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Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2023 11:19 PM Title: Bay Ridge Avenue - An Edward Flashback

So now that I've read this account of Alec's Death involving Aro I'm not sure why Edward was so mad at him for killing him. I know Edward had other plans but Aro Kinda had no choice and if Edward knew this, there's no reason for him to be so upset and stop talking to him when he did, and because of what he did under the circumstances.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2023 11:17 PM Title: The Hunt Part Two Starring Aro

So now that I've read this account of Alec's Death involving Aro I'm not sure why Edward was so mad at him for killing him. I know Edward had other plans but Aro Kinda had no choice and if Edward knew this, there's no reason for him to be so upset and stop talking to him when he did, and because of what he did under the circumstances.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2023 11:17 PM Title: The Hunt Part Two Starring Aro

So now that I've read this account of Alec's Death involving Aro I'm not sure why Edward was so mad at him for killing him. I know Edward had other plans but Aro Kinda had no choice and if Edward knew this, there's no reason for him to be so upset and stop talking to him when he did, and because of what he did under the circumstances.

Reviewer: kerareneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2019 7:18 AM Title: The Hunt Part One Starring Aro

Loved it!

Reviewer: kerareeneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2018 3:48 AM Title: The Hunt Part One Starring Aro

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 28 Outtake Starring Carlisle

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 12:00 AM Title: The Hunt Part Two Starring Aro

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 10:25 PM Title: The Hunt Part One Starring Aro

Loved it! Poor Lauren!

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2016 10:49 PM Title: The Hunt Part One Starring Aro

I am re-reading the storm series but I already review quiet storm so I am going to review what I hadn't

I love this story 

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 6:22 PM Title: Bay Ridge Avenue - An Edward Flashback

Great update; really gave a clear snap-shot of what life was like for Edward after his father sent him to live with his Nanny. It showed his soft side, giving money to his grandmother and being respectful and caring with her, and to a certain extent with his brother. Carlisle was an awesome big brother to him, and it was nice to see the beginnings of his friendship with Aro. Edward's biggest role model was clearly Marcus, which fed his need to feel important and wanted and helped fill his need to show his father - who sent him away - that he is doing great without him. So young Edward was basically a punk with daddy issues, a dispicable role model, a supportive big brother, a loving grandmother who could only do so much to reign her grandson in, and a good heart where his family was concerned, but for everyone else he's out for himself...end of story. Thanks for not including in this chapter Edward sleeping with Jane...thank God it only happened the one time. Yuck! Thanks for this outtake.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2013 8:13 PM Title: The Hunt Part Two Starring Aro

I thought Aro killed Alec and two of his associates? I wonder when he kills them? Or am I remembering wrong? I liked reading these chapters, its just that you would refer to, "all the shit that happened in the city last night", and I have no idea anymore what you are referring to at all. I have no idea what happened last night. I know that the Cullens are on vacation in Florida right now but I have no idea what happened last night. I guess I could go back to read the chapters that happened just before this one again, or I could just get back to the Epilogue and the Sequel and stop worrying about what I can no longer remember. I guess that sounds like a good idea. So...'on with the show'!

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2013 7:13 PM Title: The Hunt Part One Starring Aro

He is not as rough as I thought he would be. It's cool though. They are cute together.

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 5:44 AM Title: Bay Ridge Avenue - An Edward Flashback

I always wondered how they were b4, now I know wish I had read this sooner, really enjoyed there history............thank you 

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 6:50 PM Title: Bay Ridge Avenue - An Edward Flashback

loved diving into edwards past some/.....u should do more like this!!

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 3:46 PM Title: Bay Ridge Avenue - An Edward Flashback

Loved it.

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 28 Outtake Starring Carlisle

loved it

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 7:07 PM Title: The Hunt Part Two Starring Aro

Loved the lemon

Exciting chapter

Love A/L

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2011 5:21 PM Title: The Hunt Part One Starring Aro

Awesome chapter. Fun to read. Aro and Lauren are cute together. 

Reviewer: newmoon11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 28 Outtake Starring Carlisle

whoa!!! so crazy

Reviewer: newmoon11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 8:03 AM Title: The Hunt Part Two Starring Aro

hahah the ending, lol priceless. awesome dirty love-it all chapter!

Reviewer: newmoon11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 7:29 AM Title: The Hunt Part One Starring Aro

shit...i love aro..seriously! lol need more more more outtakes with him..gah!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2011 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 28 Outtake Starring Carlisle

that makes a little sence as to how carlisle was acting at the time but in qs durring this fight carlisle told ed he loved her and was running away with her, why do that when he was never planning to? when they already kinda had a plan? that part doesn't fit....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2011 5:49 AM Title: The Hunt Part Two Starring Aro

oh aro baby i would help you clean up a scene and dump a body!damn he really tossed her around in bed, and the italian? holy shit! body? let's toss a body! i know i've said it before but i adore your aro! seriously crushing on this character!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2011 4:26 AM Title: The Hunt Part One Starring Aro

ahhh! you have made me love on aro! in all his sweetie-hardass-sexy-mobster glory. fucker could bring the nasty outta me. just sayin! i wanna cash in the airmiles leave hubbie at home and go find me an aro down in brooklyn. yummy yummy!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 28 Outtake Starring Carlisle

Yes the FBI plant.. Heidi assisted.  Bella was dead on right about them both.

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 6:30 PM Title: The Hunt Part One Starring Aro

love being able to get the other characters perspectives on things!! and LOVE the pics on the banner! those actors fit the character rolls perfectly esp. marcus and aro! hope to see more pics from you on your stories!!!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 6:27 PM Title: The Hunt Part One Starring Aro

Love the outtakes.  So that's what happened.  We can't really blame Aro for disobeying Edward now, can we?

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