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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 2

what are the z88 's

 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 24

Thank you for writing this lovely story!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 23

*sigh* what a great wedding. thanks so much for this...I tore through it today, didn't I?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 22

Love how possessive Bella is and how she, once again, put Tanya in her place!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 21

evil cliffie! good thing this is already complete so I don't have to wait to see what happens...Charlie to the rescue??

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 20

I don't understand why fan fic characters aren't all fat, what with all the pizza they eat! Doesn't anyone eat vegetables?? Yikes!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 19

hooray for all the people, and dog, that saved her! 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 18

I guessed it was Newton, didn't I? Lucky guess! Yikes...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 17

Will he quit his job to be there with her?  Tune in tomorrow....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 16

he loves her! yeah!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 15

wonderful lemon! such a sad goodbye...her trying to be all stoic....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 14

I always hoped to have this kind of relationship one day. Sadly, at 70, I think my chance has passed. I love to read stories like this and live vicariously through them. This one is a gem. Thank you...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 13

That was hot! I seriously don't know why it is called "dry humping" when there is nothing dry about it! Good thing they were at his house where he could clean up quickly. Sorry I didn't  get to 10 chapters today....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

we're half way through the story now. i'm enjoying it a lot.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 11

Is it Mike Newton leaving the flowers? Wasn't he the student that "accidentally" brushed up against her butt at school?  Love that they're getting so close to each other! 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 10

Leave it to Alice to cut through the BS!  Yes!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 9

See...that's why making ASS umptions makes a ass out of u and me....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 8

ha ha that's quite the nod to Twilight there at the end. Oh dear. Bella took that the wrong way and Edward hasn't a clue!  Seems she is as obsessed over him as he is over her. The need to just sit down and talk about it!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 7

I think she's in trouble too....they are so cute and the dog loves them both already....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 6

I love seeing inside Edward's mind. I applaud him for his restraint, knowing he is leaving soon and won't be back for a while. Still, I long for them to be happy together. I have a lot of time to read today so hope to get in at least 10 chapters. Thanks!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 5

I love this! Neither of them is really looking for a relationship, but it looks like neither will be able to deny their attraction. How long that will take is anyone's guess. Well, except yours, as you wrote the story!  Bella strikes again with putting Tanya in her well deserved place!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love the no-nonsense way Bella told Alice to back off matchmaking for her. I love straightforward people like that!  Why does Tanya already dislike Bella? Is she jealous? Hmmmm....the Cullens' party sounds fun!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 3

so looks like Alice wants to set her up with someone. Edward maybe? I'll keep reading!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 2

nice. writing is snappy and good, characters likeable. i'll read a couple more chapters tonight then start again tomorrow...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2016 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue

This is my choice for my next completed story to read. I read another of your stories, Walk, some time ago and put several others on my TBR list. So here I am...I'm loving the first chapter. You got their wrong choices out of the way quickly, so now I'm eager to see where this goes!

Reviewer: pimmcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2016 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great story, enjoyed every bit. 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 24

awesomely sweet little story thanks for sharing ;D

Reviewer: NPattz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 24

A sweet and easy to read tale. Thank you for writing, it is much appreciated.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 3

Sweet Alice!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 24

This was a great story!!

 

I loved it!

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 24

Great story

Reviewer: nello1418 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 24

Wonderful story. I enjoyed it so much.

Reviewer: lmc123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 24

Nice story

Reviewer: tululah Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great fic, just a good balance of drama and romance.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 24

Truly enjoyed the entire story.

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 24

:)

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 20

"panty poofing"!!!! I love it!
Great story!! :)

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it

Author's Response:

Thank you-so glad you liked it! xoxox

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved the Labor Day wedding!



Author's Response:

Thank you-for reading, reviewing  and all the kind words you've left me :)  I'm really happy you liked the story!

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved the proposal & putting Tanya in her place is always a plus!  

I'm reading this as a completed story and usually I'm very aware of how many chapters are left - I was cruising along & bam "only 2 more chapters left" - totally took be by surprise!



