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Reviewer: Mana Lusk Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2012 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 31

Wow that was a great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm so happy you enjoyed it.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2012 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 31

good chapter.. Sweet bella



Author's Response:

Bella certainly is a sweet girl, Petey is too.  Glad you liked it.  XOXO

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2012 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 31

Peter:  OMG so sad he had to see all the abuse esp when Malice et al knew.  Glad Sarah and Molly tried.    Oh poor B.  Glad their was a nice person at the airport.    Ugh for the twilight rehash.  Sucks about Jake imprinting but at least she had people around to help her.  LOL for soapy artery comment.    lol for the blurting when he came back.    Glad they have a plan to help with the cooking and training.  wow  Embry and his mom have a lot of talking to do it seeems.     Wow  Charlie had a nasty spirit walk.  

Awww for teacher Bella.  So patient.  



Author's Response:

Renee is a cruel woman and those who play a significant role in Bella's life finally got a first-hand account of it through their spirit journeys?  Why?  I can tell you that Alice and Carlisle will use their knowledge of Bella's past to try to manipulate her, but not much more.  Her past will play a huge role in this story so keep it at the back of your mind.
Peter gained much needed confidence in himself from his spirit journey.  He needs that because what Maria told him previously about him being a more powerful threat than Jasper is very true.  Jasper is much too easily coerced due to his empathic gift.


Uncle Quil learned that by hiding his wolf status for so long and not taking the leadership role he should have, he caused many errors that put the Quileutes in danger.  It was a lesson that he needed to learn because he has both the experience and worldly knowledge needed to lead the pack--especially now that the magic is evolving.  I got the idea of evolving Quileute magic from the Eclipse movie when Billy Black said, "The Quileutes have always had magic in their blood."


Speaking of Billy, he learned that he too made grave errors by not taking a greater parenting role in the lives of his children.  He was chastised by Sarah in the spirit world for this. He was also told that he should have taken a greater role in Bella's life, this is something that Uncle Quil had always done.  Not to worry, Hermosa will whip Billy into shape.


Now Charlie's journey uncovered Carlisle's and Alice's past and the animosity they have against wolves.  You also have their true ages--they are as old as the Volturi so this is how long they've been deviant and twisted.  While the Volturi were willing to make changes to improve themselves, the Romanians weren't and this is ultimately why our fun-loving three kings are so different from Stefan and Vladimir.


More to come.  Thank you for your review.  XOXO  mama4dukes    

Reviewer: MrShyRockstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh okay I understand that :) I was just putting it out there. Like I said you rarely do it but when you do I get confused by who you actually mean. I won't push though because I understand some people do work better on their own :) Yay new chapter soon? Awesome! xoxo

Reviewer: MrShyRockstar Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2012 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 30

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH -SCREAMS-  FUCK NOOOO! I didn't wanna catch up with you D: Thats what I get for reading continously for days on end... gah.. :(

 

Susie is a good mommy :P I enjoy it. And yes thats the best way for them to learn how to make decisions on their own, they need a strong parental figure(s) staying strict and steady with them. I llike Peter's trip :D So happy he gets to eat human food again :) I know he's missed it. I also like his whole "I should've listened when mama read me Snow white" thought ahahaha. Yes I was shocked :( Poor bella shouldn't have had to live through that, but I can see how that would make her strive to want peace in the world--which could lead to her gift. I like Didyme's story :P And I like that she mated to TAha Aki tooo!!

 

Okay, my own thought real quick is I'm fucking AMAZED you can keep anything straight in this story! Lol like, with all these people here.. and the time lines and generations and all that shit... I'm proud of you for being able to do that because I dont know if I could lol. I enjoy how this story started out as a simple plan of revenge that led them to finding out all this other shit which allowed them to find out ahead of time the Cullen's master plan! which is sooo fucking wrong I hope they fucking die horrible terrible deaths :( Grr!

Every now and then I'll see you make a mistake, like you'll make a person be off somewhere then the next sentence it seems as if he/she is there instead of gone or whatever. You don't do it often but every now and then you'll make a mistake that confuses the story. I don't want to sound rude, because.. I love your story so much and would hate to make you upset but i just wanna give a suggestion and I'm sorry if its unfounded, but maybe you could get someone else to look over the chapters for you before you post so they can catch anything that doesn't match up with something previously said? I mean its an easy mistake to make when trying to keep up with all the people you are trying to keep up with so I totally understand.

 

Alright, can't wait for the next chapter :D! Hope you update soon!!!



Author's Response:

You're right, Sue is a great mom.

With Pete's spirit journey, I wanted to show the contrast between his fabulous childhood and Bella's atrocious one.  

I had to give Didyme an happy ending.

As for your suggestion that I have someone look over the chapter, don't worry--I don't think you're rude, but I truly do work better on my own.  

Next chapter up tomorrow.  XOXO

Reviewer: tuckerjnp1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 30

Great chapter.  Can't wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

Thank you for your awesome feedback.  Next chapter up soon.  XOXO

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2012 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 30

Bella had a horrible mother.  She has a loving one now and always her loveable father.  Good chapter.

 

Missed you glad you are writin again.



Author's Response:

Bella's mother is horrible, but her father has always been wonderful.  XOXO

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2012 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 30

Ma Sue:  Wow  talk about a tight leash they had been on.  Oh My 80K.  Atleast they are helping pick clothes and not choosing for her like Malice would have done. LOL for Bella and Jane's bra stories.   Poor scared little Tia.  Aww bella was so sweet.  Decrepit Tanya, ha ha.  Sounds like Tia will be a big help to Bella.

Peter:  LOL for naked dance and brewmaster.  OMG  now that song is in my head, ya wench.  awww for meeting his parents.   hmmm interesting history lessons.  hmmm Didyme with a wolf imprint, interesting.   Wow  bella had it worse than we knew.  That sucks.  Glad Renee never had any more kids.   Cool Bella power though.  ooohhh spirit journey for Petey.  



Author's Response:

When you take into consideration what Sue and Charlie had to deal with in order to get Seth, Leah, and Bella to where they are today, you realize that they were bombarded with problems parents of most normal teenagers didn't have to face. It was together that they dealt with Bella's depression over her break-up with Vampire Edward then her subsequent relationship with a shape-shifter Jacob. It was together that they dealt with Leah and Seth's transformation into wolves. They were able to handle the supernatural as humans now as vampires themselves, they truly are the only ones qualified enough to parent Tia and Benjamin. And with Tia, Sue isn't coddling her, she's being firm but loving so she could develop a sense of self.

Peter's trip to the spirit world so far has brought much of the missing pieces about his past that had been plaguing him since his transformation back to him. He wasn't very comfortable using Jasper's last name, he wanted to know who he was himself. His parents provided that information to him and now his memory will be jogged enough so he can remember more about his human self. The information will give him the confidence that he needs to be a stronger leader.

I've written Bella as a woman who was able to overcome an abusive childhood caused by her mother. Much of the love in her heart came from Charlie, Molly, Sarah, Sam, Quil, and Embry. You'll get a bit more insight next chapter but this information is critical to understanding the character that I've created.

I wanted to give Didyme a happy ending with Taha Aki who I imagine was a bit like Paul would have been had he never imprinted. Didyme, though enslaved by Stefan, survived for three thousand years so she could empower the female slaves in the Romanian coven. That says a lot about her inner strength.  Yes, Didyme is with Taha Aki, but remember...they are both human in the spirit world...well dead humans.

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for the awesome feedback. XOXO mama4dukes

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 29

wow!! Amazing chapter!! Can't wait to read the next one :)



Author's Response:

More to come.  We're sending Petey over the rainbow.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 29

Oh, I am so glad that Benjamin and Tia are good guys :)  I actually breathed a sigh of relief haha ;)

I think Aro could give Emmett a run for his money in the comic relief department...Gryffindor colored snuggie...*snorts*

I don't know what to think about the Benjamin and Tia situation.  I think Maria is correct, but with training and time, Benjamin and Tia will come into their own and be able to beat the crap out of Amun :)  Jasper is right too, and I am still mulling that over as to why.  I think Amun's head may have just come out of his butt long enough for that realization to set in :)



Author's Response:

Benjamin and Tia are truly helpless as you'll see in the upcoming chapter.  Amun kept them so naive that they aren't able to think for themselves.  Sue and Charlie will help with that. There really are the only couple that would be able to care for them and care for them well.  It remains to be seen if Maria's assessment that Benjamin will be a hindrance comes true or not.

