very welcome.  glad you liked it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 2:33 AM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

love marlon brando, the book is better than the movie tho.

loved Chris...he is awesome!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  At least he wasn't quoting from Last Tango in Paris......gah I'll shut up now.  ;)  Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 9:41 PM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

Probabaly one of the funniest chapters I've read!

Great update :)



Author's Response:

I thank you!  It's a good day if I can make someone laugh.  Diligently working on the next V&V....

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 5:06 PM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

Hilarious!!!!!  Absolutely brilliant



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Always glad to hear that.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 4:51 PM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

This was really funny and I really need to find out what that chair is. I'm so dumb.



Author's Response:

they have a website...but be careful, the video may as well be a porno....just sayin.  Don't judge me, I merely viewed it for research purposes.  ;D

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 4:12 PM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

That is the FUNNIEST thing I have ever read!!! I LOVE DRUNK Edward and Chris!



Author's Response:

me too!  lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 3:37 PM Title: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

OMG THAT WAS TO FUNNY!!! I SO NEEDED A GOOD LAUGH.  LOVED IT AND CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER OF EITHER STORY.  HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND.

LOVE-

SHANNON



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks Shannon!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 5:38 PM Title: On The Road Part 1

I just love Edward's POV. It is always funnier.



Author's Response:

you are gonna love the new one...just posted.  Thanks so much!

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