Date: 08 Jan 2020 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One
Ummm...I would love for Carlisle to spank me. Just sayin
Date: 07 Mar 2017 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
This story is perfection! I didn't mind Edward getting killed. I don't like him at all lol. Man! I have to save this
Date: 09 Nov 2016 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
Aww...I hate to see it end, (sniffle). But alas end it must...what a wonderful story hon. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing it with us...bigg huggs. Peggy
Date: 03 Apr 2016 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed your story!
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 15- Loving A Vampire 101
Glad to see the Douchebags from Denali gone - though I do like Carmen and Eleazar. Things moving along with Carlisle nicely - I'm waiting for those 4 little words.... we've heard the 3 little words, next comes the 4 .
Date: 22 Jan 2016 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 13- A Change of Heart
You can't see me, but I am internally stomping my feet......
Date: 22 Jan 2016 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 7- Songs of the Heart
I feel like Esme has been cast aside - her loss seems not to be addressed. Don't get me wrong, I am all for Carlisle and Bella and I get the focus is on how they cope with Bella's condition ..... but maybe a paragraph or two on how it is that Carlisle seems to be moving on so quickly.
Date: 21 Jan 2016 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 2- Bad Things Come In Three's
Crying hearts
Date: 21 Jan 2016 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 1- When It All Went Wrong
Heart breaking for Edward, but I really love B/C so .......let's see where this goes.
Date: 10 Jan 2016 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
thanks for the story and good luck with your ongoing projects!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2015 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
Wonderful story!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
What a good story. I am so glad I found when it is complete. thanks for sharing. It is truly a favorite of mine. Well written, well done...
Date: 14 Feb 2015 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 8- Final Goodbyes and Reunions
Wow, I didn't think you could do it. My tear ducts are always dry! Not this time, they opened and rained down on me hard. It felt like my lost. (smh) All I can say is well written, well done! Thanks
Date: 12 Aug 2014 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
I started reading this on fanfiction and I had to finish reading it. It was great!
Date: 05 Jun 2014 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 8- Final Goodbyes and Reunions
Oh hun, I've gone through a fourth a box of kleenex, & had to wash my face. I've hardly stopped crying.
If only Rose had not made that phone call to Edward..................
Well, on to the next chapter........
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 4- Exodus
Your story is ... KILLING ME... from the very first chapter I have not stopped crying.
So much Death ... I'm hoping to be able to handle continuing to read this ... I NEED to find out what is going to happen.
Carlisle made her the same promises Edward made to her...'Everything I have ... Everything I am'.
On to the next chapter & more kleenex.
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
Date: 29 May 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans
Awesome story, can't wait for the next update!!!! Absolutely love Carlisle in this one!!
Date: 08 Feb 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
Great ending to the story. Good luck with your book.
Date: 08 Feb 2014 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 27- Reunited
Awesome chapter.
Date: 08 Feb 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New
All I can say is H.O.T.
Date: 07 Feb 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 25- Never Trust a Vampire, Trust Me
I wondered what dare Carlisle wouldn't do? More, please, more.
Date: 05 Feb 2014 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One
Hot is all I can say about the lemon scene.
Date: 03 Feb 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition
Beautifully well written. I love it!
Date: 03 Feb 2014 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans
Excellent chapter.
Date: 01 Feb 2014 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 21- Unwelcome Visitors
Yeah, Carlisle is there. I hope he beat the crap out of her for hurting Bella like that.
Date: 01 Feb 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 20- Lollipop, Lollipop, Oh Lolli-lollipop
Sweet chapter.
Date: 31 Jan 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 19- Sex, Lingerie and the City
Fantastic chapter. Can't wait to see how Carlisle response to the lollypop set.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 18- A Christmas Wish
What a sweet chapter this was. I totally love it.
Date: 23 Jan 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 17- Land of Wonder
I think you did an excellent job on the lemon scene. Can't wait to see what happens next in the lives of Bella and Carlisle.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 16- Yes
I think this is by far my favorite chapter in this story. You did an amazing job on the proposal. I don't think you could have done anything better than that.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 15- Loving A Vampire 101
What a sweet and romantic chapter this was. I love it!
Date: 19 Jan 2014 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 14- To New Beginnings
Nice chapter.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 13- A Change of Heart
Sweet chapter. Happy to see Bella and Carlisle together as a couple. Just wished they would kissed already.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 12- The Kiss That Kills
Aww, sweet chapter. I have a feeling Bella is going to stay now. Though, I kind of wanted her to leave for a while. Maybe have Carlisle come to her instead of the other way.
