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Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 3:40 AM Title: Edward's Rape

The details you put into this story is so fantastic.  How you came up with them and where I have no idea but if I had a choice I would of loved to live there. 

Reviewer: lamelurker Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 5:40 PM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!

Just finished another reread and wanted to thank you for writing and sharing your story! I wish there were more scifi twifics out there. Thanks again!

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2016 9:26 PM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!

In all the years I have been reading and the thousands of stories that I have read, this story is still my absolute favorite! I have read it so many times that I practically know it by heart. I wish there was a pdf version with all the pictures that I could download to save to my ipad and kindle so I didn't have to get on the internet. I live up in the mountains and we don't have very good service up here. I have read everything you have written here and on fanfiction as well, I love your stories and would love to read more if you decide to write anything in the future. thank you again for sharing this amazing story.

Reviewer: ejclever Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2016 4:15 PM Title: Rosalie and Royce; Alice, Bella, and Rosalie's Past

I love how you made an effort to produce the news article in a newspaper. Awesome idea! Good job!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2015 6:53 PM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!

'squee' AWESOME!!! story ;) i had trepidations at first because of the domward part (prefer dommella) but you did an excellent job with not making him be too much ;) i LOVED ALL the characters ;) and the blog is awesome as well ;) thanks for sharing this on here ;D

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 11:09 AM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!

Great story and fun to read! Edward and Bella are always good together, no matter what planet they live on! I enjoyed all your review replies, too, thank you! Let me know if you ever decide to extend your one-shots, I have you favorited!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the story and I appreciate all the reviews!  I have considered a zombie story, since there aren't too many of those out there and only a few are complete.  There have been a lot of vampire stories and I just don't know if I can make it unique enough for people to want to read it.  We'll see.  Have a great day!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 10:54 AM Title: Daily Life, Discussions, M & D Home, Baby Shower/Birthday, and Lil' Lovin'

Very few problems left to solve because the council has pretty much thought of all that is needed for the good of the community. This place sounds rather ideal with everyone caring for and helping out all the inhabitants. Small towns have always been like that, maybe with a few flaws, but close!



Author's Response:

Small town life is a dying breed.  Cell phones, computers, TV, all keep folks in the house and isolated.  Face to face gatherings are becoming a thing of the past.  I can't say much, as I sit here and type on my computer....lol.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 10:24 AM Title: Interrogations, Lil' Lovin'

Alec seems to have the brains in that family and the good sense also! Jane sure has no loyalty to her own brother! This whole scheme is just stupid and evil and Aro needs to leave them alone!



Author's Response:

I see Jane as too sadistic to really care for anybody.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 10:09 AM Title: Don't Mess with the Faeries!

There must be crazy in that family and Tanya and Irina have a real bad case of it! Good thing there were faeries to protect everyone from Alec and Jane! Nothing like a foiled kidnapping to spice up a birthday party!



Author's Response:

LOL! Usually crazy runs in families.  You aren't going to fall asleep at any of my shindings.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 9:54 AM Title: Edward's Birthday and Trouble

I would put money on it being the hit on Didyme, staged by Aro and Caius, and probably Jane and Alec!



Author's Response:

You are very accurate.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 9:39 AM Title: Outtake: Felix and Bellona Meet - Read A/N

It sounded just about right to me, them being cat-like humanoids!



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 9:19 AM Title: Movies, Lovin', Ultrasound, Garden Time, & Drecks

Bella will find something unique for Edward's birthday gift, I'm sure.



Author's Response:

I had to really think on that one.  What do you give someone that has everything or can just go out and purchase it.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 8:12 AM Title: Change of Plans and Tour of Homes

Really an excellent solution to Jasper and Alice and Cassandra and babies! Bella is a smart woman! I'll bet I know who Marcus was yelling at on his sat! That darn Aro, or maybe Caius? Charlie sure seems to be settled in and happy with Sue and with his job.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Marcus wasn't gone long before they started sniffing him out.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 7:45 AM Title: Family Meeting, Talks, Lil' Lovin'

Good thing Alice has those visions, that would have been tragic if she had died in childbirth! It will be kind of like the old Mormon multiple wives household. At least they can have children and all be happy and healthy!



