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Reviewer: Loopylisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2017 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Her Dimonds

I am loving the story but I have to point out demons is spelled this way for the title , keep up  keep the brilliant writing x

Reviewer: kopec82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2016 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 49 - Blissful Interlude

I like it but it was very dark very painfull story for bella

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2014 11:37 PM Title: Epilogue

The whole story was great except for the ending where he is lieing to her. It makes their whole immortal relationship a lie in my opion. Other than that it was a wonderful story!! 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 11:45 PM Title: Epilogue

I can't believe its finished!!!!!! You never mentioned if her scars were healed though??? Thanks for completing it though xoxoxoxo

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 49 - Blissful Interlude

Bygum that was a fast forward! Why did she have to have a BRAZILIAN!  She could of just be trimmed not all the way!!!!!!!! ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 47 - Thoughts of the Aftermath

Wow! Rose!!!!!! I'm so glad they were able to get rid of them so quickly and she only had broken ribs ;) and I'm in total agreement with Edward that they wait until she mentally stable and they get married asap ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 45 - Fixing the Details

I'm so proud of Bella .!!!!!!!!! ;D I was wondering if you were going to do the 3 nomads ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 42 - Getaway

That was awesome! I think it was only natural with the situation ;) with Vladimir I think maybe he will get bad in Russia and the volturi will be called and ask for Edward?? 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 41 - A Time of Healing

Its great that she is healing but when Paul s trial comes I think it will go down hill a bit I was thinking is Alice watching out for the volturi? If they go with her and the press capture there image there will be big trouble ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 34 - What's Next?

So cool that Bella is religious I thought Edward was going to propose I hope he does soon! Just a thought "when" she is changed will her physical scars disappear? Plus I hope they hold off consummating their relationship until their at least married and she's changed because of the damage to her body also with her having a hysterectomy why isn't she on hrt?;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Bella's Story

Wow !!¡!!!! Its strange how she was Dwyer instead of swan but a great chapter with its content ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Is She at Rock Bottom Yet?

Its wears that Jacob is human  with the Cullen's being vampires ;) 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 13 - A Haunting Past

Wow! I have a theory on what happened to her that her parents were murdered in front of her and they gang raped her afterwards? I loved the personal interaction between them and Edward having his first erection was hilarious! ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Mental Meanderings

I'm cool with waiting for the trial ;) in another chapter you mentioned that Edward was the only one to read minds does that mean that are doesn't have his canon power? I hope so ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 10 - So We Meet

I love this storyline! It's like a grown up version of the original ;) I love how he is using masen instead of Cullen, your writing is awesome! ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Learning More

Thanks for the explanation of the drugs she is taking. 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Revelations

Great chapter ;) maybe Esme could join the church and befriend Bella?

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Breathing her Scent

I love how you write !;) Emmett is histerical! ;D

Reviewer: BiteMeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 10:59 PM Title: Epilogue

I usually comment on each chapter, but I really wanted to wait until the end of the story on this one. I loved this story!!! Very well written and such a superb story line. I really liked how Bella and Edward mated while she was still human. Incredible!! Now I'm off to read more of your stories!!

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 9:39 AM Title: Epilogue

Yeah, I can't get behind their little vigilante spree. It was wrong. Bella didn't want that to happen and just because they found a loophole doesn't make it right. It would kill her to find out otherwise and shatter her trust in them. It would serve them right. Justice had been done, and done fairly. They didn't need to mess with it. It also takes away from the courage and strength Bella had in going through with the trials for them to just go behind her back and kill them anyway. Life in prison was her justice to them and they took that away from her.

Not to mention death is infinitely easier than life in prison.

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 50 - How Eternity came to be

Before Edward bit her he really needed to sit her ass down on that moldy matress and tell her that she needs to stop pulling this 'somethings wrong so I'm not going to talk to you' thing. She's done it more than once and let a problem fester between them that could have been solved with a simple conversation. I understand she has issues but this is one she really needs to work on.

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 46 - What have I done

That bit of the book/movie always bothered me, it's impossible to suck venom from a snakebite!!! Not your fault, like I said, they did it in the books and movie, it's just something that always urked me.

