Date: 10 Oct 2017 9:26 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
I just cant stop reading this. So good... i love how bella and carlisle relationship progress
Date: 10 Oct 2017 2:28 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
I love this story and the way you writing it. Im glad i found this ๐๐๐๐
Date: 28 Apr 2016 7:13 PM Title: Chapter Forty Nine
I loved the story & thought it was sweet how it ended up being, can't wait to read more of your stories.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2012 12:50 PM Title: Chapter Forty Nine
Very good!!!
I loved CxB together. Very caring & sweet! Like how u were creative with the roles & personalities of the characters. Made the story even better!
Glad it all worked out in the end! :)
Looking forward to reading more of ur stories.
Author's Response:
Hello,
I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. As I mentioned, I don't know why but I enjoy writing Bella and Carlisle. I actually have another story with them in teh works, after I"m done with "Finding What Was Lost," so if you are intersted stay tuned!
Again, I'm o happy tha tyou enjoyed the story!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2012 2:32 AM Title: Outtake Three
Way to go Carlisle!!! Esme takes the cake for Queen Biotch!! :)
She deserved much worse than what Edward or Carlisle did, but it just goes to show the caliber of people they are vs her!!!
Awesome story btw!! I love CxB but feel badly for Edward!! :( poor guy.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter Nine
This is a really good story! I love it when Jacob is the brother...Seth too!
Decisions decisions. Which to choose CxB or ExB??? I really like CxB with their shyness and all around goodness, but u can't beat a ExB.
I guess only time will tell!
:)
Author's Response:
Hello,
Thank you for reading the story! I don't know why but I enjoy Bella/Carlisle stories. I obviously enjoy E/B too but sometimes a little varity is good too. I hope you give the story a chance, even if you aren't thrilled with who she choses.
Again, thank you for giving the story a chance :)
-Lisa
Date: 29 Jul 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter One
i wasnt trying to imply i didnt like it i was just simply saying what i thought was going to happen.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter Seven
my theory at this point is tht carlisle is edwards dad....i originally thought tht carlisle was gonna stop and see bella at school and meet and fall for esme but after this chapter i realized tht tht isnt gonna happen
Author's Response:
Hi-
I am sorry you don't seem like you are enjoying the story. I know it isn't everyone's cup of tea. I do have another Bella/Edwad story and I am currently working on one if that is more your cup of tea. I understand the older man/younger woman thing isn't for everyone. Feel free to look up the other two if that is more your style (one is complete and the other is in progress).
Thank you for attempting to read the story!
-Lisa
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter Forty Nine
This was a great ending. I will miss them. I wish we would of found a happy ending for Edward. I feel sad for him.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I'm sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you.
I did just kind of leave Edward hanging. I didn't mean to. I want to think that he found love in NYC and is very happy.
I don't know why but I really like the Carlisle/Bella pairing. I like writing them too. I'm sad to see this incarnation of them go too. There was a lot of drama in this story and they most certianlly deserved their happy ending. I am currently working on a Bella/Edward story but I have an idea for another C/B, I'm trying to work out the details.
Thank you for reading and taking the journy with me!
-Lisa
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter Forty Nine
Amazing... I have loved reading this story so much! Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us! :)
(will you do and epi or futuretake to see what happens or is this where we leave them?)
-Kate
Author's Response:
HiKate,
I'm glad you enjoyed Bella and Carlisle's journy! I really enjoy writing them. I knwo a lot of people don't care for the older man/ younger woman thing but they are my favorite non cannon couple to write about. I'm going to miss this version of them too. There was a lot of drama that happened to them.
As of now I don't plan on anything else. I'm just leaving the story as is. Someone asked about Edward. I like to think that he found someone and he is happy with them as well.
I am working on a Bella/.Edward story as we speak and it has been posted. It is a work in progress. I have an idea for a new C/B story but it is in the early stages of planning right now.
Thank you for reading and commetning as often as you did. It really meant a lot to me. I"m sorry it took me so long to get back to you.
Thank you!
Lisa
Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter Forty Nine
Wonderful end to a great story. Thank you for writing and sharing
Author's Response:
I'm so happy that you enjoyed the story. I really l ike writing C/B as a couple. I don't know why, I just do! I am currently working on a B/E story with teh plans of going back to a C/B story but I have to wrok a few things out first. It is in the early stages as of now.
Thank you again for reading and commetning as many times as you did through out the story. I really apprecaite it and I can honestly say that it really meant a lot to me.