Author's Response:

I tried the concept and got such a bad reaction from the readers, I pulled the idea.  I had in mind the old testament or Mormon mindset.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 7:03 AM Title: Felix and Bellona

Felix and Bellona are kind of intimidating so it's no wonder Addy was scared at first. The whole bunch sure got a shelter up for the newly mated pair in a hurry. It was pretty funny that they destroyed  the clotheslines and all their clothing!



Author's Response:

I imagined them as large creatures, even bigger than Twilighters.  Felix is supposed to be huge anyway.  So, yeah, they could do some damage fighting for dominance.  As for the clothesline, I think I have a sense of humor that shows up occasionally. :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 6:44 AM Title: Ladies Discussion and Lil' Bit of Lovin'

All this passing back and forth of enzymes between mates is a fascinating phenomenon! Good to know Aro and Caius are their usual awful selves, and Felix and Demetri are still loyal to Marcus.



Author's Response:

As for enzymes, a lot of my ideas just popped up in my head while writing the story.  Now I know what writers mean when they say the characters talk to them.  They really do....I don't sound crazy at all....lol.

I had to divide the guard up between the good and bad.  Jane can never be good in my book.  She is too sadistic.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 6:21 AM Title: Matching up Mates

Danger and intrigue come to Forkington, how exciting! As long as Bella is in no danger, that is. More matings and an imprint, plus more workers for Charlotte's restaurant.



Author's Response:

Bella will be able to protect herself, don't worry.  Plus, she has plenty of bodyguards.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 5:10 AM Title: Retrieval and Arrival of the New Girls

Thank heavens for Edward and Jasper getting those females out of the awful conditions they were in!



Author's Response:

Yeah, it was not realistic to think that all communities would be as civilized as Forkington.  But Cullen and Co. only have control over their own community.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 4:51 AM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding

Now we can look forward to the new arrivals and maybe Mike will find a mate! Marcus and Didyme make a nice addition to the community and they will be so much happier raising their coming child among friends!



Author's Response:

I think I pretty much paired everyone up.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chat with Friends and Galleos Jewelry

I love hot fudge sundaes and my husband likes banana splits, so those pictures made my mouth water! I hope Edward does send that harpy Jessica to another community, it would serve her right!



Author's Response:

I am a banana split person myself.  'Bout made myself sick as a kid because mamma said I had to eat the whole thing if I ordered one.  Needless to say, I didn't order one very often.  Ice cream is still my favorite guilty pleasure.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 3:59 AM Title: Morning Outdoor Lovin' and Night Out on the Town

Emmett is never going to quit teasing Edward because he always gets a reaction!



Author's Response:

It is so hard not to react to someone teasing you.  I have been told to ignore someone before.  It is easier said than done.  So I was teased a lot.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 2:21 AM Title: Stay Pharmacy, Family Dinner, and Lil' Lovin'

It sure is nice of the grandparents to give the newlyweds a weekend  to themselves. Now the brothers and mates willhave a little date night!



Author's Response:

It is nice to have a responsible set of grandparents.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 2:02 AM Title: Didyme, Ultrasound, and Baby Shower

That was a wonderful get together for the whole community to celebrate the twins, as first babies they were more than welcome! Very nice of Marcus to thank Bella  for her befriending of his mate!



Author's Response:

Marcus can be an upbeat guy, when he isn't suffering from a lost mate.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 1:32 AM Title: Makenna's Babies, Dinner, Esme's Past

Poor Esme, she sure had a rotten time of it and Carlisle was the perfect remedy for that life! It's great that Rosalie is gaining the trust of the family and especially Emmett. Bella is so happy with her circumstances, I hope you aren't going to change that!



Author's Response:

Bella and Alice are very content and will stay that way, Rosalie is finally coming to her senses.  You know the saying, grow where your planted.  It might not be ideal for the "women's libbers", but I guess they have no place on Twilight.  They will have to stay back on Earth. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 1:07 AM Title: Imprints, Ultrasound, Night Out on the Town

Jessica better get her head screwed on straight before Leah phases and removes it for her! The ultrasound sure made the family happy, even Rosalie, who wants to be pregnant just like Bella!



