Date: 16 Sep 2022 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 43
Just re-read the whole series again! I loved it, of course, but I hate that it ended. I always hate when the series ends. I want everything to continue forever. LOL
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2018 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 43
it was an amazing ride
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2018 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 13
wasn't Garrett abused and abandoned as a child maybe he was rescued by Lillian
Date: 27 Jun 2017 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 43
i think you should write anohter story in this series
Date: 26 Sep 2016 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 43
you should do one more story, about Bella being the big boss lady and stuff.
Date: 28 Nov 2015 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 30
Love your writing. Brilliant
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2015 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 28
Brilliant story line
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 43
DAMN ... Ok, there needs to be possibly one more sequel...delving more into their
personal lives .... with another psycho for them to chase.
I have loved all three of your FBI stories even though this one got a little far-fetched with The Program.
I'm now going to go check out your other stories. You are a wonderful author, & I have thoroughly enjoyed each & every one I have read.
Thanks muches for sharing them with me....
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 43
wow!!! AWESOME AMAZING !!!!! xxxxxx i didnt want this to be over but as they say all good things have to end *tears* thank you so much for finishing this story xoxoxoxoxo ;D
Date: 26 May 2014 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 34
*shock/horror* i havent read this story beore!! ;) its brilliant btw:) anyway how come they havent worked the riddle out yet i thought the picture from the lawyer worked it out? ;)
Date: 26 Sep 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 43
I hope Bella is finally happy.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2013 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 43
So are we gonna see a fourth in this series???loved it! Also just finished CBA ;-) lots of happy tears with that one,as well as a few sad ones.
Date: 24 Sep 2013 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 43
Thanks once again for sharing your talent :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2013 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 43
Will there be another part to this series a PART 4?????
I am absolutly loving reading this story because it is so uniquely different from so many other stories out there!!! This amazing story has left me captivated & intrigiued. Expectanly & impatiently awaiting next chapter update. This is a Briliantly amazing story, which has captured ur audiences attention!! I most definatly give this a 10 star rating!!!
U Truely are an amazingly gifted write with such an amazing talent!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2013 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 43
I loved readding all 3 of the stories...you did a great job!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing it all with us!!
Date: 23 Sep 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 43
Looking forward to more
Date: 22 Sep 2013 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 42
Looking forward to more
Date: 20 Sep 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 41
Bella needs to stop hiding and spend time with her family. She will probably feel less guilty and more normal if she interacts with the people who love her. She needs a life outside the office. She needs to spend time with the children and see the good in the world. She is already the leader of the team. She should take the job, but she needs balance. She would get that with family.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 41
No, please write more than two more chapters. Pretty please. I love this series.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 41
Looking forward to more
Date: 19 Sep 2013 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 40
I hope Stefan LeStrange is a good guy, but with a name like that I doubt it.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 40
Looking forward to more
Date: 05 Aug 2013 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 39
I hope Bella listens to Seth. She has to choose to live again.
Date: 01 Aug 2013 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 39
lookign forward to more
Date: 31 Jul 2013 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 38
I am glad that Edward is smart enough to shoot Embry Call. It had to be done. He was not going to stop.
Date: 31 Jul 2013 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 38
Looking forward to more
Date: 22 Jul 2013 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 37
Loved it looking forward to more
Date: 21 Jul 2013 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 36
I've been reading your stories ever since I read and re-read the Awakenings series. This FBI series has had me neglecting my housework for the last week. I can't wait to read the last few chapters in this story!!
Date: 19 Jul 2013 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 36
Wonder what her name is? Something Dwyer?
Date: 19 Jul 2013 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 35
oh wow Vanessa Hale.
Date: 19 Jul 2013 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 33
My chocolates melted. So I get RL.
Date: 18 Jul 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 36
looking forward ot more
Date: 18 Jul 2013 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 36
Great chapter, I'm looking forward to more being revealed.
Date: 17 Jul 2013 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 35
Woohoo, keep posting.
Date: 16 Jul 2013 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 35
looking forward to more
Date: 16 May 2013 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 34
Keep on posting, another great work!!
Date: 13 May 2013 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 34
looking forward to mroe
Date: 30 Mar 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 33
Thanks for sharing this story with us! I love it!
Date: 23 Mar 2013 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 33
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2013 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Love this story! Thanks foe sharing your talent with us!
Date: 17 Mar 2013 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 32
Wow! I just love this story! Thanks for sharing your talent with us!,
Date: 18 Feb 2013 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 32
looking forward to mre
Date: 03 Feb 2013 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 31
Looking forward to more
Date: 03 Feb 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 31
Great Chapter!!!!!! Glad both Bella and Edward are alive!
Date: 02 Feb 2013 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 31
Another great chapter! Your stories have always been worth waiting for...hopefully everything going on for you gets better soon.
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2013 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 30
This story is not showing up under most recent any longer!! It showing u haven't updated since Jan 3rd which I know is untrue because u were only at ch 29 not 30!! Many people who are reading this story is not going to realize it has be updated or new chapters have been posted since then PLEASE FIX U PROBALLY HAVE CHANGE DATE 4 IT SHOW UP UNDER MOST RECENT BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSE FIX THIS AWSOME STORY!!! I had to do a search for this story to even check if it had been updated. Thanks 4 all ur hard work!!
Date: 21 Jan 2013 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 30
looking forward to more
Date: 21 Jan 2013 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 30
Wow a great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next...