-Lisa
PS-I'm sorry it took me so long to get back to you!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:16 AM Title: Chapter Forty Nine
what a great ending to this story !
Author's Response:
Hey!
Thank you for reading the story and sticking with it as much as you did. It really meant a lot to me. I'm currently writing a B/E story, but after that I think I might be going back to a C/B. I have an idea that is in the really early stages now. We'll see what happens!
Thanks again1
-Lisa
PS-I'm really sorry it took me a month to get back to you!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter Forty Eight
Share?
Author's Response:
I dont' think I understand what you mean by share. Do you mean Jacob and Seth sharing Bella's walk down the aisle?
-Lisa
Date: 12 Jun 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter Forty Seven
oh my what a Christmas and to think a little girl took care of calling the police.
Author's Response:
It is a Christmas they will remember for a long time. Molly is a smart cookie. rememebr she was the one to put Jacob in his place when he was being rude and childish to Carlisle in the begining. Molly has been fun to write.
The story is winding down. the last chapter will be posted later today. thank you for reading and I'm sorry about the delay in updating and responding. Life got really crazy for a while.
-Lisa
Date: 09 Jun 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter Forty Eight
Just knew phil was a scam artist. Glad they let jake go. Aww for her asking them to walk her down the aisle.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I'm sorry about the late response. Phil is a jerk who isn't in the picture any more. I love Bella and Jacob has sibblings. they were fun to write...even when he was a jerk :)
Thanks again for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 08 Jun 2012 12:08 AM Title: Chapter Forty Eight
lkoved the update looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I'm sorry about the late response and update. Life was crazy but the last chapter will be posted later today. Hope you have enjoyed it!
-Lisa
Date: 07 Jun 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter Forty Eight
I love this story, you write Bella and Carlisle very well
Author's Response:
Sorry for the delay in responding and updating. Life has been crazy. Thank you so much for the compliment. Carlisle I think is such an easy character because he is so tender and sweet. I think everyone should hve their own Carlilse!
Thank you for reading. The last chapter will be posted today at some point!
-Lisa
Date: 07 Jun 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter Forty Eight
I knew he was a con artist!! Bad Phil :( Poor Renee ..... such a sweet ending with her and Seth and Jacob though :)
-Kate
Author's Response:
Hello again and thank you for reading! Renee is good and even though they argue and bicker with each other, the Swan/Black sibblings love each o ther.
-Lisa
Date: 24 May 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter Forty Seven
ugh... well at least Phil showed his true colors enought for Renee to realize he isn't as great as she thinks he is. Poor Jacob, hopefully they get him bailed out quickly. Can't wait to read the next one!
Author's Response:
Sorry for the long delay in responding and posting. real life got in the way of life. I hope you have enjoyed reading what you have thus far. The last chapter will be posted later today. thank you for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 22 May 2012 12:13 PM Title: Chapter Forty Seven
The police officers are also going to need to talk to Bella and Molly. I don't know why she doesn't just change her shirt and go down stairs. She needs to bring the torn one also. She can't hide from it. If she wants to help Jacob, she needs to get her arse down stairs and talk to the police. She can't hide upstairs.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 20 May 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter Forty Seven
Go Molly. Glad school taught her what to do. Jake will get out quickly. Hope mommy dearest learned her lesson.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the long delay in posting. Life has been really crazy. Molly is a smart cookie, after all she had lectured Jacob so many times after him beign rude to Carlisle way back when. I hope you enjoyed the chapter. thank you for reading. The last one will be posted today.
-Lisa
Date: 20 May 2012 2:25 PM Title: Chapter Forty Seven
well at least the duchebag boyfriend is finally gone... looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and I'm sorry in the delay of response. Life has been crazy for a while but I think it is all sorted now. Anyway, Phil is gone. Hope you enjoyed this chapter. thank you again for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 16 May 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter Forty Six
I think that Jacob and Bella should buy the house and they can rent it out if they want to make it an investment property. They are not ready to cut all ties to Forks. They want to bring their families back there and show them their history. It is a beautiful place to go to on vacation. If they can afford it why should they give up their home just because their mom is a flake.
Author's Response:
sorry for the lng delay in response....it has been a crazy few months. I hope you have continued to read what has been posted of the story. The last chapter will be posted today! thank you for beign a long time reader (I'm pretty sure you have been there since the beigning, right?). Hoep you enjoy what is left!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2012 4:26 AM Title: Chapter Forty Six
glad Bella is telling her mom the truth of how she feels. I'd be hiring a private investigator cause I bet Phil has a record of doing this before.