As for Maria, there's a reason why she was able to seize the south and control Jasper during the Southern Vampire Wars.  Her fighting skills are legendary and she is a ruthless strategist.  Maria is a proven leader and she supported the fact by putting both Chelsea and Hermosa in their places.

Explanation as to what's going on in La Push will happen over the next two chapters.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2011 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 29

Great chapter. Poor Ben and Tia.  Glad they finally got away.    Think ben will be ok once he gains a little self confidence.  Liked maria taking charge of the idiot women.  yummy Jazz in the buff.   Yummy B and P time too.

Woo Hoo More wolves

 

Merry Christmas!!!



Author's Response:

Ben and Tia are good guys but they have a lot of issues to deal with before they can be any help.  For one thing, they have to learn how to think for themselves.  There's a reason why Maria is undefeated and Jazz had to learn his skills from someone.  Yes, a showering Jasper--that was purely for self gratification.  Yummy B and P?  Crazy B and P.

 

XOXO

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 28

PPov:  Hope the law part works somewhat right in this case.  LOL for Bahamas Charlie.  Love the plan for fuckwards car.   Hermosa and rose bonding...nice.  lol for the "lying" to Emily about the car.  OMG for Aro breaking the players.  Aww poor Aro.   Eddie is gonna regret messing with him.  ROFL for Aro and Walmart.   Go Vicky making the idiot talk.    Cool for the trap door working so well.    ooohh charlotte is in for it with jane and maria gunning for her.    Oh Branleur..... you've messed with the wrong family.    ewww for trying to suck Jazz.  LOL for Jane taking out the lingerie boys.   Wow  the slave harem thing is really sick, and char believes in it.... creepy.    Wow  at least Jaques told them lots of good info before they killed him.   Buh bye skanky char.



Author's Response:

Considering that I'm not a lawyer, I hope that the law part works well too.  Heidi did go overboard with the tanning  Emily deserved a nice...um...new...car.  Hermosa needed new friends.  Vicky is a brilliant actress, she deserved an Oscar for it.  Jacques has a conscience (somewhat of one) unlike Char who is just blech.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: Voracious_Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 28

Sounds like the opposition is fragmenting from within to a point, and Edward hasn't got the charisma or brains to pull off a coup. If they can let the rank and file members of the Romanian and Egyptian army know that they will be killed for feeding on humans, they may be able to increase the fragmentation or provoke a mutiny or three. I really doubt that part of the dystopian plan has been revealed to their underlings. Surround the castle, lob in a few hundred incediaries and use the weres to catch any stragglers. They temple of Amun could be the unfortunate site of a random jihadi riot--that would make a good cover story!

I loved the volvo desecration--just too funny!



Author's Response:

Yes, the opposition is fragmenting for sure.  They made the fatal mistake of relying on Alice's visions and now that her mate is gone, things will go haywire.  

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 28

love it as usual!! hah edward is gonna freak over his volvo.. and glad at least 2 of the enemies are down and they have som intell now..cant wait  to see whats next forour fav vamps...and hermosa is a superwoman!! haha



Author's Response:

Hermosa is an A-okay lady.  And the Volvo served an honorable purpose, it gave Emily a brand new ride.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 28

Awesome!  I was totally psyched to get this update!

Haha, Vicky fake-baked!!

I was gonna say...wouldn't there have to be a disclosure t buyers about what happened there?  Hmmm...then again, perhaps noone knows what happened there as it was a supernatural thing...

Haha, for a brief moment I was reading about Riley and I thought "This Riley won't be written as well as LHSJRWI's Riley I bet" and then, I remembered who wrote LHSJRWI hahaha :)

Oh, my word, I just cackled out loud at the thought of Aro, dressed in white, with a green dickey just like Randy Quaid in Christmas Vacation hahaha!

Only Peter and Aro could be crying one minute and then talking about Vegas the next... :)

I think Aro would be happy doing a WalMart tour vacation :)

I almost choked on my lunch when the warning howl went off...

Man, am I glad Rose and Tanya are safe.  My heart actually skipped a beat haha

How coudl the dunderheads be so dumb?  And if Benjamin has such good control of the elements, then how come he didn't stop the fire from burning the other vamp?  Please understand that I am saying this as though I were actually screaming at Benjamin for being such an idiot.  I love the way you write this stuff!

Oh, I think I may hurl...Jacques and pain...blech...

Yeah, right...no funny business my left eye :)  This IS Riley we're talking about hee hee :)

Haha, Charlie is switching smokes...and I literally almost gagged from the audacity of those vamps...you were right...this chapter is definitely a whopper!

Wow...what a nice way to being the end, if you knwo what I mean.  Jacques was slightly redeemed in my eyes, but only slightly...

 



Author's Response:

No disclosure on the house because they had to clean up the crime scene and take the body to Port Angeles in Carlisle's Mercedes.

I think my fave version of Riley is the one in LHSJRWI.  I'll have to create another cool Riley one day.

You'll see why Benjamin didn't control the elements soon.

Jacques was given a painless death by Jasper because he was honest in the end unlike deluded Char.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved this chapter!! :) yay for Emily's new car and as great as it would be for Edward to find his precious VOLVO all destroyed, let's hope he is dead before that happens :)  Loved his phone call with Victoria! she is a wonderful actress! :) glad that some of the bad vamps are dead and at least they got a lot of info from them before they killed them........but I wonder what everyone back in Romania will think when they don't return... especially Alice since both of her mates are dead now.  Can't wait to read the next one!



Author's Response:

The Volvo died honorably.  Victoria deserved an Oscar.  Two down, but bear in mind that Alice's mate is gone.  She won't be a happy camper.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 28

Sicko CITY

 

They want Bella the most!  Funny Edward has given her up. Nope don't want her no more, but Carlisle and Stphan do.



Author's Response:

Edward thinks that Chelsea is his eternity because of her mind.  Carlisle and Stephan, though, are sick.  They want her as a sexual plaything.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2011 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 27

Hahaha, I forget Aro is the Volturi king.  He's so informal that it cracks me up!

Man, won't the Cullens, Egyptians, and Romanians have a nasty surprise hee hee :)

Love it!!



Author's Response:

Oh, they absolutely will be surprised.  Next chapter is a whopper.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: Voracious_Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 27

whoa, good thing Picia is in La Push. Hermosa sounds like she's actually very nice. I have to wonder though: if she is less than lovely as a vamp, what did the poor thing look like as a human? I'm glad she and Billy will be happy together (they will, won't they, Oh mighty author?) Loving this and waiting for more!



Author's Response:

Hermosa is less than lovely, but she is a kind soul.  That's why Bella tries her best to be kind to her.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: dizzykaz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 27

I have to ask who is the picture of hotness on the front of story. fab story by the way



Author's Response:

The picture of hotness would be Paul Walker.  Isn't he delicious?  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 27

OMG that had to be the best chapter yet!!! As I kept laughing my husband kept asking me what was so funny! Can't wait to see the next one!!!!

Author's Response:

Glad you got a good laugh.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 27

Malice:  Well At least Malice and Scumlisle have to answer to someone else.  Hope Ben and Tia can get away from them.   

Bella:  Taylor Swift???  lol.  awww poor Hermosa.  bella is so nice.  Exploritory committees.  ROFL.  Yes Bella...you are too nice to everyone.    Aro the bargainer.  Poor Aunt molly.  Peter and Paul with the runs.  ROFL.  OMG for Garrett and Peter.   Nasty boys. 

Peter:  Gotta say I want Garrett's vision of life too.  Uh oh  sake hangovers I can see coming.  lol for not letting Jasper stole the alcohol.   Poor Bella getting pulled in so many directions.    hmm fight in romania huh.  Lots of planes to get all those vamps/wolves over there.    Charlie and the Rack....lol.   OMG for Billy and the video.   Aro is just kooky



Author's Response:

Alice is in trouble, big trouble, but she's brought this all onto herself.  She's quickly realizing that her life is on the line if she can't deliver the goods and she won't be able to either because the sheer number of shields and wolves on the opposing team are blocking her visions.  The other issue is her and Charlotte.  They are mates and they are lesbians and in their world it is illegal.  Branleur has helped Alice by acting as her umbrella and by using his gift to make Edward think that Charlotte is his mate as well.  If the truth gets out to Carlisle, Edward, the Romanians, and the Cullens, things will be very hairy for her.

