Date: 04 Nov 2010 7:15 PM Title: Flight
booooo!
Author's Response:
it's okay, there's no need to cry
Date: 20 May 2010 5:24 AM Title: Five Years Later.....
So did Edward and Bella die or are they alive somewhere together?
Author's Response: no one knows :-)
Date: 05 May 2010 6:39 AM Title: Five Years Later.....
So I'm bummed about Bella and Edward being dead but that's just because I'm a sap for those two. I would have loved to read more about the settlement and whatever happened with the vaccinations and the zombies. Thank you again for taking the time to share your story with the fandom. This is definitely one of favs, I've never before taken the time to post reviews on two sites just because I think the story deserves it. I really liked that you followed the different characters and didn't focus on just one. Those stories are fine, but I think you did a great job making this story more about a community of survivors rather than one person or couple surviving. If I could offer any advice, it would be this: Your characters have their own personalities but I think you could express them more, especially when writing in so many different points of view. Many of the character's voices sounded much the same. Thanks again, I really enjoyed it, H
Author's Response: sorry I let you down
Date: 05 May 2010 6:29 AM Title: Flight
I kind of wish you'd put the story on hiatus and let it go a little longer when you were up to it again. I've really been enjoying it and hate to see it end, but it's your call, obviously.
I really hope Edward and Bella aren't dead... :(
In general I hate reading unhappy endings, but I can totally respect an author who's willing to kill main characters for the plot. Not many are willing to do that so it always comes as a surprise when one dies.
Regardless of the outcome, if you're happy with the ending that's all that really matters. If you're not, you can always change it or write a sequel (if you haven't killed everyone by the end). (*nudge, nudge, wink, wink*)
Author's Response: I'm sorry hun
Date: 04 May 2010 3:45 AM Title: What Can Go Wrong Will
"Dun dun dun. I know, crazy place to end it, but I had to save some good stuff for later! :-)"
Woohoo! I love good stuff!
Author's Response: lol happy you enjoyed!
Date: 04 May 2010 3:31 AM Title: To Hell with Waldo, Where's Edward?
I think you did great. I didn't see a vaccine coming to be honest, and I definitely didn't think Carlisle was going to be eaten by his dead lover.
And Charlie's POV was too cute. He's such a sap.
Author's Response: I heart Charlie lol
Date: 04 May 2010 2:46 AM Title: Where There Is Smoke....................
Finally the peeps are going to find out about Carlisle's so very dirty secret (ick!)
People seriously asked you to change your story? That's f*cking rude. I'll admit I was creeped out by Carlisle and his necrophilia, but that's what horror's all about! I loved it!
Author's Response: yes, I had a few people tell me that they weren't going to read my stuff anymore if I didn't make the changes they wanted
Date: 03 May 2010 9:47 PM Title: Two Months
OMG! Seriously sick. I fucking loved it.
Author's Response: I know! *evil laugh*
Date: 03 May 2010 7:55 AM Title: Luck is Always Two-Faced
Oh that's just too sad.
I don't see how Esme can be saved. People die, then become zombies, right? Vera was bitten, her heart stopped, she died, then she became reanimated. I don't see how anyone can be brought back to life, especially after their blood has coagulated and junk.
Sheesh, why'd you have to go and kill sweet Esme?
Author's Response: I'm sorry hun, but that's a horror story for you
Date: 03 May 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 8 Game Plans
I'm just loving the shit out of this story. I sometimes like to imagine what I would should some crazy 28 Days Later shit happen and, of course, all the awesome stuff I would raid to survive on is like the first stop.
I can tell you put a lot of thought into this story and it really shows.
Author's Response: yeah, I put so much thought into some of this that it scared readers off lol
Date: 03 May 2010 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 7 Incoming!
Ugh, why'd you have to go and make Tanya all human? I actually feel bad for her. Obviously she should have been more supportive of Edward's career, but I think she knows that, and I doubt she could help feeling lonely. She made one mistake and Edward won't even think about forgiving her...
Author's Response: Tanya deserved a break in this story, since I was doing things so differently with a lot of the others
Date: 03 May 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 6 To WallyWorld We Go!
