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Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2020 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2020 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2020 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2020 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2020 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2020 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2020 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2020 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it! Poor Edward!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2020 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

Great

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2020 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2015 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 10

wonderful and Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2015 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 3

awesome

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2015 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 10

Sounds like life, messy as it usually is, turned out pretty near perfect for all concerned! I loved the new baby coming on Millie's birthday and her name honoring both her sister and grandma!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2015 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 9

I knew she would move to Everwood and to build them a new house was just a bonus! The proposal was perfectly done , too! Now if only they could regain full custody of Millie!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2015 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 8

Now that they have found each other, it must be heartbreaking to part! I just hope they can keep the relationship going!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 6

A real rollercoaster day! I was sort of shocked that Jake said what he did and acted like a dad for a change, never mind a man! Great that the rescue went well and better that they have now confessed their love for each other!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2015 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 5

What a sweet, romantic first date! Enough to make a girl swoon! I just love the way these two are falling for each other! They have a lot of heartache in common and similar experiences to draw them together! May I also say what a couple of selfish slobs Jake and Nessie are?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2015 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 4

Jake only thinks he's found his soul mate, it looks to me like Bella really has! He's darn near perfect!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2015 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 3

Okay, so I lied, I just had to read a couple more chapters! This tale has grabbed me and I'm hooked!  Better finish later before I fall asleep on my keyboard!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2015 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 2

How nice that his daughter has taken a liking to Bella! A child of divorced parents can probably empathize with her a lot!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2015 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm sorry it's the middle of the night here, because I'm loving the way this is starting out and hate to wait for daylight to finish! I kept favoriting your stories , after finishing Behind the Images(loved that, too!) and ran out of time!

Reviewer: Gran6 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 10

What a gift this wonderful story is!  You never disappoint.  Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 10

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME AWESOME JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us. I have read a couple of your other stories. I noticed that you have not written in a while......WHY???? You do an awesome job and you have wonderful story lines. You need to start writing again. I am putting you on author alert in case you decide to write some more. I don't want to miss anything you write. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 9

AWESOME!!!!!!!!! I love how everything fell into place for them. Now they just need Millie to live with them. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

LOVED this whole chapter. Loved the sleepover, the carriage ride with the kids and their date. I hate that they are leaving. But I know with how Bella and Edward feels they will be back together. Awesome chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 7

Glad that Bella has gotten her muse back. LOVE me some Esme. Jake needed his eyes open to Bella moving on. He was the one that screwed up not Bella. Love the kids at the end here. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 6

LOVE Esme and her story. I hate that Bella and Esme were worring about Edward. SOOOOO glad that Bella went off on Jake. He deserves much worse than that. But at least maybe it opened his eyes.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 5

Love the time that they spending with the kids. Loved their first date.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 4

OMGosh!!!!!! I can not believe that Jacob and Nessie were treating the kids like that. I know having a new baby is stressful but what they did was just wrong. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 3

Leah and Jake are a pair. I feel so sorry for Bella's kids. They are going to have an awful Christmas. Thanks for giving us Edward's story. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love little Millie!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Jake sounds like a real jerk. Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2013 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 10

I absolutely adored this story. Thank You!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) loved this

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 23 Sep 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 10

very sweet story.

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2011 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 10

Wonderful story.  And I managed to read it at just the right time as Christmas season is just starting to kick off.  The story is as your others- well-written with great fleshed-out characters.  Such a short sweet tale.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 10

Really sweet story.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 9

The only thing that could make this better would be if Edward got custody of Millie.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 8

Not one word from Leah the whole time?

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 7

Teary eyed.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 6

Jake wakes up. He's such a sap.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

Ice skating is so incredibly sexy. Great date.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh, Bella you never learn do you?

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 3

Aww such a sad story. It's so unfair that the courts blindly take a mothers' side. Seen too many times when mom isn't the best choice. I've always stuck up for the divorced fathers I know. Of course, Jake isn't one of them.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 2

Think Millie is going to play matchmaker.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hope appropo, a forest ranger. My daughter-in-law was a ranger in Washington. Not a very easy job

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2011 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 10

You packed quite a punch in 10 chapters!  Loved each and every one.  Again, well done!

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2011 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 9

Whoa, they packed a whole lot of life in 1 year of a long distance relationship!

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2011 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 8

What a special New Year's for them.  So sad when Bella and the kids had to leave. 

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 7

I'm so happy for Bella, Edward and kids - they are plotting out a course to become a family.

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oh Jake, at least you acknowledged you messed up HARD.  Thank goodness Edward is okay and how sweet were their "I Love You's"!

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 5

I am so freaked out, I loved that show High Mountain Rangers and had hard crushes on Shane Conrad too!  That date was lovely.  Sigh...