As for Aro, he's a strong leader that has finally embraced his humanity.  He likes to keep things fun and light hearted, but he makes sure that business is taken care of.  He's also someone that takes to learning new things with the eyes of an innocent child.  This is why he welcomes new ideas and experiences.  We have to thank Deepak Chopra for that one.

Hermosa is a very lonely vampire that's been maligned for most of her existence because of her intimidating looks.  She's a good person though and Bella, though intimidated, is trying her best to be her friend.  Hermosa appreciates that and she's showing her appreciation in an overbearing way because she doesn't want to lose her new friend.  Bella will never be intentionally cruel to anyone and she will be Hermosa's friend, despite her worries.  Keeping her loneliness in mind, I thought that Billy Black would be the perfect mate for Hermosa because both of them have been lonely for a very long time.

Unexpected visitors arrive next chapter.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 20

Why didn't they just roll Paul and Jane over so Jane could lift herself off?

Author's Response:

They weren't thinking and neither was the author...  *winks*

Reviewer: Voracious_Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 26

Da-dat-da-da-da-dit-da; Tequila! ROFLMAO! You can't let those guys out of your sight for a minute, can you? Charlie tore the hand off a viking? Ok, I'm impressed. You do realize that you're going to have to top everything for the victory party, right? I feel very bad for the Moon Wolves, and I imagine that Caius is going to have to do a lot of apologizing. Can't wait to see that. So, now their numbers match or exceed current enemies and they have a large, well-defended base of operations. Is the battle going to be in Egypt or at La Push? Can Chelsea turn Ben's allegiance or will she end up as a deep cover spy? Will she work with Rebecca to attract and interrogate captives?  What about the two cell phones they found in Montana, can they reverse-engineer the call records from those? Eagerly awaiting your next chapter, here. Gives me something to do other than shovel snow.



Author's Response:

I doubt Caius will get an opportunity to apologize.  Chelsea can turn anyone's alleigiance.  Lots and lots coming, but first let's give Hermosa a mate.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 26

Haha, Spongebob!  Love it!

Man, the hits just keep on coming, don't they?

You would think the Cullen idiots would be more cautious, but tyrants do tend to create their own downfalls without realizing it...



Author's Response:

Bob Esponja is marvelous!

The tyrants are too arrogant to even think that they are creating their own downfall.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 25

I should have trusted that Peter and Bella would be ok haha :)

I was surprised about Emily, for sure.  I think Bella and Peter are pretty quick thinkers, I probably would have curled up in a ball or something :)

Haha, and ancestry.com wouldn't have helped, either.  Good thing for the archives!

No, I would NOT want my husband in my brain all of the time...

Peter's surprise was pretty sweet :)

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 26

ok all im going to say is carlisle fucked up when he killed that girl now that we know that she was a mate of a true wearwolf i cant wait to see what you come up with next why do i have a feeling that the  cullens are going to show up to try to get to the women on the rez and try to kill the wolf pack they are in for a very big suprise when they get there and find that they are prepared for them so i cant wait to see if i am right so please update soon



Author's Response:

Wait two chapters.  *winks*  XOXO

Reviewer: Queen_apples Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 26

wow they are gettin alot of help



Author's Response:

...and they're going to need all the help that they can get.  XOXO

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 26

Aro:  Gotta agree.  Charlie is bad ass.  LOL for Picia maybe being able to kick his arse.   Glad they got Diego on their side (is it bad that i'm singing the theme song from Go Diego Go in my head?)   OMG  not tequila.    hmmm wonder who Hermosa's mate will be.  Poor Jake.    ROFL for bob esponja and wolfback rides.

Peter:  lol  poor maria.  Hee hee for nudist (almost) Marcus.   Brewmaster to the rescue again.  Awww poor Andrei.  hmmm werewolves on their side now too.  Kewl but sad fro Andrei.    woo hoo fro 30+ more fighters.

Rebecca is just as skanky if not moreso than Paul to answer your question from the last review reply.  Ugh.   LOL for Maria and Bella needing to open up a professional kitchen to keep all these people fed.  They aer getting alot of great people together for the meeting.    Poor Luca stuck with Becca.   Bet the white wolves are beautiful.  . 

Sweet little ending

 



Author's Response:

Charlie actually has real life experience at being at the helm...you can't be stupid to be a police chief.  I always wondered why SM made him so oblivious.  You're a mommy, of course you're going to sing, Go Diego Go.  LOL.  You'll find out who Hermosa's mate is next.  And it's going to be a whopper, too.

Carlisle has made enemies all around the supernatural world, hence why they are all united to fight against him.

I bet the white wolves are beautiful too.

XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 26

wow... crazy chapter! So many new supernatural species showed up! Carlisle and Alice and the rest of the evil vamps are in for a really rude awakening!!! Can't wait to see the next one....

p.s.

(spongebob in spanish LMAO!)



Author's Response:

Yes they really are in for a rude awakening.  And Bob Esponja is cool!  XOXO

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 26

oh wow brain overload! haha great chapter....vamps, shifters, children of the moon...wow everyone getting along....and man carlisle and alice are just eveil and old! i cant believe they kept up the secrets of who they really were  for soo long esp around jasper, rose and emmett....cant wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

Carlisle and Alice are evil.  In two chapters, Maria will have an explanation as to why she believes Peter is actually more powerful than Jasper is...  That might give you an idea as to why Alice and Carlisle were able to keep secrets around him.  

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 25

BPOV:  dun  dun dun....new wolves.  Teapot!!!    OMG  ROFL.     Awww emily is a wolf now?  Hmmm  someone of the original wolfes has been dipping his wick outside the Q tribe.  Wow  Emily is really being clingy.   If Emily was with the wolves and she knew Bella, why were they almost attacking?    Wow..... you got some serious geneology going there.  Poor sad Esme.    Damn  Paul is just skanky.   All those boys are just horndogs.  Poor emily and leah.

Oh  Sam... you are going to regret the Alpha crap on Em when Quil takes it back.    Awww Sweet Valentines.



Author's Response:

Teapot dance was done to save their lives.  As for Emily, she was too freaked out to even warn the boys, but they didn't attack P and B because Quil had phased immediately and told them to stand down.  They just didn't phase back to human form because they didn't know how.  I'm never doing a story with genealogy involved again, I thought my head was going to spin off.  BUT Emily really does have Ateara blood according to Meyer.  Paul is skanky?  What about Rebecca?

Sam will regret it once Quil returns...he won't be back yet though.   

Peter needed reassurance and so did Bella, it's been tough on them, hence the Valentine's Day surprise.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 25

Great chapter... OMG Bella and Peter singing I'm a little teapot... and acting it out too funny!! LOL.... and then to find out all the wolves and poor Emily... yeah I would not want my husband in my head... I think he would be surprised at what goes on in there! and then the poor Hoh boys grandmother.... stupid Carlisle.  Loved Peter's valentines day surprise.... they needed a little time to get away... hopefully they are able to gather ranks with all the vampires around the world! Can't wait to read more!

-Kate



Author's Response:

Hi Kate,

Yes Bella and Peter reached deep down and summoned their inner thespians during their life or death ordeal.  Yes, Emily is absolutely not in a good place.  Not only is her husband in her brain, so is her brother.  Carlisle's treachery knows no bounds.  As for Peter, he needed to reassure himself and Bella that their love was secure.   Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: Zamar22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2011 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 24

I have only recently just found your story.  I have spent the past week reading and catching up with it.  I really do like this story line - very different - very interesting. The stories I tend to like best are the ones that can take be by suprise once and a while and move in unexpected ways.  yours does that

I am worried that it may be starting to get to complicated though - you have so many characters taking main stage that it could get hard to keep up (not yet though :)     I am also missing some of the main characters.  We don't hardly ever hear about Emmet and Rose - and the only time we hear about what's going on with Esme is when she is pulling a prank.  I know you are having her regress and relive some of what was stolen from her but I would like to see her grow up a little - while still keeping her since of humor.    But then again you now have so many characters to keep up with I can see how it is hard to develop them all.  Thats my worry about it getting to complicated - too many plot twists and we the readers are caught in a twister and stay confused - kinda like one too many spices in a good dish - (I did that a lot when I was first learning to cook - not good!)