Author's Response:
thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm working on the next chapter as we speak.
-Lisa
PS-Thank you for sticking with me. This story is taking a little longer to post and try to end and I know I didn't update for a while. I just wanted to say thank you for coming back. it means a lot to me.
Date: 13 May 2012 1:20 AM Title: Chapter Forty Six
sorry about your health problems.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and thinking of me. I think I'm okay...I think any way. Also, thank you for coming back to the story. I know I haven't been updating as much as I want to and thank you for understanding that.
The next update will be soon (no, for real, I promise :))
Lisa
Date: 13 May 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter Forty Six
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Also, thanks for sticking with the story when I haven't been able to update as often as I'd wish. I am working on thenext chapter as we speak!
Thanks again!
-Lisa
Date: 06 May 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter Forty Five
Renee is a class act; It's not fair to make Phil live in her first husband's house, but it's totally OK to sell it and let Phil's charity benefit from it's sale. WTF?
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm not trying to make Renee be anything buy blinded by love. She likes the idea of being in love. The next chapter, which is ready to be posted will get into Bella and Jacob's head a little more.
It'll be posted soon!
-Lisa
Date: 27 Apr 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter Forty Five
Renee is as selfish as ever. This Phil is a creep. This is not how you introduce yourself to a family. I think they should buy the house and then just write off Renee as a loony bin. She has chosen a man over her children. This is something a parent is never suppose to do.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Renee just wants to be happy and she thinks she has found it with Phil. Jacob and Bella know she isn't happy, which is wy they were arguing. Renee thinks if she packs her life up into boxes she will be happy again. We shall see what happens!
I'm working on the next chapter now so hopefully it isn't too long until you guys have an update.
Lisa
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter Forty Five
Happy to find it updated! Great story!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the update and glad you are enjoying it! The next update will be soon. I'm working on it now.
Lisa
PS-Thanks for commenting!
Date: 22 Apr 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter Forty Five
wow thats a lot of crap that happenend in this chapter ! i hope that your feeling better and im still sticking around !
Author's Response:
Hello,
I'm feeling a lot better, thank you. I'm glad you'll be sticking around!
Lots did happen in this chapter and there is more to come. I'm working on the next chapter now.
Lisa
Date: 22 Apr 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter Forty Five
uh oh... yeah I am thinking that Phil is not such a stand up guy.... and his charity is a scam... but that is just my thoughts? Why would he want the money from the sale of the house? seems fishy.... Can't wait to read more!! :)
Author's Response:
thanks for reading!
Phil isn't such great news but until he does something really bad to Renee herself, she will remain blind. Phil wants Renee's money to support his African charity, which does sound a little fishy.
I'm glad you are enjoying the story and I am currently working on the next chapter, so sit tight :)
-Lisa
Date: 21 Apr 2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter Forty Five
hmmmm Renee is an idiot. Phil sounds like one hell of a scam artist.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Renee is doing what she thinks is best for her. Phil of course isn't a stand out guy.
I'll be updating soon (I'm working on the next chapter as we speak:)).
-Lisa
Date: 17 Apr 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter Forty Four
Lisa, I was just wondering if things were ok for you. I have been waiting a while for you to update and finish Back to Boston. I hope you really will finish this story. It's great and I don't normally read stories that have someone else with Bella but Edward.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for still being intersted in this story. I am still very much working on this, unfortunitly in the last month or so life has been hetic. I was hospitalized, a friend died, I was in a car accident. Between all of this stuff and work, I felt like I was going in twelve different directions with my head cut off. This story had to just take a break for a while.
With all of that being said and behind me, I am hoping next week to post the updated chapter. I am so sorry for the wait but I do apprecaite your patients and I am so glad you still want to read the story. Please be patient with me and I promise I will post soon.
Lisa
Date: 19 Mar 2012 1:01 PM Title: Chapter Forty Four
I am glad that Vicky didn't ruin the getaway. Carlisle and Bella needed some alone time. It is hard being a mom the second time. Bella is lucky that Liam is a good and easy baby.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm in the process of writing the next chapter. It will be updated soon. Thank you for sticking with the story!
-Lisa
Date: 12 Mar 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter Forty Four
great chapter!! Loved how she handled vicky.... stupid people! Can't wait to read the next one! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting! I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. Hopefully it'll be posted by the end of the week!
-Lisa
Date: 09 Mar 2012 3:55 AM Title: Chapter Forty Four
loved the chatper ! looking forward tgo seeing what happens next
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. I hope to get them up before the end of the week..we'll see though.
