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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2018 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 14

FYI it is raped to rapped(that would be a kind of singing)

Reviewer: ocdcullen01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 17

ty for sharing, great story

Reviewer: ocdcullen01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 10

this story is still keeping me hanging on, i cant believe how under raviewed it is :(

Reviewer: ocdcullen01 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 6

this is like a train wreck, u wanna stop it and ur frozen u wanna look away and u cant

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 16

Stupid, stupid, stupid. She's being a brat and every one's catering to her.... Edward needs to keep moving on and doing well cuz she brings out the worst in him and eventually she's gonna bring him down with her. Not to be mean but you can save those that don't want to be saved at some point you gotta let go and put you first

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 15

Yeah she's making me mad and she won't learn until she's messed up or the cause of someone else being messed up. I hope they all learn that when it comes to James, Bella can't be trusted

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2013 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 13

How could they all be so stupid and leave her unprotected knowing he's roaming around out there and already making/trying to make contact with her

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2013 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 12

I know she's been through so much and her head is all kinds of messed up but hell I'm even frustrated with her at this point

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2013 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 5

They are so confused I just feel for them. That being said Edward seems to be so selfish and I know where it stimes from but it still gets to me.... That Lauren shit was so not okay and I'm happy Bella spoke up for herself and stuck to her guns

Reviewer: vamp_luvor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

                WOW Bravo Bravo !!!

It was ahrd to read in some spote very emotional

      But very well wrote you did a amazing job.

 

Reviewer: Laia_222 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 17

I can't belive that it finished! I loved your history! Sorry for the few reviews I didn't open this page a lot and my english isn't very good and I can't explain what I want to say, but I love how you write. 

I know that you won't do a epilogue but I don't think that it would have ruined the story :p! 

I put you at favourite author (not a alert because I don't know for what is it) but I will follow your new fic, althought I don't understand the argument

If you want something send me an MP :D

PD: sorry my english

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 14

wow!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 13

Aïe!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 17

Thank god he let her go before he killed himself and I say good riddins to him.  I am sad that this is over it is a wonderful story.  I will be looking forward to what else you do thanks

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 16

OMG where did she go.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2011 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 15

James is messing with her she will not be alone again.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 14

I am freaking out here what is James going to do and why isnt Bella telling anyone that he was there???

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 13

Please someone come home and save Bella

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 12

Wow that is fucked up someone needs to put James 6 ft under

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 11

Bella has the right to freak out poor thing has been through hell

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 10

Aro is a creepy bastard and he is trying to make Edward as guilty as James.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 9

Bella had every right to be pissed at Edward for the Lauran thing giving her a hug if Bella would of done that he would of beat the shit out of who ever she hugged.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 8

OMG he has a baby oh that is fucked up shit

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 7

I am loving the break through and the changes they are going through but shit Edward is scarry

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 6

I want to cry she seems so alone so sad and he is just lost

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 5

Wow brainwashing at it finest.  I am glad Bella made her claim know but I am sure it wont be the last time.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 4

So glad they made up and I hope she knows she is not a burden

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

Thank god he new it was wrong I was worried he wanted things that way.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow what a life

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow they are fucked up James is one creepy bastard

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 15

Looking forward to see what James is planning!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 14

You are such a tease lady, but I'm nothing if not patient! lol! So I guess now I have to wait! I'll just be here twiddling my thumbs till you get back! lol!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 13

I'm very afraid that's what I think! James was at the door, yikes! That cannot be a good sign.  Glad I don't have to wait, I'm off to read the next chapter! 

Krazi

xoxo

PS.  I love the prologue of the collab between you and Kasi!

Reviewer: xoxokristen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 14

great chapter!

Reviewer: Laia_222 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 13

OMG! James is back! I can't wait for the netx chapter!!! :D

Reviewer: xoxokristen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2011 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 12

great story! I can't believe the verdict, though

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 12

Now I really don´t know what to chink!  James not guiilty?  WTF?  But as usual I trust ya and can´t wait to see were you take this!  

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 12

verdict...surprenant mais réaliste!  Edward devra, lui, aller contre James.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 11

bien contente d'avoir la suite et j'ai bien hâte de savoir le verdict.

Reviewer: Laia_222 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 12

I couldn't belive that he wasn't guilty! 

they had to heard the evidence recorded!  

