Date: 21 Apr 2015 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great book . love it keep the good work
Date: 20 Apr 2015 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 24
Something tells me it will not be so "easy". 😉
Date: 16 Sep 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 43
Loved it
Date: 31 Jul 2014 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 43
Had to read this story again it's one of my all-time favorites
Date: 27 Jun 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 34
i think she needs to chill out and see it from edwards side
she expects him to see her side
double standards bella
Date: 27 Jun 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 33
its hard to accept when your told it will never happen and then it does ive been there it sounds as thou you should be so happy but you just think it cant be happening because you have spent that long accepting what the doctors told you in the beginning
poor edward
Date: 26 Jun 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
i dont like that carlisle hits his grown up son thats just not right ewwww
Date: 15 Apr 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 43
Love your story. It made me laugh, almost made cry, and I defintely the sexy times with Daddyward.
Date: 03 Mar 2014 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 43
Awesome story! Loved it, really well written!
Date: 22 Nov 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 43
great story loved it
Date: 10 Oct 2013 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 43
Very cute story! I really enjoyed dadward having to work his way back in to babybella's good graces. Her staying away for as long as she did is rarity in most stories! It was a great spin on their love story! I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories!
Date: 05 Aug 2013 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 43
this was a great story !!!!!!
Date: 18 Mar 2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love this story
Date: 27 Feb 2013 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 42
Edwards not being fair expecting her to answer everytime he calls mo matter what...hard to answer the phone henur ptting a baby to sleep
Date: 27 Feb 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 39
I thought bella said no more groundings when they had that dinner?
Date: 26 Feb 2013 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wtf by telling her she can only be friends with those in the lifestyle he is isolating her where she will be so cut off she will stay with him....if she told him giving up her friend angela is a deal breaker would he relented on it to keep her? I could never give up my bffs for a guy.
Date: 26 Feb 2013 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love her saying daddy
Date: 31 Jan 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 43
sweet ending. Glad everything worked out in the end. Aww for Carlisle though. But he was getting older. Rose and Em are surprising but understandable
TY for writing and sharing
Date: 31 Jan 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 42
Glad things are going well for them
Date: 31 Jan 2013 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 41
Great chapter. Sweet baby.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 40
Such a romantic proposal...not. Glad she had an ready birth though. my first took forever.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 39
Still wanna smack jazz upside the head. Ah well. Glad they are back together. Hmm wonder when eddie and carlisle will have it out again.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 38
Glad she made a list. smart thing to so so she wouldnt forget or be distracted. wow he is still pretty pissed at his family huh.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 37
I think slow is good. They need to build up to a healthy relationship for the baby's sake.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 36
LOL She should be taking child support/care money anyway. ah well Guess part is the hormones talking too.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 35
sweet chapter. Glad she is standing on her own two feet. He has a lot to make up for.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 34
Esme needs to back off. Well at least he manned up and finally apologized to her face.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 33
yeah you really fucked up boy. Wasnt that about the time of her "grounding" anyway.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 32
kinda knew that was coming.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 31
I agree that the family deserved the silent treatment. Glad she talked to charlie. Renee needs a few smacks upside the head. So she is either getting really sick or really prego
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 30
Gotta say I agree with cutting off the whole family. They are all culpable for going along with Psycholisle
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 29
And he is being WAY to pushy about Charlie. With everything else going on, it really should be on her terms not his. Personally I think she should have left for a bit.
WTF indeed for the end.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 28
Evil Cliffy... wonder if Eddie will keep his word or not. I'm thinking not and Bella walks...at least for a little while.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 27
Good chapter. Waiting for the next family dinner for jasper to rat them out. E needs to back b up with everyone taking over thier wedding.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 26
Jasper just had to bring in the carlisle thing. Id be revolting against the entire wedding thing already since they are all going against her anyway.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 25
hopefully eddie was truthful and the "losing control" thing is the only thing Carlisle has over his head. But I have the feeling Carlisle will end up touching her at some point for some reason.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 24
all I have to say is, we'll see how long it lasts once they are back under Daddy C's jurisdiction.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 23
Can't blame her. Carlisle putting his hands in me would be a deal breaker too.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 22
carlisle is really bi polar.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 21
Yeah um mmm. Ya need to drop him soon if the carlisle thing isn't resolved. Her argument about jane and other guys and her was right on. No double standards.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 20
she needs to grow up a bit but he is being a douche.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah she definitely needs the 411 on beatlisle before she commits to marriage. Men are babies when sick.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 18
Dont know if I belive anyting Renee has to say.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 17
hmmm wonder how much of a bitch renee will be
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 16
Need to get carlisle out of the picture somehow. Renee does have a lot to answer for, much more than charlie. If I were Bella, I'd be running from that psycho family led by a sleezeball. Love for E be damned.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
Hmmmm gonna be pissed if he punishes her because of carlisle.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'd be pissed at him too. But moreso at renee. What she gonna do for money now. Guess she stole all the birthday and xmas money. Wow he’s kept it from her for months??? So not cool. I would leave too. Waiting till the day before is pathetic.