-Lisa
Date: 09 Mar 2012 3:48 AM Title: Chapter Forty Four
She handled the situation with Vicky very well. Yummy times for our fav kiddies
Author's Response:
The good times are rolling for them :) Thank you so much for the comments and for reading. I'm hoping to have the next chapter out before the end of the week.
-Lisa
Date: 02 Mar 2012 4:58 AM Title: Chapter Forty Three
And here I thought Carlisle had come down with a terminal illness and was on death's door. Silly me!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Even the strongest of men are babies when they are sick! I'm tryin gto update for either today or tomorrow so keep your eyes open that!
-Lisa
Date: 02 Mar 2012 4:28 AM Title: Chapter Forty Three
Wow Esme surprised me in both a good then a bad way. What a pussy expecting Bella to tell them.
lol for Baby Carlisle. men are like that when sick
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Esme is a piece of work. She is selfish and doesn't care about anyone other than herself adn it shows. She had a few tender seconds with Bella but then shifted back to her old self. Bella once again was left to clean up a mess that wasn't hers, of course brought on by Esme.
I just posted this in another review but its true....even the toughest man is a baby when they are sick!
I'm hoping to update either tonight or tomorrow so please look out for that!
-Lisa
Date: 01 Mar 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter Forty Three
great chapter!! so glad that he is getting her to go away for a few days.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Yes, Bella is going to go away just for the night with a now healed Carlisle. I'm hoping to get that chapter up either tonight or tomorrow so keep an eye out for it!
-Lisa
Date: 28 Feb 2012 5:34 AM Title: Chapter Forty Two
i think you played Molly right. That young is hard to have a new sibling come along. She's not the first kid to want a new baby to go away.
Poor hormonal B. She is so lucky to have Carlisle'
Author's Response:
thanks for reading/reviewing. I think every woman needs a Carlisle, don't you? the next update should be later today/tomorrow some time.
_Lisa
Date: 26 Feb 2012 2:37 PM Title: Chapter Forty Two
Very nice chapter
Author's Response:
thank you for reviewing and reading...I'm glad you enjoyed it. The next update should be tonight or tomorrow.
-Lisa
Date: 21 Feb 2012 9:44 PM Title: Chapter Forty Two
Amazing chapter!! Molly is just feeling like all kids do when a new baby comes along, especially when her friend's parents are having problems..... it makes her curious. PPD is not easy, I know from personal experience, with my 2nd child I had it. Having babies does alot to your body and your hormones and everything.... Can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commetning. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter.
I'm hoping to post the next chapter tonight or tomorrow ar some point.
Thansk again,
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2012 12:11 PM Title: Chapter Forty Two
Great job!
Date: 19 Feb 2012 3:55 AM Title: Chapter Forty Two
love it.
Jukie
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanksf ro reading!
-Lisa
Date: 19 Feb 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter Forty Two
Early baby hood is HARD.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/commenting. I'm glad you liked it. The next update should be later tonight or tomorrow.
-Lisa
Date: 19 Feb 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter Forty Two
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
thanks for the review and reading. I'm hoping to finish the update later today or tomorrow to post!
-Lisa
Date: 17 Feb 2012 6:30 AM Title: Chapter Forty One
aww :) YAY for baby Liam :) and it is so good that Renee is finally coming around... Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Things are looking good for the Swan/Cullen family :)
Next chapter will be soon, i promise!
-lisa
PS- Thanks for reading!
Date: 14 Feb 2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter Forty One
woo hoo Baby has arrived!!! Congrats.
Author's Response:
Baby Liam is here and safe and is healthy!
Thanks fo rreading...next chapter will be soon!
-Lisa
Date: 14 Feb 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter Forty One
At least his name isn't Charlie Carlisle. That is a mouth full. I am like whatever just no more Renessmee. That name is a double mouthful.
All of us mothers and grandmothers think of the births of our babies and grands. Each different and each special. My first was an 8 1/2 pound boy that was 21 inches long. I never fully dialated and trust me I was sore for the full 6 weeks. Ahh but he is well worth it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
No, Charlie Carlisle here. Bella doesn't really remember Charlie so it wouldn't make sense to name the baby after him. She refers to Billy as her father, thus William. Renessmee....ick.
Thanks for sharing yoru story too! :) Next update will be soon!
-Lisa
Date: 14 Feb 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter Forty One
i loved it...but DAMN what a waste of a red sox ticket!
