Date: 12 Nov 2017 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 22 full circle
This was a great story, you drew me in from the start.
Date: 07 Nov 2017 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle
Amazing story. Really loved it. I'm not often a fan of reading Bella/Edward fanfiction, but this one was awesome.
Date: 07 Nov 2017 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle
Amazing story. Really loved it. I'm not often a fan of reading Bella/Edward fanfiction, but this one was awesome.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 22 full circle
thank you so much for completing and posting this AWESOME!!! story on here for us ;D
Date: 18 Sep 2012 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle
I trully loved your story Im happy I came across it
Date: 30 Aug 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle
Loved your story
Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle
great ending
Author's Response:
Thank you so so so Much for taking the time to read this whole story and for every wonderful review:)
Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
great chapter
Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
sweet
Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
great chapter
Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
great chapter
Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
sweet
Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
oh no
Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
great chapter
Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
great chapter
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 13 The ties that bind
sweet
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 12 skeleton's in the box
great chapter
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 11 Karma's present
oh no
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
great chapter
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
sad
Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
poor bella
Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
great chapter
Date: 29 Jun 2012 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 6 Flight or Fight
great chapter
Author's Response:
thank you for reading this ole story and reviewing:)
Date: 29 Jun 2012 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 5 Cause and Effect
poor bella
Date: 29 Jun 2012 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace
glad their talking
Date: 29 Jun 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 3 Common Thread
great chapter
Date: 29 Jun 2012 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 2 Discarded Soul
great chapter
Date: 29 Jun 2012 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence
poor bella
Date: 29 Mar 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 22 full circle
Wonderful story and a blessed outcome!
Date: 06 Mar 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 22 full circle
loved it! thank you for a wonderful story!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all of your reviews... they inspire me:)
Date: 06 Mar 2012 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
sweet love it! <3
Date: 06 Mar 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
love the name!!! yeah bella!!! back labor sucks... been there done that!!!
Date: 06 Mar 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
oh boy that was a cliffie!! glad that i dont' have to wait to read what happened!
Date: 06 Mar 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
lots of choices... glad i am not you bella.
Date: 06 Mar 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
why don't they just get married?
Date: 06 Mar 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
wow the devils are back. renee you are terrible yuk!!!!
Date: 06 Mar 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
gald everything went well with emily..
Date: 06 Mar 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
oh boy cool jake came love rose..and i heart charlie!!
Date: 06 Mar 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 13 The ties that bind
hum interesting twist...
Date: 06 Mar 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 12 skeleton's in the box
james was a sick puppy... sick!!!
i don't envy the choices having to be made wow very tough
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 11 Karma's present
oh boy that is a twist.. i wonder who.. mike? hummmm
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
you are a strong woman to have a child so young and some through... i admire you much.
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 22 full circle
I am glad that everyone is happy and healthy. I love this story! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
karma baby karma!! love it i am glad charlie stood up for what was right. poor victoria
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
wow just wow... renee you need to burn in hell.. how terrible...wow i can't even comment
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
well at least he didn't spaz out about the kiss...
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 6 Flight or Fight
glad she got it out. good job bella!!! love charlie
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 5 Cause and Effect
oh boy it's all coming out now!! i know you shouldn't have done it but good job Jake!!! hate to see that you are in jail... oh bells you got some explaining to do.
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace
rose is awesome love her....
Date: 06 Mar 2012 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 3 Common Thread
well you gotta fess up bella it's not like you wanted to have james to that do you...
Date: 06 Mar 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 2 Discarded Soul
oh boy...
Date: 06 Mar 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence
oh boy that really sucks why didn't she tell... i hate that she didn't
Date: 06 Mar 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle
it is NEVER to late to go back to school. I am 34 almost 35 years old and I will be starting my 2nd year of collage my 3 girls (12, 11, 8) are very proud and tell all that mommy has homework also. thank you for showing that with a little work it can all work out.
angel
Author's Response:
absolutely... going on 33 and i have a few semesters left, My daughter is now the same age as i was when i had her. i am so proud that i can show her a dream defferred isnt a dream lost. and thats what i wanted to come across in cullen home... just because a plan changes doesnt mean you cant make a new one, thank you so much for reading. and congrats on collage... and being a wonderful role model to your daughters
mandi:)
Date: 06 Mar 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle
that is such a sweet ending!update soon
Date: 05 Mar 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 22 full circle
Sad to see it end but really loved this story.
