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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 15

wow evil cullen parent's!!! i LOVE epov's ;) much longer chapters as well ;) i also loved the jucing insident ;D

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 15

that was good i cant wait to see what is going to happen and cant wait to read the sequal

 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2010 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 12

too funny and it is good that eddie laid into alice! that was some stupid shit she did.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 15

Didn't read B's side. I want to now. And I need to get on the sequel because it can't end there!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 11

jasper's sure was funnier! heehee it gives dickhead a whole new meaning! i think eddie is not the only one to be given a pet name today! dickhead is awesome! lol

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 10

silly girl it's easy to love and want this edward ... you made him up! lol!

 

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 15

Ya hating on the parents. Not a usual for dr c and esme. Jess. Eww nasty ! Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 14

The dream was heartbreaking. Still worried about the 2nd story. Is there a huge new moon phase or do the take on the world together? Meg

Author's Response:

Nothing New Moonish happening in the neext installment! I would never do that to you! LOL

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 12

Ouch say on a curling iron. I expected more internal dialog from Edward in this chapter. It was good do not get me wrong.

Love what he told his dad. Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 11

Bella had it MUCH worse. But that was damn funny. Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 8

Wow hearing prom from Edwards pov was powerful. To feel his guilt he felt. Great job. Meg

Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Flynnstones Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 15

i discovered you story a few days ago and was astonished by how little reviews there were for such a extrodinary story. love you writing.

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 5

On Eddie. That just will not due. Fix the hurt feeling. I can't imagine the pain he has due to his parents. I'm worried about the next story. :)

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 4

Sad that Edward worried about punishment for giving a tour. Loved the th fact bella got caught checking him out. Meg

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 9

eddie got a blow job! eddie got a blow job! yay!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 8

so eddie opened up and then he got what he has been waiting for his i love you. and he has someone to help him deal with his past and find ways to move past it and the guilt.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 7

well bella got hers time for eddie's turn...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 6

heehee bella sure does have him good

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

E is a fun place to be. Love jazz he is a total trip! Fun times in e's world.
Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well I'm back. I hate the way his parents make him feel. I like epov's it is lots of fun to see in his head. Meg

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 5

wow eddie way to stick both feet in your mouth, one right after the other.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 4

she may have gotten busted ogling the goods but eddie got off easy by her not noticing his little problem!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 3

looks like eddie is really enjoying himsalf. it only gets better from here, honey!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 2

gotta say i am not sure how to take your jasper. he is a train wreck! not what i am used to at all. but so funny to think of perfect shopping fashion pixie head over heels for happy meal eating toy playing wears the box on his head while talking to his food jasper. heehee too funny. little pixie sure does seem to have her work cut out for her on this one.



Author's Response:

Ah yes...my Jasper! OK, so I personally feel like Jasper gets the short end of the stick in the Twilight books and most FF stories. He's so serious. So I thought, why not make Jasper, the Anti-Jasper. So I literally took him and flipped him completely around...from serious, to completely non-serious. Personally, I LOVE Jasper. He's my favorite character to write for. He has A LOT of me in him. I struggle with maturity and seriousness myself and have been know to wear bizarre head apparell (*cough* underwear *cough**cough*). I knew going in that it was a risk to flip Jasper so violently from one extreme to the other...but it had to be done. I think I flipped Esme a bit too. She's like Rosanne Barr, Madea and Lois from "Family Guy" all rolled into one! LOL

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

ok so i am gonna be honest here. i came over to this story after reading ihow and saw in the an that this would be kinda redundant and thought 'who cares what eddie was thinking let's move on to the next story' well that was the plan thinking that i would be ok to jump from one to the other... um nope! didn't even get through the first chapter and i knew i had missed something and had to come back here. heehee what's that they say about the best laid plans....?

so far i am happy to see it has new material, i have trouble with stories that basically repeat everything in someone else's pov. i am really hoping that this one covers the same stuff but different, if you know what i mean.

sorry if that is totally confusing, it's late and i should be in bed but i have a few more things to do before it is my turn to snuggle down for the night. lol so rambling here, sorry again.



Author's Response:

You're not rambling at all. When I originially wrote IHOW, I did it from Bella's POV, obviously. But then I doubted that it was good. I mean was Bella's thinking boring? So then I decided to flip the switch and see if I liked being in Edwards head better. So I wrote both POV's with the intention of ONLY publishing one. But the unthinkable happened and I ended up liking both!

If anything, I'd say that I liked Edward's maybe a little bit more. He comes off in Bella's POV as confident and maybe a little cocky. But in his POV you're in his head, so you can see that it's front. He's just a vulnerable and full of self doubt as she is. The only real difference between the two, is that he takes chances.

I love your reviews! Thank you for leaving them!

Kari

Reviewer: unicorn_bliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 15

Ho Hu. I hope he doesn't pick up Jessica. Not because I'm afraid of what she'll do. But to prove a point to his parents. He is going to start doing shit his way and if they have a problem with it. Then they will be happy to know he is laving them for good once he graduates. Hell he could leave now if they agreed to a little legal work.

It would be wonderful if Edward does everything he can to embarress them enough to disown him and allow him to live on his own. He practicaly is anyway. That'll be one obstacle gone.

 

I want him to really humilate them too. Call them out on what kind of parents they are in an important event. Make an announcment at school on all the shit he can get away with as long as fucks whoever daddy and mommy want him too.That'll really make them look bad to. Because Jessica will them tell her parents..lol....oh the theories.

Guess I just really want some humiliation to go towards them and have them be loked down on. Like they have been looking down on him.

 

I'm not to worried about Charlie. Since Bella is the only one who puts any effert with  relationship with her father and does alot around the house. He is going to get all the punishment he deserves once she graduates. Since Rose fav and all. He'll know exactly what he had raised her to become and be regretful for what he put Bella through once she is no longer there to help and care for him.

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

always love to read the "other" pov



Author's Response:

YAY!!! I hope you like it! I almost like this POV better than Bella's. It was definitely more fun to write. Edwards head is a fun place to be! :)

Thank you for the review! It means a lot!

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