Date: 03 Jan 2015 11:35 AM Title: Outtake 1 - Peyton's First Day Back to School
Such a child you have given us to be amazed by and wish we knew!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 11:29 AM Title: Epilogue
An absolutely perfect story, with a family I wouldn't mind joining and one awesome, madly in love couple, Edward and Bella! I loved this so much as I do all your stories I've read so far!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 28
That was about the most original proposal ever! I keep thinking life can't get any better for them, and then it does!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 27
New car, new permanent address, custom key chain, what more clould a gut want? This was such a great chapter, tears and all when it came time to move to Bella and Peyton's!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 26
Fabulous Valentine weekend complete with amazing sex! Peyton's special valentine from Brody was adorable, but I understand how it made Bella and Edward feel, too! With him moving in, life is good, but I'm curious about him going out on the boat again. If that doesn't happen, what will he do?
Date: 03 Jan 2015 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 25
That was rather gut-wtrenching for all concerned! Boy, am I glad that Bud shot Aleksei and he can't hurt anyone any more! Bless Charlie's heart, that scared hell out of him, for both Bella and Edward! I hope the relief outweighs the guilt for Edward, it wasn't his fault Aleksei was wrong in the head, thinking his miserable life was Edward's doing!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 24
This is going south in one big hurry! After all this time, for that piece of crap to reappear in Edward's life is the most horrifying thing! It's bad enough Aleksei murdered Wayne, now he's about to do something awful to Edward and Bella! I don't like this one little bit!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved the Christmas gifts, especially Brady! I felt a cold chill, however, when I read about the cold, calculating eyes of Bella's visitor! No doubt in my mind that somehoe, Alexsei has found where Edward is and has come to cause trouble. That warning about what can happen wasn't spoken by accident!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh yes, Edward is going to have a most excited little girl on Christmas, Peyton will love a puppy, especially one from her best friend! Can't wait to see how that goes! Now we have to see how going back on the boat affects everyone!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 21
Thank heaven they got him out of the icy water in time! God bless Jasper's roping skills, they most likely saved the day! Frankly, this chapter made me cry, several times! I was almost as glad as Bella when Edward opened his eyes and spoke!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 20
What the hell, if they were saints, they both would wear halos, right? There are bound to be bumps in the road and bad days, but love and family will get them through. As for Tricia being that hateful, some people just can't help the poison in their hearts from leaking out! Bella told her what was what, anyway!
Date: 01 Jan 2015 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
I just plain loved this chapter. It was fun when they all went to the boat races and Edward giving Peyton that charm bracelet was adorable!
Date: 01 Jan 2015 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward may be Peyton's best friend, but she can manipulate all the mwn in her life, not to mention most of the women! It was cuter than all get out when she got his phone and asked her mom if Edward could spend the night, and the comment about him being her dad if he married her mom was perfect Peyton!
Date: 01 Jan 2015 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 17
Things are going along swimmingly indeed! They both are smart to try and take it slow, not rush things along! You can kinf of tell they would like to hurry just a bit, and be together all the time. I can see it happening soon. Emmett is slowly being forgiven, even by himself, and Peyton, of course is wonderful!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
Though it was a scary thing to confess to a seven year old, Edward should have just trusted what Bella told him! Peyton is a truly amazing child, like a gift from God, just meant to help Edward! Boy, do I love this story!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
That was nearly overpowering! They are so good together, just as I suspected they would be! That was a sad story about Evan and her, but look what it produced, Peyton! If this chapter had background music, it would have to be Etta James, singing, At Last!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 14
Poor Emmett, he just did what a lot of people do when they hear that word, prison. Too bad he didn't hear everything so he could judge fairly. Well, Rose will straighten him out, but good! I can just picture Bella running to the docks and Edward catching sight of him, and then them embracing each other tightly!Whooee!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 13
I think I really do see that light at the end of the tunnel! I just hope Bella and Edward can see it too! I'm holding a very good thought for them!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 12
Truly, life is what happens while you make plans. That sure wasn't the way he wanted to tell her about his past. Naturally he has put the worst possible spin on her words, but that's probably the low selfesteem talking. The guy sure doesn't cut himself any slack.
Date: 31 Dec 2014 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
This was tough for Bella and I'm thinking the next chapter is going to be worse! It's time to suck it up and bare all, I'm thinking! At least Xavier and Bella have made peace which should help. Her mom really laid it on the line about Edward being a fisherman. Sounds like a tough life and a dangerous one!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
Xavier is going to cut his own throat if he keeps on at Bella like that! I think Edward did the right thing, telling him to take it up with him and not Bella! This was a great chapter, especially them making out in the parking lot like a pair of teenagers!
Date: 30 Dec 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm so glad Charlie told Edward he's not the bad guy he thinks he is, and I'm happy he has started talking to Carlisle, too. It took a lot to talk to Charlie, but I imagine he's glad he did!
