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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2012 5:41 AM Title: EPILOGUE

Eighty chapters, I nearly didn't favorite this story. Boy, how glad I am that I did! This was a super read and worth every minute ! Always have loved the Cullens, and Yolanda and Liam only added to my enjoyment. They are great characters and I'll always remember them! THANK YOU!



Author's Response:

No, thank YOU for taking the time to read this story to the end. I am heartened that you took the time to do so. 

best wishes,

Sammi

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2012 5:21 AM Title: SERVED COLD

I'm glad they didn't do away with Stuart. What they took from him, besides the money, was any peace of mind he would ever have. That's almost a worse punishment anyway! Serves him right, the prick!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2012 4:58 AM Title: LEAVING FORKS

Fifty years before they can come back, wow! It must have been especially poignant for Yolanda, so much happened to her in the Forks house, most life changing, to say the least.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2012 4:33 AM Title: HOMECOMING

Whatever she decides to do to him, it probably won't be enough to even the score.

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Date: 14 Feb 2012 4:20 AM Title: RETURN

Like that's been a deep, dark secret! I think we are all a bit in love with Liam.

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Date: 14 Feb 2012 4:06 AM Title: SHE SHALL BE FREE

Frankly, I'm kind of looking forward to Dallas myself. I hope Yolanda pays that miserable bastard back in spades! That aside, I had an idea of how much the delightful Liam loves his lioness!

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Date: 14 Feb 2012 3:35 AM Title: NEED FOR SPEED

Sorry for the sex, indeed! As if! You know we all enjoyed it as much as you enjoyed writing it!

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Date: 14 Feb 2012 3:22 AM Title: NIGHT TO REMEMBER

You naughty girl, you! That was a fun, sexy chapter for sure! The redecorating of their roomwas gorgeous from the sound of it!

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Date: 14 Feb 2012 1:38 AM Title: TOGETHER

I can tell this will be a wonderful honeymoon, in every way. Truly the newlyweds are blessed in the friends they have.

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Date: 13 Feb 2012 10:52 AM Title: NEW DAWN

I don't know that I would categorize them all as giving in to their baser natures, just being vampires, I thought! Anyway, a really wonderful time was had by all!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 10:32 AM Title: THE RECEPTION

You are forcing me to reuse some good adjectives here! This segment of the reception was all things wonderful, magical, fabulous and touching. You outdid yourself!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 10:09 AM Title: THE WEDDING

That was as beautiful a wedding ceremony as any I've ever seen or heard of. Altogether fabulous! Carlisle should marry people more often.

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Date: 13 Feb 2012 9:49 AM Title: AVANTI

When Alice puts on a wedding, large or small, stand back and watch in awe! This sounds fabulous!

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Date: 13 Feb 2012 9:32 AM Title: TIMBER

And a dandy Marilyn she made, too! Liam really did get a great birthday. The treetopsex, with all and sundry was kind of hilarious as well as sexy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 9:15 AM Title: BIRTHDAY BOY

Neat watch, lovely inscription and a nice birthday, so far. I can just picture the whole bunch of them hunting through the woods.

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Date: 13 Feb 2012 8:58 AM Title: MY LOVE

There are certainly worse things to do with your time than make love 24/7, 365. Lucky vampires!

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Date: 13 Feb 2012 8:33 AM Title: YOU GIVE ME SOMETHING

I can't wait to see what the girls have come up with for the wedding. The clothes sound  lovely and the dancing should be magical, from the few hints I've read. I love that Liam can't stand being apart from Yolanda for more than a few hours, and she is affected the same way by him.

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Date: 13 Feb 2012 6:18 AM Title: SURF'S UP

The beach has always been my favorite place and I've even made a believer of my husband. We live in semi arid country but make it to the ocean at least once a year, if not more, for the last fifty years. So this interlude with Yolanda and Liam was lovely!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 5:59 AM Title: STEAL MY HEART AWAY

Does not get any better than that! I hope you had someone to love while you were turning out chapters like this! If you didn't, what a waste!



Author's Response:

Hi K, thank you so much for following me over from the Twilighted site to have a look at this story too. Your reviews and support have been wonderful. Thank you so much, from the bottom of my heart. Apologies that the updates have been a little sporadic :-/

I'm afraid that writer's block is still preventing me from updating my Loving Edward story but hopefully I'll get there one day soon. 