Author's Response:
I know! LOL! How does one score box seats to a Sox game anyway? Geez Bella!
Next update will be soon! thank you so much for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 14 Feb 2012 1:48 AM Title: Chapter Forty One
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
It will be posted soon..I promsie! Thanks for reading :)
-Lisa
Date: 10 Feb 2012 3:11 AM Title: Chapter One
Just wanted to know if you were going to update sometime soon. I don't usually read C/B fanfic but I really like this one. You got me hooked. I'm waiting for the next chapter. I know you have something planned for Esme/Carlisle/Bella conforntation. Hope you update soon.
Author's Response:
I am working on the next chapter literally as we speak. I've had a few unexpected family issues arise as well as a lot of work for my job to do. I've been left with little time to write, which makes me sad. I don't like neglecting the story. I'm almost done with my stuff for work so that should free up my time (also, we are expecting a storm this weekend which will allow me to write too). Also, I've had ideas for yet another story dance through my head (this one is Edward and Bella centric). I refuse to write it until this one is done with.
Please be patient with me. There aren't too many chapter left to B2B, however there is some Esme closure that has literally filled my head every night while I'm in bed trying to sleep. It'll be happening soon, promise.
I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story. I'm hoping to have a new chapter posted this weekend at some point.
Thank you for being understanding!
-Lisa
Date: 08 Feb 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter Forty
Great chapter
all we now is a nice girl for Edward
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked the chapter!
Next update will hopefully be this weekend. Please stick with me! Life has been busy.
-Lisa
Date: 30 Jan 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter Forty
wow someone stood up Eddie? Glad Bella told her mom off...in a polite, calm way. Renee cant say she didnt have it comeing.
Author's Response:
Poor Eddie, right? I didn't think Bella was too hard on Renee. She was firm yet honest and wasn't mean.
Life has been a little out of hand lately thus the long time between updates, however I hope to have the next chapter up this weekend. Please stick with me!
-Lisa
Date: 29 Jan 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter Forty
Bella did fine. I think Renee did not tell Bella because she knew she was wrong about the age difference. She was and is a hypocrit. I still don't like Renee even though they have a truce. She should love her daughter and granddaughter more than herself.
Edward is really coming along.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing.
Bella was just honest with Renee. Renee is trying to change. Edward too is coming to terms that he and Bella will never have a romantic relationship, thus he is trying to be a friend for her.
Life has been very much crazy and up and down lately. I plan on finishing the story up. Please just be patient with me. I'm hoping the next update will be this weekend.
Thank you again for reading.
-Lisa
Date: 29 Jan 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter Forty
Go Bella!!!! Yay I am so glad she told Renee all of that.... Renee really needed to hear it! :) Loved Bella's little night in with ice cream and Edward :)
Can't wait to read the next one :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Bella wasn't cruel or mean, she was honest and to the point with Renee, which Renee needed to hear. Edward realizes that he and Bella weren't ever meant to be together. He figures having her as a friend is better than nothing.
Life has been a lot crazy lately. I haven't jumped ship with this story. I very much plan on finishing it up, I've just been thrown a few curve balls in the game of life that I was/am dealing with. With that being said, i haven't had the time to work on the story. I'm hoping to have the next chapter posted this weekend. Please stick with it!
Thanks again!
-Lisa
Date: 29 Jan 2012 5:36 PM Title: Chapter Forty
im glad that she layed it all out and renee for not realizign that she was doing the same exact thing dateing a younger man .... looking forward to the next chatper
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Bella was competely honest with Renee because Renee needed to hear it. Bella wasn't mean, she was just to the point. You are right, she is dong the same thing.
Life has been crazy lately. Work hetic. I have a bunch of reports that I am finishing up. I'm hoping to get them all done soon so I can concentrate on this neglected story. Please have a little patients with me. I'm hoping to update this weekend.
Thanks again!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Nine
I'm loving all "the lovin'" but I can hardly wait for Esme to get what's coming to her. I'm guessing that Renee has taken up with Phil who is, what, 10 years her junior? This should be very interesting!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and I'm so happy you loved th chapter! Renee and Bella are having a little conversation in the next chapter that gets, well, Bella kind of ticked off. I'm hoping ot post the update within the next day or so. Thanks again for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 16 Jan 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Nine
Great dramaless chapter. Renee is not going to be happy so Bella needs to tell her straight up. Get over it or don't bother coming around. Renee is just jealous. She wants Carlisle for herself.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it.