WooHoo! The whole gang is together (right?) and there's already some electricity between E&B and it sounds like I get to read about some massive zombie killin in the chapter. I'm stoked!
Author's Response: there's always some zombie killing to do!
Date: 03 May 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 5 Spoons Annoy Me
"Amorous endeavors can be contemplated on when we're not about to die!" Carlisle is too cute.
Poor Ben and Angela, but jeez, she could have waited until she helped find a cure, and then shot herself. I think Ben would be disappointed.
Yay, now Emmett, Carlisle and Esme are together and so are Rosalie, Alice, Jasper and Edward! Now we just need Bella and the two groups together.
"... currently AWOL on account of the zombie apocalypse." I love Emmett.
Author's Response: the characters just kind of took off on me lol
Date: 03 May 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 4 On the Road Again
Poor Emmett.
I really like your Rosalie. And Alice is too funny.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like them, it's difficult to make likable characters in a world like this one
Date: 03 May 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 3 Mad Scientists, Dogs, and a Hummer
Yay! Jasper and Alice met Rosalie.
Zombie Survival Handbook, awesome!
Author's Response: :-) yes it is!
Date: 03 May 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 2 Running is Sometimes the Best Option
I am LOVING this story! I can't wait to find out if all our characters eventually meet up somewhere.
Thank you so much for sharing!
Author's Response: glad you like, thanks for reading!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 4:55 AM Title: THIS IS RIDICULOUS
That's why I hate ff.net now.
Author's Response:
yeah, bunch of jerks
Date: 19 Apr 2010 4:52 AM Title: Flight
-hugs- Hope you're holding up. I'm not sure which would be worse, and expected death or a sudden one. My grandma passed away two years ago, but it was very sudden.
Author's Response:
I am doing better, though I agree that it's hard to tell which is worse.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 4:23 AM Title: Where There Is Smoke....................
It wouldn't be YOUR story if you changed it to make other people happy. That's what I like about this place, they won't dump your story just because enough people made complaints when it didn't even break the rules. If you don't like it, it's as simple as not reading it.
Author's Response:
exactly. thank you for the support *hugs*
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:49 AM Title: THIS IS RIDICULOUS
That's why I hate ff.net now.
Author's Response:
I hate it too, but it's hard to leave when it's where I got my start
Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 3 Mad Scientists, Dogs, and a Hummer
Reminds me of Resident Evil, that where you get the idea? Also, could you go back through and edit the names/locations to show up in bold? It's slightly confusing when you miss them.
Author's Response:
Sorry, can't say that I got the idea anywhere except for my twisted brain...or my husband's equally demented self lol
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2010 12:43 AM Title: Two Months
that is gross, big time gross.
great story but i think that was grossest part in this story. lol
keep up the great work
Author's Response:
*evil laugh* that's why it's a horror story
Date: 17 Apr 2010 2:51 AM Title: Five Years Later.....
I understand ur feelings about ending the story, but i think you did it well!
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
thank you hun :-)
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 11:25 PM Title: Five Years Later.....
Oh the tears! I have loved this story oh so much! But i can't beleive you killed Edward and Bella!
I cry so much for this.
I think it is great that you hve been able to get this out with all the personal stuff you have going on. It just shows that you are a fabulous writer.
Anything else you ever decied to write i will be sure to read.
Thank you for the great story.
Loved it, Love ya, Kj :)
Author's Response:
thank you so much for reading!!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 10:44 PM Title: Five Years Later.....
Short and sweet. :) [I'm going to copy and paste from FF - makes it easier. I might have added a few things also. :D]
That was a really sweet end. I wasn't disappointed at all. I'm glad you ended it in Alice's POV also.
I was especially impressed at how you made it very old-fashioned since the world is starting over. They're like the first settlers on the homestead, all taking part in schooling the next generation, and then the horse and buggy driving up to the cabin was a nice touch.
I thought that was especially cool.
I wanted to also add Edward's death was EPIC in the previous chapter! I forgot to tell you that earlier. Of course, this whole story was EPIC, and I enjoyed it all, despite my random whining. ;)
It was well-written, always kept my interest, had fully developed characters, and fantastic and well-thought out plot, and so I'd say it's one of my favorite stories.
