Is it any wonder Alice never could remember what her human life was before her change? If it was anything like the way you have portrayed, it's a real blessing to have forgotten. No doubt Jasper's face and visions of their future was the rope she held on to for dear life.

Fanfiction is so fail, but don't worry, before I read this, I buried the website in bricks.

Where do I start? I don't like reviewing here..it's a silly website (sorry TWCS) and barely anyone goes here, but I will review because FFnet is George and it won't be on Twilighted for a while..so I will have to review there another time :P

Anyway.. I loved it, I know it is a stuck record from me..but I did. So much Jalice, and it is very true to their love. His eyes were hers..now that totally makes sense when I read it in the OS. See, I knew that was all it would take for me to understand :)

The silent conversations they had..*jumps and claps*

I was waiting for the illusion to end though. Those nuns..bitches and the doctors need to be beaten themselves. They spread the word of God around as if they believe God would approve of what they were doing. Disgusting people. It's a bit much for them to be slapping, beating and spitting etc, but that's what they were like back then. Like I said, disgusting people.

The ending.. *sigh* It was perfect, and I like that it was an escape for her, even though when she goes back to her reality, things will be worse again :( Jasper will be there, one day, and when she wakes up after her transformation, she won't remember anything of her past. That is a blessing for her after reading this.

Sorry this review is so short :(

Just so you know, the contest has been pushed back another week because of all the problems with fanfiction.net :)