Date: 30 Dec 2014 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
Everything about dinner was just right, even the stopping and leaving, when neither really wanted to! They have a lot to tell each other and it looks like it will happen pretty soon.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
It's so easy to see why Edward loves Peyton, and I guess she sees him clearly so returns the sentiment. They are quite the pair. He and Bella are doing a lot better, too, for her to invite him to Sunday dinner. Now he just has to survive telling Bella about his past!
Date: 30 Dec 2014 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 6
Evan must be Peyton's father, and from Bella's nightmare, he must be dead. I'm hoping you elaborate on that story later on. It sounds like Edward is fitting in and doing okay learning his new job and is at least friendly with Bella now. It was kind of obvious that they needed to at least be civil.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
Has it not dawned on Bella that her reaction to Edward borders on bizarre? She seems to be scared to death to get to know him. This despite her daughter , dad and brother all seeming to like him, at least a little.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
I think Edward is under Peyton's spell, like the rest of her friends and family! So, he has his second chance and must now begin the hard work of re-entering society. I'll bet he can do it, too!
Date: 30 Dec 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 3
Instant attraction, mixed with fight or flight! Must be hard on the nerves to feel that way! Bella and Edward are both hiding things from their past that will probably need talking over in the near future. Can't wait to hear Xavier's history with Peyton and Bella, why they are so close.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
There truly are good people in this world, willing to help give a second chance where deserved. I still want to know more about Edward's background, but more about his future.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really curious as to why he spent seven years in prison for something he supposedly didn't do. There has to be a hell of a story there, I'll bet! His lawyer is guilty for not getting him a better deal and now thw parole officer hands him a hundred grand! From where comes that kind of money?
Date: 30 Dec 2014 1:15 AM Title: Prologue
Not too promising a start her, woman, having Edward pitched into the icy waters to his death! WTF? I hope that's not really how it ends, because that would just be mean!
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2014 4:34 PM Title: Outtake 1 - Peyton's First Day Back to School
AWESOME read even the 2nd time around ;) thanks so much for keeping it posted ;D
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting storyline
Date: 05 Sep 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
wonderful beginning to the story! i hope Edward is going to be okay
Date: 04 Sep 2013 12:23 PM Title: Prologue
loved it! poor Bella and Peyton! hope Edward is ok!
Date: 07 May 2013 1:54 AM Title: Outtake 1 - Peyton's First Day Back to School
I really liked this story. I was sweet, sexy, exciting and left all these warm and fuzzy feelings inside. Great Job
Date: 08 Mar 2013 11:41 PM Title: Epilogue
I loved this story:) I read alot of Bella and Edward stories an this one will go on my list of all time favs.
Anita
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 26
why isn't he proposing?
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
must be Aleksei
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
what kind of puppy?
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2012 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 21
wow that gave me goosebumps and chills
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 20
this really derves more reviews and I know I am guilty of getting so caught up in it that I hit next before I review
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 16
so wonderful
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 14
me too, you are doing an excellent job
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
still likely to be a bumpy road or choppy seas
Date: 01 May 2012 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
I Had this theroy that he faked his death to get away from the responsability of being a dad now i feel bad
Date: 09 Mar 2012 5:37 AM Title: Epilogue
'Loved this story. It was soooo sweet. But also had lots of detail, great characters, enough suspense. I don't usually care for tatoos, but this Edward was no less appealing with his tatoos. It was a different twist for the story to start with a little girl befriending the lonely Edward. 'So many supportive characters, who made Edward feel loved.
Was there a particular meaning to Edward's tatoos, or were they just some way to appear tough? I thought I remembered him telling Bella that he would explain their meaning?
Thanks sooo much for this story. Keep writing!
Date: 06 Mar 2012 8:06 PM Title: Outtake 1 - Peyton's First Day Back to School
Just read this all the way through. It was so good. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 05 Mar 2012 5:25 PM Title: Outtake 1 - Peyton's First Day Back to School
Love little Peyton. This was really good. I can not wait to hear more from Peyton. I would love to see her POV of different things from the story. Wonder what she thinks of her little brother??
Date: 03 Mar 2012 9:15 PM Title: Epilogue
Snif Snif...I have tears rolling down my face!!! What a great ending to a great story. Can wait to read your next story...Anne-Marie
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2012 1:55 PM Title: Epilogue
Absolutely fabulous!! Perfect ending!! All of it!! Thanks for the lemon, btw!
Going to miss this story, TONS!!
Soo proud of you!
Will be watching for Drummer Girl.
Take care!!
Date: 27 Feb 2012 2:56 PM Title: Epilogue
AWESOME!!!!!!!! I love seeing Edward as a daddy. I know he has had Peyton but just imagining him with his little son. I loved the picutre you posted. You have done an amazing job with this story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I am sad to see it end.
Date: 27 Feb 2012 1:31 PM Title: Epilogue
It was a brilliant story!