Date: 18 Jan 2014 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 11- The Witches of Alaska
What do you mean we might hate this chapter? I totally love it, espeically how Carlisle entered into the drama and comforted Bella.
Date: 18 Jan 2014 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 10- Which Life To Choose?
Awesome chapter.
Date: 18 Jan 2014 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 9- Picking Up The Pieces
Sweet chapter.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 8- Final Goodbyes and Reunions
Well, I didn't cry, but I don't think I'm a heartless monster. Great chapter. Happy to see Bella finally awake.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 7- Songs of the Heart
Yay! Bella's getting better. More, please.
Date: 14 Jan 2014 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 6- Choices
I wonder what that means? Carlisle walking into a dense fog like that? More, please.
Date: 14 Jan 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 5- And Then There Were Three
I like this Rosalie better than the books. Great job.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 4- Exodus
Awesome chapter. I love how concern everyone is about Bella. Shows how much they love and care about her.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 3- A Race Against Time
Bella's in her numb state now.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 2- Bad Things Come In Three's
I like it. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 1- When It All Went Wrong
Interesting start to the story. I look forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
WOW that was a amazing and a bit sad story... I'm glad it all worked out in the end though.....
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 1- When It All Went Wrong
Finally get to talk to you. I read your story on FF and I fell in absolute love. It saddened me when I couldn't read the rest of it, and I know I'm not 18, but, I really wanna continue reading. I will wait to have your permission. I swear.
Please, please let me. I loved every chapter, and have fallen in love with this couple. When I read the parts about Bella being void of emotion, I cried. It really upset me when she was unintentionally putting them through so much. It nearly tore my heart out when she was about to leave them due to Kate...I had begun to grow a hate for her, and still do...
Is that weird, and strange, saying I hate a character who isn't even real?
Anyway, please allow me to continue reading your story. Please.
Thank you for taking the time to read my rambling. I love you! :) And you should honestly think about becomming a author, if you already aren't.
Have a good day.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your lovely review. It is not weird at all to have real emotions over a fictional character. It is an incredible compliment to me in that my writing can inspire true feelings, so thank you again!
As for the content and your age...the continuation of this story most definately takes on an adult theme and as such I posted it here for the higher rating threshold. It is not up to me whether or not you read it. I hope that you would respect the boundaries that your parents have set for you and follow their judgement rather than a random author such as myself.
I do hope that when the time comes and you do read the second half of the story that you enjoy it just as much. :)
All my best,
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
I really wish you had continued this on FFn, but I understand your reasoning.
I liked this story enough to follow it here. :D
Thank you. I don't normally enjoy 3rd person writing, but you did a wonderful job. I thoroughly enjoyed this story from beginning to it's ending.
You did a wonderful job with this pairing. Did I say I loved it yet? I did. I loved it. :D
It was a beautiful journey.
Author's Response:
Ahhh, thank you so very much for making the journey over to continue this!!! And thank you for your lovely words. This story has been such a great experience to write and hearing that others love it as much as I do means the world to me!!!
I hope you will come say hi on my author page on Facebook!!! https://www.facebook.com/pages/Nickeyd26/314561435261264?ref=stream
All my best,
Nickey
Date: 29 Jun 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
Nickey what a great story I loved reading it and that is a huge compliment considering I'm a die hard E/B fan but your Edward character just added some lovely heart wrenching that just deepened Carlisle & Bella's love story.
Thank you so much for writing this & your recs, I'm going right now to add you to my fav's*-))
Author's Response:
Ahhhh, you make me blush. Thank you so much for saying that!!! I am also a tried and true E&B fan, but on occasion I come accross other pairings that just work somehow. I was lucky enough to meet Peter Facinelli in Oct 2010 and something in that inspired this story line. I am glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your thoughts along the way.
I hope you will come visit me on my Facebook page. https://www.facebook.com/pages/Nickeyd26/314561435261264?ref=stream
All my best,
Nickey
Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 27- Reunited
Great chapter.
Burn baby burn, eh;-))
Author's Response:
{giggles} Thanks for the encouraging words. ;P
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One
Great chapter, again.
Sorry to read your story did not win in the competition. I think you are a great writer. Thanks for the awesome recs, I say awesome cause most I've read & agree are great but a couple I haven't so will check out.