Author's Response:

That is a great compliment! Thank you. I really love a good telling off, especially when it's Tanya!

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 21

Oh shit. Really? :(



Author's Response:

Just a little more drama to add to the mix! :)

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 20

;-)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 19

Glad that's over! Hopefully she heals quickly & no lasting effects. 



Author's Response:

I try not to drag anything out too long, it tends to get boring! Thanks so much :)

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 18

!!!!



Author's Response:

Frustrating, huh?  sorry!

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 17

Glad that wasn't more serious (Edward/hostage thing). Oh she loves him too ;-) 

Ready to find out about the flowers & now the note. And ready for Edward to quit that job & come home!



Author's Response:

I enjoyed that chapter, too ;) 

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 16

Sad to be apart but that I love her realization hot him like a ton of bricks huh?



Author's Response:

Yes, it did :) I think it happens like that sometimes.

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 15

Lemon was great. Him leaving = :(



Author's Response:

 

Hotness and sadness...  did you cry at all? I shed a few when I wrote it.

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 14

I don't want Edward to leave town :(



Author's Response:

It had to happen :( 

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 13

D. A. M. N. *thud*



Author's Response:

Liked that, did ya'?  :)  Thanks!!

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 12

;-) great still getting to know each other chapter with a perfect mix of more



Author's Response:

I liked this chapter! Thanks so much!!

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wondering if the rose is James or someone else... 



Author's Response:

You know now, but James was of course everyone's immediate guess.

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 10

I wanna do a body shot off of Edward *pouts* 



Author's Response:

I do, too! It's a long line, but definitely worth the wait ;)

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 9

There she goes again...



Author's Response:

She's about to be enlightened :) (you know this already...I feel a little silly responding when you've read it already-but I MUST!)

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 8

Always jumping to conclusions...



Author's Response:

With what James did to her, can you blame her?  :)

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 7

;-)



Author's Response:

This one, too!

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 6

;-)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing every chapter!

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 5

They just can't deny that attraction to each no matter what they say ;-)

 

And kudos to Bella again for how she handle Tanya!



Author's Response:

 

I really liked that scene ;) 

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 4

Fiesty Bella - standing up to Alice right off the bat! And we even got Tanya -yay, not!



Author's Response:

 

Yay Bella! Boo Tanya! I love writing her, though. :)

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 3

Typical Alice - gotta love her!



Author's Response:

I think I'd love to have a friend like her!

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 2

Nothing like needing a bit of help from your neighbors - eager to read Bella's first impression of Edward. 



Author's Response:

Such a sexy neighbor, too!

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue

I just read the 7 chapters of "Walk". When I find a new to me author that hooks me in, I always have to go read what else they've rewritten!

Looking forward to reading all of this one in the next few days!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, that is a great compliment!

Reviewer: jan319 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue

Hmm sound interesting 



Author's Response:

I hope you enjoy it!  :)  thanks for reading

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 24

Thank you so much for writing! Great read!;-D)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 21

What!?!



Author's Response:

LOL  what?  Not expecting that?  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 24

Truly great story. Read it all in a lil under 3hrs. Thanx for sharing

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond. I was sick and had surgery. All that with the holidays and recouperating...yeah, sorry. I'm happy you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 24

Awww, that was such a great story. I have to thank you again. :)



Author's Response:

I know this is redundant...but, Thank you!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 23

All is right in the world. I love a HEA, who doesn't? Thank-you so much for writing this awesome story, I really loved reading it.  :)



Author's Response:

I just want to thank you again for reading and reviewing! Not enough do and I truly appreciate you taking the time to tell me your thoughts! I'm happy you liked it so much!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 22

Oh, I just love a happy ending. :)



Author's Response:

Me too...Thanks!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 21

Shit!!!!



Author's Response:

LMAO!  Thanks! :)

 

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 20

I want to take a shower with Edward. *sigh*  :)



Author's Response:

What a nice thought!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 19

Whew! I'm so relieved, that was so intense.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! (and reviewing) I am really glad you're so into it!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 18

Arghhhhhh! Holy shit!