Well that is my constructive comments for the first 24 chapters.  I really do love the story and can't wait to see what happens next.   This has kinda been my obsession (to read this) for the past few days ---- good news I will now have time to do what I have been neglecting - bad news I have to wait - sigh - LOL - guess I'll have to practice patients.  I must thank you for the Super Long Chapters - it makes it worth the wait!!!  Thanks

TTFN



Author's Response:

Well, thank you for your review and welcome to the story.  Emmett, Rose, and Esme are only supporting characters in this story as is Jasper.  Really, the two characters we're focused on are Pete and Bella and the entire idea of the evil Cullens.  However, I can admit that it can get confusing.  For that, I apologize, but I'm only writing this for fun.  

Glad you've joined me.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter! OMG totallly crazy Carlisle just gets worse and worse :( And then the wolves at the end! oh no... hopefully someone will come talk to them! :) Can't wait to see the next one!



Author's Response:

Carlisle is horrific.  He is becoming sicker and sicker by the hour.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 24

Peter:  Go maria for training everyone. lol for Billy running and Rebecca.   the new building sounds great.  Ewwww for montana house.  World travel plans sound great.  lol for saving the pots and pans.  hmm   blood drugs huh.    Glad they found the passports and all.  burn them all I say unleass they need them for evidence.  Poor scared bella.  Glad he burned the place down.   Ah so Luca knows her.   Guess Charles gave her to carlisle to use up or punishment or both.    LOL for maria eating the drug dealer.    hmmm Charlie knows a back alley lab huh?  cool.  awww for maria protective of bella.   Hee hee for Walmart sexy times.    Lol for grease monkey rose.  Thats how I felt and was treated when I worked in maintenace with the air force for awhile.    aww for the jewelry purchases and the father/son talk. 

The hooters thing is still hilarious.  Hee hee for jared flirting.  Ugh for Benjamin and the new army.  but at least they are forewarned.   Go smart bella.   Poor makenna.  they should make a video to show to the other covens and nomads.  Woo hoo for tearing up the stupid cullen house.  ROFL for wierdo esme.  LOVE the plan for the volvo.

aww for the beach talk.  hmmm like the plan for turning and terrorizing Renee.  hmmm thinking maybe those werent quilutte wolves.  Maybe Makah or Hoe ones?

 

Great job as always.



Author's Response:

Well, now Carlisle Cullen has done it.  With chapter 24 and the kidnapping and assault of Makenna, he has officially committed direct crimes against the Swan/Whitlocks, the Volturi, the Denalis, the Camilleris (the Maltans), and the Quileutes.  I can tell you that when he returns to the United States with his family, life is going to be hell for him and Garrett is going to leading that legal crusade.


Now, Embry and Demetri came home with news that shook up the entire crew.  A hundred experienced fighters trained by the best of the best, that's not a good thing.  Plus, they have Benjamin.  More on him later.  They also have to worry about saving the enslaved vampires in Egypt, and now they have to start getting in contact with almost every vampire they know.  This is going to be a tough ride for our guys.  Oh, and tearing about the Cullen house was something that they needed to do, and it was about time that Aro became angry.  He can't be the vampire equivalent of Deepak Chopra all the time.  

Peter is going through a really rough patch right now.  He was blessed with a mate that he loves dearly, but for the first time in his life, he feels almost helpless, not only does he have to keep her safe, he has to save the vampire world too.  Everything has been thrown in his direction, and because of who he is (Bella's mate), he's been thrust into a position of leadership that, in the past, has belonged to Jasper or Maria.  Charlie noticed this, that's why he was unusually fatherly towards Peter because he realized that his future son-in-law needed a shoulder to lean on from time to time.  Charlie genuinely likes Peter, not because he's Bella's mate, but because Peter is a good man underneath his snarky attitude.  

Peter and Bella are trying their best to spend time together and keep things as normal as possible in these turbulent times.  Of course, when I ended the chapter they were surrounded by seven ravenous wolves...

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO mama4dukes

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 24

now sweetie we can not have these wolves killing our favorite duo. No Please save them Mama!

 

I love this story and I am so glad you updated. I wish this was all you had to do. LOL



Author's Response:

Now, Mary, if the wolves kill Pete and Bella, I'd have to end the story.  They are the main protagonists, you know.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2011 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 24

ohh that carlisle gets worse every chapter! i cannt wait for peter and comapny to end the evil cullens!! and ohh no hope the other wolves can get to bella and peter in a hurry! cant wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Carlisle is horrific and there's a long line to assassinate him.  The taming of the wolves is coming up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2011 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 24

This chapter update is like a balm of comfort.  My dog passed away this morning and this went a long way towards cheering me up :)

Haha, and now Pete can watch them on Blu ray!

I absolutely love this chapter.  I honestly don't know who is gonna get the first piece of Carlisle...

Man, this gets twisted and more twisted...

LOVE it and thank you again for the pick-me-up :)



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry to hear about your dog.  I truly am, you must miss him.

Carlisle has so many people after him that he won't know where to turn. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: Voracious_Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2011 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 24

Just a note: the average human body contains between eight and nine liters of whole blood. If Maria only got six quarts from two people, she wasted about three gallons, not including spillage. Waste not, want not, lol. Carlisle is losing it if he is willing to randomly attack like that, sounds like the psychological degeneration some serial killers go through. Poor Makenna! Is charles dead? If more of the tribe is phasing, will they still acknowledge Quil jr as Alpha; that is if he gets there in time? Nice cliffie, though, I must say!



Author's Response:

Interesting, I got my information from this site here:  http://www.medicalfaq.net/how_many_pints_of_blood_in_human_body_/ta-97622  It listed the average human body as having 8 to 10 pints of blood so I subtracted some for spillage.  Doesn't matter though, it's only a fictional story.

Carlisle is losing and our guys are gaining ground.  No info on Charles yet and yes, Quil, Jr. will still be alpha.  XOXO

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 23

Wow  Billy chose human?   Surprised.   Ugh  Of course Maria's mate is an incubus......sigh.  OMG for the Hooter's uniform.   Someone needs to smack Paul and Quil.  Poor Bouncy Ball Bella.  Curtains... Maria is hilarious.  Uh oh   Changed by the triplettes?  Uh oh  thats gonna be an interesting reunion.   Awww Poor Marcus.    Maria hasnt taught her mate to fight? 

Hmmm Eau de Carlisle Cullen?   Very smart. So carlisle's gift is his vemon I think?   Oh I love Sue's idea. 

Maria is funny.  Esme is nuts.  They need meds for her.   Glad Maria and Bella are getting along.  Still Think the chicken thing is funny.   Gotta love Walmart

Awww for Sue knitting Maria a sweater.



Author's Response:

Maria is actually going to be a welcome addition to this group of misfits.  We needed a take charge woman to help because, quite frankly, most of the crimes committed by the Cullens are against women.  The women, all of them, need to be at their strongest.  For Maria, having Bella around actually gave her her very first female friend.  She was a very lonely vampire and she needed companionship.

Fernando is a very kind hearted vampire.  He truly feels bad that he couldn't rescue Didyme hundreds of years ago, but Marcus appreciates the fact that he tried.  Marcus needed to vent and Uncle Quil was there to lend him support.  He needed to scream and he needed to cry and no one understands that better than Uncle Quil.

As for Jacques gift of being able to mimic the feeling of mating, we can't help but wonder who is actually imprinted to whom.  And now that we know that Carlisle and Alice has been around for much longer than they first implied to everyone, things will become hairy.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Peter's POV is next.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 23

Great chapter!! :) WOW! I love that you made Maria nice :) and I think it is funny that Fernando is an Incubus and he was changed by the sisters :) and OMG he knew all of the bad ones in Romania :( Poor Didyme :(..... and Holy Crap about the tunnel! I love Sue's idea about rebuilding and having the trap door go into the fireplace that they will keep going 24/7!! Can't wait to read the next one!



