[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2017 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 41
Whether another chapter is added the story is amazing and i think that if this is the last chapter or if there is another that the story will still be amzaing. there are some that are easy to write while others aren't
Date: 28 Feb 2017 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 41
I just read all this for the first time and I loved it!!!!!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2016 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 41
I think you have done a wonderful job with this story. Thank you for sharing with us Bella and Carlisle we think through a lot to be together. So happy everything worked out for them.
Date: 19 Aug 2016 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 40
Delay and she talked to Charlie even though he was being an ass.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 39
I agree with Bella she needs to talk with her dad. So glad everyone is happy for them about getting married.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 38
So hapay Esme and Charlie were found quilty on all charges.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 37
Poor Bella and Renee. They both have lost so much.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 36
Wow, so they did try to kill Renee. I hope Bella decidesto to see Renee. Maybe it will help with Renee's memory and they can get Esme and Charlie for attempted murder for her too.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 35
So glad that Bella has alot of support. I thought Esme said they killed Renee. I'm glad that Bella will have her mother but I am sure she will be mad that Renee left her with Charlie and did not try to get her away from him. Which I do not blame her for being upset.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 34
So glad that they are out of the hospital. Glad Esme and Charlie and Alice are going to pay for their crimes. Also glad that Edward has accepted his father and Bella.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 33
Glad they finally got to see each other.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 32
So glad that they caught Charlie and Esme. How did Alice know that Carlisle was with Bella at college to send Esme and Charlie there? Wow, Alice knew for 2 years that she was Charlie's daughter and never said anything.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 31
So glad that Edward stood up for Carlisle and for Bella. Emmett is standing up for his mom who doesn't even like him. Emmett and Alice end to hear the whole story. Did Professor Gerandy talk to Charlie about Bella. Is that how they found them.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 30
I am so glad that someone heard the gun shots. Esme and Charlie really messed Bella and Carlisle up. The detectives need to check with Alice and see if she knows where Mother Dearest is.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 29
Omgosh!!!!!!! So Alice is Charlie's and not Carlisle's. Wow. What the hell us wrong with Charlie? Does Esme have him drugged? I can't believe that Charlie did that to his own daughter.
Date: 17 Aug 2016 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 28
What the hell??????? I know Esme is evil but why would Charlie hurt his own daughter? That is just crazy. Poor Bella, her day went from bad to worse to what the hell. I hope Carlisle doesn't think that she just left him. I hope he comesaid home before they leave with Bella. How did they know where to find Carlisle and did they know Bella would be there? So glad I can go straight to the next chapter. Glad I donot have to wait for an update.
Date: 17 Aug 2016 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 27
I don't blame Rose for moving out. Bella was a total jerk to her. I can't believe that she slapped Rose and then never apologized to her. That is just wrong. All Rose was trying to do was very a good friend. Carlisle does need help.
Date: 17 Aug 2016 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 26
Glad Bella told Carlisle that he scared her and that he needs help. Since Esme is made at Edward maybe he and his father will join forces.
Date: 17 Aug 2016 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 25
I hate that Edward found out like he did. But maybe it is for the best. I wonder what Carlisle thinks of Edward being gay. This is not the first time Carlisle has taken Bella like this, being so rough. Why does he do it?