Thanks for sharing it with us and hope you the best this weekend and the days ahead.
~Labbit :)
Author's Response:
thank you! I don't think I'm ever going to say that enough
Date: 16 Apr 2010 8:13 PM Title: Five Years Later.....
:)
Author's Response:
:-)
Date: 16 Apr 2010 8:26 AM Title: Flight
:)
Author's Response:
:-)
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 4:15 AM Title: Flight
As I reviewed over at FF, I'm so sorry for your loss, Raven. :(
This was a great chapter. Again, its amazing you wrote this with all you are dealing with. I think from the scene with Bella to the end it was fantastic.
I completely understand why the topic is upsetting at the moment.
I hope you the best with the funeral and all that you are dealing with at the moment.
Take care of yourself!
~Val xoxoxo
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing over on here too hun!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 4:00 AM Title: Flight
So sorry to hear about your grandfather's passing, but at least he is at peace now. I have enjoyed this story, but if it is ending here, I am disappointed that Bella and Edward have been killed off. I was hoping for a somewhat HEA for them.
Author's Response:
thank you for your thoughts
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:59 AM Title: To Hell with Waldo, Where's Edward?
Dude, I threw up in my mouth when Carlisle turned around with his trouser snake covered in zombie...zombie, ugh hold on...ok in zombie blech. I'm at a loss for words *rare feat I might add* finding a description of what exactly he could be slathered with.
*Snort* Esme's eating Carlisle * oh God I'm turning into Emmett*....well the sexual revolution tables have certainly turned in post-apocalyptic Forks. *grin*
Author's Response:
that scene lost me a few readers lol
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:36 AM Title: Where There Is Smoke....................
The pace with which you have this story moving is like watching a movie, I shit you not. I'm kinda glad RL got busy so I can move through more chapters, rather than do the proverbial update pee-pee dance to find out what happens next. *grin*
However, I do believe that our dear Dr. Cullenstein has gone to rubber room town and purchased a house. Yikes.
As far as losing readers due to the gore factor, well.....the title is pretty self explainatory soooooo. Hm. Yeah.
Author's Response:
I'm really glad you've enjoyed everything so far!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 2:30 AM Title: Blondes and Bombshells
loving the story so far...keep up the good work...sorry about your grandfather
Author's Response:
thank you for reading
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2010 5:04 AM Title: Blondes and Bombshells
oh sweet rose, her story has become so intriguing. i must be dense cause i totally didnt put together that her and vera were more than just friends. awesome suprise to the story. so glad she is adopting the little girl. how is edward going to function with a broken arm? cant wait to find out. this chappie was great. i dont know what your talking about. thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
thank you for sticking with me!
Date: 07 Apr 2010 10:45 PM Title: Where There Is Smoke....................
why would we stop reading a zombie story because it is creepy? HeLLoooo... zombie stories are supposed to be creepy. The fact that this one actually delivers is a reason to begin reading it, not stop. silly people. i praise you RJ, please stick to your guns and original plot line because thats all i want to read. let those other people write their own stories to please themselves.
Author's Response:
thanks hun, a lot of people just want fluff with the occasional Boo! when it comes to horror...I guess you can tell that I'm not one of them lol
Date: 07 Apr 2010 10:33 PM Title: Two Months
i thought that the gross part was going to be what carlisle was feeding esme. so i was waiting for those gorey details, but you side stepped that and freaked me out with carlisle's demented twisted sexy times. awesome! awesome and yucky! that and edward and bellas relationship finally evolving makes this the best chapter yet! thanks for sharing your craziness with us!
Author's Response:
thank you for reading! It means so much to me!
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 9:15 PM Title: Blondes and Bombshells
Again, I hope you the best with your family and take as much time as you need. Not that you need our permission, but I know I love this story so much I'll wait for whenever you're able to update.
I wrote such a long review on FF that I'll shorten it here.
I loved Rosalie's POV and the fact she got a little girl.
Tanya and Leah, well you know they've been over at my place, and I just love those two. :D
Bella POV was a crack up. She and Jake are such great BFF's.
Thanks for the shout out and you take care of yourself. Another great update!
