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Reviewer: kfoll Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

 If he loved her so much, why did he leave her stranded at the alter after the vows and then abuse her when she found him with his whore? Ridiculous.

 

Reviewer: nzjojo Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2017 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed reading this one. Even though it was written many years ago I've just found it. I wish it was longer. Thank you!

Reviewer: 4theloveofaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

I loved it!  Would make for a great multi-chapter fic.

Reviewer: shyshy1016 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2014 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

I was searching and searching for this on Fanfiction!!! I am so glad I found it!!!!

Reviewer: jasmin103093 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

i really like the story, wish that there was more

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

nice story and you did ok with the history part nice job

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

When you first gave Edward a voice, it brought tears to my eyes.

Reviewer: tracylk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2011 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

OH i LOVED it... good job!  Would like to see more of your work!

XoXo ~ Fangs

Reviewer: DaleStateShorty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2011 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my! This was exceptional! Loved the angst, drama, all round awesome story! :)

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

I liked this and I do not read many things that are set back in time too far.  But thanks for shairng this.  You are a very good writer~!

Reviewer: edwardbabymomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

I loved it!



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you, I'm pleased :') Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Rion Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

I liked it...

Author's Response:

I'm glad... ;) Thank you for the review :)

Reviewer: butzi1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story!!!!!! Why was Edward so gruel to her, when he loved her at first sight? It took him a long time to confess his love to her. Lucky Edward, Bella was able to forgive him.


 



Author's Response:

Thank you!! He was cruel to her because he wasa being hard on himself, he didn't know what to do with his feelings for such a young girl, and being a Duke, he was used to harshness in those days :) He is indeed lucky!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Brilliant plot bunny! Great job!



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you!! :-)

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-D

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

I agree that arranged marriages were common in time period but adultery is NEVER an 'okay thing to do' if you truly love the one you are with, no matter what time period it happens in. And Edward even told her that he did not love her when she walked in on him fucking another woman on their wedding night!!! Maybe he grew to love her but how or why would you ever trust someone like that? I think marriages that except adultery are marriages of show, not meaning. Thanks for sharing your story. It is well written, even if I don't agree with the content. :~)



Author's Response:

But you see, in those days it really was an 'okay thing to do' if you were a man, it would really be expected of you to be honest. I don't agree with at all, if a guy was to cheat on me his balls would be on my fire place. Edward told her he didn't love her to keep distance, he was cruel to her and even by the end of the piece she doesn't love him, but accepts her life with him. I like your term marriage with adultry are for show, well there Duke and Dutchess, there whole life would be paraded on show! Thank you for reviewing, I really loved hearing your views :-D

Reviewer: nikon342 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great Story! I loved it as a OS. However, I would have very much enjoyed it as a multi chapter as well. :)



Author's Response:

Ahh, you make me happy with your words ;-) I'm so pleased you liked it and feel honoured you'd like to see it as more that a one-shot, however at this time, all I can see is it staying the way it is :) Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved this one shot.  Historically totally wrong but such fun anyway.  

Its nice to see you here.  

 

PS I am so looking forward to A Rude Scotch being updated here.

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it :-) and you're completely right about it being historically wrong! I only had The Duchess film to go off of, Lol. However, I'm glad you liked it anyway :) Thanks for reviewing and I'm happy to be here ;) ARS will be here, so just keep looking :)

Reviewer: scareDcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! So well written ~ I wondered if it was her delayed reaction when saying her marriage vows that made him turn cold to her?

Can't wait for ARS :D You've made me sooo happy lol



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you for the compliment! I don't think it was the delayed reaction per say, but it was a catalyst. :-D I'm glad I've made you happy!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well you didn't name his wedding night woman but you did describe her. Well I thought it was a good period piece. Short 1 shot I am never sure how to review.

 

I like different situations, not so much of Edwards' dieing love for Bella. She trips alot bites her lip and can not answer. I am much happier with a stronger version.

 

I am glad she did not just jump up and declare her love for him. It takes time and after they way he treated her it will take longer.



Author's Response:

I didn't want any readers to associate a name with the woman, because she was unimportant in Bella's eyes, it was the fact that he'd had the nerve to cheat on her, on their wedding night, at that. I'm glad you liked it too :) I like a stronger Bella too, and I think she was quite strong in this piece. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: msaubreydrakegraham Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

i think that this is really good, what made me want to read more was the fact that Bella didn't like Edward's eyes at first...

 



Author's Response:

Haha, I'm glad you liked the 'eye hating', I just really wanted to get across that she didn't want to be there. Thank you for the review :)

Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yes, very reminiscent of The Duchess with Kiera Knightly minus the love part. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review :) I did watch this film for the first time three hours before I wrote it. Kiera Knightly was my inspiration, she was stunning in this film.

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very sweet & very nicely written! I do enjoy period pieces & I love how Edwards had crazy hair under his wig! So happy that he softened up for her!



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you for reviewing! I'm really pleased you liked it.

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