Date: 27 Feb 2018 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
This was really a sweet story!
Date: 27 Feb 2018 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
He came ready to care for them!!
Date: 27 Feb 2018 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 6
He's coming for you and the sweet baby!
Date: 27 Feb 2018 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well he is rich enough to find her.
Date: 27 Feb 2018 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
This story is so intense!
Date: 27 Feb 2018 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
Is edward man enough to go with her.
Date: 27 Feb 2018 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! I don't know how i haven't read this yet!
Date: 28 May 2017 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great to see o see their HEA. Thanks for an interesting story.
Date: 28 May 2017 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
So happy he was able to do what he needed.
Date: 28 May 2017 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 6
Just as long as he doesn't tell the wrong people where they are.
Date: 28 May 2017 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
He should follow her once he has his money.
Date: 28 May 2017 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 4
I hope she gets away safely.
Date: 28 May 2017 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
She should try to get her parental rights back.
Date: 28 May 2017 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
So is Bella leaving town? Seems a strange situation.
Date: 28 May 2017 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. Looking forward to reading more thanks.
Date: 10 Sep 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
love this chapter! can't wait to read more!
Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
hey
WOW great story!
I just can't believe Alice is a drug addict...
WOW they are a family now!
I love that!
bye
Lil
Date: 25 Jun 2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 8
Absolutely loved this story and the hea! :)
Date: 25 Jun 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
FINALLY! They're together, I was beginning to wonder what was the holdup with Edward not coming to get them when he'd had his birthday, all is well again :)
Date: 25 Jun 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
LOL come on now Bella! You had to know that Edward would do his best to try and locate you and his son! Despite Edward signing his rights away as EJ's father didn't mean that he didn't love him at all. I must admit though why has Bella not informed anyone that it was EJ's birthday? Or did she?
Date: 25 Jun 2011 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
Met hubby in the most unconventional of ways ... In my pajamas whilst my bestfriend at the time was desprately trying to charm him with her womanly wiles, while I was sat inside his house with his sister who is bestfriends with my own sister gabbing away about anything and everything. Hubby didnt'e give my bestfriend the green light she really wanted from him and he proceeded to flirt with me lmao. I was disgusted by him, I wasn't attracted to him in any way and I had a boyfriend at the time and I don't do cheating, it took hubby a long time to finally win me over and I ended my relationship in the same day hubby and I started dating, and now 15 years later we're still together LOL - I feel sorry for Edward in a way, but I can understand how Bella's feeling and the way she sees things, and Alice wasn't that bad after all despite her addiction.
Date: 25 Jun 2011 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
Never experienced a goodbye as such LOL, if anything I've always ended relationships when dating and I don't think my hubby would appreciate me trying to say goodbye forever LOL - And this chapter was absolutely heart breaking!
Date: 25 Jun 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
OH MY GAWD .. Nothing of any relevance to say here just wanted to leave a quick review before I move on to the next chapter, my gawd the anticipation of what could possibly happen is causing me to have angsty twitches LOL
Date: 25 Jun 2011 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
OH SHIT! Now this I certainly was not expecting to read : .. Their parents made Bella give up her child? Poor Bella, and OMFG they have goodtimes every Sunday? I hope Alice loves the crack : .. B/E have some communication problems, they obviously need to talk everything out and clarify what's up ... It's obvious Edward and Bella love each other *rolls eyes* .. Nice drama!
Date: 25 Jun 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMFG now this I was not expecting! Bella has goodtimes with Edward to get drugs for Alice? In the process Bella ended up pregnant with Edwards child who is 8 months old and Alice was taking care of the child for Bella whilst she did the deed to get the goods? I need to see what happens next LOL, so off to the next chapter!
Date: 04 May 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
like it so far, still trying to figure it out
Date: 29 Apr 2011 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
This was a short story but it was good. thank you for sharing it~!
Date: 27 Apr 2011 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
im excited t osee where this story goes
Date: 26 Apr 2011 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 8
this was the best chapter!!!!!!!!
Date: 23 Apr 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
happy dance :)
Date: 23 Apr 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
yay they are going to start their life together. cant wait to see waht is going to come next
Date: 19 Apr 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
he made a mistake by leaving her alone she wants to do the best for your baby
Author's Response:
Thank you for letting me read your thoughts :D
Date: 19 Apr 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG
Author's Response:
OMG, thanks for the review :D
Date: 15 Apr 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
I really love your story! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! There will be three added chapters tonight :)
Date: 15 Apr 2011 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 4
WOW That last chapter was tear jerking! I am glad Bella left with the I love you...poor Edward. Now we see that he had some motive to what he did other than himself in mind, which is what I had thought. I am hoping he is smart enough to track down Bella if she leaves before he can stop her. I love this story and think it should have more reviews! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the meaningful review, I enjoyed reading it. There are more chapters being added tonight, so hopefully all your queries will be answered :D
Date: 12 Apr 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
WOW! I didn't see that coming. I am shocked Edward is in love with her as much as his actions show...not wanting her to do drugs, giving into her, etc. I am HOPING he figures it out or goes after her and helps. I love the alternative for Alice...never saw that in another story! MAN THIS IS GOOD!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the lovely review, it really made me smile :) I'm glad you like the alternate Alice, it was nice to write her as so OCC. More updates tonight :)
Date: 12 Apr 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 3
wow that was good.
Author's Response:
Ahh, thank you more chapters tonight! :D
Date: 08 Apr 2011 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
That is brilliant!
Author's Response:
Ahh, thank you! :-)
Date: 08 Apr 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
WOW...again. I had no clue Alice was the babies "mother". Bella's situation sucks, badly. I am dying to know what is up with Edward...is he in love with Bella, I think his thoughts mentioned that in the last chapter. I loved the last line, it sounded like he would love to know their son as well. Oh ...is it Monday yet? LOL
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you for this lovely review, so many theories and questions :') I'm not answering any because I don't want to ruin the plot for you. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me and it's Monday tomorrow! :-D
Date: 07 Apr 2011 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
wow i cant wait to hear more of their story!!!!! i need more
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, I'm glad you want more! Update is Monday :)
Date: 07 Apr 2011 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well this chapter answer my previous question but brought who bunch of other one and this is what I love in a story : ) Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Haha, I'm glad your question was answered :-D It is a short story, so you'll have answers before you know it! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 07 Apr 2011 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
WOW...I am hooked...but not like I think Alice is going to be...LOL! I will be reading Mon and Thursdays...I love preupdate schedules...they draw me in!
Author's Response:
Haha, I like your twist on the words about Alice, they made me smile :-) Yes, chapter two in five minutes! Thank you for the review :)
Date: 06 Apr 2011 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow! i cant wait to see where this story goes!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're intrigued, thank you for the review, chapter two in five minutes! :-D
Date: 06 Apr 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good start, I am def intrigued. Does Edward know about the baby?
Author's Response:
Ahh, thank you for being intrigued :) I won't answer that question, I just hope you come back tomorrow to see if he does/doesn't know ;) Thanks for the review.