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 4

Come on...  Go with your instincts on this Bella and have a little faith.

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 3

Goodness. such chemistry between these two!  Ewh, Leah and Jacob are awful, selfish people.

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 2

Millie - Amileah, what a sweet little girl!

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ranger Edward?  OMG, I love that!

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 10

As I've come to expect, you've written yet another amazing story! Thank you so much for sharing your gift for writing with us. :)

Reviewer: HanaYoshiko Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 10

I love how the ststers have the same birthday. Because I have a little sister ten years to the day younger than me. loved the story. ;) 

Reviewer: jesspace Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 10

Beautiful story!  It was such a great read. I tend to read some deep stories with lots of angst.  I loved that this was serious, yet light hearted; overall just a great story with tasteful, yummy lemons.  Kudos!

 

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 10

I hope you write another story soon!! :0 You could do one for Valentines and then easter!! One every holiday?? Ha, ha, ha....... :)

Reviewer: GwenCooper426 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 10

: )  Such a sweet story & ending! Thank you for sharing!

Hugs,

Gwen

Reviewer: Rion Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 10

nice story... I really enjoyed this..

Reviewer: SeaShells421 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 10

I loved this! You gave it a perfect ending!

Reviewer: dwright Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 10

What a fun Christmas story! Loved it. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 10

I really loved the story.

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

I loved it!!!!!!

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 8

I know it's taking me a while to get through your most recent updates; real life has kept me from reading. I love your story, and absolutely love Edward. Scars can be a touchy subject and the way that he handled Bella's was so unbelievable, awesome.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 10

Great Ending!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Stellarrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 10

So loved this story!  Rangerward and Authorella are wonderful...and such a great bunch of kids! (Kinda would have loved to see a showdown with Edward's wicked Bitch of an ex, but can't have everything...)

How about another epilogue (or two)...????

Reviewer: Rayday Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 7

Was finally able to have the time to read this chapter. I loved it. I love how the kids just seem to gravitate to each other in a way that they want to be a big happy family. I hope everything works out. I also find it kind of satisfying that Jacob has finally realized what he has lost.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 10

Great ending, wow! 5 kids...busy household! beautiful story (as usual...lol) Have a wonderful NEW YEAR!!!

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 10

Warm and beautiful. A wonderful story filled with life lessons that we can all live by.

Thank you dear (again) for all of the lovely words you send our way.

Pam

Reviewer: angelbaby696 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 10

Such a wonderful story! it was one of the few that i would stop what i was reading to go see what happened next. loved it, and can't wait till your next one.

angel

Reviewer: momams Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 10

I loved it!!!!! 

I liked that this took place after some time so we could get a glimpse as to what their life has been like. How they all have adapted and formed an amazing family. The two younger kids are far in age from the first ones, that has to be complicated at times, but also has given them all their own time. 

It has been a wonderful journey, thanks for writing it, sharing it and thanks too to the wonderful team that encouraged and helped you through it.

Have a wonderful happy new year!!!!!!

Reviewer: westernem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 10

gosh great name :D loved the end, what a great HEA kind of like that you didn't really mention what happened to jake and nessie and all that, just focusing on the happiness that is edward and bella (and all of their kids of course) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 10

That was a wonderful story the only thing is I am sad it is over.  I will be looking forward to what you do next.  Thanks for sharing your talent have a wonderful New Year

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 10

woo hoo Millie is where she belongs.

Reviewer: Mil Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 10

I really loved this story. A wonderful christmas treat. The epilogue was a perfect ending to a beautiful and well written story. Happy New Year to you and thanks again for sharing your writing with the fandom.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 10

I absolutely loved it!! Thank you for wrapping it up all nice & tidy!!
Happy New Year!!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 10

I LOVED IT!!! WHAT A GREAT CHRISTMAS STORY!!!

And I got the name thing :)

 

Happy New Year xoxo

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 10

Great ending!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 10

I love the ending.  However, I didn't get the Suzanne part, too.  That confused me.

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 10

Sad to see it ending but it was a wonderful ending. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 10

Such a beautiful story. The growth in their emotions is natural. I know that when love hits it really does, some of us are lucky enough to know from the very beginning. I have always enjoyed reading your stories. Enjoy the start to the New Year as well as the ending of an old. Keep coming up with great ideas for stories.

Reviewer: Tezzaangel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 10

I love this story! Thanks for sharing it with us! Happy New Year!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 10

:)

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 10

awww such a great way to end the story way to go loved it!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 10

Thanks again for such a beautiful "holiday" story!

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 10

A beautiful ending... I would have liked to see a bit more of Edward's presense, but otherwise I loved it.

Thanks and Happy New Year.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 10

Great story!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 10

LOVED it!!  I was hoping this epi was a baby being born.  Thank you!!  It's been a pleasure.

Have a great New Year!!

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