Date: 16 Aug 2016 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 24
I knew it!!!!!!!!!! When Jasper was telling Bella about the guy kissing him he never said his name and wondered then was it Edward. I think shit is fixing to hit the fan.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 23
If Esme is responsible for Renee leaving and no one has heard from Renee, does that mean that Esme kilied Renee.Edward and Bella live in the same dorm. That's not good.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 22
O boy!!!!!! This could get interesting real quick.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow, so Esme's hated for Bella goes way back. Boy, she is a bitch.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 20
I am with Rose. Esme and Charlie are seeing each other. They need to check Charlie's phone and see which he was talking to.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
Esme is a bitch. I hope Carlisle gets away from her. I still have a feeling that Esme is Charlie's girlfriend and she is the reason he has changed his appearance and had nice new things that she has given him.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
So glad that Rose is with Bella. Charlie thought that by leaving Bella at Carlisle that he was doing what was best for her when he could not be there. I'm sure Charlie never thought that Carlisle would seduce his daughter.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 17
Charlie is trying. Yes he is not the most attentive dad but he does miss his daughter. Sometimes I wonder if his girlfriend is not Esme. Glad Bella is going back to Forks also glad that Rose is going with her.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
Glad she finally told Jasper and Rose about Carlisle. She is going to need her friends even more now. I can't believe that he just up and left without saying anything to her.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella is being unreasonable. She is not thinking like an adult. She is thinking like a spoiled brat. He will need a good job to support them while she is in school. I understand she misses him but she needs to think of their future.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 14
I kind of figured that he would co.email to her since she did not go home for Thanksgiving
Date: 16 Aug 2016 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
Glad she and Rose made up.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 12
I think Bella and Rose really need to talk. Things are not as they always seem.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'm glad d that Bella has Jasper. Hopefully she will confine in him about Carlisle.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
I think Carlisle is playing/lying to Bella.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 9
I think Bella is to hard on Charlie. How was he suppose to know. He asked Bella several times what was wrong. He isis not a mind reader.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
Carlisle is getting a little more demanding and rough with her. He seems to take from her and body and not really worry about it, especially when he had anal sex with her in the other chapter.
Date: 15 Aug 2016 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
I think Bella is being too hard on Charlie and Alice. She is being mean to them for no reason. They have not done anything. She is the one who is wrong. She should be being nice to them.
Date: 15 Aug 2016 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
Is Carlisle feeding her lie after lie???? Wow, Esme was kind of harsh about Bell
Date: 15 Aug 2016 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
They can't stay away from each other. I am wondering if they will have some kink, like Dom/sub or Daddy/little girl. Can't wait to read more
Date: 15 Aug 2016 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait to see what you do with this story
Date: 15 Aug 2016 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have been trying to decide if it was Carlisle or Edward.
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2015 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just joined this site and your story was one of the first I read
Honestly, I couldn't stop reading. It touched something inside me. I love how you portrayed the characters even if it wasn't cannon. I'm about to read another story of yours and I'm sure it will be just S good. I never really write reviews but I had to let you know how amazing this was. Thank you for writing it.
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2015 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 41
What a wonderful story. I love everything about it. I'm glad I found it when it was complete. (I don't like waiting for the next chapthers, it drives me insane) I am so glad you stayed true to your story. You had me with every twist and turn, the easy and the not so easy. To me you truly a master story teller. And I thank you for this one. Now I will check to see what else you have written. all that's left for me to say is "well written, well done".....
Date: 23 Dec 2014 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 41
I think you did a great job at writing the story. Thanks for writing all that you do.
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2014 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 41
Other than the normal Edward/Bella pairing, Bella and Carlisle pairings are my favorite. I absolutely love this story!!! Thank you so much for sharing it with us. d84;a039;
Date: 28 Nov 2014 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 41
Every bit as enjoyable as all if your stories we'll done betty roll on Carlisles gift
Date: 28 Nov 2014 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 41
I loved it!!!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 41
:) aaawwww love it
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 38
where can we look for you book Forbidden Awakenings. and under what name?
Author's Response:
It's available as an ebook on Amazon for pre-order for $1.99. Once it goes live, the price will change. http://www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/B00OR53ZUG/ref=mp_s_a_1_1?qid=1417153631&sr=8-1
And the paperback should be up by Monday, too.
Date: 26 Nov 2014 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 40
That was totally insane, I liked it! :) update soon!
Date: 26 Nov 2014 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 40
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 24 Nov 2014 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 39
Awesome I loved it!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!
Date: 23 Nov 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 38
Family always comes first in my opinion so you do what is right for you.
