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Reviewer: Fire dolphin83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2019 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 23

Omg so need more. Please please

Reviewer: jasonsbrat Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2018 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 23

I just finished reading this and was sad that there wasn’t more. I hope you will finish writing the sequel and post it. I would like to see what happens next.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2016 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 23

OMG!!! you are a GENIOUS!!! that was EPIC!!! i had tears from laughing so much in most chapters i'm looking for to part 3 of this story  thanks for sharing ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 2

hi you put jasper as hale instead of whitlock in this chapter ;D

Reviewer: vanilla-bella36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 21

ME TOO!! XDDD

Reviewer: vanilla-bella36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 18

Not just no, but FUCK NO! Hahahaha. xDD

Reviewer: vanilla-bella36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 9

Hahahahah! Can't... Stop.. Laughing! hahahahaha!!! I love this CHAPTER!!! hahahahaha! Especially the:

"Um, RAWRRRRR! I'M A BEAR!" Jasper yells.

Esme and I both have equally horrified looks on our face. "You stupid idiot!" Esme whispers, as she slaps him in the head. "Since when would a fucking bear announce himself?".

"Sorry! I panicked...shit!" Jasper whined, grabbing his head.

"OH MY GOD! IT IS A BEAR!" we heard Rosalie scream. I could even make out the sound of her feet running up the stairs and her door slamming shut.

Esme throws her hands in the air, rolling her eyes. "Blond!" is all she offers as an explanation.

part. hahahahha! YOU'RE A GENIUS!!! xDDD

Reviewer: vanilla-bella36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2011 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 14

I love the joke about Die Hard. Hahahahaha! You're a genius! xD

I also loved the CHAPTER where Edward confronted Rosalie. I mean the part where Bella, Esme and Jasper were eavesdropping. COOL. I love the "Uhm, RAAAAARRRR! I'm a bear!" thing. I LOLed. MAJOR. Keep it up! :D

Oh, and I hate Rosalie. As in, I FUCKING HATE HER. hahahaha. xDDDD

Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 23

I am thoroughly enjoying your stories. I have laughed, smiled, and even cried. I can not get enough. I honestly can not wait to start reading the next leg of their journey. High Five to you!

Reviewer: silvervolvogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 23

REALLY? You leave us with all this info without answers and you want to know if you should continue?? YES!! Please continue!! Better than the soaps on tv right now!!!



Author's Response:

Haha! Luckily I decided to continue anyway! Proceed to "Lives In Chaos"...it's 5 Chapters in already! LOL

Thanks for the review!

Kari

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 23

that was good cant wiat ot read more of this stories   i liked it

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 23

Awsome!!! I had a nasty Headache reading and could not and still can't think straight to write reviews. Im sorry I did not leave my review a chapter like the first 2 stories. But this one did not turn out AT all like I thought. It was sooooooo much better. Thanks - meg

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 23

Gah! It definitely can't end there.

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love that Rose failed!!! Whoop!!! Meg

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 22

Who's the daddy?! Emmett? Carlisle maybe?

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 17

I only feel bad for R because my little sis was cut off from our dad so I know how painful it can feel. My ls is nothing like R, but the situation was/is still really painful.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 15

Hand raised.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 11

Well schmobviously she was forced or threatened away! R seems like a decent person.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 9

That emeffer! Where are Esme and Jasper?

Author's Response:

They went back to the house in Jasper's car. And yeah, Charlie was off his rocker! LOL

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2010 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm disappointed in B but really glad she recognized what she had done right away.

Reviewer: fanficfan1968 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 23

yes, yes, yes, i want, i want, i want!!!!!

I am loving this story and would love for you to continue. Please!!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 23

I am excited to read the next chapter in their lives!! I can't wait to see what happens when Esme gets ahold of Carlisle!!



Author's Response:

I'll just say this much...Carlisle should be scared! I'm posting IHOW from Edwards POV now...first 6 chapters up! :)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 22

Well we know where Carlisle is now and that Rose is pregnant. I imagine that is going to go over well isn't it.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 21

Edward is a good man there. I want to know where to go sign up for one of him???