Author's Response:

LOL, all of them will hopefully get there someday.  This is fiction.  As for Leah, I would definitely protect my property.  You see who I have portraying him?  I would fight for him....lol.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 12:41 AM Title: Charlie's Back, Lil' Lovin', Bonfire

The baby clothes are darling! I seem to remember making a few items like those, though it's been over fifty years! I even crocheted clothes for my daughter's Barbies! Boy that was fun! It's nice of Bella to share her sewing machines with the other gals.



Author's Response:

I have crocheted baby booties for charity, but never actually made anything for my own kids and grandkids.  I could never get a handle on knitting.  At least with barbies and small dolls, it wouldn't take much time or materials to make something. But again, it is something I have never done.  I actually have several containers of yarn and several sets of crochet needles, but couldnt' tell you where they actually are.  

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 12:13 AM Title: Carlisle's POV and Building Meeting

I thought it was interesting that all this growth is going on and everyone is busy, busy!



Author's Response:

It was years in the making and came to fruition when Carlisle's boys were ready to mate.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 11:53 PM Title: Bonding Ceremony, Meet the Mates, Hot Lovin'

I had to laugh when Bella's power manifested itself in keeping Jessica and Lauren away from Edward and Jasper. That should teach the sluts to stay away from the Cullen men! Now that mates and imprints are on Twilight there should be more binding ceremonies and more babies, yay!



Author's Response:

Yes, the floral and ceremony planning folks should be making plenty of money.  Also, need to get the hospital built to accommodate all the new mommies.  

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 10:53 AM Title: Homelife, Little Bit of Lovin', Training Center

Good to see Jessica and Lauren are as slutty as ever and Edward and Jasper as immune  to them as ever! Angels is usually always Bella's friend, and I see by the pictures, she gets a really cute Ben!



Author's Response:

Oh yeah, Jessica and Lauren will probably always be on the b***ch brigade.  They remind me of my own schoolmates.  

Angela is quiet and unasuming, very similar to Bella.  Ben wasn't in the films, so I searched for a good-looking asian depiction.  At the time this was written, the last movie was not fully developed and all the cast had not been chosen.  So several characters got my own interpretation.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 10:08 AM Title: Family Time and Emmett's POV

That is a really cool chess set! I am very hopeful that the enzyme exchange has helped both Emmett and Rosalie better understand each other! She realizes now what a good guy she has and wants to hold on to him.



Author's Response:

The chess set was found on my excursion of finding other worldly/futuristic looking products.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 9:43 AM Title: Victoria's Staying, Rosalie's Bound, Family Lunch

Guess Rosalie has finally come to her senses after a really good scare! She knows now that this isn't the worst thing to ever happen to her!



Author's Response:

Yes, good ole Rosalie has seen the light and is ready to cooperate.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 9:14 AM Title: The Hunt is On!

Don't know what punishment Rosalie is in for, but maybe Emmett still wants her, regardless. I'm rather pleased James is dead, so he can't terrorize Bella or anyone else ever again!



Author's Response:

Yeah, the wicked worlock is dead!  It's too early in the morning 'cause I'm making Wizard of Oz comaparisons.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 8:51 AM Title: Rosalie, What are You Doing?

Rosalie is a smart girl, except in this one instance. Wisdom came too late to do her any good! Sounds like James still wants Bella, too which is just creepy. I feel so sad for poor long-suffering Emmett. I hope they get Rosalie back before something bad happens to her!



Author's Response:

She just needs the bejesus scared out of her to get her head on straight.  I wouldn't let anything too tramatic happen to her, she is crazy enough as it is.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 7:48 AM Title: Charilie's POV, Clinic Time, Little Bit of Lovin'

So the community is growing and more females are on the way. That will no doubt mean more bindings and more new residents of Twilight. Who knows, maybe even Sue and Charlie might have a baby!



Author's Response:

LOL, I don't think I got that far.  It has been a while since I wrote this.  But yes, since the lifespan of everyone is so long....the window to conceive is longer than on earth.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 7:14 AM Title: Breakfast and House Tour with Charlie, Town Council Meeting

I guess they have all the business taken care of, though I wonder why Charlie had no questions.