~Labbit xoxo :)
Author's Response:
I had to give Rose and Emmett a little girl, it just felt right. And I just view Jake and Bella like my hubby and I would be if he was gay actually lol
Date: 28 Mar 2010 8:19 PM Title: Blondes and Bombshells
Real life takes top priority sometimes...happens to everyone...*Hugs*
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
thanks for understanding hun *hugs*
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:46 PM Title: Blondes and Bombshells
great chapter. so are we going to get some edward and bella sexy times??? and do you have anything planned for after this story?
Author's Response:
I'm not sure either of them are ready for that level of intimacy yet. As for things planned after this story wraps up, I have a few ideas, but nothing solid yet
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:31 PM Title: Blondes and Bombshells
:)
Author's Response:
:-)
Date: 28 Mar 2010 4:37 PM Title: Blondes and Bombshells
It is hard to watch a loved one deteriorate and suffer. All you can do is try to hold on the best you can. As one of your readers, I will still be here when your RL slows down and you have the time needed to update this story regularly. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
thank you so much for understanding. I'm still going to try and write, but I don't want to just throw something together just to keep things moving, which is why I'm not sure when the next update will come.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:17 AM Title: What Can Go Wrong Will
awesome chapter. cant wait for the next.
Author's Response:
thank you! I'm working on it now!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 2:48 PM Title: What Can Go Wrong Will
:)
Author's Response:
:-) hope you go and enjoy Labbit's outtake as well!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 2:07 PM Title: What Can Go Wrong Will
At least for the most part they're ok...
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
maybe *evil laugh*
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2010 2:02 PM Title: What Can Go Wrong Will
Oh wow, what a great cliffie! Bella, Tanya and Leah...dun dun dun. ;) LOL
Emmett and Rose - love his POV, and your OC's.
Poor Alice and Jasper, thwarted by a BBQ.
And as I've told you before, I'm finally warming up to Edward. I mean, I don't love the guy, but, he's very bearable now and I'm okay with him and Bella in the story. Okay. :D (Man, I felt like something was going to fall on my head after typing that.)
Another great chapter and I'm totes looking forward to the next one!
~Labbit :)
Author's Response:
duck and cover! rofl I just got started on the next chapter, hopefully I don't get distracted lol
Date: 24 Mar 2010 1:56 PM Title: Labbit's Awesome Outtake
Ahhhhhh! I am definitely one of the Zombie fangirls! Thanks Raven. :) Your story is just so awesome its brimming with outtakes. You're welcome and it was totally my pleasure writing it. Now, you just have to get to work and write that next chapter. ;)
Love your story, thanks Superman!
~Labbit :)
Author's Response:
Nah, you're not just a fan girl, you're a Zombie Girl now, especially if that crazy brain of yours keeps this up! lol And I'm not the only one who is supposed to be working on chapters ;-)
Date: 20 Mar 2010 4:10 PM Title: To Hell with Waldo, Where's Edward?
Bella for the win! ^_^ She's a gymnast with poor taste in men. Ah well, at least she has the zed killing skillz.
~Labbit :)
Author's Response:
my philosophy is that all men are assholes and all women are bitches, you just find the one you can deal with the most shit out of lol
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2010 4:09 PM Title: Where There Is Smoke....................
Poor Alice feeling all the crazy. :(
LEAH! And that's all I have to say. LEAH POV, oh yeah! :)
~Labbit ;)
Author's Response:
I felt so bad for Alice, but I had to do it
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2010 4:08 PM Title: Two Months
Ewww, is right! I love that you are giving us the horror that we pay for. As sad and disgusting as this scene was, I'm thinking this would have been awesome in a zombie movie and made me fast forward or turn away. ;D
Carlisle is truly crazy crackers now! ;P
Great job!
~Labbit :)
Author's Response:
It's great to have people understand that this story isn't fluffy hun :-)
Date: 20 Mar 2010 4:05 PM Title: Missing
I'm glad you tried to clear up a little of what's bothering Tanya and she is not all to blame. Nothing is clear cut and it was just the one time, plus I'd like to see Tanya get past the bedhead and have a life too. :) I'm hopeful, since I love Tanya and that she speaks her mind.