Bella and Renee talk in the next chapter and that's all I am going to say :) The next chapter should be updated in the next day or so. Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 15 Jan 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Nine
looking forward to the next chapter ! i hope eventually renee grows up or shes going to loose bella
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading,
Renee and Bella are taking in the next chapter. We'll find out what its all about then. The next chapeter should be posted in a day or so!
-Lisa
Date: 15 Jan 2012 10:59 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Nine
wonderful chapter. The group renovations and the surprise party were excellent. Hmmm Lemme guess, Renee either has a boy toy, is pregnant, or both.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked the chapter! It was fun to write.
Bella and Renee talk in the next chapter so sit tight until then! The next chapter should be updated in a day or so.
THanks again for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 15 Jan 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Nine
Great chapter!!! Can't wait to read the next one .... and I am thinking that Renee is dating a younger man and that is what her and Jacob's argument was about.... :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
We'll find out in the next chapter about Renee. She and Bella have a I'm hoping to update in teh next day or so!
-Lisa
Date: 11 Jan 2012 2:46 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Eight
Missed you good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading (it's nice to be missed :)).
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I'm working on the next on!
-Lisa
Date: 10 Jan 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Eight
Very sweert!!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading. I'm almost done with the next chapter :)
-Lisa
Date: 10 Jan 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Eight
Woo hoo. Wonderful chapter. Love the renovation idea.
Author's Response:
thans for reading!
I'm so happy that you are enjoying the story still. I'm working on the next chapter and it should be ip soon!
-Lisa
Date: 10 Jan 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Eight
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I'm working on the next one as we speak!
-Lisa
Date: 10 Jan 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Eight
So sweet. Yeah they are engaged. Every woman needs her own Carlisle. Great Chapter.
Jukie
Author's Response:
I am currently looking for my own Carlisle so i can understand your comment "every woman needs her own Carlisle" :). I'm glad you liked the chapter. I'm working on the next chapter as we speak!
Date: 10 Jan 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Eight
Things are really looking up! Thanks for the update and this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting.
I try to update once a week, but sometimes life has other plans for me. I love writing this story. I love the characters, so no problem with updating!
Things are looking up a lot for them. I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. It'll be posted soon!
-Lisa
Date: 10 Jan 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Eight
awesome as usual!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading another chapter :) the next update will be soon!
-Lisa
Date: 09 Jan 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Seven
People keep making excuses for Bella being mean and rude to people in her life. She gets upset if anyone crosses her. She is not as nice as everyone thinks. She is spoiled. She expects everything to go her way because it always has. The men in her life have always bend to her way. Carlisle was right. She needs to talk about her fear of leaving Molly. She has known Emmett and Rose forever and she still could barely let them watch Molly at her house for one night. They use to watch Molly all the time. Molly is fine. Bella needs to get help or realize that she is going to smother Molly if she doesn't get over this fear quickly.
Author's Response:
First thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
I don't mean for Bella to come across as rude. She is insecure and frankly is just scared. Bad things seem to happen frequently in her life so basiclly she just shuts down. That is why she thought not going out would keep Molly safe. She did come to her senses and did leave Molyl with Emmett and Rose. She just needed a push in that direction and thanks to Emmet, she got it.
I do hope you will stick around. i should be uploading the nexxt chapter very soon. It is a lot lighter than previous ones.
Thank you again for your comments and for reading,
Lisa
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2012 12:55 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Seven
Bella is so lucky to have Carlisle!
Author's Response:
Thanks fro reading and commetning.
I love Carlisle. I hope I am doing him justice by writing him. He was always my favorite character in the Twilight series.
I think you'll really like him in the next chapter :)
-Lisa
Date: 03 Jan 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Seven
Poor B. Can understand her reluctance though.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Bella is acting the only way she knows how. She is scared but thanks to Emmett she is trying to let some of it go and be normal. I think it would be a very common reaction having all those bad things happen to you or your child.
I promise the next chapter is lighter!
-Lisa
Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Seven
{sigh}
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading...next chapter is lighter and I think you'll like it!
-Lisa
Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Seven
Loved this chapter..... so glad that Emmett was able to convice her to go out.... because that alone time will not be as easy to get once the baby comes! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Pretty much things are going to get better this point on. I promsie the next chapter will be lighter. The baby will be coming soon too!
-Lisa
Date: 03 Jan 2012 1:24 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Seven
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting.
The next chapter will be posted very soon..promise!
-Lisa
Date: 31 Dec 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Six
update soon? I miss this story.