Author's Response:

He is still new to this environment, so he just listened.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 6:45 AM Title: Blue Sparks and Addy Has a New Granddaddy

How sweet Charlie was when he met Addy and she asked if he could be her granddaddy! Sounds to me like there is going to be hustle and bustle going on, with Emmett and Rosalie's binding, Charlie and Sue next and Bella and Edward's child! Busy, busy!



Author's Response:

Can't let any grass grow under their feet.  We still have plenty of excitement to go.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 6:18 AM Title: Rosalie's Dress and Charlie's Here

Charlie is just great, I love his character! Boy, has he got a lot to learn about Twilight! I think, by the way you ended the chapter, Charlie may be about to meet his mate!



Author's Response:

Yep, he meets her in the next chapter.  

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 5:47 AM Title: A Little Afternoon Delight and Sleep Aid

Loved the interior of the general store! I have actually been in a couple very similar ones. It's amazing all the diverse merchandise they carry, truly everything from A to Z!



Author's Response:

We still had a few open when I was a kid.  We even had one that had an old wooden floor, a pot bellied stove, and a little post office set up in the corner that had those old fashioned post office boxes.  I took my cues from that one and the one on Little House on the Prairie.  But there is no Mrs. Olson....lol.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 5:28 AM Title: Shopping, More Shopping, Stupid Human Males

I see having body guards is really necessary for Bella's safety! She never knows when some fool boy will try to grab her, or at least think lustful thoughts of her! No wonder Edward goes ballistic all the time! Good thing she got her shopping done so she can go home where it's safe!



Author's Response:

LOL, I made the guys a little more forward here....females are supposed to be scarce.  So if you see one, it makes you want to grab her.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 5:01 AM Title: Jasper Explains and Smores

Poor little Addym what a gooey mess to have in your fur! I'll bet she was still cute, though! Lots to get ready, Rosalie's dress for the binding ceremony, all the preperations for that. Then Bella is looking forward seeing her dad again. They will have a lot to catch up , not seeing each other for four years or more.



Author's Response:

I wouldn't want to be the one to clean her up.....lol

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 4:34 AM Title: Working too Hard and a Day for Deliveries

Had to chuckle at the pregnancy hormones! Glad all the fuss wasn't anything too serious! It was kind of startling to have this chapter end the way it did!



Author's Response:

I like to get dramatic every now and then.  Don't want folks fallin' asleep reading my story....lol.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 4:13 AM Title: Grillin' Out and Addy's Bath and Bedtime

Addy sure seems like an easy child to deal with, but then this is fiction, isn't it? I hope Esme is correct that Bella being a faen, she should have no trouble bearing a child. I suppose her added strength would be a help there.



Author's Response:

Addy is based off my son.  I gave her his personality and he was a very easy child to raise. He is now a real estate banker that is married to a lawyer.

Yes, Bella is a faen.  She will need all the help she can get, having a baby with someone Edward's size.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 3:50 AM Title: You Have Value and Addy's Excited

At last, the impetus for Rosalie to mate with Emmett, competition for a baby! Who knew it would take that to spur her on? Everyone seems to be happy at the news of Bella's pregnancy, from Addy right on up the line!



Author's Response:

Almost everyone loves babies.  Remember in the books that Rose wanted a baby so bad....so that worked it's way right in.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 3:12 AM Title: Hot Steamy Night of Lovin', You're Having My Baby

I seem to remember lots of babies coming nine months after the wedding, back in the day. Good thing Bella is prepared for overprotective Daddyward!



Author's Response:

My parents were farmers and they timed the births to happen during the winter.  So that she didn't lose any field time.  This happened many years ago, but she still worked.  In the old days and in other households, if the wife was only a housewife....there was no reason to wait to get pregnant.  The more the merrier.  I don't know why my momma had to work, because my daddy's mom never worked in the field a day in her life.  She was one of those that stayed barefoot and pregnant.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 12:49 AM Title: Rosalie Chooses, Clotheslines, Ride Through Forkington

Wouldn't you know that Mike has vile thoughts about Bella and Alice? He must have a death wish also! The tour of town and the dairy was a lot of fun, especially for Addy.



