Date: 09 Jul 2013 11:10 AM Title: Jasper and John Barleycorn
worried, of course about angela!!! will she ever recover, mentally? and carlisle ? are his healing powers increasing due to bellas proximity? is she making them all better stronger vampires?
Date: 09 Jul 2013 3:31 AM Title: Tests
i thought jake was meeting mike here?!?!?!!!!! and jasper? he is already there for bella?!
Date: 09 Jul 2013 1:56 AM Title: Confessions and Realizations
cannot wait for jake to meet mike!!!!
Date: 08 Jul 2013 1:13 PM Title: My Bella
i really like that edward is 25 and not 17...a little more sensible, less impulsive, less teenager 'i know everything, and what is best for everybody'
Date: 08 Jul 2013 4:30 AM Title: Phase and Phascination
yup...i would say seizures are another level of worse...
Date: 08 Jul 2013 4:09 AM Title: What Just Happened?
poor bella, now she is about to find out her friend is a werewolf!!! how much more can the poor girl take...her ex was a lazy good for nothing demon, who attacked her, forcing her to use unknown powers and to come to the realization that she is a witch, she meets two new friends, who are vampires!!!! one of whom she is attracted (? the dream?) to but she happens to be his singer and mate!!! neither of which she knows about, yet...
Date: 26 Mar 2013 3:43 AM Title: Epilogue
Some of it was pretty scary and dangerous, but far and away this story was fun to read. The romance was just right and the family times, human and supernatural. Just a damn good story, I loved it!
Date: 26 Mar 2013 3:15 AM Title: The Battle
That was too close for comfort! Lucky Marcus crossed over to the good guys, and fought Aro. Loved that Bella helped finish off Caius andJames! That thing with Maria was a close one, even more so than with Tanya. Now the correct side has won and maybe they can all draw a peaceful breath.
Date: 26 Mar 2013 1:04 AM Title: Goodbyes...Maybe?
Thank heaven for Carlisle's healing power, it sure came in handy when Victoria hurt Charlie! He sure was amazed by Bella taking the demon out. Well, now he knowsabout everything, so all they have to worry about is the coming fight with the Volturi!
Date: 26 Mar 2013 12:36 AM Title: Decisions and Transitions
Preparations are made, allies are gathering, and we are off to Forks! Wonder how Bella plans to say goodbye to her dad? This is going to be touch and go with the Volturi, and I'm trying to hold a good thought!
Date: 26 Mar 2013 12:05 AM Title: Preparations for Battle
It figured that Tanya would turn traitor to her family, what a bitch! Hope she's happy with the Volturi! The battle with the three demons took all four Cullens to win. This could be a problem for the big battle coming in May.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 11:45 PM Title: Denali
Tanya brought that on herself, by putting her hands on Edward. I'll bet by the time her arm is reattached, she'll think twice before trying again! The visions Bella , Edward and Alice shared are pretty damn bad to have such an effect. Let's hope they find a way to protect all the family and destroy all the Volturi that threaten them!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 11:11 PM Title: Honeymoon
I figured the Volturi would want Bella's powers for themselves. Too bad, she's only for Edward, and for helping her new family! This new-found ability to look human and shut down the bloodlust is amazing! Too bad about the honeymoon being shortened, but I'm sure they will make up for it later! Can't wait to see the meeting between Bella and Tanya!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 10:44 PM Title: Isle Esme
Even the plane ride down was part of the honeymoon! Hope they can return the favor to Jasper and Alice sometime. Jasper's story was really interesting, in that he resisted sex with Maria for so very long. Alice didn't get a virgin vampire, but almost! I know dangerous times are on their way, but I love you taking time out for the honeymoon. After all, you do it so well!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 10:09 PM Title: Training
How disappointing to hear James isn't dead! That creep has as many lives as a cat, and too bad he'll get help from the Volturi. Again, it's good that Bella and Jake are friends, because the Cullens will need all the help they can get to defeat the Italians! The closer Bella and Edward become the stronger their combined powers, it seems.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 8:17 PM Title: Voices in the Moonlight
SDince it gives a warning about approaching danger from the Volturi, this was an excellent time to acquire Edward's goft. It's cool how you are letting them share their power. I can see where this will come in very handy in the near future! p.s., the sex was great, you do good work!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 7:43 PM Title: Scorched
Touch and go there for a bit, but it really helps for Edward to be able to channel Bella's power like that! She's doing really well for being less than a day old. Looks like Bella will be one awesome vampire/witch!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 10:30 AM Title: Burned
It wasn't a very pleasant experience but Bella changed a bit faster than expected. Her first hunt went well, right up until she got her first whiff of human blood! I think she likes vampire sex pretty well, too!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 10:07 AM Title: James
I thought you did well on the fight! I hope Mike and Jake made it through without too many injuries. Bella is kind of a mess right now, so Edward better bite her and save her!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 9:49 AM Title: Vegas Baby! Vegas
Their wedding was lovely, but the sex was powerful and erotic. Not bad for Edward's first time! Gives me shivers to think how good they will be together after she's changed!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 9:25 AM Title: Forks
Yes indeed! They are both being amazingly good, waiting for their wedding night. I'm old, so I think it's kind of neat they are willing to do that!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 8:57 AM Title: Blessings
Charlie took their announcment about like I thought he would, but Bella convinced him she was really in love forever. Didn't hurt that Edward asked him to walk his little girl down the aisle. I really like that your Bella and Edward can talk to each other in their minds. Sure makes for fewer misunderstandings between them! It was amazing how they teamed up to kill that demon, and makes me wonder why they can't do that to James?