Author's Response:
Sorry for such a long delay. Things have been crazy with the holidays and such but I promsie a new chapter tonight! thanks for reading.
-Lisa
Date: 19 Dec 2011 2:43 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Six
I hope Alec gets off easy since he took care of Molly. He tried to help her get home. I hope things quiet down a little bit for this family.
Author's Response:
We'll find out about Alec in the ent chapter, which is going to be posted tonight. things are going to quiet down just for a little while (after all, there still is Esme and Renee's attuitude to deal with).
Thank you so much for reading,
-Lisa
Date: 15 Dec 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Six
It is good that Molly is back where she needs to be and that is with her family. I wonder if Renee will ever truly accept Carlisle for being with Bella and for wanting to be Molly's father and always be there for them.
Author's Response:
Carlisle has proved himself again and again that he loves Bella and Molly. We'll get to deal with Renee a little bit later (oh and Esme too...don't forget about her).
thanks for reading!
-Lisa
PS-I'm posting the next chapter tonight.
Date: 14 Dec 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Five
Well I must say as a mother if I was in Bella's situation I think that I would have done the same thing. There is nothing in this world that stops an angry momma Bear and Bella is no exception.
Date: 14 Dec 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Six
hmmm now why did it take a month esp if Alec was helping. I smell a lawsuit and maybe someone on Skankya's side in the police dept. Glad they are all back together. Molly is so cute, even indeed.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. i'm updating tonight.
-Lisa
Date: 13 Dec 2011 7:14 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Six
loved it finally happy! looking forward to seeing what happens next
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! the next update will be later tonight.
-Lisa
Date: 13 Dec 2011 5:01 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Six
yay Molly is back with them! Loved this chapter... it was nice to hear that Alec was good to her and kept her as safe and happy as possible.... Can't wait to read the next one!
Author's Response:
The next chapter will be posted tonight! Thank you for reading/reviewing!!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 1:57 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Six
Well, that was satisfying. I love a looooonnnng chapter. Just want to mention, however, that the word is not chocked. That rhymes with block! What you mean is choked; long "O" sound. You aren't the only one to do that, but it always stops me cold when reading. At least you don't use "shutter" when you mean "shudder". That one drives me nuts! I have also been known to "shudder".
Author's Response:
You're in luck because the next chapter is long (and should be posted tonight). Thank you for correcting me.
-Lisa
Date: 13 Dec 2011 1:45 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Six
Ding dong the wicked witch is dead. Yeah they got the little munchkin back. Oh happy days are here again. Awesome job on the chapter. Keeps getting better and better.
Jukie
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review! The next update will be tonight. Sorry for the delay!
-Lisa
Date: 05 Dec 2011 8:32 PM Title: Chapter One
I have been reading this story from the beginning and have really liked it. It does feel like the pace is dragging a little at this point though, and the switching between present and past tense in this chapter was uncomfortable to read. Keep writing!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and I'm glad you are interested in it.
I appreciate your feed back about the tenses. The thing is when I write a story, I make an outline and I follow it. When I type the chapter I sometiems copy and paste the outline and use it to write the story. I do proof read what i write but obviously I don't don't get it all. I don't have a beta so it's just me who reads it. I appologize for the misuse in langauge. I appologize and will try to work on it. I also got the last chapter up really fast and maybe should have spent more time with it. I really do appreciate the comments about this. Thank you for bringing this to my attention!
Hope the next chapter will be posted by Sunday. Hopefully this won't be a problem!
Thanks again,
Lisa
Date: 05 Dec 2011 5:51 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Five
I don't understand the cops letting Molly stay with them for 18 days. They should have figured something out by now how to get her back safely.
Author's Response:
The police were straigizing. It'll be touched upon in the next chapter. I cna't wait to finish and post the next chapter!
Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts!
-Lisa
Date: 04 Dec 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Five
Get Molly, Then HANG Tanya. This is her worst yet.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
There will be a resolution soon.....I promise!
I'm hoping to update soon!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2011 5:05 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Five
Cant blame bella for getting pissed and jumping on it. She's been there 18 f'ing days? WTF. She's obviously left alone a little if molly was able to call. Sometimes the shackles we put ont he cops are pathetic, but they should have told B more than they did. maybe if they had, things would have been different. Yea for the elderly couple.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting!
I'm not a parents but I don't think how Bella acted was unreasonable and I'm surprised she didn't act sooner. We'll find out how Molly was able to call Bella in the next chapter. I'm so happy you aknowedged the elderly couple! Aren't they awesome!
