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Reviewer: JDRAST Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:23 AM Title: At Last

Hello.  You did this movie justice and it just made it even better with the Bella & The Cullens substituted as the actors/characters!  I had already seen the movie before, but I really enjoyed reading (envisioning) it with the Twilight characters.  Thanks for the entertainment this evening!  Suzan Noerr 

Reviewer: yuri11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 2:43 AM Title: Late Night Visits

omg i love it amazing

Reviewer: yuri11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 2:33 AM Title: Meeting The Family

love it amazing

Reviewer: yuri11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 2:11 AM Title: Misunderstandings

love it good story i love it just like i love the movie this is really good

Reviewer: yuri11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 2:03 AM Title: The Fateful Day

hi i love this 2nd chapter is amazing

Reviewer: yuri11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 1:56 AM Title: Prologue

perfect just like in the movie

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2011 5:21 PM Title: Late Night Visits

It's so weird. I have the movie playing in my head and when ever the dialog is changed to fit twiligt it's like blaringly obvious... is that sad that I have the scenes in my head like that?

Love it so far. My only difficulty is invisioning Carlilse as both Peter Facinelli and Peter Boyle...hmmm....strange.

I'm reading this during my writing breaks, if you're wondering :D

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 11:27 PM Title: The Fateful Day

Oh, sweetie, that's my favorite scene in the movie where SandyB makes that "uh uh" sound! LMAO!

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2011 2:14 PM Title: At Last

nice:))

Reviewer: lorens Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2011 6:03 AM Title: At Last

10 things i hate about you

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 11:32 AM Title: At Last

:)

Reviewer: TheSavage Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 3:42 AM Title: At Last

Loved your story :) Can't wait to read the new one you come up with

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 1:25 AM Title: At Last

Omg! I loved this story I also love the movie thanks for writing it.

Reviewer: Twilightfan85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 12:41 AM Title: At Last

THAT WAS SO GREAT!! I LOVED IT!! THANKS FOR A GREAT STORY!!! I HOPE YOU MAKE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS ONE!!! BIG FAN!!!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 11:06 PM Title: The Wedding

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 10:59 PM Title: Second Chances, Second Guesses

:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2011 7:53 PM Title: The Wedding

If I didn't know the movie, I would be very upset with this ending point. Is Alice not there for Jasper to see and recognize?

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2011 1:09 AM Title: The Wedding

Oh no!!! There is  no next button….argh!!!!  It is getting to the best part….

Reviewer: Twilightfan85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2011 12:56 AM Title: The Wedding

OH WOW!! PLS CONTINUE HURRY PLS CONTINUE!!! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN SO PLS CONTINUE!!! BIGGEST FAN EVER!!!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 12:59 AM Title: Understandings

Aw, I loved Carlisle's reaction!!! Edward was so nervous for nothing!!

Reviewer: Twilightfan85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2011 12:34 AM Title: Second Chances, Second Guesses

AWWW POOR EDWARD. :(   I HOPE BELLA IS SMART ENOUGH TO KNOW THAT EDWARD LOVES HER. AND DESIDES TO NOT MARRY JASPER, AND I HOPE THAT EDWARD AND BELLA DO DESIDE TO STAY TOGETHER. SO PLS CONTINUE SOON!! PLS HURRY AND CONTINUE!!! BIG FAN!!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 10:44 PM Title: Reborn

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 10:35 PM Title: Putz

:)

Reviewer: misswhiting14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 9:13 AM Title: Reborn

wedding planner or sweet home Alabama!!!!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 5:50 AM Title: Reborn

The Wedding Planner is kind of icky.  The others would be great.  Though Edward and Jake are nothing alike.  I love Sweet Home Alabama though.  Just Like Heaven while a sweet movie it implies dead Edward or Bella.  Not cool.

Love Actually could work AWESOME with the Twilight Saga feel

Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 5:30 PM Title: Meeting The Family

Oh my goodness when she said crazy hair.  I thought it was Edward.  I have thrown my hands over my eyes.  I can't watch.

Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 5:21 PM Title: The Fateful Day

Bella is a hero.  I wonder if he will remember her face.  I am really disappointed that my Edward couldn't defend himself. 

Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 5:13 PM Title: Prologue

I feel so sorry for Bella all alone in the big city.  Does she have any friends?

Reviewer: Twilightfan85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 10:22 AM Title: Putz

PLS CONTINUE THIS STORY SOON!! PLS MAKE EDWARD AND BELLA FALL MORE IN LOVE AND MAKE JASPER FIND SOMEONE ELSE PLS I THOUGHT THIS WAS A EDWARD AND BELLA STORY. SO PLS CONTINUE WITH THE EDWARD AND BELLA ROMANCE!!

BIG FAN!!!



Author's Response:

Hi, thanks for the message. It is a Bella and Edward story. Don't worry about that. Jasper will have his ending also. Thanks for reviewing and I'm so happy that you enjoy the story. 

Reviewer: jvav702 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2011 2:55 AM Title: Understandings

i would love for you to finish this story

Reviewer: TiramiSue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 3:49 PM Title: Understandings

Please don´t remove this story!!! I can´t see where the "problem" lays!!! As far as I see it- you HAVE mentioned over and over again that neither the storyline nor the characters were yours! What else can one ask for?!?! Please finish this story! I absolutely love it!!! Love the combination!!!!