Thanks so much for writing this.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading this!!! I write for myself, but I love to hear when others, like yourself, enjoy it as well!!! It means so much to me.
XOXO
Nickey
Date: 27 Jun 2012 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 19- Sex, Lingerie and the City
Another great chapter. In my opinion SM's got nothing on you in writing romance.
Author's Response:
Ahhh, you are making my ego blow up!!! Let's hope the publishing houses feel the same way as I am trying to get another story of mine into the real world of printed pages.
XOXO
Nickey
Date: 27 Jun 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 17- Land of Wonder
Unghh very good, haha
Author's Response:
LOL, Trust me...it killed me to wait this long. ;)
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 14- To New Beginnings
Great chapter, very romantic & steammy;-)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 27 Jun 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 8- Final Goodbyes and Reunions
More crocodile tears. Great story!
Author's Response:
Yeah...this was a tough one. :( Thanks for the review.
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 7- Songs of the Heart
Okay that Edward & Bella stuff had me bawling my eyes out. So sad to think of him or her giving up the other.
Author's Response:
I knew this would be a tough chapter. It really is the point where Bella has to make the final decision to stay locked away in her mind or come back to reality.
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 6- Choices
Yes, you did make me cry. I'm not sure what to hope for?
Author's Response:
Sorry for the tears, but I am glad my story has touched you that way.
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 4- Exodus
I like were you are taking this story. I can't wait to read more. Love it!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it so far. It is hard to gage how people will react to non-E&B pairings. Thanks for the rating and review.
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 1- When It All Went Wrong
I like what you have done so far with this story. You have realed me in so I will keep reading, until I get to the end like everyone els.
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to review.
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
Great way to wrap this little story up, im finally glad to say i have finished this and i was happy with the way you decided to end it. Great job. Looking forward to seeing what your going to throw our way next.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment!!! I really enjoyed writing this story. Right now I am just brainstorming a few other storylines that I want to build while I try my hand at publishing another story I completed some time ago. Come follow me on Facebook at Nickeyd26. I give updates when I have something of note to say. :)
All my best,
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this story, even if it took do different sites in order to do it!
You've done an excellent job!
CC
Author's Response:
Thanks for making the trek over here to read the second half of the story!!
All my best,
Nickey
Date: 27 Apr 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
When I began reading fan fiction I only read Edward/Bella pairing inspired fictions. Slowly I began to drift into other pairings. The first was Carlisle/Bella then I moved onto others. I've read many Carlisle/Bella inspired fictions - though they are harder to find - and this one is by far one of my newfound favorites. Besides the fact that there was a small bit of angst, the fluffiness of this story captivated me and continued to pursuade me to fall more in love with your writing. Thank you so much for sharing this story and I will continue to be on the look out for more to read from you! Thanks again!!!
Author's Response:
Your review just made me grin from ear to ear. Thank you so much for your beautiful words. And thank you for giving C&B a chance. I, like you, was always a more traditional E&B fan, but began to branch out. I always wanted to write C&B, but could never find the right spin on the story to take Edward out in a resonable way. And then A Voice in the Darkness was born!
I may not post much for a while as I am really trying to get one of my stories published, but in the meantime, come follow my musings over on Facebook on my author page at Nickeyd26.
All my best,
Nickey
Date: 13 Apr 2012 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
I'm so sad that this fic is now finished, but I'm thrilled Bella and Carlisle will be together forever. Carlisle is really the only other person I can stand having Bella be with other than Edward - I think he's been perfect for her.
I've loved reading this fic and I'm looking forward to see what else you can come up with!
Thanks,
teri50
Author's Response:
Teri,
Thank you so much for sticking with me throughout this story. I know accepting Bella with anyone other than Edward can be tough for a lot of people. So thank you for giving Carlisle and Bella a chance. I have loved writing this and am so glad others enjoyed reading it as well.
All my best,
Nickey
Date: 10 Apr 2012 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
Wonderul job! Good luck with your writing endeavors. I wish you all the luck in the world. I hope to see the book in the near future and add it to my book collection. I loved this story so much. Best of luck.
Love Jukie
Author's Response:
Jukie,
Thank you so much for the love and the luck! I will take all that I can get!
All my best,
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
Beautiful ending!
Author's Response:
Ahh, thank you for saying so. Thanks for all the ratings and reviews!!!
All my best,
Nickey
Date: 10 Apr 2012 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
thanks for the wonderful story.. and good luck with your future writting!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and well wishes! It means so much to me.