I'm hoping to update by Sunday. I've been really busyso here's to hoping!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2011 1:04 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Five
Love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Next chapter will hopefully be posted by Sunday!
-Lisa
Date: 04 Dec 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Five
looking forward to the next chapter ! im glad they finally got some news on molly !
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting!
We'll hear more about Molly in the next chapter!
I'm hoping to post the next one by Sunnday!
-Lisa
Date: 03 Dec 2011 6:58 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Five
I have to wait a week for an update!!! I'm going to cry now. Please write quick? and wtf? 18 days and nothing? I hope Bella OWNS Boston pd by the time this is done!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and I'm so glad you are enjoying it!
I'm sorry but the next update might not be until like Sunday. Please don't kill me!
-Lisa
Date: 03 Dec 2011 5:57 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Five
wow! Asw a mom I would have done the same thing! Hopefully they get her out soon! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting!
We'll find out more about Molly in the next chapter, which will hopefully be posted by Sunday!
Thanks again!
-Lisa
Date: 02 Dec 2011 5:20 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Three
Renee might not like the relationship, but she should support Bella. Carlisle is not a bad person. He is just older. It is not like he is a bum. Molly seems to get into mischief when she is not with her mother.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and reviewing!
That's Bella's point. When seh sees Carlise she doesn't see age, shes love. She sees home. He has proven himself that he isn't just fooling around, he really does care about her and Molly.
Molly didn't mean to run away, she didn't want Zoe to get lost. Doesn't make the circumstances better, but still. She isn't running away.
Thanks again fro reading!
-Lisa
Date: 02 Dec 2011 1:58 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Four
How awesome was Bella telling Esme off?? I am glad that she got to do that. And while I realize that Renee is under lots of stress along with the rest of them but does she really need to lash out on Bella and Carlisle? He and his family have been there for Molly and Bella and are family to them too.
Author's Response:
Thansk for reading!
Bella felt bad for yelling at Esme, but as we all know (and even Edward) it was coming and she deserved it.
Renee just is confused. She automaticlly asumes that Carlisle is using her. She doesn't know how to channel her emotions. He has proved that he loves Bella and Molly again and again. They are his life now.
I haven't been able to put down the story and I have been working on it every night. I started writing the next chapter before I posted the last one. Next update should be soon!
-Lisa
Date: 02 Dec 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Four
Let me say this. In this day and time with Amber alerts and identification regarding air planes and children. You would need lots of time to do this and pull it off, or she is close by or transported by car. This kid is smart and she will not be quiet.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! :)
Who knows how long this has been planned. it was Tanya after all and she seems off her rocker. The next chapter should be in a few days.
-LIsa
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2011 1:12 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Four
I was kind of thinking it was Tanya as well. Crazy!
Author's Response:
It was Tanya because she is crazy...as she proved!
thanks for reading. The next update will be soon!
-Lisa
Date: 01 Dec 2011 12:15 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Four
I'm glad Esme got told off and Edward is still trying to be good friend. I hope Bella will pull herself together for the sake of herself and the little bean on the way. She needs to be strong so they can find Molly and get the Tanya the witch for ruining their lives. Awesome story.
Jukie
Author's Response:
Edward is trying his best to be a good friend. he is trying to get over his feelings for Bella.
Bella doesn't know how to handle and take care of herself. She also doesn't know how to allow the people around her to take care of her either. Molly has always come first since she was born.
Glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for reading and commenting. The next update should be soon!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2011 6:58 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Four
At the beginning of the chapter I thought Skankya or Esme.... I immediately negated Esme cause she hates kids so much. Renee is a witch. She is seriously adding to a stressful situation, IMHO. OMG I so LOVED Bella telling off Esme. Think the Dean needs to know how Esme really feels too, esp since she just took it upon herself to show up at B's house making demands.
Author's Response:
Esme in her own little world thought she was wakign the situation in her own hands and was being the bigger person...she was wrong.
Tanya is never good news in any story, is she? LOL!
Renee means well but needs to take a step back.
Thank you so much for takign the time and commenting. the enxt update will be soon!
-Lisa
Date: 01 Dec 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Four
I was debating between Esme or Tanya. And Renee is a wicked bitch! OMG YOU HAVE TO UPDATE QUICK!!!! This is heartstopping!
Author's Response:
Hello!
thanks for commenting and reading!
Tanya in any story usually is bad. Renee is trying, but she deals with stress almost as well as Bella does.
I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. It should be a few days!
-Lisa