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Getaway

Alice is bugging me in this story, she's pretty selfish. It's pretty messed up that she'd even hint that she wanted to go on this vacation with them, let alone make a deal with Edward. She really needs to learn some respect for peoples personal space. And Bella needs to not just get back at Edward, she needs to tell him that it's not okay. Enough choices have been taken from her in life, she's the one who says where she'll go and who with, not a selfish sister and her boyfriend.

Same thing with her being changed, that's Bella's choice and no one elses. And Rose can take her baggage and leave it on someone elses porch. Just because she doesn't like her life doesn't mean everyone else will hate it too.

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 21 - A Day at the Cullen's

"So I have to ask, who here likes and who hates the Spider Monkey comment in the movie?"

 

I don't mind the spider monkey comment in the movie or the book (don't remember if it was in the book to be honest) but I'm not a fan when lines from the book or movie end up in fanfiction. People are always putting quotable lines from the movie/books into their stories and we've all read them a hundred and one times now and it's gotten old and unclever. Sometimes I wonder if authors read other peoples fanfiction because so many things are repeated across fics that they must not. So yeah, I'm glad you skipped it. You are borrowing characters but the story is your own, good call.

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 13 - A Haunting Past

Man...I've read tons of stories where Edward and Bella are mated and are obvlivious to it yet the whole family knows and keeps it from them while teases them about it and every time I wish I could reach into the story and shake them senseless!

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Lunchtime Observations

"She also had very little support for women who went back into abusive relationships."

Edward is 100% right and if Rose really feels this way she needs to stop volunteering. This is the time when these women need support the most and withholding it is doing more damage than anything. It can ensures a women wont leave and seek help again due to being judged.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 49 - Blissful Interlude

L.O.L!! Not AT ALL like BDWard!! :-P

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Meet the Cullen's

such a good story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Is She at Rock Bottom Yet?

exhauted, undr nourished and stressed somthing had to give

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Lunchtime Observations

hook line and  sinker, she has caught him

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The One That Sings

ok well you answered my previous question...he just wasn't close enough



Author's Response:

Yeah, things were a bit chaotic in the begining and she wasn't right there for him to know it was her

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Learning What's Wrong

how come he did not realize she was his mate immediately?



Author's Response:

He doesn't realize because he's clueless, trust me before long you will want to bash him on the head

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Returning Home

great start



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the begning, I hope you keep liking

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Returning Home

great start

Reviewer: Alexsgirl311 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Returning Home

I just wanted to tell you that I loved your story but... I did think the end chapters were rushed. The comments in the end notes saying that you were trying to just get it done really showed in your writing. The rest of the story and it's progression was believable but the whole James scene, then the rushed barely one and a half chapter marriage/honeymoon part and then the Voltera part... Seemed like you were just ready for this story to be over and I was a little disappointed because up until then I thought your writing was a breath of fresh air with all of your details and realistic timing. Very good job with the whole thing, I just wished the last part would have had as much effort put into it as the beginning. Keep writing because your awesome! :)



Author's Response:

I love your review.   I really do and I agree with most of it.  It wasn't that I was ushed to get it done it was that anytime I tried to add filler and fluff it sounded horrible to me so that made all the rest become rushed.   I really hate how the end worked bcause I don't think it flowed well.  Sorry to disapoint.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl311 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Trying New Things

I just wanted to let you know that i think you are a beautiful writer, the story just pulls me in and I can just feel the emotion of everything. I love to read and honestly your writing is better than a lot of published writers. I love Emmett in your story... He is a breath of fresh air and a comical relief to her sadness. His comments do get me sometimes and I find myself laughing out loud. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story and that it is from Edwards point of view! I love that and I found sm version a little lacking in the characters. I have honestly enjoyed what the people on this site do with her character more than she did herself... But a big thanks to sm for creating tanthony that sites like this let people get more creative:) 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like Em.  I think he is what keeps the story from being depressive and overly angsty.