 

 

Upgrade soon, plis! It's very interesant!

 

 

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 5

It keeps getting better & better!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 4

I'm glad that at least Edward sees what James did was wrong! He needs to work a bit on Bella!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 3

So sad ...James is the sick bastard I suspected!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loving the flashbacks!  I wish Edward wasn't so controlling, but I do understand why he is!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow!  What an awesome, juicy chapter!  E & B have been so brainwashed...I fear they will difficulties with the Cullens!

Reviewer: Christine Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

I have a feeling that great plans = evil plans. Anyway, love it.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 12

Man, I almost stopped reading this chapter.  It was so damn hard to read this.  I can't separate this shit anymore.  I know this is fanfic, but this shit really got to me.  I hope this turns out with a HEA.  I don't know how much more of this I can take.  That makes you a great writer with a imagination out of this world (hopefully this is not real)!

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 11

wow incredible story Thanks can't wait for more.:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 11

Missed this story!  Loved the update and can´t wait to see what the verdict is!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 11

That BASTARD needs the death penalty.

Reviewer: shookie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 11

Okay, first off I found this story today and man oh manwonderfully dark. I have cried, laughed and gotten so disgusted and angry...my emotions are all over the place. The only thought that has stuck with me is HOW BLIND AND STUPID ARE ESME AND CARLILE TO THE ABUSE THAT EDWARD IS STILL DISHING OUT TO BELLA. I mean come on he is acting just like james and know one sees it to point that little fact out to him... 

 

Love it and can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 10

I'm speechless!  Never have I ever read anything so intense.  The details are overwhelming.  I couldn't imagine being in a situation like this.  Nor have I ever known anyone to be!  Amazing story!!!!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 10

wow!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 9

c'est vraiment étonnant qu'il n'y ait pas plus de review car cette histoire est très bonne!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 8

Quelle belle imagination délicieusement tordue, LOL!!!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 7

wow!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 6

oucht!!! 1/mois... c'est peu! on a le temps d'oublier.  C'est mieux de mettre de côté et écrire quand vous aurez le temps.... c'est mon avis.

 

Dommage, c'est une histoire dure mais si bien écrite... elle mérite que vous y consacriez votre temps lorsque vos histoires seront terminées.

 

Cela n'aide pas pour laisser des review car on a l'impression que l'histoire est à l'abandon!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 5

Je vous trouve courageuse d'écrire sur ce sujet. Ce n'est sûrement pas facile.  Je trouve le ton très juste. logique...

 

J'adore!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 4

Magnifique!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 3

wow! J'espère que vous aller continuer à écrire cette histoire, elle est très belle, originale.

 

Je suis une jeune grand-maman.  Je lis avec Google Translate.  Je suis désolée, je ne suis pas capable d'écrire mes review en anglais. French. 

 

Bravo!  Continuer votre bon travail!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 2

wow!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

Délicieusement tordue!  ça me fait penser à une fic que j'ai particulièrement aimé "The Perfect Wife".  »J'ai été bêta pour la traduction française.

Reviewer: vivlig Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2011 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 9

I love this story it's so different and sad but i love the way Edward and Bella are starting to grow

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 10

It is crazy how Aro twisted it to be about Edward, even though I know he is in the wrong as well. But it still is sad!

Reviewer: just4fun4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 10

Wow...this story is really different.  I wasn't sure how I would like it but I have quickly become hooked!

This is definately reaching outside the box!

Thanks for being brave enough to write such a touchy subject.  I can't wait to read the rest. 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 8

Holly shit!!!!!

Reviewer: xoxokristen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 10

great story!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 10

oh I love it.. I can't wait for the udate. 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 5

Sad that Edward is able to live his life, yet Bella still is in the same routine. Love this story!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm with Bella.. Lauren needs to go.  I don't like her at all... but I do love this chapter.  Great job

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 5

I'm scared that Edward's new freedom is going to land Lauren in his lap.  OH NO

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 4

This is really so sad... I mean I absolutely love it.. but they are both such a mess.  I can see glimpses of their healing, but they have to talk to someone.  JAMES was a horrible person.  BOO JAMES.

 

Love it

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2011 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story! I can't wait to read more ;)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2011 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 2

oh this is really good.  I am a little scared of what made them both this way.  If Edward was there for 10 years, i am sure he was in some dark places. 

 

Nice job.

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