I really didn't expect Rose to take such a hard line against Tan (since I'm sure she's made mistakes in her life also), other than she's more loyal to Bella, and in that Tanya was just lashing out, and she's pregnant, and so far is feeling like the mud at the bottom of everyone's judgmental shoes because of the one night stand. And there sits the perfect little coppertop acting like... well the perfect man of the world. Oy... I have a headache.
Charlie's POV is always great to read. And I got to see Leah being competent, which is always a plus.
Author's Response:
I normally hate Tanya with a passion, but since I was changing so many characters around, I thought I'd give her a shot too
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:53 PM Title: Thank You's Target Practice and....Bait?
New dog and Bella taking target practice on a roof. Hah, this was a fun chapter.
~Labbit :)
Author's Response:
I had to bring in another pup and get in why people could actually hit a target instead of poof! and magically being marksmen lol
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:52 PM Title: THIS IS RIDICULOUS
Thank you for sharing what went on between you and FF. They never wrote me back. I'm amazed they wrote you back.
I completely and wholeheartedly agree with you. If you know of anyone else being harassed by the LU let me know and I'll provide a full list from what I have of all the members to block from this insipid little group of hatemongers. They are simply organized to harass authors of Twilight fanfiction.
Thanks, ~Labbit :)
Author's Response:
I thought it was important that everyone knew what kind of treatment to expect.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:45 PM Title: Stupid Smart People
Thank you Jazz, but you should have given the wuss a good kick. :D Bella is just too awesome for a certain doctor. I guess she's out of his league? HAHA
This is still such a great story.
~Labbit :)
Author's Response:
I don't know if you noticed, but I changed Bella and Edward's roles in this...she is the strong one, the protector and he is the weak one...people usually don't have the balls to do something like that
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:42 PM Title: Luck is Always Two-Faced
:( Esme is a goner. And now Carlisle hits the crazy juice.
Author's Response:
rofl what a way to summarize it
Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:40 PM Title: The Race is On
Another good chapter with Rose, Alice and Bella - Jasper too. Esme is so sweet and caring. I have to read the next chapter, don't I?
~Labbit :)
Author's Response:
:-) of course you have to read! lol
Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 8 Game Plans
Everyone is off, and as you aptly put it, 'mobile buffets' for the z's. ;P Another great chapter!
~Labbit :)
Author's Response:
thanks hun!
Date: 19 Mar 2010 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 7 Incoming!
Bella and Alice really do kick some bootay! ;) What a great couple. :D
Another great chapter!
~Labbit :)
Author's Response:
being bi myself, I think I might try to do a Bella/Alice story one day
Date: 19 Mar 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 6 To WallyWorld We Go!
And this was the point in the story when I did this: O_O
Leah and Charlie? Leah and Charlie? *blink blink* Leah and...
Yep, that was pretty much it. ;D
I love the pairing right now, actually. Another great chapter!
~Labbit :)
Author's Response:
I had to do something different!
Date: 19 Mar 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 5 Spoons Annoy Me
That's a way to give Alice a nice hair cut. ;D And Angela and Ben's death was still really sad. :(
Great job again!
~Labbit :)
Author's Response:
In most of my tales, I fins a way to give Alice long hair, but thought it was time to give her another short cut because it worked so well. And I didn't want to kill Angela and Ben, but I had to
Date: 19 Mar 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 4 On the Road Again
You can't beat a fun road trip! ;) Another great chapter!
~Labbit :)
Author's Response:
Especially when you have Jared and Jake to entertain you!
Date: 19 Mar 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 3 Mad Scientists, Dogs, and a Hummer
“Love you too brother,” I put the barrel to the back of his head and close my eyes as I fire.
This, of course, reminds me of, Of Mice and Men.
I loved that you showed what an amazing love James and Victoria shared in such a small amount of space. When he pulled her to his lap, holding her close, I actually choked up. It was really well-written and this scene was one of my favorite scenes when I read it at FF.
Great job, Raven!
~Labbit :)
Author's Response:
I didn't want James and Victoria to just be throw away characters so I needed to make a lasting impression. I'm glad it worked
Date: 19 Mar 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 2 Running is Sometimes the Best Option
This is the best Alice and Jasper. And I love Jacob and Jared! ^^ Rosalie - well, she is the most awesome blonde in the universe, and that's that. ;)
Another great chapter!