As to your comment about having someone to love when I wrote this particular story, I was, in fact, in the throes of a divorce and all my pent up emotion was going on this story.  Eventually though, I was lucky enough for my own "Liam" to walk out of the chapters of this novella and into my life.  He has not, to date, read my work, but he has already used many of the loving epithets seen here and has overridden my own angst about being a burden to him through chronic ill health.

So, when I wrote of Yolanda's worried notion about running away due to loving someone so much that she didn't want to "ruin" his life, it was very much from the heart. I'd certainly harboured such thoughts about the future. However, my "Liam" won me over and told me not to worry and that we'd have fun together doing simple things. We enjoyed a jaunt out to the coast yesterday (he has just moved in with me) and enjoyed a sunny afternoon by the ocean. Very healing and very much recommended.  I've visited arid places such as Arizona/Nevada which have their own beauty, but having lived away from the ocean for 20 years, I'm very glad to be back near it again, after returning to the region of my childhood!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 5:44 AM Title: ACROSS THE UNIVERSE

Had to chuckle at the description of Carlisle's unsteadiness. That was pretty darn cute! Esme surely loved the fallout! Theses evening visits and family discussions are so nice, for all involved.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 5:27 AM Title: TANTRIC

I do believe you've said everything necessary! WHEW!

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Date: 13 Feb 2012 5:14 AM Title: STRANGER IN MY BODY

That fine mind of hers goes into overdrive sometimes. Yolanda still has this notion that she's more trouble than she's worth. Lucky for her, Liam has the right answers. The beautiful part of that is that he truly means every word!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 3:56 AM Title: THE HUNGER

How could I not enjoy it? That was almost too much excitment for one day. Good old Emmett, he seems to never take life too seriously. It sure was a case of all's well that end's well, and Liam definitely kept his promise!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 3:42 AM Title: ONE, TWO, THREE, FOUR, FIVE

This hunt was going so well, feeding and loving, and then possible disaster! I sure hope Yolanda can avoid killing some hapless human!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 3:26 AM Title: WILD HONEY

You're no slouch in writing lemons, either! I particularly like the fact that this is a very good story, with fabulous sex, not sex with no story. Hope I'm making sense.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 1:04 AM Title: SEEING THE LIGHT

Who doesn't love lighthouses? It was an inspired choice on Alice's part and should make for a memorable wedding!

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Date: 13 Feb 2012 12:46 AM Title: I'LL BE THERE

I just love Liam, and of course, Yolanda too!

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Date: 12 Feb 2012 11:28 PM Title: ALL THAT YOU COULD WANT

Another little piece of Yolanda's history in this chapter. I like the way you parcel out some of hers and some of Liam's, quite interesting. I suppose now Alice will be in full wedding planner mode. That girl sure likes to organize these things!

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Date: 12 Feb 2012 11:12 PM Title: BURNING QUESTION

I would be shocked if Carlisle didn't want to marry them. He most likely would deem it an honor. Now that she's thought about it, Yolanda wants to get this show on the road!

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Date: 12 Feb 2012 10:59 PM Title: POZHALSTA

The conversations between Liam and Yolanda are so honest and open, it makes a person wish every man could be like he is with her. Is it just me, or are all the Cullen men and Liam, just the cat's meow?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 10:42 PM Title: WHOLE LOTTA LOVE

Including mind-blowing sex, this was a wonderful day, nearly alone, for Liam and Yolanda. I think it was enhanced a bit with Edward and Bella's  joining them, and it's always fun with Renesmee around.

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Date: 12 Feb 2012 10:14 PM Title: LOVE ALL AROUND

I'm really hoping Liam and Yolanda can stay connected with the Cullens, wherever they end up settling. You are truly blessed when you find friends like these, considering how rare they are. We meet many people in our lives, but few you can call true friends.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 9:56 PM Title: SURRENDER

There's just something about music that speaks to your heart, isn't there? It expresses so many things so beautifully. I really like that you have woven it so nicely through this story.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 9:43 PM Title: JUST SAY YES

That was a close thing! Too bad Yolanda didn't think for a second, about how Edward tried the same thing with Bella, and how very wrong that had been! This business of deciding your life's course, and not sharing that decision with your partner, is just plain stupid! Lucky that Liam is so eloquent and convincing, he saved them both a lot of heartaches.

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Date: 12 Feb 2012 9:24 PM Title: WHEELS

I nice new silver Beemer, how exciting! Not to mention a run up to the ocean, my favorite place, too. It seems Yolanda fits right in with the Cullens.