Author's Response:

Having so many from the same town abducted may seem a little contrived.  Hind-sight is 20/20.  The good folks of Forks would really think there was an alien invasion.  But at the same time I wanted to work as many of the original characters in as possible.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 12:15 AM Title: Confinement Chambers and EPOV Lemon

Great, now James is obsessed with Bella, the way Tanya is obsessed with Edward! I guess when Edward has to go back to work full time, that means the honeymoon is over!Bella will be busy caring for their home and Addy and looking forward to seeing her father! Can't wait to see what Charlie thinks of this planet his daughter ended up living on!



Author's Response:

You know what they say....if it is something you can't have, you always want it more.  They both want something they can't have.  Charlie will be there soon.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 11:54 PM Title: Movie, Music, Emmett's and Rosalie's House, Claiming Bella

I hope this short time in Emmett's house may help convince Rosalie to accept him as her mate. I'm thinking she is just being obstinate for appearances sake now. Wonder what Edward is about to share concerning the prisoners?



Author's Response:

Rosalie still has a way to go.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 11:18 PM Title: Edward's Special Place and Addy's Tea Party

Bella being able to talk to animals, especially unicorns and wolves, is really cool! She and Edward had a lovely time at the cabin, except for breaking the bed. Now their room is soundproofed, hopefully, and Addy can come back home!



Author's Response:

While I was doing my research, there are "rumors" that certain fairies and elves can talk to animals.  Since we are talking about fairy tale lore here...lol.  I am mainly Irish/Scottish, so I guess it is in my blood to be curious about them.  I just incorporated that into the story.  I had no clue there were so many types of elves.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 11:00 PM Title: Taking a Peek, Lunch with the Family, and Get-Away Cottage

Someone is going to have to build or order a new bed. Since Bella's powers as a faen were released, she and Edward seem to be growing stronger.Alice and Jasper sound like they are happy in their new status, but poor Emmett and Rosalie are still in limbo.



Author's Response:

Yes, they will have to order extra sturdy beds and extra strength sheets.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 8:52 PM Title: I'm a What? and Exploring the Books

Very nice, that Bella is a faen with accompanying physical improvements! Even better that she will be reunited with her father! Neat way to get them together, I thought!



Author's Response:

I wanted the story to be similar to the original with vampires having enhanced senses.  So, I made a world where I could keep the enhancements.  I tried to keep it sort of believable.  Because some stories make the characters so invincible, I can't wrap my head around it.  

I like Charlie's character, so I try to integrate him into her world when possible.  Her mom is debatable, I can go either way.  I wasn't very favorable to her in this story.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 9:50 AM Title: Morning Lovin'

Bella ought to be completely scented with her mate's essence now! The guy is nothing, if not thorough!



Author's Response:

Again, having to have a looksy at the chapters.  I have some pics missing.  I fixed my blogs, but didn't consider the pics I had here.  Gonna have to correct that.  As for Edward.....gotta love him possessive and dominant.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 9:22 AM Title: Honeymoon Night, Binding Completion

It must have been fun dreaming up the twilight physiology and sexual practices! I had fun reading about them, anyway! When Carlisle showed up to see if Bella was safe I couldn't help but chuckle. How is that for embarassing, having your dad check up on you on your wedding night?



Author's Response:

This is an animalistic planet, so I let my imagination run wild.  And no, noboby wants their daddy to show up after you just had sex....lol.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 8:57 AM Title: Reception Part Three

Something permanent needs to be done with Tanya, she's just going to continue to be a danger to Bella if she's not stopped! All in all, this has been a hell of a day!



Author's Response:

Hey, they will be good and hyped up for the wedding night....lol.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 8:36 AM Title: Reception Part Two

What did James think he was going to do with Edward Cullen's mate? Even with Victoria's help, he didn't get very far and is now paying for his crime!



Author's Response:

Maybe, he was dropped as a baby...lol.  Too cocky, as usual.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 8:22 AM Title: Reception Part One

Sure, just as calm prevails, some fool has laid hands on Edward's mate! Now we are going to see fireworks, I'll bet! I would also wager that Peter wants to tell Edward something about Tanya!



Author's Response:

Well, Emmett was one fool....as usual too exurberant.  But now it is time to bring in the other bad guys.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 7:52 AM Title: First Taste

That was different. What amazing control Edward has! Now they get to go make nice for the photographer and the guests!