EPOV: Glad he feels bad at least. Think Irina is wrong though. Think E is going to force B to talk to Charlie.
BPOV: Cant blame B for not wanting to see him, esp being forced and in Carlisle’s house in front of everyone. E is wrong to do it at a family dinner that way. I see something bad happening.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
Can we run over renee? or let her fall overboard? jeez he is being a jealous arse.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
Hope Charlie talks to her soon and she tells Renee off. Ugh Rose is annoying. Hmm not liking Carlisle much based off descriptions
Date: 31 Jan 2013 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow to insights about Charlie from Edward. Wonder where the cards are too. She should be pissed if you don’t tell her about it soon. Same as lying. Wouldn't want to be around Rose either. Sucks that she can't Angela as much.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
I am soooo hating Renee. Naughty Alice getting her in trouble.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well start with telling him that and go from there. Renee really needs to be run over by a bus.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
oooh so she met Daddy Dearest and didnt know it. Hmmm shouldnt say that. I bet Renee refused him access. I really wanted to smack Renee upside the head for saying that. What a skank. Give us normal women a bad name.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 7
sounds like all the men find thier women in similar Rose is a snot but Alice seems nice, but hyper. Carlisle seems like an arsehole. hmmm Lemme guess. Renee has been keeping the child support for herself and lying to B about Charlie.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hope she learns fast to save her poor butt.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
hmmm why do I have a feeling the baby thing is going to come into play in a bad way somehow?
Date: 31 Jan 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
you get a lemon dance for first lemon:
Hope Irina's must be getting paid really well to deal with screamer boy
Date: 31 Jan 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
ok the one part that is not cool is: Rules can change at any time without notice as care giver chooses. He could try to make her do something illegal or something...or share with family. That wouldnt be cool.
No cussing....I see alot of spankings in the future
Date: 31 Jan 2013 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
Glad she asked about fidelity. hmm he's being pushy even before the contract, wonder how that will play out
Date: 31 Jan 2013 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok Really hate Renee. What a bitch. At least man 1 broke up and didnt cheat as she said. Jake is an arse.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 43
All I can say is that you writted an amazing story, yes, you put us in a rollacoster (with a lots of ups and down I might add) but so great that it was hard to put down ;). I'm not gonna lie at first I was kind of creep out with all the daddy, spanking -don't get me wrong that's not a bad thing!- and specially the grounding thing. But since I'm kind of studborn and really hardheaded woman, it was hard at first to get a feeling of their realtionship. Once I got that I really enjoy the story. Seriously you make me cried, laugh and even get mad and frustrated with the characters and that's just what a real writer does. So congratulation on this story. Keep up the good work!!! Alybethed
Date: 07 May 2012 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 43
I actually liked this story...it was a bit of a wild card for me but i am glad i gave it a read in the end!
Date: 22 Dec 2011 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
ok she had to go to the office as punishment for calling him Edward so she acted out because he wouldn't listen. He is acting like an irrational child in this story and I'm not so sure I like this Edward
Date: 16 Dec 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Over all really good story I was kinda freaked out about the whole daddy thing and I no I would never be able to be in a relationship were I was treated more like a child then someone's equal but hey it worked for them
Date: 21 Nov 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 43
I've just caught up on your final two chapters and i'm sad that's the end.
It was nice to see Edward with Charleigh as a teenager, poor guy he's still highly strung and on the verge of a stroke.
I like a good mobward story so i'm looking forward to that, as well as some more daddy kink stories from you.
Jessee
Date: 31 Oct 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 43
Good luck with all your future writing.
SDN was fun to read, I'm glad to have read it and thank you for writing it.