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Date: 12 Feb 2012 9:04 PM Title: MUSIC SOOTHES THE SAVAGE BREAST

For having gone through a few highs and lows, the day ended on a great note. Kind of makes you wish you could have been there, listening and dancing. I wonder how much of the Southern wars Jasper and Liam shared with Yolanda? Lots of stories there, I bet, both good and bad.

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Date: 12 Feb 2012 10:11 AM Title: BLOOD SEX MAGIC

Mostly good , only a bit of bad to deal with. Yolanda is a newborn, after all and Charlie is the first human she's had a whiff of. As long as the guys control her, it should work out the way Alice has seen. One step at a time, I suppose.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 7:00 AM Title: FOR ONCE IN MY LIFE

This amazing woman is adjusting to being a vampire better than anyone, except possibly Bella. Still waiting to see her reaction to imprinting.

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Date: 12 Feb 2012 6:48 AM Title: SIGNAL FIRE AT RAINBOW'S END

Their lovemaking is incredible, that's all I have to say!

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Date: 12 Feb 2012 6:35 AM Title: LEAPS & BOUNDS

I hope Yolanda comes to appreciate her gifts, and not be upset by them. I think it's great that at least one of them is defensive, you never know around Forks when you might have to ward off the Volturi, or attacking nomads.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 6:19 AM Title: SENSES WORKING OVERTIME

Quite a successful first hunt, and the dessert was to die for! Oh lucky Yolanda, and lucky Liam!

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Date: 12 Feb 2012 6:05 AM Title: VIOLET HOUR

That was cute when Bella told Yolanda she was a bit jealous of how little time it took for her transformation. I still can't get over how perfect her violet eyes are. The first hunt will be very instructive, I'm thinking.

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Date: 12 Feb 2012 5:49 AM Title: HEAVEN

That was so good, I'm surprised they ever got out of bed and in the shower. Helps to have an extra pair of hands I guess, especially such talented hands as Liam's. What an adventure Yolanda is embarking upon.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 5:37 AM Title: LIGHT MY FIRE

I'm with you, there, that was an amazing way to begin a whole new existence, and with violet eyes, no less! It made me smile when Yolanda made her Liam aware of what exactly she wanted and needed from him. Extraordinary how short a time this change took, even outdid Bella, I think.

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Date: 12 Feb 2012 5:22 AM Title: ON THE MEND

As Edward said, no going back and changing things, but it sure would have helped Bella to have had this amount of support during her transformation. At least she told them all what would help the most. You couldn't ask for more than what Liam is doing, and the Cullens are all so helpful.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 3:32 AM Title: OVER &OUT

That went much better than I expected, rather like a planned assault in a war. Yolanda is amazing, in that she can battle her way through the agony with the power of her intellect. What a mind she has. Liam did real well and had no problem stopping when he should. Carlisle must have really prepped him, and it sure didn't hurt to have Edward's gift to monitor the process.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 3:19 AM Title: ULTRAVIOLET

Trust me, my dear, reading your words did the same for me! It was so beautiful when they were quoting back and forth, I had to stop and wipe away my tears, too!

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Date: 12 Feb 2012 2:59 AM Title: NOCTURNE

You do realize, a person could run out of superlative adjectives, reading this story? Damn! Just gorgeous!

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Date: 12 Feb 2012 2:46 AM Title: INTERMEZZO

Took my breath away when I read the sentence about Yolanda's daughter, who was still-born. Was I reading too fast and missed that part of her history? I can't wait to hear what she will think when she learns of the imprinting of Jacob and Renesmee. The setup in the bedroom and Alice's ministrations, the dress and jewelry, all sound fabulous.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 1:07 AM Title: ETUDE

How sweet that Liam presents the ring and asks for Yolanda's hand before he changes her. She is slowly learning what she needs to know about her new life. I always thought Carlisle's library was one of the best things about the house in Forks.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 12:51 AM Title: REVELATIONS

She will take it all in, chew on it a while and digest it, and accept it very well, if I have any sense of Yolanda at all. She's one strong womanwith a good mind and a big heart.

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Date: 11 Feb 2012 10:55 PM Title: COMFORT

I really don't know how you could have made that any better than it was!Just simply perfect!