All my best,
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2012 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
Beautiful...I have really enjoyed this story and wish you all the luck with your writing in the future.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for rating and reviewing! And thank you for the well wishes...I will take all the luck I can get.
All my best,
Nickey
Date: 10 Apr 2012 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
Thank you for an amazing journey. You made the inconceivable, more than believable, and what began as sorrow and loss became joy and belonging. This story was a a sheer joy and I wish you only happiness on your new endevour. Take care and be sure to let us know when we can attend a siigning!! Take care!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the beautiful review. I will most definately keep you up to date on my FB page.
All my best,
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever
Yipppee for marriage. Glad Kate has somebody too.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
LOL! Yeah, I felt I needed to give Kate someone else to fixate on so she wouldn't keep pushing her luck with Bella. Thanks for all the ratings and reviews!!!
All my best,
Nickey
Date: 02 Feb 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 27- Reunited
Really cool story!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I am glad you think so!
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 25 Jan 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 27- Reunited
I love it. I feel like I've been waiting for forever for Kate to come back!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
It does seem like forever, doesn' it? I am sorry for making you wait so long. Thanks for sticking with me and for the lovely review!
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 09 Jan 2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 27- Reunited
Ah :D I loved the chapter.
ooh whose idea was it? Nnooo I have to go find it now!!!!!!! LOL! Ah. omg anyways I loved this chapter. I still cant stand Kate : Im glad Irina and Tanya apologized -ugh- and whooo is the mysterious cutie -wiggles eyebrows- I have a few ideas.. but.. -licks lips-
Mmm.. Update whenever you can :) I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope this story doesn't continue to feel like a burden to you!!
Author's Response:
Ahhh, thank you so much for the review. I don't know if this ever felt like a burden, but it is definately not free flowing as it used to. My mind wants to move on to other ideas, but I swear I will finish this one! Thanks for the love.
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2012 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 27- Reunited
Fantastic as always...the sun room was a great choice. Though my absolute favorite part was Carlisle licking her palm. /swoon
Author's Response:
Yeah...I loved that part too. So secret....so dirty. Thanks for the rating and review.
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 29 Dec 2011 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 27- Reunited
Ahh, it seems Kate met Garrett. Now she can GTFO with trying to get Carlisle over and over again!
Author's Response:
LOL. Yes, the nomad was Garrett, but she was too far lost in her own head to realize what she REALLY saw in the field that day. ;)
Thanks for the review.
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 29 Dec 2011 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 27- Reunited
great chapter! gotta love Bella's sheild. I hope the nomad follows Kate back to the Cullen's, that would be interesting
Author's Response:
LOL. The nomad won't be following Kate, but we hven't seen the last of him. Thanks for the review.
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2011 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 27- Reunited
Oh, Oh, Oh! The nomad Kate ran into was Garrett, I bet. I bet he is on the way to the wedding and when Kate gets back, she will see him :) I clap my hands for her (sort of) :)
Love that Bella threw her shield around Carlisle. Look but no touchy :)
Author's Response:
LOL! Yes, it was Garrett. As much as I can't stand the graby whore, I had to give some closure so she will discover him at the wedding. Shhh, don't tell anyone else. ;)
Thanks for the rating and review hon!
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 25- Never Trust a Vampire, Trust Me
Hahaha, the truth or dare thing is hilarious! I laughed out loud in my office :)
Well, now I need to go out and find my Jasper. Excuse me...
Author's Response:
I had another part to the TorD scene, but it didn't flow. I hope to be able to squeeze it in or maybe I will write a couple outtakes. We will see. Thanks for the rating and review! I have loved each and every one of them!
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One
Don't ever try to force it out if you are having writer's block or are just struggling period. It will come out forced, and that will take away from AVItD's awesomeness. Your loyal readers do not mind waiting for the updates.
That being said, I really liked this chapter and I am insanely jealous that you got to meet Jackson and his crew!!!
Author's Response:
Jackson and this Monkeys were insanely awesome and I highly reccomend going to see them if ever the chance presents itself. My hubby and I have already agreed that we will see them again on their next tour.
Thanks for the words of encouragement. I think sometimes I am too hard on myself when I write and forget to find the fun in it. I'm glad you have continued to connect with the story.
Thanks for the R&R.
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition
I am eating lunch while reading this nd my fork was suspended in midair while I read to see if Bella would recognize Carlisle haha :)
Ha, in that moment, Carlisle was Bella's shield...blocking out everything but the two of them :)
LOVE it!!!