Date: 25 Mar 2013 8:22 AM Title: Reactions of All Shapes and Sizes
I'm guessing that this story brought you lots more love reviews than hate! I got to thinking, if Bella and the Cullens are going to destroy the Volturi, it makes little difference that they told Angela what they were. Loved the feathers, by the way!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 7:32 AM Title: Jasper and John Barleycorn
I'm proud of Edward, too, the way he handled that evil son-of-a-bitch, Laurent. Serves him right, after what he did to poor Angela. Even more amazing was what happened with Carlisle! Wow! Talk about the laying on of hands, that's nearly biblical! Why not, seeing as he is such a good and caring doctor? This is getting better all the time!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 6:51 AM Title: Tests
Bella's power is growing, I think, and it's getting pretty damn impressive! All that testing sure was draining, though. I always get a kick out of Emmett, he's just like a big kid! Pretty exciting about Alice meeting her mate. It's way different to have that happen just now, instead of years ago.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 6:24 AM Title: Confessions and Realizations
This story is moving right along! You pack a lot of information into a few chapters. There does seem to be a lot to accomplish before we get to the end, so that must be the reason! Having a great time reading it, too!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 2:38 AM Title: My Bella
Bella has an awful lot of information to process! It has to be rather unsettling to learn that she will die and be reborn as a vampire in less than a month. Her mental connection with Edward also let her know how they are really made for each other, a fact she seems happy about.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 2:14 AM Title: Phase and Phascination
There is so much going on here, it's a wonder my head doesn't pop! It sounds like James survived Bella's assault, as did the Cullens. When witchcraft is used I guess it pays to be a fairly indestructible vampire! Sharing their powers wasn't a real good idea at this time! Alice was thrown across the room, Edward has a headache and Bella is having a seizure! It must have upset her to see herself as a vampire!
Date: 24 Mar 2013 10:17 PM Title: What Just Happened?
Could this get any better? Bella is a powerful witch, Edward's singer and mate, and will team with him and Alice to save supernatural beings, as they save her from the Volturi. Her friend is a gay werewolf and will probably imprint on Mike Newton, who doesn't realize he's gay! I nearly forgot, Alice's mate, Jasper, no doubt, is coming with the Volturi to kill Bella, but obviously won't, or Alice will kick his butt!
Date: 24 Mar 2013 9:12 PM Title: Break Up
I loved that Bella exploded demon James into a million pieces! This is going to be good!
Date: 23 Oct 2012 6:06 PM Title: Epilogue
Such a great story and looking forward to reading a few more of yours.
Date: 25 Aug 2012 7:50 PM Title: Vegas Baby! Vegas
Hey, I know you have had this up for a while but I find it amazing. I was looking for stories online when I stumbled on a link that said tufano79 at fanfiction.com clinking on that link was probably one of the smartest things I have done this year. I have read most of your stories and I just want to say you are very talented, and I started searching that website and now I have followed you here to more amazing stories and authors. Thank you!
