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Reviewer: LadyAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2017 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 22 full circle

This was a great story, you drew me in from the start. 

Reviewer: jennateewrites Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle

Amazing story. Really loved it. I'm not often a fan of reading Bella/Edward fanfiction, but this one was awesome.

Reviewer: jennateewrites Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle

Amazing story. Really loved it. I'm not often a fan of reading Bella/Edward fanfiction, but this one was awesome.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2015 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 22 full circle

thank you so much for completing and posting this AWESOME!!! story on here for us ;D 

Reviewer: Jossiev Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle

I trully loved your story Im happy I came across it

Reviewer: marycullenblack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle

Loved your story

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle

great ending



Author's Response:

Thank you so so so Much for taking the time to read this whole story and for every wonderful review:)

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

great chapter

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings

sweet

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy

great chapter

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart

great chapter

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 17 Strength

sweet

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company

oh no

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings

great chapter

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie

great chapter

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 13 The ties that bind

sweet

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 12 skeleton's in the box

great chapter

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 11 Karma's present

oh no

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on

great chapter

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss

sad

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen

poor bella

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings

great chapter

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 6 Flight or Fight

great chapter



Author's Response:

thank you for reading this ole story and reviewing:)

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 5 Cause and Effect

poor bella

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace

glad their talking

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 3 Common Thread

great chapter

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 2 Discarded Soul

great chapter

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence

poor bella

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 22 full circle

Wonderful story and a blessed outcome!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 22 full circle

loved it! thank you for a wonderful story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all of your reviews... they inspire me:)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

sweet love it! <3

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings

love the name!!! yeah bella!!! back labor sucks... been there done that!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy

oh boy that was a cliffie!! glad that i dont' have to wait to read what happened!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart

lots of choices... glad i am not you bella. 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 17 Strength

why don't they just get married?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company

wow the devils are back.  renee you are terrible yuk!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings

gald everything went well with emily..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie

oh boy cool jake came love rose..and i heart charlie!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 13 The ties that bind

hum interesting twist...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 12 skeleton's in the box

james was a sick puppy... sick!!!

i don't envy the choices having to be made wow very tough

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 11 Karma's present

oh boy that is a twist.. i wonder who.. mike?  hummmm

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on

you are a strong woman to have a child so young and some through... i admire you much.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 22 full circle

I am glad that everyone is happy and healthy. I love this story! Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss

karma baby karma!! love it i am glad charlie stood up for what was right.  poor victoria

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen

wow just wow... renee you need to burn in hell.. how terrible...wow i can't even comment

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings

well at least he didn't spaz out about the kiss...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 6 Flight or Fight

glad she got it out.  good job bella!!!  love charlie

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 5 Cause and Effect

oh boy it's all coming out now!!  i know you shouldn't have done it but good job Jake!!!  hate to see that you are in jail... oh bells you got some explaining to do.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace

rose is awesome love her....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 3 Common Thread

well you gotta fess up bella it's not like you wanted to have james to that do you...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 2 Discarded Soul

oh boy...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence

oh boy that really sucks why didn't she tell... i hate that she didn't

Reviewer: amhall1977 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle

it is NEVER to late to go back to school. I am 34 almost 35 years old and I will be starting my 2nd year of collage my 3 girls (12, 11, 8) are very proud and tell all that mommy has homework also. thank you for showing that with a little work it can all work out.

angel



Author's Response:

absolutely... going on 33 and i have a few semesters left, My daughter is now the same age as i was when i had her. i am so proud that i can show her a dream defferred isnt a dream lost. and thats what i wanted to come across in cullen home...  just because a plan changes doesnt mean you cant make a new one, thank you so much for reading. and congrats on collage... and being a wonderful role model to your daughters

 

mandi:)

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle

that is such a sweet ending!update soon

Reviewer: lahragal Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 22 full circle

Sad to see it end but really loved this story.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 22 full circle

:)

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2012 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle

wow hell of a story

thumbs up to you and your family

having kids period is hard. but to be young and have them i assume would be harder. i am glad it ended well for your family

love the story thanx

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle

great ending! so glad they are all happy

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 22 full circle

sweet ending.  TY for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2012 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

:)

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2011 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

Hi Mandi, I was wondering if you were still planning on doing a Epi for this story and if you were how soon you plan to post it.  This is just a fantastic story, and I really look forward to seeing the way you see the future for the much loved characters you have developed in this story.  Kasi~



Author's Response: absolutely.:) ty for asking..

Reviewer: shegoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 17 Strength

Do you make up all those tshirts sayings because they are great!!



Author's Response:

lmao.some i found online and some are off the top of head:)

Reviewer: shegoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2011 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company

I have heard of grandparents sueing for rights before but really what a load of crap. I hope the brought Renees letter.

Reviewer: shegoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2011 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 12 skeleton's in the box

I thought it was mike too! Great save!!



Author's Response:

Thankyou..:) for your reviews

Reviewer: shegoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2011 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on

well that last little scene with Edward took my breath away!!

Reviewer: shegoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2011 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss

Soooo sad!!Its too bad she didnt have a c-section earier. That was the reason when I graduated from surgical tech school I chose not to apply to the open position in L&D. I knew one day that is what I would see and I can handle anything but that!! This chapter must have been very hard to write :(



Author's Response:

Yes, very hard to write. Ill mention it in the epi or maybe i have earlier but all five women are real well the situations are somewhat. I had to draw their grief from both my mother who had an stillborn daughter in 1975 and my sister whose baby died while still pregnant. thankyou for your very awesome reviews

Reviewer: shegoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2011 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen

we have one in gainesville, florida

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

woo hoo for baby being good.   Glad ed and B talked about the tanya thing.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

I was so happy to see an update. I am so happy that everything is working out.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

Loved it. Glad Bella is welling to help Mr Newton after what his son did. He was right James would never left Bella alone. So happy Edward didn't sleep with Tanya. Looking forward to the epi

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

Awww....... It is good that Eden is going to be ok and so are Bella and Edward..