Author's Response:

LOL  Sorry...Thanks for R&R!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 17

Wow, what a powerful, emotion packed chapter. You wrote it really well. I felt the emotions come at me through my computer screen. I feaked out when Edward had that gun in his face; I was yelling "I knew it, I knew it!" I'm dying to know who the Hell is stalking Bella, and what did that note mean? That is a bit ominous, 'Soon', I want to know what is 'soon.' This is getting scary. I'm so glad Bella has the support system she does. I feel so bad for Edward, he feels helpless.



Author's Response:

Thank you! It's gratifying to know that you felt what I did while writing it. Thank you so much for all the support!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 16

This is hard, I know how much long distance relationships suck. I'm really looking forward to seeing what you've done with the rest of your story. I still love it so much.  :)



Author's Response:

They really do. Thank you for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 15

Sweet, hot, and sexy! I'm pouting; I told you I was going to be sad when Edward left. I wonder if he really will put some thought into quiting Twilight. Well, now let's see if Bella's admirer/stalker will be revealed.  :O



Author's Response:

It made me sad too...and I wrote it!  Thank you!!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 14

Your Edward is the sweetest man. *swoon* Bella is one lucky woman. I'm going to be sad when Edward leaves. This was a great chapter.  :)



Author's Response:

I figure that if Edward isnt swoon-worthy, than why bother?  lol  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 13

Damn, that was hot; I was feeling a bit tingly as I read that. ;)



Author's Response:

Awesome...guess it worked, then!  LOL Thanks so much, my dear!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 12

Awww, I really love your Edward and Bella. :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, they are pretty sweet. Thank you!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 11

Ya, I have to tell you again how much I love your story. I have a couple of thoughts on who could have left the roses, and what about that hang up call Bella got on her machine with no name on the caller ID. My guess would have to be maybe James, or what about Mike Newton from her class(she did wonder if he grazed her ass on purpose)and I have to throw Tanya in there(I don't know why, just because). I don't know why but I don't think it was Banner. I guess I'll see soon enough. :) Oh, and damn, what if they don't find out before Edward has to leave and something bad happens while he's gone? At least she's in a secure building, there's Emmett too, ect. But I'll worry just the same, maybe it's nothing too bad.



Author's Response:

It warms my heart seeing you so wrapped up in this story! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing and liking it!  LOL 

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 10

I'm still wiping the tears off my face, I laughed so hard. This was a great chapter. Loved the sweet ending too.  :) 



Author's Response:

That's great! I thought it was pretty good, too! Thanks for the R & R!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter! Poor Bella, she has such heavy trust issues from being married to James, now she thinks Edward is a womanizer or something. I wonder how many more women Bella will 'see' Edward with, or 'hear' him with before she'll find out that she totally jumped to the wrong conclusions. I can't blame her though, not with her history.This is going to be good. I just about fell out of my chair when Bella ended up naming the puppy 'Jake', I was hoping she would.  :)



Author's Response:

She does. Sometimes it's hard to see the forest for the trees. The only saving grace is that she's wrong  lol Happy you liked her choice of names for the pup!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 8

I know I sound like a broken record, but I just love your story! I just had a lightbulb moment; I wonder if Bella keeps the puppy if she'll name it 'Jake'.  :D  Sorry, that never gets old for me. :) I love how E/B are thinking pretty much all the same things about each other, it's so cute. I wondered for a minute about who Kate was, but I figured there was an explanation, after all Edward had told Emmett he wasn't into one night stands(or something like that). Bella sure doesn't know, of course she thinks the worst; isn't it funny that it bothered her so much. In denial much, Bella? I can't wait to see what happens next. Oh ya, I keep forgetting to mention how much I love your Emmett!  :)



Author's Response:

It's hard for me to write a response...I know you already know the answers! Thanks so much for reading & reviewing. I enjoy your comments and laugh right along with you!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 7

I can't even tell you how much I'm loving your story! I'm laughing my butt off! I think I even thought 'awww' a few times at the cute or sweet parts. Your story is just what I needed today. You know how life can suck sometimes? So, ya.....thanks for writing.  :)