Date: 11 Jul 2012 10:44 AM Title: Decisions and Transitions
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Date: 11 Jul 2012 7:23 AM Title: Preparations for Battle
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Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:40 PM Title: Voices in the Moonlight
:)
Date: 08 Jul 2012 7:20 PM Title: Reactions of All Shapes and Sizes
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Date: 08 Jul 2012 5:18 PM Title: Jasper and John Barleycorn
:)
Date: 08 Jul 2012 1:01 PM Title: Confessions and Realizations
:)
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:43 AM Title: Break Up
Hey I can't get past chapter one. I really want to read this story but the website won't let me past the NC-17 disclaimer to get to any other chapters. Can you help me out? I really want to read this. Is it posted somewhere else? Please help me!!!!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 2:57 PM Title: Epilogue
well done!!!! deserves more reviews
Date: 07 Jun 2012 2:25 PM Title: The Battle
great job now hit a home run
Date: 05 Jun 2012 5:11 PM Title: Vegas Baby! Vegas
why did mirrors break but not windows?
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:10 PM Title: Forks
and a honeymoon as well enough of the cockblocking
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:09 PM Title: Reactions of All Shapes and Sizes
love it
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:28 PM Title: Tests
hopefully a good Jasper
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:47 PM Title: What Just Happened?
wow
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:19 PM Title: Break Up
please continue
Date: 08 Nov 2011 5:12 AM Title: Isle Esme
i loved it!!!!! email me when you write more at edward_heart204@yahoo.com
can't wiat!!!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2011 12:59 PM Title: Break Up
Oh this looks good can't wait to read more!!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 6:14 AM Title: Burned
Am I seeing double or did you post chapter 14 twice? ;)
Date: 13 Mar 2011 8:59 AM Title: Voices in the Moonlight
James = Michael Myers!! Just won't go away!!
Date: 13 Mar 2011 8:13 AM Title: Voices in the Moonlight
Oh shit, Looks like that steamy honey moon just may have to wait. They've got some work to do. Hopefully they've got time to train with all of Bella's powers
Date: 09 Mar 2011 3:16 AM Title: Scorched
Loved that chapter!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2011 5:35 AM Title: James
Actually I really like the actoin scene!!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 5:23 AM Title: Vegas Baby! Vegas
loved it!!
Date: 03 Mar 2011 12:18 AM Title: Forks
This is one crazy story I have stumbled upon...you have quite a vivid imagination, taking on the standard Vampire, Werewolf and then throwing in the Witches and Demons for fun...I really like that Bella is so powerful and is the key to their survival...so much better when she is strong and not a constant victim to circumstance.
Raise your hand if you are ready for Vegas, I know I am!
Date: 28 Feb 2011 9:10 AM Title: What Just Happened?
Awesome chapter
Date: 28 Feb 2011 8:45 AM Title: Break Up
Exciting chapter. loved it
Date: 26 Feb 2011 1:46 AM Title: My Bella
Uh I thought Jacob was a werewolf - you said vampire earlier
Date: 25 Feb 2011 9:59 AM Title: Reactions of All Shapes and Sizes
I am enjoying this story, although I am rather disappointed with this new 6 year old pissy Bella. Edward has never done anything to her at all, yet everytime she gets a little miffed (at things a 6 year old would get miffed at, I might add) she throws a fit and strikes out at him. I dunno, but my interpretation of loving someone is showing that person respect, the stuff she does in relatiation to a little teasing shows no respect at all. I hope she grows up and fast, her antics are really annoying.
Date: 25 Feb 2011 5:59 AM Title: Blessings
I can wait for the the BIG lemon!!! Great chapter!!
Date: 23 Feb 2011 5:25 AM Title: Jasper and John Barleycorn
Loved it!!! can't wait for more!!! So glad the whole crew is together again!!
Date: 23 Feb 2011 2:52 AM Title: Tests
OMG yay Jasper's commin!!
Date: 23 Feb 2011 2:19 AM Title: Confessions and Realizations
lol
Date: 22 Feb 2011 5:32 AM Title: My Bella
wow!!! can't wait for more!!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 5:17 AM Title: Phase and Phascination
oh my!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is soooo intense!!!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 5:05 AM Title: What Just Happened?
and here come Jacob!!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:47 AM Title: Break Up
Very good start!!!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 1:10 PM Title: Phase and Phascination
:)
Date: 21 Feb 2011 12:44 PM Title: What Just Happened?
:)
Date: 20 Feb 2011 8:37 PM Title: Phase and Phascination
Interesting......
Let's see where you take this.