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Reviewer: leesmee Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 9:30 AM Title: The Pain of Vision

very original vision Alice is having.I look forward to chapter 2. Thank You;)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 11~ Nothing will ever be the same

Edward and B as parents.. LOL

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2012 12:21 AM Title: Building Lives

I am so not a fan of Jake.. nope not at all.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2012 12:11 AM Title: Changes

Oh Bella, finally someone to stay with you and love you. The minute that wolf imprints you my dear are history.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2012 11:13 PM Title: Learning to Live Again

I rather love how this is starting. I still think they need to tell Rose she can settle down and be nice or be gone.  Bella is Jasper's great,great,great grand niece and Edward's mate. So deal with it.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2012 9:53 PM Title: The Pain of Vision

time to ditch Rose.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 4:56 PM Title: The Pain of Vision

:)

Reviewer: ECullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2011 5:49 PM Title: The Pain of Vision

Should of warned that tissues might be needed through the vision.  Great start very different.

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 8:31 AM Title: Shattered

 

Oh my!!!!! That's so sad!!!

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 8:15 AM Title: New Beginings

lol!!

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 7:58 AM Title: Building Lives

interesting ability!!

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 7:40 AM Title: Changes

wow that was alot!!! lol

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 5:43 AM Title: New Friends

how cute!!

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 5:26 AM Title: Charge Hell with a Water Pistol

Soooo cute, so the wolves are coming....

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 5:09 AM Title: Secrets Unkept

where's the blood from?

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:39 AM Title: Learning to Live Again

Im lovin this story!!

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:19 AM Title: Alone in a Crowded Room

OMG!!!! that was intense!!!

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 3:52 AM Title: The Pain of Vision

Great start!!

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Date: 14 Feb 2011 1:38 PM Title: The Pain of Vision

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Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2011 5:56 PM Title: Building Lives

I agree with Bella, her gift is more like a curse. What use is it?



Author's Response:

iI know her gift is terrible but very soon it will be a useful tool. 

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 11:52 PM Title: Changes

I never saw her getting changed like that.



Author's Response:

It was a toss up between that and Edward slipping and almost killing her. I just couldnt see edward ever harming Bella so this one seemed more realistic to me.

Reviewer: indgirl1982 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2011 3:33 PM Title: The Pain of Vision

nice start, pretty good story idea.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying this story. I hope it lives up to your expectations.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2011 5:15 PM Title: Charge Hell with a Water Pistol

Good chapter. I wonder how fast Bella will find out about the wolves?



Author's Response:

I'm guessing not too long this Bella is very smart. The next chapter is coming very soon.

Reviewer: Nette91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2011 3:53 AM Title: Charge Hell with a Water Pistol

Loving this story



Author's Response:

thank you for reviewing. I'm glad your enjoying the story! I loved writting it and am loving revamping it. 

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2011 3:06 AM Title: Secrets Unkept

I thought it was funny that Rose was the one to give the secret away. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! I loved this idea too since she was so worried Edward was going to slip and tell Bella.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2011 1:08 AM Title: Learning to Live Again

I like this Bella better. She seems like she can actually have fun.



Author's Response:

Just wait. This Bella has a back bone and can be a smart ass. She holds her own with Edward and can think for herself too!

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2011 12:45 AM Title: Alone in a Crowded Room

What a mess that one careless child made of others lives. This was a very sad chapter.



Author's Response:

Yeah! I teared up while writting this chapter. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2011 12:04 AM Title: The Pain of Vision

I really like this story, I havent read one like it.



Author's Response:

im sorry it took so long to reply. I missed this one.  I got this idea because I love Jasper and wanted him to have a signifagant role in the story but my Jasper would never hurt Alice to be with Bella and Alice would never hurt Jasper. I thought of this and loved the idea. i started writting and found I fell in love with who he is even more. I have more happiness instore for Jasper.

Reviewer: TwilightAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2011 3:15 AM Title: The Pain of Vision

I can't wait to read more and see where this goes.   LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind review! I am getting chapter 2 ready to go now. It should be up within the hour.

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