Loved the story. Not my usual subject. But it was a beauitiful and intense love story. Thank you for sharing it. I cried many times while reading sometimes because it was heartbreaking and sometimes because it was beauitiful Thanks for sharing. Meg

i loved this story and i almost cried at the end lol xxx well done xx

Aww wow.  I think I love a chatty Edward too!  Nice :)

Stop whatever you are doing and carry on writing this wonderful story ! Its fantastic. X

great chapter. Edward's finally starting to heal. Hopefully more ups than down's from here?

Awww.  Some familial fluff.  I just hope everything can work out for everyone involved.  Loved the two-fer, but we need some Kas action.  Lol.

this is not the type story i usually read, but i came across this one, and i am really enjoying it. Maybe the heartfail will resolve soon...

An impass, hmmmm, whatever will Mama Whitlock do? Yep my money is on Mama to break the ice.

Oh Edward please dont go and be stupid and throw yourself to the boys again.  I understand he is hurt and he is going to do the only thing he knows and that is shut himself off from his feelings and push away all that care about him.  It is so sad seeing how much Jasper is hurting I just hope he doesnt give up and Edward because I feel he will come around at some point.  I just hope it isnt to late.  Awesome work.

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oh  my ...my heart hurts....... i really dont see edward listening to anyone... i see him going back to the club hooking up with different boys and rubbing it in jaspers face or at least flaunting it..... and i dont see a way for them to get together after that, it may seem to jasper taht if edward could do that he must not have truely had feelings for jazz. but i will put my faith in you........... i hope this will work itself out.

This is so sad.  Edward is so hurt from his past with his family he could not even hear the truth in Jaspers words.  I am hoping when Edward calms down enough he will see the truth but I have a feeling it will be a little to late and he is going to do something that will hurt Jasper.  Please dont let Jasper give up on Edward and his stubborness.  They need each other and I feel Edward really does love Jasper but he is just to afraid of being hurt again.  Great job i cant wait for the next chapter.

I am glad to see Edward staying to open his feeling up.  I cant wait to see what Jasper will say Edward tells him.  I love that the only picture in Edward home is of Jasper.  It is just ashame that Jasper doesnt know it yet.  I have a funny feeling Friday night is going to be big night for these two.  Great job and hot as hell as well.

I hope Jasper waiting until Friday is not going to bite him in the ass.  I am glad to see Edward willingness to show there relationship to other that know him.  Great job.

Again, not really into slash but this is a great story. Good writing. Very easy to read and keep up. Fun story line. Lots to find out and learn about the characters.

We find out a little something about Edward's past here and that tub. Great job. :)

Edward does have a heart.  lol  It's there even if he hasn't used it in a long while.  Your Jasper is just the most adorable guy.  Love it.

Really sweet interaction here between the guys.  Great job.

I am addicted to Starbucks' Christmas Blend because of this chapter.  lol Definately loved being inside Jasper's head.

I love how even in these first chapters, Edward thinks of Jasper as "pretty," "God."  He has fallen for him and has absolutely no clue yet.  Great job.

"I want to make you sit on my nine-inch cock."  hehe My favorite line of all time-Bryan's and Edward's.  I am so glad to see you over here.  I really like this site so far.  Great job.  Love ya, Katie.

All I want to say is you ALL MUST READ THIS!!!!!

 This is the slash story that will get you hooked  the love, passion and angst is second to none.......LOVE YOU Star where ever you are xxxxxxxxx

Reall good you wrote this..)

I like it so much,..)