~Labbit :)
Author's Response:
I love this version of Alice and Jasper. They are so young and yet so wise
Date: 19 Mar 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1 The Beginning
Mischa's line at the end, "Are those fucking zombies?"
Haha, I love this story. ^^ ~Labbit :)
Author's Response:
I had to do that lol
Date: 18 Mar 2010 10:02 AM Title: To Hell with Waldo, Where's Edward?
:)
Author's Response:
thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 9:38 AM Title: To Hell with Waldo, Where's Edward?
again, had to leave a review on both sites. cant leave ya hanging. so daddy c is dead. too bad it wasnt tanya.
Author's Response:
meh, I've decided to keep Tanya around for a bit longer, do something different, for me at least lol
Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:46 AM Title: To Hell with Waldo, Where's Edward?
Yay, Edward isn't a zombie!...right? Poor Edward, having to see Carlisle do the nasty with a zombie Esme. This story is epic!
Author's Response:
no, he's not a zombie, but he is immune to being turned now!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:17 AM Title: To Hell with Waldo, Where's Edward?
u do what you gotta do...its your story, and if you dont tell us, we'd never know any different!!
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
thanks hun!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 12:24 AM Title: To Hell with Waldo, Where's Edward?
Go badass Bella!
Author's Response:
lol yeah, when she's not doing face or ass plants
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:39 AM Title: Where There Is Smoke....................
I love your story just the way it is. Please don't change anything just because we want it to. You do what you want with your story and us fans will roll with it : )
Author's Response:
Thank you for understanding! ))hugs((
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:54 PM Title: Where There Is Smoke....................
good for you! Write for yourself and dont give a shit about what other peopl elike or dont like....if they stop reading and move on...who cares...dont like it...Im here til the end...even if that means its jsut you and me...
oh...DUnDUN DUN!! wonder what carlises gonna do when they find out what he's doing down there...
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
thanks so much for sticking with me and my craziness *hugs*
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:49 AM Title: Where There Is Smoke....................
I always end up reading this story really late at night, and then I'm afraid to get up and pee because a zed might get me. *shudder* Scary stuff. Seriously though, awesomely frightening, superbly thrilling, and monsterously cute.
Author's Response:
Please don't take this the wrong way, but I know I'm doing the story right when I scare you like that!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 9:32 PM Title: Where There Is Smoke....................
i suppose both posting deserve a lil love. again great chapter. cant wait to see how carlisle tries to talk himself out of the mess situation he's gotten into. looking forward to the next exciting installment of Love in the Time of Zombies.
Author's Response:
:-) I can't wait to see what he does either! thank you hun!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 9:07 PM Title: Where There Is Smoke....................
Love ti! I can't wait for them all to find out what a sick fuck Charlise is.
And i must say i agree with you and i kinda enjoy reading all that nasty stuff.... ok enjoy is too strong a word but it really adds to the story and if that is what our twisted minds come up with...
Love ya, update soon, KJ :)
Author's Response:
lol horror stories are like train wrecks, you want to turn away, but it keeps pulling you back in!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 8:53 PM Title: Where There Is Smoke....................
:) go for it girl....this is your story
Author's Response:
thanks hun!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:28 PM Title: Where There Is Smoke....................
Way to go for staying true to yourself. If others don't like some aspects of this story, then they don't have to read it! It is only a story and people should just let it go and enjoy the parts of the story that they do enjoy. I hope that you have a HEA planned for Bella and Edward. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I can't give anything away about the ending yet hun, but thank you so much for reading and supporting me!
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 11:22 PM Title: Two Months
wow this sure is a gross but good story. is Carlisle feeding Esme people? I'm guessing yes but confirmation would be nice :) and did he feed her those two kids? maybe?
Author's Response:
yeah, he fed her a toddler!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 2 Running is Sometimes the Best Option
brilliant, just brilliant! am loving it.
Author's Response:
thank you so much! I'm glad that you are enjoying it and hope that you continue to like my crazy ramblings! :-)
Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:36 AM Title: Two Months
Carlie's a little fucked up.
