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Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2016 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 5

lollollol I love this story!!!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 30

such a cute story!!!! ;D

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 30

PERFECT! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 29

Perfect wedding! !!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 28

That was a cute way to propose to her!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 27

Love love love this chapter! !!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 26

Some how I knew that was going to happen. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 25

I am glad that James was killed.   He can no longer come after Edward and Lily. Poor Edward and Bella. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 24

So Bella knows that Edward lied about who was at the door but she is not mad at him. Love how they are depending on each other. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 23

James sounds crazy.   I hop James and Jacob are not working together. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 22

Love love love this chapter! !!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 21

All this still ffa with Jacob is crap. I would think that all they need to do is  a DNA  test 9 Connor and Jacob and then they would see that they did not match.  Conner would not be Jacob's. It should not matter who is Conner ' s dad after that. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 20

Love love love this chapter! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 19

I hate that Jacob got the better of Edward.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 18

It does not surprise me that Renee approached Edward about talking to Bella about her dad. I love how they banter back and forth with each other. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 17

Emmett always seems to get into some type of trouble.  Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 16

They have finally had sex. Love this story. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love them taking care of each others kids.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

Love that Edward got so upset about what Jacob said to Bella and about Connor. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 13

Meeting the family! !!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 12

I hate that Rose and Emmett can't have kids.  Glad Bella is letting Edward in. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 11

No kids for their date!!!!!! Things could get interesting. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loving their relationship.  Wht did Esme just leave the baby in his office?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 9

I am thinking that Edward is going to get the wrong idea about Seth. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 8

Glad they seem to be getting along really well. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 7

What happened with Bella and Jacob? ?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 6

Like that Phil and Renee are rutting for them. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

Lol. Love it

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 4

Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

Too funny

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 2

OMGosh! !!! This is not funny but then again it is. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

This sounds very interesting.  Can't wait to see what Bella and Edward's stories are. Why they both have children but no spouses. .

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 30

Great.

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2013 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 30

amazing story!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 29

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 28

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 27

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 26

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 25

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 24

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 23

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 22

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 21

loved it! I hate Jacob!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 20

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 19

loved it! poor bella and edward!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 18

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 17

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 16

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 15

loved it! Jacob is an ass!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 14

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 13

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 11

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 10

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 9

loved it! Seth is hilarious!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 8

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 7

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 6

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 5

fantastic story!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 3

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

uh-oh!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

great story!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2013 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 30

wonderful end.

TY for writing and sharing

ty

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2013 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 29

aww wonder ful wedding and end surprise.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2013 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 28

That was an interesting proposal.   so Jake just went away?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 27

awww so happy for Rose.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2013 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 26

awww she's nice to give Tanya a chance.    E is so good with the kids.    Hee hee for results, I knew that would happen.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2013 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 25

Well at least James is dead this time.   Jake needs to be next.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2013 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 24

Well at least Charlie tried to come in person.  Still think she is up to somethin.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2013 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 23

Poor E.  Thats scary.   He needs a good alarm and to tell his parents at minimum.  Please tell me he has a restraining order on James if he's not in prison for attempted kidnapping?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2013 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 22

ugh having to deal with Jake and now James too?    Kate was funny.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 21

oh wow Charlie and Jake being all evil together.  What arseholes.   LOL  E is going to be Connor's father.  I just know it.   LOL

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 20

oooh  poor Rose.  Good thing Bella is a good sport.  I'm with Rose, I don't think Jake is just going to go away.  Something untoward is coming I think.    Love Esme but quit with the pushiness.  Renee is being a big baby.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

Wow  Jake is a real piece of work.  Guess he wants B since she's all rich and successful.    Hey wouldnt it be funny if Connor really was E's from a donation.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 18

great party time.   What is Renee playing at?  why is she pushing so much?  Is Charlie dying or something?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 17

love the carefree banter and the yummy kitchen time.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 16

lOL for getting kicked out of the theater.  Woo hoo for lemony time

 

dl

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 15

Angela is a saint!!!!    Awww hope B doesnt run from the relationship.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 14

Glad they had fun at the BBQ.   Wow Jake is a real piece of work.  Can't believe Charlie gave him her number.   what a jerk move.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 13

Esme is funny.   E is such a good daddy.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 12

aww Rose seems sweet.   poor seth.    B needs to have the Jake convo.  That is so nice of E

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 11

wow  charlie was a real douche.  I wouldn't forgive him either, esp via a phone call.

yup  gotta love self serve.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

Seth sounds wonderful.  Aww for jealous E. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 9

hope E doesnt misunderstand about seth.  Wow wonder what changed Charlie's mind.   Ugh why do I get the feeling Jake is going to come cause trouble.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 8

awww what a wonderful first date.  I wanna know more of this Jacob story.  Wow Charlie abandoned her....thats different.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 7

aww poor Ang.    A day care center would be so smart.     Renee is too funny

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

nice dinner with Renee and Phil.  A company day care would be a great benefit.   Awww for the kiddies.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 5

I like E.  B needs to take the stick out of her arse.  Phil is funny

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ah the James and Victoria angle.    Ugh hope Lilly is ok after being carried by her.    Tanya had a real hard first day huh?    B needs to tone down the bitchiness.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 3

awww we meet Ali and Jazz.   Glad the cops got an easy one to fix tonight.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 2

Em and Tanya....thats different.   Actually feel sorry for Tanya in this one.   Poor girl on her first day.   The Daycare is partially respoinsible too though.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great start.   Architecture is different.  I like it.    But she needs to be nice to Ang  :-)

 

 

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 16

a priest go out and buy a hooker LOL priceless! lovin this story i adore daddyward

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh shit, I was rec this story through people like us, and OMG. this is priceless, cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 30

Fantasic sweet loving and funny.

Reviewer: kcmbrown2445 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 5

You need to take control E.
LOVE IT!!!!

Reviewer: Where Who Me Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

The summary of this story caught my eyes. I cannot wait to continue reading this story. One good thing about reading compleated stories ;-)

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 30

Great story. 

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 29

Everything is perfect. 

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