Wow, loved this one hunny! I read it on Twiwrite but saw it here too. And since I'm over here more lol, thought i would review here ;) Anyway I really liked ths one. Im a Jake fan, well I'm not Team anything most days, lol. But I love Edward a bit more :) However I have no prob with Jake or wolf pack. But im finding out in this twi fandom that ppl are really Team Edward and not very open minded with stories, lol. I have many reviewers for my story who tell me they hate Jake and they hate that my Bella is with him but because they love my story so much they'll still read it lmao. I just think thats funny, lol. Anyway getting off track here. But I really enjoyed this take. It made me sad too I was heartbroken for bella. I cant believe Edward acted that way freakin jerk but Im not surprised I mean he does have these controlling, possessive tendencies, lol. Still love him though. But again you are a amazing writer. I just really love your work, ttys, *hugs, Leslie