Date: 05 Mar 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 22 full circle
:)
Date: 05 Mar 2012 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle
wow hell of a story
thumbs up to you and your family
having kids period is hard. but to be young and have them i assume would be harder. i am glad it ended well for your family
love the story thanx
Date: 05 Mar 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle
great ending! so glad they are all happy
Date: 05 Mar 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle
sweet ending. TY for writing and sharing.
Date: 14 Jan 2012 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
:)
Date: 16 Dec 2011 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
Hi Mandi, I was wondering if you were still planning on doing a Epi for this story and if you were how soon you plan to post it. This is just a fantastic story, and I really look forward to seeing the way you see the future for the much loved characters you have developed in this story. Kasi~
Author's Response: absolutely.:) ty for asking..
Date: 14 Dec 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
Do you make up all those tshirts sayings because they are great!!
Author's Response:
lmao.some i found online and some are off the top of head:)
Date: 14 Dec 2011 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
I have heard of grandparents sueing for rights before but really what a load of crap. I hope the brought Renees letter.
Date: 14 Dec 2011 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 12 skeleton's in the box
I thought it was mike too! Great save!!
Author's Response:
Thankyou..:) for your reviews
Date: 14 Dec 2011 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
well that last little scene with Edward took my breath away!!
Date: 14 Dec 2011 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
Soooo sad!!Its too bad she didnt have a c-section earier. That was the reason when I graduated from surgical tech school I chose not to apply to the open position in L&D. I knew one day that is what I would see and I can handle anything but that!! This chapter must have been very hard to write :(
Author's Response:
Yes, very hard to write. Ill mention it in the epi or maybe i have earlier but all five women are real well the situations are somewhat. I had to draw their grief from both my mother who had an stillborn daughter in 1975 and my sister whose baby died while still pregnant. thankyou for your very awesome reviews
Date: 14 Dec 2011 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
we have one in gainesville, florida
Date: 13 Dec 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
woo hoo for baby being good. Glad ed and B talked about the tanya thing.
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
I was so happy to see an update. I am so happy that everything is working out.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
Loved it. Glad Bella is welling to help Mr Newton after what his son did. He was right James would never left Bella alone. So happy Edward didn't sleep with Tanya. Looking forward to the epi
Date: 07 Dec 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
Awww....... It is good that Eden is going to be ok and so are Bella and Edward..
Date: 07 Dec 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
too cute, I cannot believe there is only one chapter left. I am going to miss them. Maybe you will do some future outtakes or a sequal.
Date: 07 Dec 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
I am so glad everything is turn out so well for everyone. I love the way Edward proposed to Bella. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 07 Dec 2011 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
I am so glad you didnt forget this story I was so worried about the baby so happy she is all good and Edward asked Bella and she said yes. Thank you
Date: 07 Dec 2011 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
awww so sad it is ending but so happy that everything is going great
Date: 07 Dec 2011 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
glad she did well during her surgery! Esme and Charlie eh? :) yay B & E are getting married
Date: 07 Dec 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
Beautiful story. I know that Bella's rape was not, but the end result, a baby and a complete true love.....priceless. The wait was long.....but totally worth it. I hope any young girls out there don't get the idea teen pregnancy and love always follows. This was a story, not all things work out like this. Unfortunately!!! This has been a exciting, with tears story, I hope everyone reads it and gives it the rave reviews it deserves!!!!
Author's Response:
absolutely. i tried to stay as close to personal experinces.. its not all fariy tales and maybe it will help if there were a AN about that in the epi. cause i sure didnt sinshine and rainbows with mine own. I was blessed with a husband that stayed by my side and became a great dad.
Date: 07 Dec 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
Well worth the wait! I cried....
Thank you for the update. I am hooked onto Married to the Mob as well.