Author's Response:

Oh, yes, Fernando, he was changed by the succubus sisters.  As for Maria, she needed female companionship, and finally found a friend in Bella.

Sue is pretty smart too, I love the trap door leading to the fireplace as well.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO



Author's Response:

Oh, yes, Fernando, he was changed by the succubus sisters.  As for Maria, she needed female companionship, and finally found a friend in Bella.

Sue is pretty smart too, I love the trap door leading to the fireplace as well.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: Voracious_Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 23

Maria rocks! I see Bella's charm is still holding true, but Fernando's attraction to the Queens could get to be a problem, lol. I have a peeve, though: you put hot male vampires in latex and didn't give us a picture?!?!? Shame on you, Mama. or the naked cliff diving, either. Now I'm gonna pout until the next chapter comes out. (huff)



Author's Response:

Maria is pretty awesome.  You can't manage an army, even a destructive one without brains.  She's also very lonely and Bella filled that hole by being a friend to her.

Fernando is a very sweet vampire.  Picia and Dora are just, well, they're nutty.

I should have given you a visual of the latex clad vamps, huh?  But Sue is so right, transforming into a vampire a la Twilight is better than any diet in the world.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 23

Well, a bit more info we have on the deviants now...hmm...

PLEASE let Maria handle the situation, I freaking love her!!! 

I love Maria's POV on the wacky clan hee hee :)

It is so funny that out of all of the Wal Mart first timers, she had the most normal reaction to the greeter :) She cracks me up, and she took everything so smoothly too :)

I love the way Maria is written in this story.  I really like her :)



Author's Response:

You will get much more info in the next chapter on the deviants.

Maria was brought in because most of the crimes committed by the Cullens were against women.

Maria found a friend in Bella and is happy.  She's a very lonely retired warlord in need of female companionship.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 23

loved it! it just keeps getting better and better! love your stories they are all so different and original and you have such a great sense of humor! cant wiat to see what you come up with next!!!



Author's Response:

More to come and I'm glad you're enjoying my stories.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 23

Well as you know I love this story. I will be so upset when you are done with it. I love what you write because of the humor. We all need to laugh.

 

Poor Marcus.  I am happy for Maria. See in there was a good person needing love. A friend someone to treasure.

 

 



Author's Response:

Humor, huh?  Well, with humor comes angst and in the next few weeks, I'll be posting an extremely angst ridden oneshot.  Because we all need to cry sometimes.

Marcus was dealt a raw deal with Didyme.

Maria has found her first friend in Bella.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 22

wow so much happened here! Like dominating Peter :) And finally someone put those crazy old ladies in their place! jeez! LOL and OMG a siren! and I love that Maria will be good :) Can't wait to see the next one!



Author's Response:

Peter can be very dominating, but he also feels an incredible amount of guilt when he is that way.  He's a pretty sensitive vampire.  Maria will be a huge surprise.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 22

I am glad Carlisle is being watched...

How funny!  I love that Brewmaster changed Peter's name!  Bwuahahahahaha!!

Well, all I can say is I wouldn't answer the door... ;)

I am so glad no one else is here right now. I don't know that I could properly explain laughing at vampires getting punched in the face!

Oh, Riley...How freaking funny!  I'm surprised Leah didn't do more than that hahahahahaha!

The way the grandmothers are kind of reminds me of the way Esme was in LHSJRWI.  I am also glad Bella is finally putting a stop to the coddling.  Kudos to Aunt Molly and Sue too!

Oh yeah, I forgot Maria is good now.  The Cullens better check themselves, because Peter is absolutely right about Maria...

I don't think I could have run after Billy. I think I would be rolling around laughing too much haha!



Author's Response:

Carlisle is being watched, yes, but Embry and Demetri are going to return with horrible news.  Riley is a very naughty boy.  As for Aunt Molly and Sue, well, they've got Bella's back.

You're gonna love Maria.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 21

Good grief, life has been crazy.  I finally have time to sit and read the awesomeness that is this story!

Sam has been a protector since the crib days, eh?  That is too cool :)

Leah telling off the grandmothers is hilarious!

I love that the boys redid the car and the truck...that is just too sweet!

I have a feeling that drunken Leah getting a tattoo is going to be hilarious!!!

I just remembered what Riley's gift was...I have a feeling that Leah is going to want to kill her some vampire haha :)

I love the way you've written Aro.  I freaking love that the vampire leader is singing Pussycat Dolls.  Even better that he wants to experience being a bitch.  I couldn't stop laughing!

Wal Mart scenes are always hilarious in your stories!  LOVE that!

Haha, Charlie and Sue are hilarious too.  My brother and I have conversations like that all the time!

Ok...Carlisle needs to die a slow, painful death...I think Bella, Rosie and Tanya need first dibs...in that order...

Rebecca and Luca, now there's a match!  I love that Billy is turning into a vampire and that Rebecca wanted to change with him.  Very cool!

 

Reviewer: Voracious_Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 22

Bella's allure and Rebecca's siren-ness (is that a word?) are going to come in very handy, I think. Riley deserved that kick and more for those tats--can Leah get them removed before she is changed? I wouldn't want that on my ass for eternity. The only reason I can think for Carlisle to be siphoning his own venom is to create some kind of fake death for himself as a way out of this weird collusion he's in, unless he's planning to sire multiple vamps at one time. I say catch him, strip him, paint 'welcome aboard' on his ass and tie him up outside a gay vampire biker bar. Now, what's going down in Egypt? Sounds like the Temple of Amun is getting a bit more lively than usual.



Author's Response:

Bella's allure and Rebecca being a siren will come in handy.  Maria has a very simple solution for Rebecca too.  Riley deserved that kick.  Carlisle was siphoning his own venom for selfish reasons.  He was trying to turn his eyes back from red to gold.  In two chapters, Demetri and Embry will be back from Egypt and the news isn't going to be good.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 22

ok there for a minute i didnt think that you where going to have billy and rebeca waking up in this chapter and i love leahs tatoos i couldnt wait to find out what they where and what riley had the tatoo artist do that was just to funny i like what she did to him also love the fact that not only did bella loose it with marta so did molly and sue i loved that as far as maria is consurned i think peter is right she is going to help with rebeca and she is going to be pissed when she finds out that the cullens have been looking into her finaces i also helps that she hates the cullens as much as everyone else i also cant wait to see what power billy is going to have i know it cant be that hes a karaoke machine and i cant wait to see if charlie passed on brewmaster to him and if he did billys reaction the first time he hears a voice in his head i cant wait to see what happens next so please udpate soon and i am glad that you are back



Author's Response:

Alas, Billy is powerless, but he's a happy vampire because he can walk again.  Maria will be an incredible help, more than you can ever imagine.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 22

lol  great chapter.  Poor Peter with a heavy duty, bad ass girl.    A siren..... they are getting all sorts of gift vamps arent they.   LOL for marta being put into her place.    ROFL for Billy.



Author's Response:

Yes, and they'll need all of the vamps with gifts...you'll find out why in two chapters.  Marta needed to be put in her place.  And Billy?  He's just happy to be mobile again.  XOXO

Reviewer: bownbey Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 21

I can't wait to find out what is on Leah's ass!!! Maybe the words "Bite Me"? I understand why Billy made the choice he made. And Riley and Jared need to be put on short leashes from now on LOL



Author's Response:

You would think it says 'bite me', wouldn't ya?  Hmm...

I'm glad you understand why Billy made the choice.

As for Riley and Jared, yep, they're naughty, but loveable.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loved the chapter! Can't believe that Billy is changing! wow! :)  LOL at Riley and Jared in walmart! so hilarious! :) and ugh stupid Carlisle ... Can't wait to see more! :)



Author's Response:

Billy is a warrior, and what Carlisle did in Bella's room fueled his anger enough to want him to fight.  And the only way that he could was to become a vampire.