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 6:54 PM Title: Epilogue

the story was awesome!  I'm glad they were able to heal Bella as much as was possible before having changed her, and I'm glad her happy memories were clear for her instead of taking the bad memories and having them be the clearest.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:59 AM Title: Epilogue

sweet end

 

Thank you for writing and sharing

snile

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 50 - How Eternity came to be

Well at least Aro was somewhat reasonable

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 49 - Blissful Interlude

wonderful honeymoon and first time

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 48 - The Perfect Proposal

she prob heard him say the not wanting her to be a vamp with the james thing and misunderstood. awww for proposal

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 47 - Thoughts of the Aftermath

wow  Rose talking sense into the boy.  whoda thought

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 46 - What have I done

ugh   Poor Bella.   Pissing off Jasper was a stupid idea james.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 45 - Fixing the Details

bella has a long ay to go.  Glad he got her to talk to him though.  Hee hee for messing with alice.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 44 - Giving her Closure

Go strong bella.   cant blame eddie for wanting P dead.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:12 AM Title: Epilogue

Wow, this story is absolutely breathtaking.  THank you so much for writing it and sharing with us readers  :)

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:51 PM Title: Epilogue

Thanks for finishing your story. It has been on my TBR list for awhile. I am slowly but surely going thru my list of completed fics and reading them. Yours will be the next one I read. = )

 

Hugs

 

 

Reviewer: paisleybutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Returning Home

read list

Reviewer: helikesitheymikey Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Learning What's Wrong

oh gosh...if you saw a weird review from me I was trying to fav your story and that was the blurb I was writing to identify which story it was. SORRY!

 

I absolutely LOVE this story though!

Reviewer: helikesitheymikey Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Returning Home

cullens meet Bella in college and she's E's mate. E just returns and finds the cullens are trying to keep Bella alive but can't connect with her enough

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Getaway

great update, hope rl is treating you well !!

Reviewer: Krystle Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 42 - Getaway

I glad you continuin the story and that you have your friends to guide you through. I really love who Bella and Edward have slowly worked through everthing and can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Getaway

i'm glad her confidence is slowly building, NY was great minus the Vlad issue. I hope he wont blab to the Volturi

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Getaway

this was a great chapter, so much excitment!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 42 - part 1

I loved this chapter

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Getaway

Great chapter.  Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Getaway

LOVE IT!  Except for the Russian wacko  lol

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Getaway

glad they got away for a bit and had a great time.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2011 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 42 - part 1

Great chapter. can't see what's going to happen next.  I know that the trial is going to be rough.  I also worry about the Volturi finding out about Bella.  I also wonder will Edward change Bella eventually if she wants to be changed.?

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 42 - part 1

DEFINITELY sticking this on 'Favourites'!! But could you do us all a favour?! If you ever have to go on hiatus again, would please, please stick it on the story's frontpage?! So at least we'll know...... :-(

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Important Conversations

*utters quiet 'Hail Mary'* Story is damn good, BTW!! :-P

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 42 - part 1

Jasper is such a cool character.

Reviewer: Simaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 42 - part 1

Another awesome chapter.


I think they are pushing Bella too much. Edward does not need to be at the trial, Bella is going to suffer enough as it is she doesn’t need to added pressure of worrying about him too.

Reviewer: sherriola Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 42 - part 1

I really liked the session with Jasper and Bella and Edward, planning for the trial.  i like that everyone will be there with her.  I think that as much as she wants to do it on her own, somewhere inside she must want that support.  I completely understand why she might nto want Edward to hear her testimony and why he wouldn't want to see the video.  Shiver.

 

I was wondering if you have this story posted on FFN.  i've recently begun posting my first fan fic over there, and i'd love to recommend this, but I think we're only allowed to post FFN links.  Anyway, if it does exist over there, let me know in a review response, or on twitter--I'm sherriola on twitter--or a PM from FFN.  I'm sherryola on ffn.

 

Again, i love this story so much, one of my very favorite twilight fics.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 42 - part 1

I really enjoyed this chapter.  Bells had a great discussion with E and Jazz.

And the progress is amazing!  I cant wait until the trial is over and she can move on

I love it, I cant wait to read part two!  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 42 - part 1

i hope Edward will be able to control himself at the trial.....he just might need Esme, Alice & Rose in addition to Emmett to hold him back

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 42 - part 1

Welcome back, glad you are ok hope RL hasn't been treating you to bad. Thanks for the chapter !!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 42 - part 1

I'm so glad that you're continuing this.  I look forward to reading more.

Thanks for writing this story!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 42 - part 1

I agree with having edward wait elsewhere - heck he can sit in a nearby starbucks - smelling coffee should be ok right?