Author's Response:

I love a mature Edward, somebody has got to keep the schedule going.  Pssst...having to go back and cheat and reread some of the chapters.  It has been a while since I wrote them :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 7:36 AM Title: Binding Ceremony

Okay, so far, so good! It's very similar to a wedding on Earth, with a lot less of a role for the female. The fang thing doesn't seem to have bothered Bella either!



Author's Response:

Well that sleep didn't last too long, due to a granddaughter who took a potty break and woke the cat up, who then thought is was time to get up.  I will have to have a nap later.  Back to story.....Hey, fangs can be sexy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 7:03 AM Title: Pre-Ceremony and Tanya

Sure glad they locked up crazy Tanya! Good, too, that Edward calmed Bella's fears and she and Alice are back on track, going down the aisle to their respective mates!



Author's Response:

Glad you are still enjoying reading it.  I think it's time to call it a night.  I will respond to any more of your reviews tomorrow.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 6:34 AM Title: Meet Addy, Meet Jane and Alec, House Tour

Addy is darling and all this prep is zipping right along. Here's hoping Tanya doesn't manage to mess up all this binding ceremony! Love the house they will share, too!



Author's Response:

Don't hold ya breath....trouble is ahead.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 6:09 AM Title: Introduction to Adanna Esme, I Have a Daughter

So, not only with Bella be bound to Edward, but become the mother of his two year old little girl! That's quite a lot to take in!



Author's Response:

She will have help.  Remember the family lives within walkin' distance, just like the old days.  We still have some houses standing that you can tell several generations lived in them.  They have seperate intrances with their own front porches.  Many hands make light work.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 6:00 AM Title: Edward's Rape

What else? She's no doubt pregnant with Edward's child, and he had no say in it whatsoever!



Author's Response:

No, he didn't.  Be glad you are reading it completed.  It caused quite a stir when I was putting up the chapters.  At least I posted every few days, so the wait wasn't long.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 3:07 AM Title: Intro to the Denali's, Tanya's Seduction

Sounds to me like Tanya got what she wanted even though Edward wasn't interested. She probably drugged him and raped him. People don't realize that it can happen to males, just as it can to females!



Author's Response:

A guy's body can have a mind of it's own and respond even when the attention is unwanted.  Heck, a guy can be attacked by another male and not even be turned on.  Most men are probably too ashamed to report it, just like some females don't want to report it.  Rape victims used to be treated like they asked for it, I don't know how it is now.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 2:52 AM Title: Esme's Sex Talk, Finish Gowns

Bella is the innocent, soon to be blushing bride, for sure! It looks like perhaps Rosalie is coming around to accepting Emmett as her mate. The pictures of the garden, fountain and deck are great!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 2:34 AM Title: Rosalie and Royce; Alice, Bella, and Rosalie's Past

There you go, Miss Rose! If you had stayed on earth, you could have been the one in poor Karen's shoes! Maybe life on Twilight won't seem so bad now? Emmett sure wants her for his mate and will probably treat her quite well, it seems to run in the family!



Author's Response:

It will take a lot more to convince Rose though.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 1:48 AM Title: Tattoos and Gowns

I hope Rose will be receptive to her friends persuasions, so futher punishment won't be necessary! I'm keeping an open mind about the tatoos and microchips. So far the girls seem to be comfortable with what's being done to and for them. All except Rosalie, of course!



Author's Response:

You think Rose will give up that easily?......Nope, sorry.  She is one stubborn gal.  As for the tattoos and microchips, at least I made it painless.  I know, I know....in real life, that is one thing I wouldn't want done to me.  I hate needles.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 1:32 AM Title: Walked Grounds, Met Emily, Began Gown

Sounds like Rose is going to tough it out, even on bread and water rations!I can just imagine why Edward pulled a face when mentioning Tanya's name! She is never good news where he is concerned!



Author's Response:

I don't like Tanya's character...period.  No means no and she doesn't seem to comprehend that.  Been there in Edward's position in real life.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2014 10:58 PM Title: Edward's POV of 1st Day

Loved the pictures of Ocicats, and I think I want one! Actually, my daughter is the cat lady in the family, so I have a grand-cat, and he's pretty cute! Edward seems a bit nervous, for a thirty-five year old, must be the anticipation! This is quite the place you have dreamed up!



