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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 15

amazing beginning of your little saga ;) but i hope she doesn't get a brazilian again ;) i'm off to read the rest now ;D

Reviewer: juandedios Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 15

this is such a great story i am really hooked on it edward and bella are such a great couple can't wait for them to go to school and see what happens and with edward's parents rosalie and charlie are such assholes i hope you make them suffer.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wow, i actually feel sorry for Bella.  Why is she so different that she does not deserve and good night kiss from her father?

If I had a sister like Rose I would have put her in her place a long time ago.  Do your own stinking washing.

Reviewer: newyorknewyork1022 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 15

It's an interesting concept that I enjoyed. May i read the sequel?

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 2

I had read E's pov 1st. I would like to know more about what's going on in her head though, not just the dialogue.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 15

well the weekend of lovey dovey-ness and their own private happy bubble has burst and it is time for monday to roll around! yay school! never thought i'd say that , heehee. time to see how the rest of the world takes our happy little couple. parents, siblings, friends, the general population... mike newton, heehee.can our love birds hang tough and see it all through? who will have to hump a leg first to show possesion? all this and more coming up in act 2! heehee

thank you for sharing your story(s)

suzie :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 14

well the happy bubble had to pop at some point and reality had to seep in. the joys of school and parents are yet to come.

Reviewer: unicorn_bliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 15

I'd love some EPOV lol

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

well now they have both had the joy of some great head.only one more step to go to seal the deal.... but will bella's butt make that a possibility this weekend?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 12

oh my goodness! what a way to be sexy personified! chafing and mild burns to your ass to go along with the general discomfort of just being waxed for the first time!and with your first boyfriend / love of your life! heehee wow bella when you do something you go all out!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 11

oh the joys of being a girl! fucking boys don't know how lucky they are sometimes! it's not all about being able to pee standing up....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 10

well it looks like eddie was right the town of forks is blind and stupid to allow bella to sit unnoticed for so long. she has it all beauty, attitude, a singing voice, and a big heart. always being over shadowed by a older sister and daddy's job has got to suck ass. plus i know from experience it takes a special person to put up with the fun craziness that goes along with being a 'different' kinda personality. the difference for me? i never cared what others thought of me, can't be too sensitive growing up with a name like sunshine-sue, heehee. so sweet that she now has eddie to help her build on trust and relationships.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 9

well eddie has finally receivedd the joy of getting good head! yay bella, good job! time to snuggle and wake up to the joy of being held by the person you love!

heehee i wonder how much jasper and alice heard? and how much bugging will come in the morning. heehee. poor eddie is never gonna get any snuck in the window fun if he can't learn to be quiet! lol

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 8

ok i am not sure on this but you almost made it all out to be tanya's fault and yes she made some stupid choices but i think we need to touch on the fact that ultimately it was james who was the bad guy here and he made the truely awful choices of the night.tanya made some stupid turns in the road that night but regaurdless it was james's fault she was raped and beaten.



Author's Response:

Very true. It was all James. But Edward knew he couldn't control James' actions. His guilt and responsibility was always with the fact that he knew James was a threat to Tanya and yet he let Tanya's blaise attitude about him, cloud his judgement and that's what Bella is telling Edward is that not his fault. Tanya should have taken the situation seriously and not tried to play games with Edward and used James as a pawn. She set the stage for disaster. But I agree...most of the blame lies with James. Tanya just picked the wrong person to use to get back at Edward.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 7

love? in one night? wow these two are moving fast! but hey with a title of ' it happened oneweekend' what should we expect?



Author's Response:

It is fast....to an almost unrealistic degree. But my theory in writing this was....if you took out all of the angst and "I want to eat you" out of Twilight, they would have fallen in love with each other just as fast. My Edward and Bella are just accepting that they are soulmates and not trying to fight it. For the first time both feel alive, complete and wanted. To anyone who's ever felt unwanted and incomplete...it would feel addicting. Like something they have to grab onto with both hands and not let go of. So for me, it seemed plausible that their feelings could evolve that quickly. You know? I've been with my husband for damn near 20 years. We started dating when I was 16 and married when I was 19. The first time I met him, I knew he was "it" for me and I didn't try to fight it. Even though it took me months to say "I love you"...I felt it immediately. Edward and Bella just skip all the "What if I tell him/her how I feel and they reject me" crap and self doubt we always put our selves through, when we start a new relationship. Personally, I'm jealous of them! LOL

Thanks for reviewing...it's almost scarey how much you get this story!