Author's Response:
oh boy is he lol
Date: 09 Mar 2010 3:55 AM Title: Two Months
EWWW Ewww EWWW!!! It was more the sex that grossed me out than her dinner..*shiver*
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
lol I had to remind everyone that this was a horror story hun :-)
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 3:32 AM Title: Two Months
Wowwwww. Hm, I see that Carlisle has gone from benevolent, compassionate doctor to zombie fucking Conductor of the train to Crazytown. I guess he proved Fat Bastards claim that baby is in fact the other, other white meat.
*grin*
Author's Response:
damn straight :-)
Date: 08 Mar 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 The Beginning
I've never laughed so much in ages. I love the sparky narrative :D
Author's Response:
thank you and I'm glad that I could make you laugh!!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 11:27 PM Title: Two Months
Okay so Carlisle feeding Esme babies? and screwing her while she's a zombie? definitly never been done before, kind of disturbing but in a good kind of way. I love how you are making this a true horror story. Great chapter, can't wait for the next.
Author's Response:
I'm glad someone can appreciate a good horror story!!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 11:26 PM Title: Two Months
:)
Author's Response:
:-)
Date: 04 Mar 2010 3:23 PM Title: Missing
Carlisle is still determined that he can save Esme and i hope he can, but i wonder how long it will take before the others reallize thats what hes doing..
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
I think it might take a while, but things are always changing. Thanks for reading!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:47 PM Title: Missing
:)
Author's Response:
:-) thanks hun
Date: 28 Feb 2010 8:06 PM Title: Thank You's Target Practice and....Bait?
:)
Author's Response:
:-) thank you!!!!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:18 PM Title: Thank You's Target Practice and....Bait?
I have to agree with Seth...it could have been a lot worse..but i have a feeling that its not over yet...
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
I doubt it is too
Thank you!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:57 AM Title: THIS IS RIDICULOUS
:)
Author's Response:
8-)
Date: 27 Feb 2010 6:03 AM Title: THIS IS RIDICULOUS
I loved the updates. I sympathize with you regarding your FF.net issues. I myself have a few stories posted, but have not had any problems. THough I don't write TW fic's, I read many and you are not the first one to have problems. Many, actually quite a few, in the past recent months have had their stories pulled. I wish you all the best and completely agree with you. Keep me update on how it all progresses.
Author's Response:
I just added their next bullshit answer and my response to the post and thank you
Date: 27 Feb 2010 4:35 AM Title: Stupid Smart People
awww, i wanna hug him!!! Jasper has seen so much in just a short life...
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
Yes he has, poor kid
Date: 26 Feb 2010 1:02 AM Title: Luck is Always Two-Faced
had to giggle at the "double tap"...Lesson number 4...LOL
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
I had to do it lol
Date: 25 Feb 2010 2:56 AM Title: The Race is On
id say we're about due for some drama at the hospital..
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
I'd have to say that you're right
Date: 25 Feb 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 8 Game Plans
at least they're working together now....
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
yeah, the whole mutual survival thing cures a lot, doesn't it? lol
Date: 25 Feb 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 7 Incoming!
wow, im kinda shocked Tanya showed up...nice!
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
Yeah, she'll be around for a while just to annoy people lol
Date: 25 Feb 2010 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 6 To WallyWorld We Go!
dun dun dun!!!!!!! Now its gonna get really good!!
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
I'd like to think it does!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 5 Spoons Annoy Me
awww, her hair...but at least shes still alive!
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
I know..i usually find a way to give Alice longer hair, but the situation screamed for it to happen this time lol
Date: 25 Feb 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 4 On the Road Again
woohoo alice is psychic!...should come in handy!
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
I hope so lol
Date: 25 Feb 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 3 Mad Scientists, Dogs, and a Hummer
i LOVE the way you ties felix in! And rose!
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
thank you!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 2 Running is Sometimes the Best Option
oh dear...wonder where all of their paths are gonna cross..
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
It doesn't take too long
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 The Beginning
Im finding out that zombie stories are quickly becoming my faves...lets see how this pans out...Shall we??
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
I hope that I don't disappoint!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 1:01 AM Title: Stupid Smart People
:)
Author's Response:
:-) glad you liked!