Author's Response:

They are actually a breed of cat and they are quite pricey....for a cat.  Since I usually end up with my cats free.  

Edward has led a fairly sheltered life, with the exception of a couple of bumps in the road.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2014 10:42 PM Title: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

Poor Emmett, he surely will have his hands full, if Rosalie continues to be obstinate. So far the rules don't seem too onerous. I suppose the years in the training facility help with that. It's a good sign that Bella feels that spark when Edward touches her.



Author's Response:

Most would be conditioned, except for those like Rosalie.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2014 10:28 PM Title: He Picked Me

Why am I nor surprised it is Rosalie that is about to stir up things?



Author's Response:

I tried to stay true to her personality and I imagined how she would react in this situation.

Reviewer: mirveil Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 12:20 AM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!

I have really enjoyed this story  and I'l read it again in the future

Reviewer: taintedangel30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2013 5:28 PM Title: Introduction to Adanna Esme, I Have a Daughter

This is a very interesting story. I love it!

Reviewer: GSRgirlforever Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 12:47 AM Title: The New Age Begins

Made you a little something because I love this story soooo much!

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Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2013 1:52 AM Title: Change of Plans and Tour of Homes

""I don't know, I just wanted her to stay with the family. I see Jasper and I both becoming attached to her and not wanting her to leave. But if she finds a mate, she will want to live with him and she will leave us. The kids will be attached to her too and I didn't want to see them unhappy," she sniffled out."

 

This is pretty selfish of her. She deserves to have a mate of her own. Who is she to bar a woman from her own happiness to be a mans second choice in life.

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2013 1:44 AM Title: Family Meeting, Talks, Lil' Lovin'

Can you explain a bit about a mans relationship with his breeder? Does he love her as his mate? Does he scent her as well? Does he have sexual relations with her even if not trying to get pregnant? Does she have to play second fiddle to the mans first mate? Is the breeder even considered a mate at all? Just wanting more information.

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2013 10:55 PM Title: Movie, Music, Emmett's and Rosalie's House, Claiming Bella

"“Come on, let's go have a good soak in the tub; and dinner is on me tonight.  Tell me what you are hungry for, and I will order in for us.  I am still not ready to get you out in public just yet; it is still too soon,” he said."

 

Is this because he thinks she might run still or because he's just not ready to share her yet?

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2013 8:48 AM Title: Binding Ceremony

I'm confused as to how they can consider their mates slaves, yet still claim to love an honor them. You can't honor someone while keeping them prisoner. If the girls had willingly gave up their lives to live as their mates slaves, that would be one thing, but this was all done against their will.

"“Do you understand and agree to everything that Edward has said today?” Carlisle asked."

Does this question really matter? They don't seem to honestly get a choice. What if the girls said no? Do they then move on to the nonconsensual rape ceremony?

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2013 7:39 AM Title: Edward's Rape

So the rape of a man is a big deal, but the rape of a human woman to force her to bond when she doesn't want to is a-okay? They don't see how she'll feel violated as well? And if she doesn't due to whatever is in their expulsions, that the only reason she's not mentally broken is because they've essentially drugged/brainwashed her?

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2013 7:33 AM Title: Intro to the Denali's, Tanya's Seduction

"So Rosalie was slowly starting to realize that life on Earth would not have been peaches and cream if she had remained there, instead of being extracted."

Except the fact she'd still have her family that loved her and that she loved in return. She'd also still have her freedom and ability to follow her dreams. You make her seem shallow and vain, that economic hardship was all it took to give all that up.

I don't mind Dominant men and submissive women, I enjoy it a great deal. However I do not like the non-consensuality of all this. These women have been kidnapped and sold like cattle plain and simple. To the point the men see no problem with raping a women to try to force a bond with them. I can't get behind that and it bothers me Bella and Alice just take it in stride. Even if their lives on Earth were poor, that doesn't mean they should be condoning what is happening. I'm sure there were other girls taken that had perfectly wonderful lives.

Reviewer: PercyJacksonFan1997 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 12:56 AM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding

:). I'm using my iPod. 