Reviewer: theLadyoftheDarkTower Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 3:39 AM Title: Understandings

I'd like the story to stay up.  I really enjoy reading it.  I think you have clearly stated, in every chapter, who owns what.  I don't think you're plagiarizing anything. 

Reviewer: Twilightfan85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 11:57 PM Title: Understandings

No pls continue this story! pls continue this story. Dont lisen to the people that are talking shit their just jealous. Ur a great writter. So  pls continue this story!! pls!!! BIG FAN!!!

Reviewer: twilightcrazed121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 9:56 PM Title: Understandings

NO!!! dont remove the story you have got to finish it

Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 8:32 PM Title: Prologue

Don't remove the story! It's not your fault that person couldn't comphrend the meaning of your disclaimer at the very beginning of every chapter. I like it, its nice and fluffy and its one of my favorite movies :).

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 6:50 PM Title: Understandings

:)

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 4:22 PM Title: Understandings

Hell no! Keep on writing! You are very good at it!

Reviewer: lorens Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 3:00 AM Title: He's Got What?

phew... now comes the hard part

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 8:39 AM Title: He's Got What?

:)

Reviewer: Twilightfan85 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 3:59 AM Title: He's Got What?

CAN WAIT FOR THE NEW CHAPTER!! SO PLS CONTINUE SOON'!!! BIG FAN!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 4:36 PM Title: Not Enough

:)

Reviewer: Twilightfan85 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 6:50 AM Title: Not Enough

PLS CONTINUE SOON PLS HURRY!! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENDS NEXT WILL BELLA BE WITH EDWARD SOON!! WHAT HAPPEND TO JASPER? SOPLS CONTINUE SOON!!! BIG FAN!!!!

Reviewer: Twilightfan85 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2010 6:45 AM Title: Pregnant?

Pls continue pls hurry and continue!!! BIG FAN!!!  I want Edward and Bella together soon pls!!! BIG FAN!!! Pls continue!!! BIG FAN!!!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 11:13 AM Title: Pregnant?

:)

Reviewer: alegranote Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 8:25 PM Title: Pregnant?

 I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the update, it was very much appreciated. Merry Christmas.

Reviewer: Twilightfan85 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 3:19 AM Title: Gossip, Potatoes, Brunettes

PLS CONTINUE SOON!!! PLS AND I REALLY HOPE THAT EDWARD AND BELLA START TO SEE EACH OTHER MORE AND KISS MORE TOO!! PLS CONTINUE AND MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! BIG FAN!!!

Reviewer: lorens Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 2:32 AM Title: Gossip, Potatoes, Brunettes

wait i just hav one quick question, will iasper and alice end up together?

Author's Response:

This is a cannon story. It's still a long road ahead, but eventually yes. Thank you for the review. ;)

Reviewer: alegranote Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 2:25 AM Title: Gossip, Potatoes, Brunettes

Loved the family diner and can't wait to see what you do with this next. :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 9:11 PM Title: Gossip, Potatoes, Brunettes

:)

Reviewer: Twilightfan85 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 3:13 AM Title: Affair

PLS CONTINUE SOON!! I WANT EDWARD AND BELLA TOGETHER!!! PLS IT JUST SOUNDS WEIRD HAVING BELLA AND JASPER IT SOUNDS WEIRD SO PLS EDWATD AND BELLA!!! PLS CONTINUE SOON!!! BIG FAN!!!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 5:23 PM Title: Affair

:)

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 11:34 AM Title: Affair

Love this :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 6:30 PM Title: Making Friends

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 11:52 PM Title: Surprise Visitors

;)

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 10:54 PM Title: Plan In Motion: Part 2

I love this movie and it's so great that you've used the Twilight characters.  Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 4:51 PM Title: Plan In Motion: Part 2

:)

Reviewer: lorens Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 5:52 AM Title: Plan In Motion: Part 2

LMBO! that was hilarious

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 5:26 PM Title: Plan In Motion: Part 1

Mass was hilarious! Jake is so gross, lol, could he be anymore vulgar?

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 5:18 PM Title: Suspicions

Good chapter!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 5:11 PM Title: Borrowed Family

Oh no! Vicky huh?

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 5:03 PM Title: Late Night Visits

Yikes! She just gets in deeper!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 4:52 PM Title: Meeting The Family

Cute confusion!

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:23 PM Title: Misunderstandings

Really cute story!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 11:41 AM Title: Plan In Motion: Part 1

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 6:03 PM Title: Suspicions

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2010 11:48 AM Title: Borrowed Family

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 6:21 PM Title: Late Night Visits

:)

Reviewer: misswhiting14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 3:05 AM Title: Prologue

okay :) I understand now

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 4:46 PM Title: Meeting The Family

:)

Reviewer: misswhiting14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 2:55 AM Title: Meeting The Family

I'm really confused, I thought this was a B/E story



Author's Response:

It is absolute an B/E story. As you can see from the summary, there is going to be a brother that will be suspicious of her while Jasper is in a coma. a lot can happen. Thanks for your question.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 9:33 PM Title: Misunderstandings

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:59 PM Title: The Fateful Day

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 10:51 AM Title: Prologue

:)

Reviewer: Raisin Cookies Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 10:26 AM Title: Prologue

Great start!  I'm looking forward to reading more.  Goodluck! x

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