Riley and Jared did society a favor in Walmart.  LOL.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: Voracious_Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 21

C.C. broke his own rules, there, now didn't he? How is he going to cover the red eyes from his snobby little group of elitist psychos? Billy as vamp is going to change a lot of relationships around the area, but it willbe good to see him out of the chair. Will he be able to phase? I'm glad Charlie won't lose his best friend. Riley in walmart made me think of that bar scene in the Star Wars 2nd trilogy where Obiwan makes the drug dealer go home and rethink his life, LOL. More, please, when you're able; I hope you and your family are ok after everything you're going through.



Author's Response:

You've got that right.  C.C. broke his own rules and then some.  Demetri and Embry are currently tracking him.  Remember that C.C. is a doctor so he knows how to cover up those red eyes in a jiffy.  

Billy will not be able to phase, he'll be one hundred percent vampire.  He asked to be changed so he could keep an eye on his daughter and not lose his best friend, but what really fueled him was what C.C. did in Bella's room.  It hit him a bit too close to home.

Riley in Walmart just did something that we've all wanted to do at one point in our lives.  

Thank you for asking about my family, we're doing fine...we were just severely inconvenienced by the lack of power for a week, but we were all safe and happy.  

Thank you for reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 21

Riley and jared were hilarious.    Tattoo's:  thinking one says bite me.      Cant blame billy for wanting to change.  Hope becky settles down now that she has a mate.

Ugh for creepy carlisle.   The porn thing is a great start.



Author's Response:

Hmm..."bite me"...possibly, you'll ahve to wait to find out.  

Riley and Jared were only doing what we've all wanted to do at one point or another.

Billy Black, well, he'll be an interesting vampire...and Becky will be a one man woman...or will she?

Carlisle is ugh, you're right.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 20

I just decided to check my email before I headed to bed and I was immediately wide awake when I saw this update notice!  Yay!  Who cares that it is 2:30 in the morning!!!  Seriously, who cares :) 

Glad to hear things are shaking out from the effects of the hurricane and I am glad you and yours are safe...

I have to laugh quietly because my roommate is asleep and trust me it is hard (no pun intended) when picturing the room where Heidi, Bella, Jane and Paul are right now hahahahahahahahahaha!!

Sorry, I can't resist...Come and listen to my story 'bout a man named Jeb... ;)

I absolutely loved this chapter!  I loved how everyone who is related discovered that they were.  I am also curious as to who Alice really is...I am already ready for the next update haha!



Author's Response:

Our gang will be honing in on Alice and Carlisle's true identities just as soon as they leave La Push.  It's going to take some massive research, but they can do it.

As for Paul, a warm, comfortable place was where he wanted to be during his transformation.

I was thinking of old names and thought of the Beverly Hillbillies--that's where I got Jebediah's name!  It's so funny you mentioned that.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 20

Pauls transformation was really funny. I think that the fact Charlie and Bella are related to the wolves makes so much sense. That is why they were always going to La Push. That is why Charlie and Bella are shields. I am not sure I understand why Bella is the strongest shield.

The fact that Bella has this allure gift. Well we have all seen that. I know she is nervous about the Cullen's but she is a key player in taking them down. Peter and Brewmaster will defend her to the death, and of course her daddy and Paul.

I am ready for them to start hurting. THem=Cullen's



Author's Response:

Eleazar will be working with Bella and Charlie along with Luca.  Sometimes there are no explanations for things, it's just inherent, but Eleazar's gift is coming in handy and was very much needed.  Bella certainly is a key player in taking down the Cullens.  In fact, all of our gang are very talented.

As for Paul, he wanted to change in comfort.  *smirks*

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter! Loving everything.. LOL at Paul's transformation..... So excited to read more when you have time :)

 



Author's Response:

Paul transformed where he felt the warmest.  More coming from our gang.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter.  Glad Charlie and Bella found some more family.   OMG  poor Jake.    That would make you nuts.   Woo Hoo for bree's gift.   



Author's Response:

Bree needed a boost of confidence.  She'll be working on her skills with Eleazar next chapter.  Aunt Molly and Uncle Quil will be forces to be reckoned with.  As for Jake, you have to hand it to the guy for defending Becky's lack of honor.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 20

This was a great chapter!! Always love Bella and Peter citrus, and the loving between them! Paul's transformation was perfectly done, BRAVO!! The meeting in La Push was great, and poor Jacob...too funny! Can't wait to see what is up next for our wonderful family of misfits, and when the time comes for them to end the fuckery that is the Cullen's it is going to be epic!!

Take care until next time, and glad everything is ok after the hurricane blew through your area! Thanks for this incredible story



Author's Response:

Peter and Bella are always pretty loving.  As for Paul's transformation, it happened right inside of his happy place.  Jacob was honorable in defending his sister's lack of honor.  More fuckery coming by way of the Cullens.  Thank you for your well wishes regarding the hurricane.  We were fine, just severely inconvenience by lack of power.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 20

funny! alot of info in this chapter! loved it and cant wait to see wht happends next!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  There's a lot more coming.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: Voracious_Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 20

I loved this chapter and I'm really glad Luca bought the compound on Molokai--I don't think Peter's little town could stand such a huge influx of supernaturals! There's only one thing I'm curious about, though: what was Marcus' reaction to the news that Didyme was actually alive for most of the time he thought she was dead? I can't believe no one has told him yet, and how would Esme react to that news? Either way, Stefan is in for a really horrible death and he deserves it. Oh, and Paul's change? Roflmao!



Author's Response:

Marcus hasn't found out about Didyme.  Everyone is still contemplating how to tell him about her.  He will find out, though, and he's not going to be happy.

Paul changed where he felt most at home, inside of Jane.  *smirks*

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

 

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 19

Well, if I was married to Pete, I would probably welcome him home the same way hahaha :)

I think Sue has a gift besides being a succubus...she knits like crazy :)

Positive reinforcement does work wonders :)

Poor Sue, that would be overwhelming to anyone, not just newborns. 

It still cracks me up to this day about Brewmaster's nickname for Peter!

I like how Marta knew just how to begin interacting with Sue.  That works in the classroom too.

Haha, I think I would already have screamed at the constant interaction. Everyone needs a little time away...just for the day...from each other... ;)

Caius cracks me up: "I don't know, but there are flashing lights..." What a SCREAM!!

"No, I'm supposed to protect the Quileutes from bad vampires. No one told me anything about the rest of the humans." Paul cracks me right the heck up!

Caius is so funny, and I love that Paul used his gaming ignorance as an excuse to buy multiple consoles hahahahahaha!

Caius is so funny too, I love how he is all proud of being Paul's pal :)

Royally sanctioned hotwiring...nice :)

Eeewwww...I think I just threw up in my mouth a little bit...

My dad sounds that way too when he tells people I'm a school teacher :)  Must be a daddy thing :)

I love the way you've used OOC with some of the minor characters from teh series...Janie for example.  Also, Caius and Aro :)

Aro is an old Wal-Mart pro by now :)

I know Jane is dead serious in her Cullen hatred, but the way she interacts with Char and Alice is hilarious!

I think I might vomit as well...pass the fruit pieces please!

Better yet, let me just camp out in the fruit section...

There are just no words...flic the bic and light the fire, Chelsea...you can do it...

Marcus is going to go all Volturi on them when he hears about Didyme...I think even Deepak Chopra would be lenient on this one...

Wow...just, wow...

Great chapter and I can't wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

 

I apologize for the delay in posting the final chapter. 98 percent of my town was without power since Sunday (8- 28) due to Hurricane Irene so we had no working traffic lights in town, and at home: no electricity, internet, phone, hot water--all of those modern conveniences that we take for granted. We just got our power back last night (9-3) after a week, and right now I'm trying to get caught up with things that I couldn't do without electricity such as laundry, grocery shopping, etc.   I will post chapter 63 as soon as possible--hopefully in the next two days, but please understand that I absolutely must catch up with home issues.   Thank you for understanding the situation I am in.

The two overbearing grandmothers immediately got on both Paul's and Bella's nerves.  In fact, it was enough to send them running out of the castle along with Caius on a royally sanctioned car theft and subsequent high speed police chase.  Don't worry, neither of them will put up with being smothered, and between the two of them, they'll come up with a creative solution.  Bear in mind that, as far as Bella is concerned, they have some competition coming in the form of Molly Swan Ateara.  Also, neither Paul nor Bella are pushovers, so they will speak their minds concerning the issue without hurting anyone's feelings.