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Date: 11 Feb 2012 10:40 PM Title: PRELUDE

How many talents, I wonder, does Yolanda possess, that she hasn't yet revealed? It would be cool as hell if she has some gift that carries over into her new life.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 10:31 PM Title: LESSONS & TALES

That was a wonderful, magical afternoon, even the part interrupted by Emmett's silliness! As Liam shares himself with Yolanda, I can see the threads pulling them more tightly together. She is so appreciative of all the Cullens are doing and what's happening with Liam, it's truly touching to read.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 10:17 PM Title: TRUTH & CONSEQUENCES

Always thought you should ask for complete honesty from your doctors, no matter what. Yolanda needs all the ammunition she can gather to make it through the coming ordeal. Lucky for her, she's got the best support system in the world of vampires, and a man who cares for her deeply. Best weapons she could have!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 9:54 PM Title: COUNTDOWN

The pain and suffering Yolanda has endured ought to be enough for several liftimes, so ease up on that scary adventure stuff! Now that the date's been set, I hope nobody gets cold feet, so to speak. Wonder who all will bear witness to Yolanda's transformation?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 9:41 PM Title: THE EYES HAVE IT

I like to think that little interlude was nothing more than mutual pleasure, enjoyed by both participants, and not some sort of obligation. It was freely offered, freely accepted and lovely to boot! Tickled me no end, that Liam wants to be the one to change Yolanda, it will be so much better if it's his venom coursing through her veins.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 9:31 PM Title: BEWITCHED, BOTHERED & BEWILDERED

What a little ego boost, to know Liam's cared for her for years, since their first meeting! The sun-born sparkles were cool, as always, though your description was better than most. My take on Liam's hesitation, I think he's weighing the idea in his mind, wondering if he can do it without harming Yolanda.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 9:18 PM Title: STUNNED INTO SILENCE

Wouldn't you just love to have someone hold you, sharing the dawn and quoting poetry in your ear? Not just poetry, but Shakespeare? It may not get mush better than that!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 9:10 PM Title: LIFTED

No worries, the pacing of your story seems about right to me, but then I'm old, what do I know? Seriously, this is how it ought to go, slow, but not too slow. Wonder when Yolanda will find out about shape-shifters?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 7:44 AM Title: SLEEPYHEAD

What to think about Liam. Beyond the fact he's got all that Irish/vampire charm going on? I think he's one terrific guy!

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Date: 11 Feb 2012 7:32 AM Title: LET ME TOUCH YOU

Liam is going to be important in Yolanda's new life, is he? I sure hope so , he sounds great!

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Date: 11 Feb 2012 7:23 AM Title: IF I DIDN'T

I'm a Mulloy, by birth, and all this talk of the Irish is absolutely lovely! I'm so happy for Yolanda, and hope she hangs on to her Liam, he's a keeper! Love your story!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 4:59 AM Title: WHAT IF I DO?

How wonderful that there is hope in Yolanda's future and good things to look forward to!

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Date: 11 Feb 2012 4:00 AM Title: SOMETHING SO RIGHT

Oh yes, there's definitely a spark between Liam and Yolanda, which I'm sure is only going to grow with time.

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Date: 11 Feb 2012 3:43 AM Title: AS LONG AS YOU FOLLOW

Liam sounds just right for Yolanda, and your picture affirms that! Life is funny, you never know how things are going to weave together and match up. That's the wonderful part!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 3:31 AM Title: MIRACLE

Who is this that Yolanda thinks she knows, as Jasper seems to, also? The longer she stays with them, the better Yolanda comes to like and appreciate the Cullens.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 3:19 AM Title: HOPE SPRINGS ETERNAL

Yolanda knows in her heart and in her mind, that these are good people and they will do the very best they can for her. She's been given the facts and has made her choice, so the next step awaits.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 1:59 AM Title: RESOLVE

Bella laid it on the line, good and bad alike, so Yolanda has a clear idea of what transformation entails. She sure enjoyed seeing all the information she received from Renesmee, too. It seems she's accepted the Cullens and all their gifts, rather easily, I think.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 1:46 AM Title: OH WELL

All these revelations only prove what truly good people all the Cullens are. They won't try to influence Yolanda, just give her the facts and let her decide.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 1:31 AM Title: IRONIC

Especially in the condition Yolanda's in, I would opt for immortality, no question. No more cancer, hell yes!

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Date: 11 Feb 2012 1:20 AM Title: NOT WAVING, BUT DROWNING

Now that Yolanda is back among the living, she has some big surprises coming. I'll bet she can handle whatever life dishes out, even the supernatural.

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Date: 11 Feb 2012 1:08 AM Title: PINK

Never has been any doubt in my mind that Emmett and Rosalie love each other in all ways and for always. There seems to be something about Yolanda's plight that is deeply affecting Rose, making her need Emmett more than usual.