Date: 28 Oct 2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
This story is very disturbing to read. But its still interesting and I want to know where it goes. I find the men in the family crazy, they have serious issues and it starts with carlisle. A person who is that controlling is severely insecure. ofcourse we saw that with edward. He got his influence by his father, he cant have children so he like really young women to feel like one, he's aware of his age so he knows that women would usually need to be given money to be with him or be completely in love with him. Because I dont think anyone would deny that if edward was very poor that women wouldnt put up with being treated the way he treats women. I wouldnt say bella likes being treated that way because she didnt like before she met edward.
Date: 21 Oct 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 43
Great story! I am sad I have finished it! I look forward to reading more of your work!
Date: 21 Oct 2011 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 42
I'm sad that this is almost over. It is quite different in a very good way!
Date: 21 Oct 2011 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 41
Edwsrd is being pretty amazing! I thought he had asked her to marry him! I love that it was her. They are pretty adorable.
Date: 21 Oct 2011 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 40
Yes! Yes! Yes!!! She really has to agree at this point! I think she was right to wait it out, but what else is there to wait for?
Date: 21 Oct 2011 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 39
I am really surprised that Edward held himself back for so long. First with not pressuring her to return to his home, then with breaking his rules.
Date: 21 Oct 2011 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 38
Hooray!!! They are finally almost on the same page!
Date: 20 Oct 2011 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 37
Bella is doing some much needed growing up here. I was pretty shocked that Carlisle called her and invited her to dinner.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 36
I don't see why Charlie didn't just pay her more so she could afford her bills. She was ready to move forward with Edward again, and now just took another step backward.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 35
So sad, but she is doing the right thing.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 34
It won't be enough until he throws himself at her feet and begs forgiveness. He still has yet to admit fault because text messages don't count!
Date: 20 Oct 2011 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 33
How could he doubt it? He tracked every second of every day! She couldn't cheat eve n if she would. Asshole!!!
Date: 20 Oct 2011 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 32
I knew he would jump straight to the conclusion that she cheated. What an ass. I am glad she has her parents back to lean on!
Date: 20 Oct 2011 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 31
One family is on the mend, will it be two? I am curious if Bella is pregnant. I get the feeling Edward will be an ass not believing he is in the 1%.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 30
I really didnt think how hard Edwrd would take that. The majority of his life has been a lie.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 29
You took the words out of my mouth. WTF!!! I totally did not see that coming, but I am proud that Edward stood up tp Carlisle!
Date: 20 Oct 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 28
I wish I had more confidence in Edward! It looks like Carlisle has finally found his opportunity.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 27
I'm a little speechless. She is starting to think she needs his 'discipline.'
Date: 20 Oct 2011 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 26
This is not going to end well. WTF is with Jasper threatening Edward with his father and telling him what punishment he needs to extend?! That is jacked up!!!
Date: 20 Oct 2011 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 25
That was really perfect. I hope Edward can keep his promise!
Date: 20 Oct 2011 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 24
How adorable is your drunk and vulnerable Edward! Will he remember anything?
Date: 20 Oct 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 23
Well she needed to stand her ground and she did.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 22
I had no reason to be afraid of Christmas. I can't help but feel Carlisle is waiting like a snake ready to strike.
Date: 19 Oct 2011 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 21
It was a good thing he saw things from her perspective. He was an ass with a double standard. If he punished her, I think I would be helping her pack! I am a little terrified of Christmas! I get the feeling Carlisle is just waiting like a snake to strike! Freak!
Date: 19 Oct 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella is spot on here. I'm sure Edward will not see it that way, but I'm leaning toward her getting the heck out! He is completely unreasonable!
Date: 19 Oct 2011 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
Edward is a typical man who turns into an infant when struck by the common cold. Of course he is potentially dying. That right there is why women have our young!!!
Date: 19 Oct 2011 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
Well that turned out better than I imagined. I still think Edward is going to call her out for drinking the wine though.
Date: 19 Oct 2011 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 17
I really don't think he will ever get the sass out of her, but he probably doesn't want that anyway. I guess it Is good that he does not work with Carlisle! Next chapter should be interesting.
Date: 19 Oct 2011 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ok, so Carlisle is a raging asshole! Good for Edward finally giving Bella full disclosure. He really should have brought her up to speed on Carlisle before this.
Date: 19 Oct 2011 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
I really am not liking this side of Carlisle! I do like how supportive Edward is being over her meeting Charlie today.
Date: 19 Oct 2011 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 14
Irena is like the mother Bella deserves. Edward is lucky to have her around! It really is good that he cares so much for her. Bella has never experienced that. Sad!
Date: 19 Oct 2011 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 13
Goodness sake! He wasn't kidding when he said he has jealousy issues. That butting against her hard head. WOW!!!