Jane, Jane, Jane...what can I say about her, except that she's Paul's perfect match.  It was her idea to go shopping at ASDA just to rankle Alice and Charlotte's nerves, but it worked out perfectly because Alice didn't want to disappoint Chelsea.  Jane is actually a pretty sensitive character in this story.  She knows the difference between right and wrong, and she'll go to bat for her friends.  

Let's move on to Chelsea.  She put on a stellar performance in front of Alice and Charlotte, that caused both of them to share a lot of information there.  Bear in mind that she is Aro's number one spy so she can easily extract information from enemies.  She can manipulate bonds, too, so it's really difficult to take her down.  If you combined her gift with Jasper's empathic abilities, you have a pretty unstoppable force.  She is a very important asset to the team. 

And now for the twisted slumber party.  Obviously, Alice and Charlotte's idea of a slumber party is completely different from Chelsea, Jane, and Renata's idea.  You now know that the two of them are mates.  But, according to Alice, homosexuality is a reason for extermination in their new world order, that's why Alice claimed that they were just two sisters showing their love for each other.  It's actually a bit sad because the two have been brainwashed completely by Carlisle.

Now, she also gave away information that will truly inflame the Volturi, the Maltese vampires, and the Quileute wolves--none of whom will take the Cullen's maliciousness lying down.  Oh, and just in case, you're wondering, remember this quote from Alice?  "They like those native girls, ugh. We did the same thing when we first moved there too."  It was not an error, I put it there on purpose.  We'll be addressing the issue in a later chapter.

Thank you for taking the time to review.  I truly appreciate it.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: tuckerjnp1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 19

Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

 

I apologize for the delay in posting the final chapter. 98 percent of my town was without power since Sunday (8- 28) due to Hurricane Irene so we had no working traffic lights in town, and at home: no electricity, internet, phone, hot water--all of those modern conveniences that we take for granted. We just got our power back last night (9-3) after a week, and right now I'm trying to get caught up with things that I couldn't do without electricity such as laundry, grocery shopping, etc.   I will post chapter 63 as soon as possible--hopefully in the next two days, but please understand that I absolutely must catch up with home issues.   Thank you for understanding the situation I am in.

Thank you for taking the time to review.  I truly appreciate it.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 19

OMG so much craziness! I loved this chapter... hopefully they get everyone out before the crazy clan gets there!

Can't wait to read more! :)



Author's Response:

 

I apologize for the delay in posting the final chapter. 98 percent of my town was without power since Sunday (8- 28) due to Hurricane Irene so we had no working traffic lights in town, and at home: no electricity, internet, phone, hot water--all of those modern conveniences that we take for granted. We just got our power back last night (9-3) after a week, and right now I'm trying to get caught up with things that I couldn't do without electricity such as laundry, grocery shopping, etc.   I will post chapter 63 as soon as possible--hopefully in the next two days, but please understand that I absolutely must catch up with home issues.   Thank you for understanding the situation I am in.

Alice gave away information that will truly inflame the Volturi, the Maltese vampires, and the Quileute wolves--none of whom will take the Cullen's maliciousness lying down.  Oh, and just in case, you're wondering, remember this quote from Alice?  "They like those native girls, ugh. We did the same thing when we first moved there too."  It was not an error, I put it there on purpose.  We'll be addressing the issue in a later chapter.

Thank you for taking the time to review.  I truly appreciate it.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: Voracious_Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 19

First just let me say: EEEWWWWWWW! I do not recall slumber parties being anything like that. I need brain bleach. Kudos to you for keeping it so in character, and so morbidly funny. Chelsea has her work cut out for her as a double agent, that's for certain, but at least they now have a way to feed false info to the other side. The knitting thing is one hell of a running gag, though, LOL. The Cullens were kidnapping Quileute women in the 1930's? Damn, where's my lighter?...



Author's Response:

 

I apologize for the delay in posting the final chapter. 98 percent of my town was without power since Sunday (8- 28) due to Hurricane Irene so we had no working traffic lights in town, and at home: no electricity, internet, phone, hot water--all of those modern conveniences that we take for granted. We just got our power back last night (9-3) after a week, and right now I'm trying to get caught up with things that I couldn't do without electricity such as laundry, grocery shopping, etc.   I will post chapter 63 as soon as possible--hopefully in the next two days, but please understand that I absolutely must catch up with home issues.   Thank you for understanding the situation I am in.

As for the twisted slumber party.  Obviously, Alice and Charlotte's idea of a slumber party is completely different from Chelsea, Jane, and Renata's idea.  You now know that the two of them are mates.  But, according to Alice, homosexuality is a reason for extermination in their new world order, that's why Alice claimed that they were just two sisters showing their love for each other.  It's actually a bit sad because the two have been brainwashed completely by Carlisle.

Now, she also gave away information that will truly inflame the Volturi, the Maltese vampires, and the Quileute wolves--none of whom will take the Cullen's maliciousness lying down.  Oh, and just in case, you're wondering, remember this quote from Alice?  "They like those native girls, ugh. We did the same thing when we first moved there too."  It was not an error, I put it there on purpose.  We'll be addressing the issue in a later chapter.

Thank you for taking the time to review.  I truly appreciate it.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 19

I think I like your early review. I also think Alice & Charolette are sicko!  Wait till Peter and Charlie find out they want to kidnap Bella. Break her bond with Peter.. He will be livid. Oh Yah.

 



Author's Response:

 

I apologize for the delay in posting the final chapter. 98 percent of my town was without power since Sunday (8- 28) due to Hurricane Irene so we had no working traffic lights in town, and at home: no electricity, internet, phone, hot water--all of those modern conveniences that we take for granted. We just got our power back last night (9-3) after a week, and right now I'm trying to get caught up with things that I couldn't do without electricity such as laundry, grocery shopping, etc.   I will post chapter 63 as soon as possible--hopefully in the next two days, but please understand that I absolutely must catch up with home issues.   Thank you for understanding the situation I am in.

Don't worry, things will be heating up because the Cullens have now gone and rankled the nerves of the Quileutes too.

Thank you for taking the time to review.  I truly appreciate it.  XOXO  mama4dukes

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 19

wow  poor chelsea having to be around the skanks.   Wow  they are soooo brainwashed by scumlisle and edwanker.



Author's Response:

Oh, yes, they've absolutely been brainwashed and it's mostly Carlisle's doing.  Chelsea is Aro's best undercover agent.  She'll be okay.  It's Jane that actually can't handle stress.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tuckerjnp1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 18

Really great chapter, I was laughning my butt over this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

Glad your butt got a chuckle.  We have a slumber party to go to next.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great chapter.

 



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: Voracious_Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2011 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 18

If Sue keeps knitting at that speed, she's going to be stalking sheep with needles in hand when the stores run out of yarn, lol! Stripper Charlie? um yeah, nice and all, but I'd have the same reaction!So how soon  will Hillsgrove be the Volterra?



Author's Response:

ROFLMAO!  Stalking sheep?  Maybe she'll start a fashion trend in Italy.  As for the Sensational Stripping Swans--the guys and the gals needed a dose of reality.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 18

YAY to the nth degree for the update!  I feel your pain on the septic issues...

This chapter was so cool!  I laughed so hard and I loved the irony of both nights out hahahahahaha :)



Author's Response:

The Septic Issues...oh my God, I'm still hurting.  The checkbook hurts, a lot.

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2011 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 18

OMG  what a great chapter.  So much to comment on. Yeah for B/P alone time.   LOL Sue knitting up a storm.  Woo Hoo Paul found more family.   ewww for face licking.   ROFL for strip shows.... hmm I need to go hit one here in vegas again soon.yum.



Author's Response:

B/P needed alone time.  Their house was like Grand Central Station.  Sue's going to start a new fashion trend soon.  Paul's family, well...those two women might be a bit too clingy.  The face licking, well, at least she didn't kill the guy.  As for the strip show in Vegas, where shall I meet you?  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2011 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 17

Love this story!!!!! Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2011 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 17

Good grief...when the time comes, PLEASE let me flick my bic to start the funeral pyre for Edward, Charlotte, Carlisle, and Alice!!!