Author's Response:

That is a great compliment, thank you! I know exactly what you mean and that sometimes spurs me on to writing.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 6

I just love the way you've written your characters, they're all great. You are so funny, I'm laughing a lot, and maybe a little gigglesnort here and there too! :)  I can't wait to see how you've worked the story out as far as Bella and Edward being together. Africa is just too darn far away!  :)



Author's Response:

I appreciate that. I try to make my characters 'different' so to speak. I get tired of reading the same typical E & B! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved this chapter! It was all good, but my favorite thing had to be Bella telling Tanya off, that was priceless. I wonder if Bella will end up keeping the puppy.  :)



Author's Response:

That was a favorite of mine, too! Thanks for reading/reviewing!!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 4

I just love your story! It makes me happy, it's so fun to read. Alice just kills me, I giggle myself silly at her sneaky little ways. It would seem that Tanya sees Bella as competition, even though she doesn't even know her. I don't want Edward to go away; I hope he gets a different assignment or something or else he and Bella won't get to know each other better. ;) I know they are both going to fight their inevitable feelings for each other, but fate is pretty powerful.  :)



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it...thank you. I enjoy reading your thoughts on the chapters!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 3

*giggles* I love your story already! It's so good to read a 'feel good' story, know what I mean? I can't wait to see how things develop between Edward and Bella, and your Alice blows me away. She's so cute; I love her!  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. Alice was fun to write! I don't do angst well, so you will find very little in anything I write!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 2

Yep, I knew it. I'm already laughing! Your story is very cute and fun.  :)



Author's Response:

LOL Thank you!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue

I think I'm really going to like your story. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! Happy you found it and wanted to give it a chance!

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 24

O how I love a happy ending. I found it highly hilarious that the dog was named Jake. I guess that just happens when you're Team Edward. This story seemed to go by so fast. I loved the plot line and little differences that you made in it. 

I was wondering if James was ever going to make a reappearance in the story. The short cameo was about all he needed though. 

Great story. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Yes, I must admit that I am 110% Team Edward...poor Jake will always be relegated to being a pet, a villian or a gay bestie...LOL  I do try to keep my stories moving-not weighing them down with too much detail or extraneous dialouge. I don't enjoy reading stories like that, so I don't write them like that. Thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughts!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 24

5 years later and more in love then they were before. awwww. eddie and bella are too sweet.

thank you for sharing your story

suzie:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for supporting this story. I appreciate each of your reviews and sorry it took a while to respond. RL has been busy!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 23

they came full circle. and to think this world wind romance all happened in one year!



Author's Response:

We should all be so lucky, huh?  lol  thanks!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 22

that was perfect! no wonder at all why she said yes!



Author's Response:

Aww. I wanted it to be meanigful, but not too cheesy...happy you liked it! Thanks a million!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 21

what the fuck?!?!?! who came in and ruined eddie's take down / shake down?



Author's Response:

LMAO  Didnt see that coming, eh?  Thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughts!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 20

eddie sure does mean business! he wasted enough time and almost lost her so he is unwilling to waste anymore.



Author's Response:

After his first marital experience, and finding the right woman-no, he isnt going to waste anymore time! Thank you !!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 19

well charlie had his say and eddie stood toe to toe with him. bella is awake and the i love yous are out. i wonder what everyone will think when they hear eddie quit and is stayingg for good?



Author's Response:

Did you like that? I wanted Edward to stand up for himself and Bella. Thank you for reading! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 18

i thought it was mike who touched her ass in class. but to turn all stalker and crazy and shit? didn't really suspect him. but she fought back and held her own, and then jake came in and finished the job. but what happened to her leg?



Author's Response:

He stabbed her...sorry if it wasnt clear! Thank you !!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 17

oh everyone should be so pissed at the 'new guy' would called the family. i wonder who the stalker is? one of the students? a teacher? james?



Author's Response:

They should. The stalker is...oh  you know already! Thank you for reading!

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