Date: 07 Dec 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
Wonderful chapter, I can't believe only the epilogue is left. Looking forward to see how everything turns out :)
Date: 07 Dec 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
Awesome update... I know the operation well... Hubby had his valve replaced in September. the average time is 4 to 6 hours my hubby everything went so smoothly that it only took 3 hours 15 minutes. Then in Oct my first granddaughter was born and she has a whole in her heart and will need an operation sometime before she turns 3.... I look forward to the epilogue.......
Hugs
Date: 07 Dec 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
cute chapter looking forward to the next one
Date: 07 Dec 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine
Love this story and will be sad to see it go but on the bright side it's in my favorites so I can always go back and read it again.
Date: 20 Jun 2011 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
What a hateful little...well, you know...I'd like to smack Renee in her botoxed face...and you know she botoxes...
Date: 20 Jun 2011 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 5 Cause and Effect
Yay Jacob! I totally love that he used his one call for Bella. I love it! I hope Charlie punches James in the face...
Date: 20 Jun 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace
I love that Rosalie figured it out...I hope Bella confides in her...
I feel a little better for Bella because of that actually :)
Date: 20 Jun 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 3 Common Thread
I get more into this with every chapter :)
Date: 20 Jun 2011 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence
Wow...
This story kind of draws you right in, and I am looking forward to reading more!
Date: 01 Jun 2011 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 6 Flight or Fight
I understand the whole having to have the "father" sign off on parental rights. I have had to deal with something similar. It is quite the stressor...
I am really enjoying the story so far. I look forward to seeing the E&B relationship develop.
XO
Date: 23 May 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
Great chapter. It was a very sweet thing that Mr. Newton did. I'm glad she can now afford to go to college in Arizona without worrying about the expense. I'm also glad that they were able to get her to the hospital in time for the delivery.
I can only imgaine what all Edward and Bella needs to talk about.
Author's Response: thankyou:) so much
Date: 23 May 2011 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
What did Edward do? Who's perfume does he smell like? I can totally understand why Bella would need to get away, I just hope Mr. Newton doesn't do anything to her or the baby.
Great chapter.
Date: 18 May 2011 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart
I really hope she stays in Arizona. Great Chapter.
Date: 18 May 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 17 Strength
I loved the ornament Edward gave Bella and I'm relieved that the adoption can go through. Great chapter.
Date: 18 May 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
Why oh why does Renee have to try and ruin everything good in Bella's life, when we all know she could care less about her or the baby.
Great chapter.
Date: 18 May 2011 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
Wonderful chapter. I found it comical that Emily didn't realize that her water broke. I would think that you would notice it immediately, but I can see it happening if your a heavy sleeper.
Author's Response:
thankyou for the review, the person that had this experince certainly is:).. she can sleep anywhere at anytime:)
Date: 12 May 2011 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
Loved the pic of the baby she is so cute Edward really acted like a man in this chap but Bella was very brave in hoe she poke to Mr Newton .what Mr Newton did for Bella was wonderful.
Author's Response: thank you so much...
Date: 07 May 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
WAIT WAIT WAIT!!!
Are you just gonna gloss over the fact that Edward came home smelling like another woman?!?!? If Bella won't say it, I will-- That's messed up! What the hell did he do?!?!
Oh...BTW...Eden is adorable :)
Author's Response:
i wont gloss i assure you.. when people are in their right mind.. it will come up
Date: 06 May 2011 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
Loved it
Author's Response: thank you
Date: 02 May 2011 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
I am glad that Bella's temper didn't cause harm to the baby. She was big for being 3 weeks early. Is she going to need surgury to fix her heart?
Author's Response:
this birth was based on my sister's when she had my youngest niece she was 4 weeks early and she weighted 7. 3 and her sisiter who was over due was 7.1.lol surgery will be a definite for eden
Date: 02 May 2011 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
ohhh, how beautiful what a wonderful birth. I really hope it goes well now, it is going to be hard for Bella and Edward to trust each other again, I hope it does not take too long. They have a bridge to mend and I hope it goes swimmingly!
Author's Response:
i agree, thankyou so much
Date: 30 Apr 2011 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
Awww.. How sweet was it that Mr. Newton is making it able for Bella to stay and be with her daughter... And she is here now!! And the name is very cute!
Author's Response:
thankyou so much:)