Having said that, I again want to say how much I love your stories.  I already want to reread them and they aren't done yet :)  Particularly the Wal-Mart scenes hahahahahahaha :)

Looking forward to more!!



Author's Response:

Oh, those Cullens shouldn't be walking this earth for the mere fact that they're idiots.  I'm so happy that my stories make you smile.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 17

LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!! Can't wait to see the next one :)



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the chapter.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 17

That was some funny shit. I can't wait to read the next chapter please update ASAFP.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed reading the chapter.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: tuckerjnp1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 17

LOVED LOVED LOVED this chapter. I was laughing so hard, I thought I would pee myself. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Well I am off to WalMart for my payday shopping trip, wonder what I will find that I don't need.........

Author's Response:

I hope you enjoyed your trip to Walmart.  I'm glad that I made you laugh.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 17

The phone answering thing hits us all! FUNNY

 

 



Author's Response:

You're not kidding.  Automated phone systems drive me berserk.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 17

omfg    you are just too hilarious.



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks bb.  Glad you had fun reading it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: Voracious_Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 17

I just realized why Alice is so insistent on her unrealistic image of herself--she's actually an immortal child, isn't she? Did Carlisle go through a pedophile stage and turn her too young? At least wtih Charlie coordinating efforts they are getting some real intel now. The phone system thing was terrific and the quick switch with Demitri and Aro was perfect. Pity he didn't get a hand on Carlisle. Poor Chelsea, too, ick. The only bad thing is that now I have to wait a week for another chapter!



Author's Response:

Edward was a start and him developing a desire for Chelsea is a good thing because she is able to take care of herself so she might be able to get some inside intel.  

As for Charlie, yes, they needed him to take charge because the Volturi have been so secluded for so long.

The next chapter is a bit complex, but will provide some much needed answers.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: dna2679 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 17

that shit was hilarious!! i loved it.. can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 16

I love Charlie being the paternal rock in this family.  And finally a voice of reason to get to the bottom of CArlisle and his depravity(along with the rest of his freaky family).



Author's Response:

Charlie will be the main voice of reason, but so will Eleazar Denali (when he comes into the story) and Aro.  They're the three 40 something year old vamps.  The rest are babies.  XOXO

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2011 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 16

great chapter.   That strip club owner is lucky he got away with his life and dick attached.    Gotta love Walmart.

Go Big Daddy S.  Take care of all your girls.



Author's Response:

Oh, wasn't the strip club owner a sleaze.  Well with strippers like Princess Creamysnatch and Lola Spankmihooter, what can you expect.  

We always, always love Walmart...there's so much fun we can have with the store.

Charlie Vampcop will be A-OK.  

Thanks for your review.  XOXO

Reviewer: Curlykate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 16

Awesome story! It is absolutely hilarious as well as being captivating. I started reading yesterday and just could not stop.

Thank you so much for sharing it with us. Please update soon. 



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you're enjoying the story.  The next chapter will be very...um...lyrical...  XOXO

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 16

You go Charlie go toast their sparkely pasty white asses. Sorry got into it their for a minute please update ASAFP.



Author's Response:

Oh, don't worry. Charlie's going to go all vamp comp soon, after his succubus wife licks him.  Thanks for your review.  XOXO

Reviewer: EASEmama Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 16

Aww!  I love me some Daddy Charlie!



Author's Response:

I love him too--he's an 80's music lovin, family man that'll do anything to keep his family safe.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved this chapter!!! and I am loving Charlie right now!!!! :) Can't wait to see the next one!



Author's Response:

Charlie's the absolute best vamp-daddy ever!  XOXO

Reviewer: Voracious_Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved the dressing room thing, LOL! Whoa, Charlie is six different kinds of awesome! I want to see investigator Charlie rip Carlisle into tiny bits for messing with his kids! I can't wait to see what you come up with for a 'real' backstory on Carlisle--perhaps a deviant courtier at the Court of King Charles I? Grand Inquisitor for the French Church? Flagellant apostate priest? Farm boy arrested for raping medieval livestock? An alchemist executed for blasphemy? Bandit? Graverobber? There are so many ways you could go with it, sigh.



Author's Response:

Oh, but the poor dressing room lady.  Can you picture having four men walk out of the dressing room and making innocently obscene comments.  Okay, well, everyone except for Paul.  He was blatantly rude but that's why we love him.

A tiny revelation about Carlisle will make Caius flip out next chapter.  Thanks for your review.  XOXO

Reviewer: EN426 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 16

I love big daddy Charlie! He's so awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Charlie is absolutely fantastic.  He'll be making some changes for the castle in Volterra next.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 16

I actually squealed when I saw the update email!  I was SO excited!

Aro cracks me up!  I love how you portray him in this story!

Oh, wow.  The Cullens, if they knew what was good for them, they would hide.  Right. Now. Charlie is just like my dad.  He's sweet and all, until you screw with his family.  Let's just say that if something like that ever happened to me, the perpetrator would not be the one going to jail...

LOVE it!  Can't wait for more, as always!



Author's Response:

Aro is a sweetie, he really is.  The Volturi are obviously written completely out of character.

Isn't Charlie Swan awesome.  He's going to be revamping all of Volterra next.  Thanks for your review.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 15

Haha, Aro got arrested and is overjoyed about it!  Hahahahaha!



Author's Response:

That's right, Aro finds joy in everything--even jail.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 14

Picturing Volturi royalty in awe and being all touristy in Wal-Mart is making my head hurt from laughing so hard :)

Now I went from roaring with laughter to my mouth hanging open.  At least Charlie and Sue will be saved...*breathes sigh of relief*

This is one of the best stories, I freaking love it :)



Author's Response:

Ah, so you liked the Walmart Exploratory Committee's foray into Walmart.  I wish I had a million dollars to spend there.

Of course, CHarlie and Sue were gonna be saved.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 12

Wow.  Just, wow.  This is getting SOOOOO good!



Author's Response:

Aww...I'm glad you're enjoying it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 11

I love that every new comer to Wal Mart calls the greeter something different.  I think sentry is my favorite :)

YAY!  I was SO hoping Esme would be mated!!



Author's Response:

Of course we had to give Esme a mate.  Yeah, I kind of like sentry myself, too.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 10

That's right that Def Leppard song rocks to this day!

Haha, AARP eligible...man am I glad no one is in the office at the moment to hear me laughing out loud like a hyena :)

Wow, Edward...Bella's virginity train left the station long ago with Peter as the engineer...get with it, man!

YAY!  Embry and Tanya mated!  Now we need to find a man for Esme haha :)

Well, I guess we will find out what happens to a shapeshifter after being bitten by their mate...



Author's Response:

That's right, Def Leppard still rocks--even though I just heard them on the oldies station.

Bella's virginity was actually given to Jacob Black way before she met Pete.

I hope you like Embry and Tanya.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 9

I am actually breathing a sigh of relief that Esme got away from them...

I just had a thought about Embry and Esme...hmmm...

Oh, Esme...poor thing...now you have real family to help you out :)

 



Author's Response:

Esme needed to run and she was able to provide some important info regarding the sexual deviance of Carlisle Cullen.  Sue and Charlie will look at Esme as their daughter.  She needs that. As for Esme and Embry, hmm...  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 8

Haha, your beginning A/N made me crack up!  I had a feeling you are writing some of the Wal-Mart scenes from experience.  I can't talk though...during Christmas one year, my dad and I reenacted the fight scene between Darth Vader and Obi Wan from Episode IV right in the Christmas department using green and red wrapping paper rolls haha :)

Oooh, my brother has a Dodge Ram 3500...it is one sweet ride!

Good gravy...the Cullens are screwed up!

This story is SO stinking funny!!!

 



Author's Response:

I want a Dodge Ram 3500.  Waaah!

The Cullens are messed up and I hope you got to see how different Alice and Jane's personalities are.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wow, this is one of the only stories I have read where Maria has been painted as a reformed vampire :)

Jasper is absolutely hilarious!  I love this!

Wow...with each chapter, I get more and mor excited about the impending showdown...I hope Bella rips Edward a new one...



Author's Response:

Yes, the bad vamps are all good in this story--even Maria.

You'll hear from Eddie soon.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

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