Kari

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 6

well now from 0 to 60 in no time flat! go bella!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 5

poor bellie! never been kissed at 16! wow. is that because she has just pulled away from her peers or because everyone is too blinded by her sister?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 4

heehee bella has discovered eddie and all of his hotness, and she so got busted making the find.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 3

bella is such a dork, a wolf - really? or just an excuse to jump into eddie's arms? if she wasn't so bella i might think there was alterior motives.



Author's Response:

You're killing me! LOL I think you're the only person to comment on her dorkiness factor. She's socially and emotionally stunted. Lucky for her that Edward finds it endearing!

Kari

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

aww well isn't eddie just a sweetheart? poor bella won't know what hit her

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

ok i am so glad to be an only child right now! i so would not have wanted any details on my brother/sister's sex life as a teen. ewwww! heehee



Author's Response:

Yes! Thank your lucky stars you are only child. Nothing like sharing a room with your sister and have to LISTEN to her sex life play out in the next bed, when she'd sneak her boyfriend in! Gahhhh!!!

Thanks for the review!

Kari

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 15

I hate it when parents do that to their children. It creates problems between their children and some of those feelings never go away.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 14

That is so sad that Edward is dreaming about his father shutting Bella out of his life. The amazing fact is that he doesn't dream about his mom doing that just his dad.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 13

He is just so sweet.

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

Aww this is so sweet. Rosalie hmm can you say bitch i would love to slap or deck. I can't believe her dad is so cold to her. I really want to see this story. i looked for it under both satan and twilightheartxxx and could not find you over on fan fiction. You also had me laughin so hard i was cryin on the waxin chapter. I will give it to edward to be the loving bf to be so comforting to her while she was in pain.



Author's Response:

I'm on Fan Fiction under Kiwibeme. I have published the sequel here though. Tomorrow I will have this story from Edwards POV published as well. There is also a third sequel in the works. It's not finished yet, so I am thinking about publishing it chapter by chapter!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! The waxing chapter was really fun to write. I giggled all the way through it myself! It's loosly based on an actual incident! LOL

Kari

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 12

Wow that is terrible and I really doubt that Bella will ever get a waxing again.

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 9

:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 11

Man that really sucks and would be why I wouldn't put myself through that.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 10

It is really sad that Bella has to deal with all of those emotions from her mother leaving.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 9

How crazy is their relationship?? I really think that their relationship is amazing because they fall in love so fast and everything.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 8

That is terrible what happened to Tanya but Bella is right she chose do not leave and to not call her parents for a ride. He isn't the person to blame there.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 7

Jasper is cracking me up! Running into a wall and hurting his nose and then Alice just saying to have fun. Oh I bet there will be talking later.



Author's Response:

Jasper is my favorite character to write for! There is a lot of myself in him, especially since I've been known to run into walls and other stationary objects! LOL I've published the completed sequel to this called "Life Outside the Bubble". I've also been working on the third installment for this trilogy of stories called "Lives In Chaos". If you love Jasper...then you are going to love LIC! It's not done yet. I only have 2 Chapter written and haven't decided if I am going to wait and publish it as a completed story. I may just publish Chapter by Chapter. Also, just for fun, I wrote "It Happened One Weekend" from Edwards POV. I am going to try and get that published today or tomorrow!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I am getting such a kick out of reading them!

Kari

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 6

Well I guess that Bella can now say that she has been kissed now. I hope that Edward opens up to her and tells her about Tanya.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 4

I really hope that Alice remembered to call Charlie and tell him that Bella was staying with her.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 3

They all seem to be getting along nicely. I am cracking up at Alice and Jasper.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 2

How cute was that! I must say that how Bella feels was how I felt in high school so I really know how she feels.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

I hate it when siblings insist on making you feel like crap!! I am the oldest and my sister that is 3 years younger than me makes me feel like that frequently.