Author's Response:

I wish I knew! My hubby says that by writing him this way, I've set an impossible standard for men! LOL

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 20

I know that what Rose did to Bella was terrible but she doesn't deserve that!!



Author's Response:

I totally agree! This is the one time I had sympathy for Rosalie!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 19

That boy is just sooo sweet!!

Reviewer: EN426 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 23

Keep going! I'm so loving this story. Guess I should have reviewed each chapter, but I couldn't make myself stop reading. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you! The next installment is posted. It's called "Lives In Chaos". It's an "in progress" story, as I've just started writing it, but the first chapter is published and it will be updated at least every Thursday, if not more often! :)

I'm so glad you liked the story! Thank you for reviewing!

Kari

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 18

Sorry if it makes me a bad person but I don't feel sorry for Rosealie because she really had it coming!



Author's Response:

LOL...it's OK, I didn't feel bad for her either!!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 17

Way To Go Charlie!!! All I have to say is that I am glad that Charlie made sure that Bella is going to be taken care of and I can't wait to see the look on Rose's face!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 16

Well I wonder what Carlisle has under his belt to fight Esme.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 15

Carlisle is an evil man that thinks about money and status more than family and that is going to be his downfall.



Author's Response:

Agreed! Carlisle is entirely motivated by power and prestige.

I've posted the first chapter of the third installment of this series called "Lives In Chaos". I've only just started writing this one, so it will updated every Thursday for sure...but more often if I can!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Also, look for IHOW from EPOV to post tomorrow!

Kari

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

I really don't feel sorry for Rosealie because as Renee said to Jessica she believes in Karma and sometimes Karma is a bitch and that is what Rosealie is going to get because Charlie made sure that Bella was taken care of if something happened to him her and Rose just don't know it yet!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 13

He is finally awake!! And Jessica is seriously asking for a beating by coming up there. I guess she didn't get it when Edward told her and her friends off.



Author's Response:

No, Jessica is not the smartest person in the world. She's been totally brain washed to the idea that her and Edward were going to be together. She really is unstable and not right. I don't think we've seen the last of her yet!

Thanks for the taking the time to review! I love reading them!

Kari

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 12

That meeting went better than I thought that it would and I am glad that it did because Bella doesn't need anymore stress on her plate right now.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 11

I really hope that Renee is going to play nice because Esme is on a roll tonight and I don't see it going well if she isn't.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 10

So Charlie knew that he was wrong in everything and didn't do anything about it! That is so wrong he was the parent and should have told Rose no that the money was hers and Bella's instead he hurt one of his children and let the other one manulipiate Bella and hurt her. It is really sad that he is never going to get to tell Bella these things for himself.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh no Edward is going to go see Charlie and make more of a mess for himself. I just hope that Bella forgives him for this.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

That is terrible that her dad would just do that to her!!

Reviewer: twigirl2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 23

LOVE!And I can't wait for the next installment!!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 6

It is good that someone finally stood up to Charlie for Bella. He is so wrong at how he is  treating Bella. Oh and Esme is growing on me now because all she wants is for her son to be happy.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh Alice is going to be in some trouble now when Bella finds out what she has been doing. It is wonderful that Esme is trying to help them but at what cost because Bella truly hates her mother.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 4

Now Esme is looking for Renee! This is just messed up I think I am wondering if it is so that they can come to an agreement about their children and money.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

So what does Renee have to do with all of this. Is this the way into letting Bella and Edward being able to see each other because of his mother.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 2

I think that it is funny that Rosealie didn't pass her test and now Bella and her are ing the same grade. I really hope that Bella and Edward don't get into that much trouble.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

That is terrible that the first day of school he has to deal with that crap.

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 5

ok 3 twists to the story i didn't see comin.... wow.. It is really good.

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 23

I'd be interested in reading the third sequel. This fic was really good! (I'm going to go read the first one now. Yeah, I was lazy!)

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 18

No, we do not feel sorry for Rosalie.

Author's Response:

LOL...I didn't think you would! She has it coming! However, there is always one person who thinks she's misunderstood! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Kari

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

I plan to read tomorrow night. Great title. Meg

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