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Meet the Cullen's

I came across this story today, and I usually dont comment until I have caught up with the writer, but I just had to interject here by saying I absolutely LOVE this story!

Your style of writing has captured my interest and I am curious and intrigued to watch everything unfold.

So I just wanted to say thank you, and I cant wait to see what happens next :)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Two Steps Forward, One Step Back

great chapter, loved the way Edward talked to her about his past, wish we could get to her story thou........

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 41 - A Time of Healing

Bella has made so much progress thanks to the Cullens...I am glad she moved in with them and faced her fears at the frat party...I hope things are starting to look up for her. Thanks

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Her Dimonds

"She agreed, and that night I slept holding my angel as she tossed, turned and fought the demons I couldn’t fight for her."

 

Edward slept? Lol... it seems that in mating with Bella, he's lost some of his vampiric nature and is sleeping now! COOL!! ;)

Sorry, had ta tease... Good chapter. I really know where Bella is. Granted, I never went through all that she did, but I have experienced PTSD, and from the recollections of my husband when I was going through the healing period, it was something similar. Most people write about PTSD, but don't get the reality of it across... You write excellently.

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Trying New Things

it was good! Quick and too the point (pun definitely intended!) 

 

I LOVE Em's addition... although I would think Carlisle would have had everyone leave the house, knowing how private Edward is. I'm not saying he would have everyone leave every time, but for Edward's first forray into the sexual realm, it seems a reasonable idea for Carlisle to have. Either that, or I would have had Carlisle tell Edward to go out somewhere else, and he would keep everyone else in the house. 

Any which way, I liked the chapter! 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 41 - A Time of Healing

I have a feeling that all is not as well as Edward believes.

Reviewer: unicorn_bliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 41 - A Time of Healing

O.k I want to point out that in SM's story. Bella and everyone else was completely healed of any scars,nicks, or bruises (no matter how old). Once they were turned.

So those scaring on Bella would go away once she is turned.

I kind of want shake my head at Rose and Edward about their ignorance towards the whole 'turning' disicion.

Now, about the recent chapter. Hmm....It was all goodI suppose.lol

Reviewer: Simaril Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 41 - A Time of Healing

Another awesome chapter.


 I am reading the chapters as slowly as I can now to drag out the enjoyment as I know there aren’t many more to come. I’m sad I didn’t manage to convince you to go to War and Peace word counts.


The whoopee cushion under Carlisle’s chair made me laugh my ass off and the capture the flag/Bella game was very original.


Bella did very well at the party and dealt with Lauren fabulously.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 41 - A Time of Healing

awww glad she is doing better.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 41 - A Time of Healing

Please let him be right! so proud of Bella, she's doing wonderfully :)

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 41 - A Time of Healing

I'm still lovin' your story.  Another great chapter.  I'm glad she's moved in with the Cullens.  Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Moving Forward

Oh I'm so glad that you haven't stopped writing this great story.

Another great chapter. thank you



Author's Response:

I know how much it sucks to have writers drop a story so nope, I can't do that.  I'm glad you're still reading!

Reviewer: motherbeatrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Trying New Things

OMG I laughed so hard at Emments comment about lift off.  That is so funny1

Can't wait for these two to do the deed

Reviewer: motherbeatrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 21 - A Day at the Cullen's

Love the story, its so intense, I can feel Bella's pain, it's worse than anything I have every read about before, good writing on your part. Can't wait to see how this unfolds.One can always be hopeful - can't one?

Reviewer: sherriola Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Moving Forward

As i told you on twitter today, this is one of my very favorite stories, certainly one of my favorite vampire stories.  I liked all the different aspects.  Bella's confused emotions, the date, their sweet tentative physical explorations.  The story has so much love woven in every chapter, in spite of all the horror we see through Bella's experiences.



Author's Response:

Seriously you are to sweet!!!!  Thank you.  I admit that vamp Edward is hot.  I love writing him and so I'm just glad that others like reading it too. Can I also say thank you.  I have felt that my last chapters have been flat.  The tension that was there before with trying to learn Bella's secret isn't there anymore and I just don't know that the chapters feel good anymore, so thank you for the review.  I feel I am tying up a ton of loss ends and still trying to keep people interested so I'm glad that you are still liking it.