Reviewer: EN426 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great story. I look forward to reading more!

Reviewer: cupcake123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 15

i want them! :)



Author's Response:

The sequel is posted! EPOV is coming tomorrow! :)

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 15

Bring it on. I really want to know what Monday brings.

Maybe esme and dr c silklike be huge road blocks. Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 14

A little foreshadowing? It always is good whenever they fight together. Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 13

Oh to have your man take such good care if you. Love me some lost boys. Used to have the sound track. Many years ago

Author's Response:

I still have that soundtrack! Now I watch the movie with my teenage kids! I am publishing the sequel now. So you can go right into it after this! :)

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh I feel for Bella. Why did the salon let her leave with any wax.
Makes me remember the first time I waxed my undermarms in college. Oh the pain of the wax being to hot. Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 11

Poor poor miss in pain bella ouch! Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 10

I like to read epov. Or maybe some flash backs to the seemed in epov from somemtine in the future?

Poor Bella ni hope she is able to start healing. Meg

Author's Response:

I've actually written this entire story from EPOV and will publish it soon. I working to get the sequel up right now, but EPOV is finished and coming! :)

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 9

Oh love and a bj. Can't it get better for Edward? Maybe. Im still worried about Monday! And Rose.
Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oh poor Edward. That is a hard choice to live with. Hope miss Bella can help him.
Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 7

Love lust? Does it matter? What happens when the bubble of the weekend is popped? Meg

Author's Response:

Funny you worded it that way! The sequel is titled "Life Outside the Bubble"! It's a little more dramatic this one and I'm working to get it published now. So you should see it soon! :)

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 6

A little bump and grind.... Way to keep from having to tell all about Tanya.

Will you tells us? Off to see
Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 5

Blasted parents and their expations! I hope thus won't stop him from keeping miss bella

Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh Bella one must learn how to look with out be caught! Too funny! Meg

Reviewer: rpattzgirl85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 15

yes, i would love to read Edward's POV.... great story. can't wait for the updates.

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 3

Awe he was ready to 'save' her. Go Alice!!!!

Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 2

Go Eddie! Take down newton before he even starts school. Texting my reviews so they will short, error filled love. Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Cute start. Sad that em is not a cool big brother. Can't wait to meet your Edward. Meg

Reviewer: TwiSagaLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 15

ok so i fucking love it! and hell yea i want a sequel! and if you want to give us this story from EPOV that would be cool as hell too! now let me say sorry cuz i didn't review every chapter. so sorry but it was just too good to stop reading!



Author's Response:

You're forgiven! I'm glad you liked it! The sequel is posted...EPOV will be up tomorrow!

Thank you for Reading and Reviewing!

Kari

Reviewer: stupidperkypixie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 15

This story is absolutely adorable! I'd love to read this Story in E's POV && a Sequel.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! The sequel has been posted and EPOV should be up tomorrow!

Thanks again!

Kari

Reviewer: Alica1992 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 15

awesome story =) please continue =)

Reviewer: AmesB Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 15

To be honest, I don't really like reading the same things in multiple POV's. I would rather have alternating chapters or something. With that said, I would LOVE to get a sequel or two. These two have just started and we need to see what happens next. I wanna know what Rosalie's reaction will be and whether all the girls at school will hate Bella for snatching Edward before school even started. I hope you decide to post. Thanks!



Author's Response:

The sequel is on it's way. Getting it ready for posting now. Should be up in the next day or so! Thank you for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: twigirl2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 15

I loved this chapter!And this story!I really can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I am excited that it's being well received!!! I should get the sequel up in the next day or two!

Reviewer: Savannah06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 15

loved this please post the sequel. thanks



Author's Response:

I'm working on getting it published now. Look for in the next day or so! Thanks so much for your review! :)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 2

he is so sweet i loved it bella needs to belive in her self more

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved it can't wait to read more

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