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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 28 EPILOGUE-MOVING FORWARD

:)  loved this 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 28 EPILOGUE-MOVING FORWARD

Oh Edward, be so very careful what you wish for! Keep in mind, also, the straw that broke the camel's back! The three stories in Edward's POV I've read so far have been so good, I look forward to Awakenings!



Author's Response:

Glad you like them. Hope the last book doesn't disappoint. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 27 DESIRES

Taking a deep breath, I'm off to the epilogue and then on to the final book!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 26 MORALS

Now is a good time for Alice's visions to get back to normal. If Carlisle had his way, the whole world would get along, no wars, no problems!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 25 FEAR

Always and ever the cold-hearted bitch, Jane is really something! Poor little Bree!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 24 CHOICE

Terrific fight scene, you did a great job with that!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 23 DANGER

Quite a bit different from the saga, but I like the way you did it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 22 LONG NIGHT

It's fascinating to eavesdrop on this exchange between Jake and Edward.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 21 MOUNTAINS

Too late to worry about it now, boys!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 20 DEAL

No matter how many times I read it, I always get a little tingle at this part! Just a sentimental old lady, I guess!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 19-ULTIMATUM

Bella really ought to cut Edward some slack. He is bossy beyond words, but usually ends up giving her what she wants. Guess he can't deny her much of anything!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 18-LESSONS

Grudging, but at least they will work as a team, to vanquish the enemy. I wish Edward felt he could tell Bella what Jake was thinking. I'ts not fair that he can torment at will and Edward just takes it, feeling he owes the dog!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 17-ALLIES

I'm wondering if Bella worries any more about the wolves fighting than she does about her vampire family? Who knew Alice and her party were just what everyone needed?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 16-CEREMONY

That was certainly different, Bella and Alice colluding like that. Edward sure didn't appreciate it much. unny that Jacob was who kind of calmed hin down.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 15-DAMAGE

Poor Edward, he relies so heavily on his gift that the normal way the rest of us, not knowing others thoughts, drives him crazy.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 14- GRADUATION

Edward worries so much, about everything, that he forgets to not bet against Alice!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 13- THEORY

Only one more puzzle piece, I'm thinking, and then it should fall into place.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 12-AN OCCASION

The picture is nearly clear now. Pretty soon all the pieces will be in place, and they will be better able to counter the threat!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 11-RETRIEVING

That was so nice , for Alice, Esme and Rose, to tell Edward how much he was loved and appreciated by the family. It sure made him think, kind of like tha passage from Wuthering Heights.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

Bless Emmett, he is such a good brother, to both Bella and Edward, wanting the best for them. Looks like the family is getting closer to an answer of who is stalking Bella, too.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 9-SCENT

I always thought Edward made a big mistake, by not telling Bella Jake's true thoughts. She needed to know, to be prepared, so to speak.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 8-Target

How does that saying go? Needs must when the Devil drives, I think. Translated, even wolves get to help protect Bella! Maybe Edward is getting a tiny bit smarter, as tome goes by!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 7-Tolerance

I always  have enjoyed their mutual jealousy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 6-Anger

A very hard won change in his thinking. I can't help feeling sorry for him, as much as I want to smack him at the same time!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 5-Emotions

Good thing cooler heads prevailed and he left the treaty intact. There's hope when he can actually restrain himself from doing something stupid!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 4-Hunting

Maybe there is hope for this vampire after all, if he can change his thinking even a little bit!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 3-Agenda's

Too bad it takes Jake forcing Edward to be honest with Bella . Why can't he just do the right thing because it is the right thing? Stubborn doesn't begin to explain !

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 2-Evasion

If she knew his thoughts, Bella would get after him with a big stick. That is one independent girl who hates anyone telling her what to do, especially her arrogant, loving, over protective boyfriend!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1-Refusal

I understand how much he wants to save her and keep her safe, but I could just scream when he decides to do so without taking her wishes into consideration. How he can be so smart and so stupid at the same time, blows my mind!