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Moving Forward

I'm so sorry to hear about your computer troubles!  But I'm so very glad you didn't give up!  You've done a wonderful job with this story and I'm always glad to see a new chapter.  Always worth the wait.

Speaking of waiting, it is nice that Bella and Edward are on the same page in terms of taking the next steps in their physical relationship.  Sometimes it's nice to read a story where they wait.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are ok with them waiting a bit.  The way I have constructed them both it would be terribly out of character for them to be ok with jumping into bed with each other.   I admit I like some smuttier fics but sometimes having them wait is sweeter.  Depends on the story.  So thank you :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Moving Forward

i think that was the best thing they could have done in making that agreement to tell each other their likes and dislikes. i hope she does move in with them.

Author's Response:

thanks.  I love it when readers like what I have my characters doing.  I agree that their relationship would be doomed if they don't communicate.  Then again maybe I just want Edward to start talking dirty . . .

Reviewer: Simaril Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Moving Forward

Another awesome chapter.

Sorry to hear about the computer fail. I'm very glad you didn't give up though. Sad to hear there are only 10 chapters left, I'd be happy if this story grew to War and Peace like word counts. I really love it.



Author's Response:

My jaw is on the ground!!!!  War and PEACE!!!!  DANG I dont' have that much in me.  sorry.   The idea makes me shudder but wow that you love that story that much.  That is soooo awesome.  Thank you!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Moving Forward

no giving up......

 

Great chapter and sweet date.



Author's Response:

I won't give up.  I won't!!!!!   I have plans for these two and I need to see it through.  Thank you that you still read adn care!  Seriously, thank you!

Reviewer: Simaril Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Her Dimonds

Another awesome chapter.

It was good to see Bella finally letting some of her anger out.



Author's Response:

This was Bella's biggest step so far in her healing process.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BELLWARDC Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Her Dimonds

Glad to see Bella is making progress.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Her Dimonds

Wow, I understand why Bella needed to do this, its part of healing herself.  It would be hard to sit and watch someone you love go through something like this and doing nothing but be there for them.

Your other story sounds interesting I look forward to giving it a read.



Author's Response:

Yeah Edward, who's never been around a girl weeping was REALLY out of his element but he got through.  Thanks for the review!  :)

Reviewer: mjwpg Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Her Dimonds

Awesome chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Her Dimonds

Wow, that was so emotionally painful for both of them, more for Bella of course. Maybe now her future will change?

Author's Response:

Her future . . . it will change slowly.  It can't be overnight but this is the biggest step Bella's taken to healing.

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Her Dimonds

I'm sure this was difficult to write, but you do such an excellent job with these intense chapters. 



Author's Response:

Thanks.  this was a difficult chapter to write.  I dont' know why it was so bad but it was.  Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Her Dimonds

Wow chilling



Author's Response:

I hope it wasn't to bad for you.

Reviewer: trails of red i cry 4 you Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Her Dimonds

0__ _ _o update soon I really love how you put the feeling in the story it's really good it made me feel what they felt and  it was really good okay now I'm going to stop talking now lol update soon 



Author's Response:

oh you mad me LOL, seriously.  Never stop tlking!  What fun is that!   Thank you for the incredibly sweet review!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Her Dimonds

rough chapter.   wonder what was in the letter.



Author's Response:

Don't freak to much about the letter.  It isn't that bad, just an added hardship on a bad week.  But it isn't bad.  Promise!

Reviewer: sherriola Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Her Dimonds

Wow, this chapter was very good.  Yes, painful sad, but so necessary for her recovery, so it was excellent.  I loved all the things the family did to support her too, even as she slept.  It was beautiful.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm glad you liked the Cullens.  They are soooooo awesome for Bella.

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Trying New Things

great chapter, very nicely done i thought edward in the shower that is,  the conversation the family had about edward's problem was amusing especially emmett, love this story thanks tracy



Author's Response:

Hey Tracey!

Glad you liked the chapter.  Glad you had fun with Edward in the shower!

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Ignoring the Holidays

hi there super chapter,  liking just like jasper bella's growing confidence in making good choices and not just going along, all in all i dont think her christmas was too sad or distressing it was just calm and peaceful just what bella  needed really,  love this story thanks tracy

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