I just really want to see Kate visit, not expecting Bella to be a vampire, and get the crap shocked out of her, as well as a serious beatdown...
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL! I love your reviews. They are reminding me of some of my most favorite moments in this story, so thanks for that!
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans
That's right, Riley and Victoria...into the flames...be good little dead vamps...
Edward is coming to visit her again, I know it...I only hope Carlisle remember to sing so she will remember to come back out of it...I figured it out when Jasper said "No, not again!"
I practically screamed at the screen, "Bella! Don't you dare quit now!" Thank goodness, Rosalie did it for me...
Author's Response:
It's ironic that so few people picked up on the fact that Rosalie was actually 'the voice in the darkness'. Carlisle may have pulled her our of her catatonia, but she was in the mental meadow then. It was only when the venom burned that Bella was in darkness. ;)
Thanks for the R&R!
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 21- Unwelcome Visitors
No, no, no...leaving the human alone while y'all all go hunt? I can hear the foreboding music queing up now...
Oh, Victoria...you dared to do it, and now Carlisle is whipping out a fresh can of whoop-ass he bought just for you...
Author's Response:
Even vampires can have a lapse in judgement once in a while.
Thanks for the R&R!
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 20- Lollipop, Lollipop, Oh Lolli-lollipop
Oh, honey...do you even have to ask which one I prefer? *evil grin*
Perhaps change his name to Domlisle? Nah, that does not sound right...
Love it, of course!!
Author's Response:
LOL! I'm glad you liked it! It was fun to write a wild side to Carlisle!
Thanks for the R&R!
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 19- Sex, Lingerie and the City
Hahaha, the scenes in the bridal shop and Agent Provocateur were hilarious! This is absolutely too funny!!!
Love. This. Story!!
Author's Response:
{Giggles} I had a lot of fun writing the scene in Agent Provocateur! I could totally see Rose and Alice popping up and down over the walls.
Thanks for the R&R.
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 18- A Christmas Wish
Hey! You can have Rob and Peter, but Jackson is MINE hee hee :)
Haha, toys were perfect for Christmas presents!
My family watches eah person open their own presents one at a time as well :)
Author's Response:
Sorry baby! I have already had Jackson! I got his signature on my leg permanently to prove it! Oh, and I have Peter's too! ;)
I'm glad you liked the gifts. This chapter was hard to write only because what do you give the family that has EVERYTHING?
Thanks for the rating and review.
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 17- Land of Wonder
That was one of the more descriptive lemons I have read and somehow that made it more sensual. The description wasn't completely trashy, but flowed very nicely with the scene, and it was poerfect for the two people involved. I hope that makes a bit of sense.
I also like how the chiming of the clock seemed to signal the beginning of something else too, and not just the day changing :)
Author's Response:
I tried to stay in character for the sex scene. I don't see Carlisle being a crass individual, so I had to write it this way. I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks for the rating and review!
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 16- Yes
Haha, Carlisle shoved it behind a pillow! That is hilarious, and such a "not older than dirt' thing to do :)
Haha, never listen to Emmett hahaha :)
*swoons*
Author's Response:
Ahhh, yeah, I love that whole scene. The music gets me even as I think on it now. Thanks for the R&R. And no...noone should listen to Emmett. ;)
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 15- Loving A Vampire 101
The whole candle thign is seriously cool...I am such a sap that I ea this stuff right up!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the continued ratings and reviews!
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 14- To New Beginnings
I can breathe a little again haha :)
Author's Response:
Yes, all the witches have hopped on their brooms and Carlisle and Bella finally got a little lip groove going on. But don't relax, my angst bank is not spent yet.
Thanks for the R&R
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 13- A Change of Heart
I practically clapped my hands and squealed! YAYYAYYAYYAYYAY :)
Kate SO needs to have her butt handed to her by Bella...
Author's Response:
LOL! I'm glad you are cheering and I hope you feel the need to grab your pom pom's in the upcoming chapters. Thanks for faithfully R&Ring all these chapters!
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 12- The Kiss That Kills
Oh, my word I thought he was going to let her walk away and leave without telling her. I was practically screaming "Carlisle!" to my screen haha :)
Kate is an evil twit...
Author's Response:
Yes Kate is evil and Carlisle is self-sacrificing. But he could never have let Bella go. It would have... well I have to let you get to a chapter far off before I can finish that statement.
Thanks for the R&R!