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2012 4:22 AM Title: Epilogue
wow i so love the story. i am glad you wrote it and glad i read it . i loved it
i was so happy on Sunday mornings for the chapters
i am so glad they family is whole and they have a new little one to complete. the girls are having more and jasper finally got his puppy
charlie wow retiring, but great he can relax with renee and enjoy the grandbabies
loved it all
Date: 26 Feb 2012 11:50 PM Title: Epilogue
That was an absolutely wonderful ending!!!! Thanks for the great story!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2012 7:33 PM Title: Epilogue
I'm sad that this story is over. But the ending was great. I loved that it was completely from Edward's pov. I'm looking forward to your new story. The little tease you gave has me interested. Your a great story teller and can't wait to read it.
Maria
Date: 26 Feb 2012 6:16 PM Title: Epilogue
loved the chapter
Date: 23 Feb 2012 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yeah! They gotta have their TALK and get the tough stuff out of the way, so they can proceed with LIFE. What chemistry the two have!!!
Date: 22 Feb 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
Good story. 'Can't wait 'til Bella and Edward actually talk to each other more (alone)!
Date: 06 Feb 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 28
OMGosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I sooooooo loved this chapter. You did an EXCELLENT job with the whole chapter. I LOVED how he asked her to marry him. I love Peyton running to them and saying WE are going to get married. I am very sad that this story is coming to an end. I am really looking forward to the epilogue. I am putting you on author alert and I have already voted for you in the contest. Thank you sooooo much for sharing this wonderful story with us. I have been following this story here and also on FF. I have left some reviews here and some over at FF. Just know that I have read every chapter and have left a review for every chapter, it may have been here or there.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 28
I loved this chapter. It was nice to read bits of past chapters in the way you did with the journal. I liked the end very much but will truely miss reading this story every Sunday! Well done! Well dine!
Maria
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wonderful story, wonderfully written and I thank you for sharing. Cheri
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 28
oh yipee they are engaged.
i love how everything came together. they where sure on a life journey all of them
i am thrilled edward found a family and a home and love. it is great to be wanted and needed and loved.
peyton is the most adorable and bright little girl. i loved the relationship between edward and peyton.
it was a hell of a ride and i love every chapter. thank you for writing
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 28
Excellent, it was perfect!! Sad that it is over....but all good things must come to an end, right?? Lol!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 27
love the chapter
sounds like edward has a hell of a car he just bought
it is great that edward and bella finally are moved in together. i am glad edward got the seal of approval. just one more step to a great future
Date: 05 Feb 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
wow, great chapter, its sad to see it over. cant wait for the epi
Date: 01 Feb 2012 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 25
You had me totally on egde for the first part of the chapter, with every paragraph I was wondering when it was going to happen. I am so glad that Peyton wasn't home so she was spared all that horror. I'm looking forward to the fluff coming :-)
Date: 24 Jan 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 26
Excellent chapter!
Date: 23 Jan 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 26
AWESOME!!!!!!!!! Loved this whole chapter. Another great great job.
Date: 23 Jan 2012 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 26
loved it ! looking forward to more !
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 26
I just have no words good enough to explain how great this story is. I have laughed, cried, gotten pissed, scared, and sat on the edge of my seat waiting for more. People, please tell your friends about this story. I find it hard to believe anybody anywhere would not love it!!! I wll be devastated when it ends. Please consider a sequel. There is so much to keep telling, do they get married, babies, Peytons teenage years, Em and Roses life, Alice and Jaz, does Edward take over the Isabella Marie, ok now im babbling. But......Im not above begging for more!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2012 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
wow what a hell of a chapter. man oh man
edward protecting his family. he does deserve all he has worked for
changed man. he lost alot in life and now he has a chance to have it all
love it
Date: 22 Jan 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
I just started to read ur story yesterday and was unable to stop until i got here this is a great story ur a great writer, keep up with the great work. cant wait to read more....
Date: 16 Jan 2012 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 25
just incredible, you are just an amazing writer i always look forward to seeing a new chapter from you! phew well that is a relief that aleksei is gone, and aww charlie at the end he is such a sweet man!! :) x
Date: 16 Jan 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 25
looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 25
OMGosh, Awesomeness!!! Thank you soo much for not leaving us with a nasty cliffee on this chapter. You soo could have. Wonderful writing, as always!! Love it!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2012 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 24
wow so bella's feelings to be spoke where correct
seems someone is hell bent on edward never being happy
aleski you are on the runand have been why didn't you just stay away. why be stupid now and get edward. he went to jail not like he didn't not serve time. he wasn't in all the way like you.
wow what a hell of a chapter. soo much going on. so much
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wow, things are really beginning to get a little scary. I know the guys will protect Bella and Peyton, but at what cost?? I hope nothing happens to Edward, please let him be the one to kill Aleksei...Please!!! He needs to know the threat is gone, over. He doesnt need to feel the guilt, He will if Aleksi gets to kill anyone else. Edward will blame himself. Edward and Bella both deserve a HEA, please. I better quit begging, this story is so good I can't help but beg for them!!
Date: 08 Jan 2012 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow that was such an on edge chapter. It was great though.
Date: 08 Jan 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 24
I think this chapter was full of tension.The angst I felt reading was due to your writing.So congrats for your work.
Date: 08 Jan 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 24
looking forwarde to the next chatper