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 23 DANGER

This is a repeat of chapter 22

Author's Response:

Thanks for the notice. All fixed. Hope you enjoy. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 19-ULTIMATUM

Missed this a lot. I really need to reread the series. Merry Christmas.



Author's Response:

I know it's been forever, but I have finally posted the last chapters of this novel. I've also posted the first chapter of 'Awakening', my version of Breaking Dawn. If you're still around I hope you enjoy.

Reviewer: bpt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 17-ALLIES

Will you be finishing this story?



Author's Response:

I know it's been forever, but yes the final chapters to this story are posted and I've also posted chapter 1 of my last story called 'Awakening', which is my version of Breaking Dawn. Hope you're still around and will enjoy. 

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 7-Tolerance

Was looking forward to that conversation. Glad you put the leg hitch in.



Author's Response:

There was no way I could leave that part out. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: annsteph Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 6-Anger

Excellent chapter.  Liked the interaction between his brothers and Carlisle during the hunting trip.  Edward is still angsty but it will be a revelation to him when it is jealousy that he is feeling and needs to deal with it.  Writing really makes the difference because it makes it so easy to read.  Thanks for posting as often as you do which is another bonus for the story. 



Author's Response:

I glad you are enjoying the book. I look writing about the Cullens. I find them fascinating. I post as often as I can, but I'm posting here and over a twilighted, that is why sometimes it gets delayed. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: linelia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 6-Anger

poor edward, excellent chapter.



Author's Response:

I felt bad for him too. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 6-Anger

Sometimes I really want to kick him in the butt.



Author's Response:

I hear you, but I also know that he's never felt jealousy before so I can cut him some slack. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2011 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 5-Emotions

Love his point of view, always.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 4-Hunting

Great again.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: annsteph Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 3-Agenda's

Wonderful chapter as well as the previous one.  I know Edward is bent on protection of Bella, but doesn't he realize that skipping a class when the principal just witnessed his little altercation with Jacob could mean trouble or atleast warrant a call to one of his parents just to relate a "dangerous situation" (hint, hint).  You know schools can't be too careful when the safety of our favorite vampire children are concerned.

The writing is so terrific and makes for a great companion piece to the book.  You capture Edward's thinking so well and the rendition of the safety thing with the crashing plane was funny all over again.  I got the mental picture of Bella rolling her eyes at him and just shaking her head at how stupid he sounds.  Maybe it was always a good thing he couldn't read her mind. 

The anticipation grows as I can't wait for more Cullen interaction because I am sure Carlisle's patience and understanding for Edward's feelings, jealousies and so forth will really be stretched.  No matter what happens next, I know it will be great.  Thanks for posting such awesome chapters!  



Author's Response:

Thank you for such wonderful words. It's always nice to know that someone is enjoying the story. I love Edward and he is so easy to write which is odd really becasue he is so complex, but I suppose that's what makes him fun. Continue to enjoy we still have a long way to go and he will suffer many twist and turns in this book.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2011 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 3-Agenda's

Really love this POV.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your wonderful reviews. It's nice to know people are enjoying them.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2011 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 2-Evasion

Such a good rendering of Edward's POV.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 1-Refusal

Always love EPOV.

Reviewer: annsteph Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 1-Refusal

Seeing this from Edward's POV is going to be thrilling.  There is so much potential to this story and you are off to a great start. This is my favorite book so to have a chance to read it from this perspective is an opportunity not to be missed.  After the other two renditions, I believe you are knowing how Edward thinks, how he acts, how he lets his over protectiveness and later on jealousy interfere with his relationships not only with Bella but with his family.  I really believe you will do an awesome job 'cause you were meant to tell his side of the story.  Your writing is most excellent! I'm hopeful that you will bring out more of the family dynamics, relationships, etc as things progress in future chapters.  Thank you for all the continued hard work in bringing a new dimension to the rest of the story.  I for one can't wait for more! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and thank you for your kind wonderful words. When I began this book I was surprised how much of it was not from Eclipse. You'll be happy to know that alot of it deals with the Cullen's. There was sooo much going on that Bella had no idea of. I'm glad you are enjoying it. Thanks again for your continued support.

Renee

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