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 11- The Witches of Alaska
Well, all I can say is that Emmett and Jasper would not have been able to hold me back...witches...
You are so good at drawing out reader emotions!
Although I think it was a slip of the tongue, it is good that Carlisle will now need to address his feelings, I think :)
Author's Response:
Since vampire minds can process so much all at the same time, do they ever really have a slip of the tongue??? Hmmmm
Thanks for the R&R. It is funny how nearly everyone has focused on the protective side of Rose, but my focus was on the visual of Carlisle standing with Emmett and Jasper on each side. Is there anything hotter than that?
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 10- Which Life To Choose?
I am so ready to start the fire myself if Kate starts crap...
Author's Response:
LOL. You better get your matches ready then...
Thanks for the giggle and the R&R!
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 9- Picking Up The Pieces
This was a perfect chapter to release the emotions from the heaviness :)
I love picturing Emmett in his poncho too :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, this was the emotional lull after all the turmoil I have put you through. And see, Rosalie still accepts Bella as a member of the family now that she is back.
Thanks for the R&R.
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 8- Final Goodbyes and Reunions
Ok, the second Esme appeared in the meadow is the second the tears fell. Even more so when she held her baby, and thena gain when Edward's parents appeared. This is just so beautifully written...
That iso the most heart-wrenching goodbye scene I have ever read. Wow...
Haha, your ending A/N was the perfect ending to this chapter, and the perfect cheer-upper :)
Author's Response:
I re-wrote that goodbye scene several times until I stuck with this one. I wanted to give Bella the kind of separation from Edward that would allow her to move forward, unlike the last time they said goodbye. I'm glad you approve.
Thanks for the rating and review.
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 7- Songs of the Heart
Oh, man she can feel how cold he is again...I love the subtle sign you give here that she is beginning to heal...
I haven't cried yet, but this chapter definitely made me choke up a bit.
My heart aches a little for Bella and Carlisle...
Author's Response:
Yeah, as hard as this has been on the others, Bella has been safe and sound in her little bubble. It is going to break, but at least she is not alone...on either side.
Thanks for the R&R!
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 6- Choices
I think it is good that Jasper is the voice of reason here. Carlisle is way too close to see the situation clearly.
I honestly don't know, because I don't really feel that anyoen can say what they would or would not do in situations like that, until they are in a situation like that.
I think you do a great job of creating this void in your reader as they read the story. What I mean is, I feel like everything is on hold until the situation is resolved. I was so into this story in that way that I actually jumped when the phone rang :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the beautiful compliment. I try to put myself in each of the charcters' shoes as I write this. I think the question is impossible to answer. Who knows what is more kind to do? There are too many unknowns to be sure which decision would be the 'right' one.
Thanks for the R&R.
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 5- And Then There Were Three
Well, I just hope Rosalie's feelings towards Bella don't change when she wakes up...
You have gotten me so drawn into this story, I am ever so grateful that I don't have to wait for an update yet!!
Author's Response:
I always thought that Rosalie was the most misunderstood character in SM's stories. She is not a bad person, nor a vendictive bitch. She is a protector by nature and that is what I had in mind when I wrote her. Thanks again for the R&R. And no, you shouldn't have to wait for an update for a while. I have all but one chapter written and posted and I hope to finish that up soon.
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 4- Exodus
Funnily enough, the eventual lemons is what is getting me through this heartfail. Not the actual lemon, but the idea that it will eventually turn around for Bella and Carlisle...
Author's Response:
Thanks for keeping the faith. As dark and down as this part of the story is, I really loved writing it. So, thanks for taking the time to rate and review each chapter! It means so much to me!
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 3- A Race Against Time
I think she just snapped mentaly and emotionally. I think she is just a shell, that her true self is so buried underneath her agony that it doesn't appear to exist anymore...
Author's Response:
Gold star for you!!!! That was exactly what I was thinking as I wrote this. There is another tiny facet that you will learn about much later down the line. Since you are reading these all back to back, let's see if you pick up on it when it is revealed.
Thanks for the rating and review!
Till next time
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 2- Bad Things Come In Three's
WOW...my heart is resting near my feet. I am staring open-mouthed at my laptop screen, and now I am really curious as to how this will turn out...
Author's Response:
It has been so long since I have read this myself that I have to go back and review the end of the chapters to remember where each one left off. I wish I could say it will get better from here, but that would be a lie. Thanks for sticking with it and for the R&R.
Till next time
Nickey