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

too cute, I cannot believe there is only one chapter left. I am going to miss them. Maybe you will do some future outtakes or a sequal.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

I am so glad everything is turn out so well for everyone. I love the way Edward proposed to Bella. Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

I am so glad you didnt forget this story I was so worried about the baby so happy she is all good and Edward asked Bella and she said yes.  Thank you

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

awww so sad it is ending but so happy that everything is going great

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

glad she did well during her surgery! Esme and Charlie eh? :) yay B & E are getting married

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

Beautiful story. I know that Bella's rape was not, but the end result, a baby and a complete true love.....priceless. The wait was long.....but totally worth it.  I hope any young girls out there don't get the idea teen pregnancy and love always follows. This was a story, not all things work out like this. Unfortunately!!!  This has been a exciting, with tears story, I hope everyone reads it and gives it the rave reviews it deserves!!!! 



Author's Response:

absolutely. i tried to stay as close to personal experinces.. its not all fariy tales and maybe it will help if there were a AN about that in the epi. cause i sure didnt sinshine and rainbows with mine own. I was blessed with a husband that stayed by my side and became a great dad.

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

Well worth the wait!  I cried....

Thank you for the update.  I am hooked onto Married to the Mob as well.

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

Wonderful chapter, I can't believe only the epilogue is left. Looking forward to see how everything turns out :)

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

Awesome update... I know the operation well... Hubby had his valve replaced in September.  the average time is 4 to 6 hours my hubby everything went so smoothly that it only took 3 hours 15 minutes.  Then in Oct my first granddaughter was born and she has a whole in her heart and will need an operation sometime before she turns 3.... I look forward to the epilogue.......

 

Hugs

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

cute chapter looking forward to the next one 

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

Love this story and will be sad to see it go but on the bright side it's in my favorites so I can always go back and read it again. 

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen

What a hateful little...well, you know...I'd like to smack Renee in her botoxed face...and you know she botoxes...

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 5 Cause and Effect

Yay Jacob!  I totally love that he used his one call for Bella.  I love it!  I hope Charlie punches James in the face...

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace

I love that Rosalie figured it out...I hope Bella confides in her...

I feel a little better for Bella because of that actually :)

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 3 Common Thread

I get more into this with every chapter :)

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Date: 20 Jun 2011 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence

Wow...

This story kind of draws you right in, and I am looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: nikon342 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2011 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 6 Flight or Fight

I understand the whole having to have the "father" sign off on parental rights. I have had to deal with something similar. It is quite the stressor...

I am really enjoying the story so far. I look forward to seeing the E&B relationship develop.
XO

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings

Great chapter. It was a very sweet thing that Mr. Newton did. I'm glad she can now afford to go to college in Arizona without worrying about the expense. I'm also glad that they were able to get her to the hospital in time for the delivery.

I can only imgaine what all Edward and Bella needs to talk about.



Author's Response: thankyou:) so much

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2011 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy

What did Edward do? Who's perfume does he smell like? I can totally understand why Bella would need to get away, I just hope Mr. Newton doesn't do anything to her or the baby.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2011 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart

I really hope she stays in Arizona. Great Chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 17 Strength

I loved the ornament Edward gave Bella and I'm relieved that the adoption can go through. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company

Why oh why does Renee have to try and ruin everything good in Bella's life, when we all know she could care less about her or the baby.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2011 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings

Wonderful chapter. I found it comical that Emily didn't realize that her water broke. I would think that you would notice it immediately, but I can see it happening if your a heavy sleeper.

 



Author's Response:

thankyou for the review, the person  that had this experince certainly is:).. she can sleep anywhere at anytime:)

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings

Loved the pic of the baby she is so cute Edward really acted like a man in this chap but Bella was very brave in hoe she poke to Mr Newton .what Mr Newton did for Bella was wonderful.



Author's Response: thank you so much...

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings

WAIT WAIT WAIT!!!

Are you just gonna gloss over the fact that Edward came home smelling like another woman?!?!? If Bella won't say it, I will-- That's messed up! What the hell did he do?!?!

Oh...BTW...Eden is adorable :)



Author's Response:

i wont gloss i assure you.. when people are in their right mind.. it will come up

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2011 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings

Loved it

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings

I am glad that Bella's temper didn't cause harm to the baby.  She was big for being 3 weeks early. Is she going to need surgury to fix her heart?



Author's Response:

 this birth was based on my sister's when she had my youngest niece she was 4 weeks early and she weighted 7. 3 and her sisiter who was over due was 7.1.lol surgery will be a definite for eden

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings

ohhh, how beautiful what a wonderful birth.  I really hope it goes well now, it is going to be hard for Bella and Edward to trust each other again, I hope it does not take too long.  They have a bridge to mend and I hope it goes swimmingly!



Author's Response:

i agree, thankyou so much

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings

Awww.. How sweet was it that Mr. Newton is making it able for Bella to stay and be with her daughter... And she is here now!! And the name is very cute!



Author's Response:

thankyou so much:)

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