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Date: 11 Feb 2012 12:07 AM Title: ALL THAT I'M LIVING FOR

Emmett's favorite occupation, loving his Rose. Second favorite, maybe playing, either electronic games or goofing around with his brothers. Em isn't stupid, by any means, but he's truly a simple, uncomplicated soul.

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Date: 10 Feb 2012 11:55 PM Title: QUANDARY

My God, this woman is a fighter! And the Lord knows she's had some hellish things to fight against, especially this guy, and the cancer. I can see why Rosalie is so sympathetic to this poor lost woman.

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Date: 10 Feb 2012 11:44 PM Title: SAVED

That's quite a story to blurt out to your rescuers. Wonder what they thought when she said what had happened to her? At least Yolanda has landed with a family that will take care of her, even though she doesn't know that yet.

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Date: 10 Feb 2012 11:33 PM Title: SCARY MONSTERS

Come now, they're vampires, not omniscent! This must be  a new situation, even for them. I'm looking forward to an explanation as much as the Cullens.

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Date: 10 Feb 2012 11:26 PM Title: END OF THE ROAD

One big question comes to mind, why drag this poor , sick woman across two thousand miles of this country? If all he wanted to do was get rid of her, he could have killed her and dumped the body somewhere. Why keep her mostly alive and bound in the back seat and drive for days? Weird!

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Date: 10 Feb 2012 11:19 PM Title: NO CONTROL

I think I may help her do the revenge scenario, just on general principles! "Thing" sounds horrible, to do these mean, nasty things to Yolanda.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2012 11:12 PM Title: PROLOGUE

Who would have thought to find a vampire family near Forks, Washington, of all places! Really looking forward to learning Yolanda's story. Fun reading Emmett's thoughts as he chases Rose around the woods, too.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 2:34 PM Title: SURRENDER

UGH!! Tasteful joke - I don't think!! Great story so far. A-.



Author's Response:

thank you very much for taking the time to review. hope you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 3:07 AM Title: EPILOGUE

BEAUTIFUL ending and especially the summary!!! It is obvious the changes that have taken place in your life have been reflected in your writing, so I wish you all the best, you deserve it.

I'll look in on Liam and Yoland while their here in Ontario if you like, LOL!

Perhaps you'll bring us another tale from Yolanda in the future, good luck!



Author's Response:

thanks Wendy.  am really going to miss my two protagonists!

Reviewer: EliseShaw Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2010 8:57 PM Title: NOT WAVING, BUT DROWNING

Lovely! I'm surprised this story doesn't have many more reviews... it's a treat for all to read!



Author's Response:

thank you for your very kind reviews - great praise indeed from such a wonderful authoress yourself. your kind words mean more to me than you will ever know.

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Date: 18 Apr 2010 8:54 PM Title: PINK

You write Emmett wonderfully!

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Date: 18 Apr 2010 8:39 PM Title: ALL THAT I'M LIVING FOR

Beautifully done!

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Date: 18 Apr 2010 8:27 PM Title: QUANDARY

Brilliant!

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Date: 18 Apr 2010 8:19 PM Title: SAVED

You do such a brilliant job of describing each moment! Love it!

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Date: 18 Apr 2010 8:08 PM Title: SCARY MONSTERS

Loved the Rosalie and Emmett moments!

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Date: 18 Apr 2010 7:54 PM Title: END OF THE ROAD

You weave a beautiful tale for all of us to enjoy, thank you!

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Date: 18 Apr 2010 7:47 PM Title: NO CONTROL

Excellent job! I could read this story over and over again!

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 6:54 PM Title: SERVED COLD

Bless the real Yolanda I'm so happy for her!

And your Yolanda is truly terrifying and I have to agree with her stance leave him scared and wondering is the best revenge possible.BRAVO, BRILLIANT!

I'll be sorry to see the story end it's been a hell of ride, but I'm sure we'll hear from you again, your a talented writer and I hope you will find another topic/character to which you will devote you skills  with equal passion!

By the way love Nickelback, my favourite Canadian band.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your wonderful support Wendy, you have been a true treasure both here and on Fanfiction.

Glad you liked what I did.  Yo and I discussed it and I went with her flow on it as she's not a truly vengeful purrson - I figured it was better to let him sweat and wonder.  I don't think Yo would have wanted Liam to rip his heart out either lol.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 12:50 AM Title: LEAVING FORKS

Great build up to what bodes to be a memorable confrontation!! Even though this chapter was about moving on and separations its about new beginnings as well and was very upbeat.