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 23 Nov 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 38
Looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 03 Oct 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 37
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 03 Oct 2014 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 37
Nice update soon.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 36
I wasn't sure that I was going to finish this story because of the characters that my favorite people were playing.......couldn't imagine Bella with Carlisle & especially my Edward & Jasper being gay. However, because it is so well written, I can't not finish reading it. So am looking forward to rest of the chapters, please hurry and update.
Thanks,
Ruby2sday
Date: 15 Sep 2014 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 36
I liked it!!!!! Update soon!!!!!
Date: 06 Sep 2014 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 35
Holy shit. Didn't see that coming. Plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Sep 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 35
Wow I knew it -
Date: 04 Sep 2014 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 35
A great chapter. I can't wait to find out where Renee's been.
Date: 04 Sep 2014 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interestinga86;
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2014 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 35
OMG!!!! She better not cause any drama. They have had way too much. Thank you for the update.
Date: 01 Sep 2014 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 34
I loved it update soon!!!!
Date: 25 Aug 2014 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 34
Looking forward to more
Date: 21 Aug 2014 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 33
Looking forward to more
Date: 30 Jul 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 31
Not very good policemen outside her door, where are they when Alice was screaming and attacking her?
Date: 30 Jul 2014 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 31
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2014 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 30
OMG!!!!!! Epic plot twist!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2014 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 30
Can't believe they're alive! I doubt the cops will find Charlie and Esme...
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2014 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 29
What the bloody hell??!! God no!!! :'(
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2014 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 28
*gasp* OMG!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2014 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 30
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2014 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 30
OMG ! You are evil!! But at the same time you're great too! Love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2014 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 30
Nice update soon!!!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it, can't wait for the update <3
Date: 21 Jun 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 29
Please update. I hate the fact that you left it a clif hanger.
Date: 21 Jun 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 29
Wow, nice. Update soon.
Date: 20 Jun 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 29
If the whole time they wanted to be together and killed the mom so they could, then what is the point of making sure Carlisle doesn't leave?
Date: 20 Jun 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 29
*speechless*
I hope they survive.
Date: 20 Jun 2014 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 29
OMG PLEASE DONT KEEP US WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE
Date: 20 Jun 2014 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 29
Umm I have no words..
Date: 18 Jun 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 28
Holy cow talk about leaving this chapter with a cliffie! Is Carlisle oing to be accused of this?
Date: 17 Jun 2014 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 28
Is he really going to kill his daughter? What a twist.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 28
Cliff hangers of note!! OMG can't wait for the update, that last paragraph was crazy. Can't believe Charlie did that.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 28
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 27
Oh no! Rose left!? *gasp*
Date: 04 Jun 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 27
Update soon!!!!!!
Date: 03 Jun 2014 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 27
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 22 May 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 26
I liked it !!!!!! Plz update soon!!!!!!!
Date: 21 May 2014 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 26
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 21 May 2014 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
In response to the AN -- love is messy. Glad Carlisle treats Bella better now.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was all kinds of juicy fun. Just a little disappointed in some of Carlisle's cad behavior. He should be more solicitous ... rude to leave her spunky and splayed on the kitchen table without a word. Boorish cad. Expect better from Carlisle, especially when toying with an innocent girl. And ripping her v-card so callously. He's treating her like a tramp. If his guilt is driving his actions/inactions, would still expect better. If Charlie treated Alice (his daughter) in such a fashion, he'd be displeased.
Don't get the wrong idea. I'm enjoying your story
Date: 20 May 2014 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 25
Hmm .... Well the ending primal I didn't expect. great job
Date: 16 May 2014 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 25
Uh-oh is Carlisle going to a dominant abusive or was him projecting something that he has been wanting to do? I liked it !!! Update soon !!!!!!!!
Date: 14 May 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 25
looking forward to more
Date: 08 May 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 24
Good to see someone finally calling her on her attitude
Date: 07 May 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 24
I knew that was who jasper was going to be in love with. So Edward and Carlisle's secrets are out.
Date: 07 May 2014 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love that it's Edward dating Jasper.