Date: 08 Jan 2013 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 28
This case is getting to all of them. They need to solve it before they are all broken.
Date: 05 Jan 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 28
more puzzle pieces - i love them and dread them at tye same time you TEASE ;-)
Date: 04 Jan 2013 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 28
Looking forward to more
Date: 04 Jan 2013 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 28
oh its getting really good. :)
Date: 01 Jan 2013 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 27
diabolical. yiu gave us a bunch of puzzle pieces but I will ned help putting the puzzle together.
Date: 30 Dec 2012 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 27
looking forard tomore
Date: 30 Dec 2012 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 27
The pussle pieces are coming together and I can't wait to see the biger picture. Keep up the good work!
Date: 28 Dec 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
I am glad you have a plan. I feel like we are in the maze at the end of The Goblet of Fire. You don't know what is going to jump out around the next corner to confuse the situation more.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wow. Great chapter cyhanks for the update and congratulations on the latest book you are so talented. Merry Christmas.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 24
You are an amazing writer. I think I have read your work for several years. I want to read your published work too.
Thank you, this is an amazing story.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
Embry is the mole. Poor zoe
Date: 13 Dec 2012 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 24
loved the chaper
Date: 05 Nov 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 23
looking forward to mreo
Date: 31 Oct 2012 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 23
I had a feeling about Embry from the smirk when they walked out of the room.
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 23
Awe man!!! So good!! *but waiting is killing me!!*
Keep up the great work!!!
:)
I hope Bella pulls her head out of her proverbial arse soon! :)
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2012 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 23
ohhhhhhh great job.
Date: 26 Oct 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 22
It is about time that Edward told her to take her head out of arse and realize that the pity party has to stop. He loves her and he is sick of being her doormat. She needs to show him that he is special to her. She hasn't shown him true love in a long time. All he has seen is neediness.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2012 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 22
This is so good!! I can't stand the waiting!!! :)
Update soon !!
Date: 23 Oct 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 22
looking forward to more
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow. Bella needs to show Edward that she loves him. Great job. I love bitchy in charge Bella. Really these people asked for their help yet they keep withholding.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 22
You may not love this story, but let me tell you it is so much more that many stories out there. I jumped on this as soon as it was out. Too much steamy sex with not story line. I mean a lemon is a lemon.
Author's Response:
I love this story, very much so.
Date: 30 Aug 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 21
This story is confusing.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 21
well well, I am into this story. I was not talking about your notes..
Date: 24 Aug 2012 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
oh I hate this. I am catching up to you again.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 17
just keeps getting deeper. I don't usually read anything horrible about children. I don't even listen to it on the news. I just cant.. You have handled it well so far so good.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 16
Not confused just really into this.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 15
She hits the director and lives to tell about it? Well I am not sure I buy that. These guys get that high up for being tough.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
I am sorry too. YOu have a life like everyone.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 11
good work Bella.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love this. I quit reading because with so much information if the updates are slow I have to reread. So I was waiting until you got ahead of me.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 6
Bella can not save everyone. Sometimes you have to back off.
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 21
This was a good chapter. The team arrived and they actually started analyzing data. Granted, they didn't get anywhere. Why are they just looking at files? Why arent they interviewing people? Plus, how big is this rat hole? It sounds absolutely suffocating yet, large.
Great chapter. I have been sick most of the summer too. So, take care.
Date: 23 Aug 2012 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 21
looking forard to more
Date: 10 Jul 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
looking forward to more
Date: 10 Jul 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 20
j'aime vos histoires
Date: 22 Jun 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
This chapter was a tough one. It shows how tied together Carlisle, Bella, Edward, and Esme are. They truly are a unit that only thrives with each other. When one is not healthy the unit doesn't function correctly, but the other parts are their to give the troubled one strength, even if they are not the best themselves. They truly need each other to survive.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
Amazingly well done. With such high emotions will be able to think. Clearly and solve he case?
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 19
looking forward to mroe
Date: 17 May 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
"This is crazy shit, right?" Yes, yes it is. Wow. Great chapter :)
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
Interesting. Keep it coming BB - the wait is worth it. take care.
Date: 16 May 2012 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
This story has more twists and turns. It is hard to remember what happened in previous chapters. It has been so long. Bella does not need to take the whole world on her shoulders. She needs to trust her extended family. They seem to be the only ones she can count on to be there for her. Her team is her extended family plus their mates and children. The rest of the world she doesn't need to worry about. When this mess is finished. They all need to leave and find a new career that is less stressful.
Date: 14 May 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 18
looking forward to more
Date: 12 Mar 2012 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
There seems to be quite a few dirty agents or at least not totally honest with each other in Bella's and Edward's presence. These agents returning from the dead seem to have their own agenda. I hope the good guys can figure it out without Bella going crazy.
Date: 24 Feb 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh Peter what have you done. Looking forward to reading what happens next.
Date: 23 Feb 2012 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
Now where getting some where on this mother. I was all hyped and shit ready to beat the living crap out of peter too.. wooosaaw lmao.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 17
Um Wow! Charlotte?!
Date: 22 Feb 2012 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ugh, what a cliffy and why?????
Date: 22 Feb 2012 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 13 Feb 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
I feel so bad for Edward for having to put up with Bella running to Carlisle all the time. She says Edward is her world, but she seems to confide and put Carlisle first. Edward seems to be the bedmate. Edward seems to love Bella more than Bella loves Edward.