Thanks to Liam for purchasing property in Ontario great choice!



Author's Response:

thanks babe!!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 1:14 AM Title: HOMECOMING

I'd say heart - she oughta pull a Tesshu. Punch through the ribcage and rip it still-beating from his chest!! A so far! ;-)



Author's Response:

d'ya reckon? It might be his balls!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 12:03 AM Title: WILD HONEY

A few pints?! Watch yourself, drinking that much brandy in one go isn't safe!!! A-.



Author's Response:

yes, I really did tie one on that evening!

thanks for your reviews. it's great to have a new reader giving me feedback.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 11:54 PM Title: WHOLE LOTTA LOVE

Gotten this far now - still going strong. B+ for the last part I'd say - too fluffy for A's!!



Author's Response:

fluffy eh? hmmmm....

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 7:31 PM Title: SOMETHING SO RIGHT

Really liking this story so far, I'd say anywhere from B to A-...? Also, WB Yeats is no longer under copyright. Many authors from the 1800's and even some from the very early 1900's are now out of copyright. It expires under UK and/or Irish law approx. 20 years after death, if I remember correctly - anyone want to be more precise?



Author's Response:

thanks Noble. I had a feeling it was something like that but I got spooked about copyright on the other site!

thank you for taking the time to review and I hope you continue to enjoy the journey.  it has some way to go before you catch up - hope you stick with it. 

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:57 PM Title: HOMECOMING

That was gorgeous, it was so full of life and upbeat I loved it!!! You have a real talent for pulling together the touching family moments. And thanks for all the Bella and Edward moments I really do love that couple.

So "Thing" is in the next chapter! Great I've been waiting for this bastard to get his just desserts. I can't wait to see what Liam and Yolanda have instore ofr him, this is going to be so good!!

Bye the way as much as I love your story, I know Real Life gets in the way sometimes and it really is more important to take of RL business, your readers will alwasy undersatnd and be here waiting.



Author's Response:

cheers my darling.  am enjoying a little "Liam" time of my own!!

Reviewer: Saralee Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 9:39 PM Title: PROLOGUE

Ah, good to know. You're right, no Cullens no Twilight.

Humm... That doesn't surprise me that Yolanda is based on a real life friend of yours. I now have read the first 10 chapters (including the prologue) and what I noticed was that either you have medical knowledge or you know someone with experiences. I don't want to say I'm thankful that you know someone (I am not!), but that (your deliberations) gives your story even more depth. I wish your friend good luck and you a lot of endurance!



Author's Response:

Thanks again Sara.  Yes, between us, Yo and I have significant experience of medical treatments! 

Thanks esp for the good wishes which I have passed on.

Reviewer: Saralee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 9:12 PM Title: SCARY MONSTERS

Ohoh... You chose Emmett as another narrator... He's one of my favorite characters, what means I'm critical when I read stories with or/and of him...

Rosalie made me laugh more than once. I see her in the woods, very beautiful, her bright hair in the wind and with her hands on her hips. And how she makes Emmett checking on Yolanda if she is still alive or something. Oooh.. "Big fella" ...

Emmett calls his Rose Rose, I like that! When I think about them as a couple or when I think about their family Rosalie is always called as "Rose". It's just a small clue though it shows how they feel about each other. A story needs lots of small details to be good! And this is one of those details. *thumbs up*

The fact that Edward can read minds is hard sometimes and working with such a tough content (Twilight-vampires can hear, smell, see... more...) is sometimes difficult. You gave us a hint that you can handle it when Emmett and Rosalie had a closer look on Yolanda and her surroundings. And of course Edward! He heard about their arrival and therefore they awaited them.

On the whole I loved this chapter. It's how I picture Emmett and Rosalie. I hope for a lot of further chapters with his POV. *biggrin*



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to do such a detailed review Sara.  I did try and respond the other day but my computer crashed. duh...

hope you continue to enjoy the story and are having a nice Easter.

Reviewer: bwen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:53 PM Title: RETURN

Another great chapter!!! It seems there is more energy and adventure in your writing lately. Don't get me wrong your writing is always wonderful, but there just seems to be some additional spice to it these days. Maybe its just me it is 15 degrees celsius today and the sun is glorious.



Author's Response:

thank you so much sweetheart - you are such an ace supporter, and I value your judgement implicitly.  don't ever shy away from telling me when I'm dropping the ball, ok?

good news is that the latest chemo round has halted things for Yo pro tem. she remains very poorly though.

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