Reviewer: SvassGudinna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 10:08 PM Title: Charlie's Back, Lil' Lovin', Bonfire

I am really enjoying your story.  It is quite unique and I love the fact that it is so different and that the wolves/elves are friends with the Cullens.  I don't miss that type of angst with the Jacob/Bella drama one bit.  I also really enjoy that you made Bella a half human/half faen.  I would like to know how this effects her lifespan in years and also how old do the Twilghters live to be in age?

Thanks again for a great new story.

D.

Reviewer: nanlovestwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2012 9:53 AM Title: Daily Life, Discussions, M & D Home, Baby Shower/Birthday, and Lil' Lovin'

Are you still planning to write the sequal? I hope you do as its a great story!

Reviewer: Angela Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2012 2:31 PM Title: Matching up Mates

Meu deus o casais pegaram fogo em, amei cada pedacinho. (PORTUGUÊS)

Reviewer: Angela Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2012 12:40 PM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding

Olá. Bem Amo de paixão esta sua historia, você descreve um Edward tão dominante e ao mesmo tempo tão amoroso e carinhoso. Esta versão da Bella mais submissa também ficou show. E a diversidade de especies que tem. fico imaginando como seria viver assim rsrsrrsrrs.

Bem desculpe por não ter comentado antes.

Um beijos e parabéns pelo trabalho.

Angela -  Brasi - Português. 

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 7:54 AM Title: Matching up Mates

Another great chapter!!! 

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 7:44 AM Title: Retrieval and Arrival of the New Girls

awesome chappy!! 

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 6:15 AM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!

I loved, loved, LOVED this story!!! Can NOT wait for the sequel!!!!!!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2012 5:22 AM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding

Can't get enough of this world you've created! Awesome chapter. 

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2012 5:15 AM Title: Chat with Friends and Galleos Jewelry

Hmmm I wonder if it's a boy or girl. Great chapter! 

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 5:03 AM Title: Morning Outdoor Lovin' and Night Out on the Town

Loved it!! 

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 4:48 AM Title: Stay Pharmacy, Family Dinner, and Lil' Lovin'

Great chapter =)

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 4:37 AM Title: Didyme, Ultrasound, and Baby Shower

Hey! *waves* I'm back. What a month, between RL craziness and major laptop issues it was nuts!

 Great chapter! On to the next!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 3:41 AM Title: Makenna's Babies, Dinner, Esme's Past

Didyme is beautiful! I can't wait til the baby arrives! Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I liked looking through pictures to determine the different characters. Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 3:30 AM Title: Imprints, Ultrasound, Night Out on the Town

Yay Rose! Awesome chapter! lovin' the movie theater!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2011 5:26 AM Title: Charlie's Back, Lil' Lovin', Bonfire

I wonder if Jessica has something up her sleeve. Hmmm...

Great chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Never trust Jessica, at least in my stories...lol. Thanks again! I really appreciate the review and rating.

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2011 5:18 AM Title: Carlisle's POV and Building Meeting

It was definitely NOT a boring chapter! I enjoyed it!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I am detail oriented; and I sometimes worry that folks will get bored with the details.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2011 5:09 AM Title: Bonding Ceremony, Meet the Mates, Hot Lovin'

Yay Sue and Charlie are officially mates. I'm happy that Bella stood up and protected her mate. Awesome! And the lemon was hot! Great chapter! Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it; and yes, Bella is going to protect what is hers. Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:58 AM Title: Homelife, Little Bit of Lovin', Training Center

Lauren and Jessica can't control themselves, can they? lol I adore Angela! Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Lauren and Jessica remind me of some of the girls I went to school with and it is easy for me to keep them in character. Angela and Bella have similar personalities; I really like them. Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:43 AM Title: Family Time and Emmett's POV

Hi *waves*

I found some time to read. I reread some previous chapters to refresh my memory, it's been too long.

Great chapter as always!



Author's Response:

I have to do that a lot when an author takes a while to update. My memory isn't that good anyway....lol. Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2011 9:56 PM Title: The New Age Begins

This sounds interesting. I like aliens;) Your pictures were great!

Author's Response:

Thanks, I hope you enjoy it! Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: AnthousaVamplover9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 4:14 PM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!

please write soon..PLEASE..
Anthousa(Vamplover9),

xo xo



Author's Response:

Right now, I am just betaing a couple of stories on FanFiction. Hopefully, I will get the writing bug back. Thanks for the review!

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