Date: 16 Jan 2017 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life
Oh my God!! This is so funny.
Thanks for making me laugh, I needed it, as it is 8 am
Monday.
Date: 28 Jun 2016 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 64: Mister and Mis(s)Communication
Why is Bella always running? Your a big girl use your word even the bad ones if want.
Date: 27 Jun 2016 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 52: Emergency Contact
Fuck yeah we have lift off! Nice chapter all around.
Date: 27 Jun 2016 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 46: Interested Parties
Alice is like an over excited jack Russel in this chapter. Jeebus!
Date: 26 Jun 2016 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 32: Allie and Jazz and Rosie and Em
Alice could attempt to big a good sister instead of sniping harpy. You married the douche just love your brother flaws and all. Next...
Date: 26 Jun 2016 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 26: Discussion and Dissection
Is this story going to time advance or is it just going to be the first week? Also are they going to get together slow slow burn style? Curious reader.
Author's Response:
Hi Miss G
Thank you for your reviews! This story is a slow burn but things will advance quickly between the characters given the time frame and there will be a HEA. If you're waiting for lemons though, that will take a while.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
-bannerday
Date: 26 Jun 2016 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 22: Angela Weber and the Mexican Mandate
So Angela is yet another self righteous judgemental bizzy body.
Date: 26 Jun 2016 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 18: Do the (After)Math
Why do I get the feeling they won't get together until like chapter 50 or something ?
Date: 25 Jun 2016 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 15: In the Dark About So Much
Oh Alice Pa-lease!
Date: 25 Jun 2016 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
If Edward was my brother and I loved him I would not tell his business to a stranger. But we all know Alice can't mind her own business. Slow burn? Jeebus!
Date: 25 Jun 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 10: Into the Lair
I love how Bella manages to be self-righteous, opinionated, judgemental and yet turned on all while completely invading Edwards privacy. Ha!
Date: 09 Apr 2016 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 71: Missing Pages and Photographic Evidence
So I don't usually review on this site, but the other one was incomplete and I guess you are reworking it to fit the TOS? Stupid site, there's nothing wrong with this story. I mean, the minimal sex there is is kind of required to make the story work. And I think it was the perfect amount.
So, I really enjoyed this story. I loved how it started and how she wrote about it. And all the funny things that happened to them, and that they were able to work it out every time one of them did something stupid or thought the other did something stupid. So cute. And then it became their story. Anyway, since I read this on my Kindle, I thought I'd better come review the last chapter at least. :)
Date: 15 Jan 2016 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 70: This Must Be the Place
OMG!!! I am so in love with your story! I read the first half in fanfiction and when I reached chapter 22, I was like I have to read the rest. So I looked for this story and I was soo surprised when I actually found it. I'm soo glad that I decided to look for it because this story is hilariously amazing. I was laughing my bum off throughout the story. So thank you so much for sharing this. I really can't wait to read more of your stories! :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2015 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life
I could not stop laughing...THANKS!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2015 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 71: Missing Pages and Photographic Evidence
AWESOME story!!!! ;) i read this on ffn but i'm so glad you posted it on here 'cos i loved the 3 banners ;) btw whre's the brief epilogue? ;D
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2015 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Espect
I can just see him scared of a giant dong jumping out at him!!! Ha, ha, ha, ha...
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2015 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 8: Departures
Wow! To have three guys like that. Can't get it out of my mind.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2015 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 5: From Bad to Unimaginably Worse
Soooo funny! He thinks she cursed him with man malfunctions!!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2015 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life
Can't believe that I'm just now reading this. Hilarious!!! I about peed my pants! Her trying to describe what may be wrong with her truck while he has a hat hanging on his... I can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 15: In the Dark About So Much
My heart is beating so fast like he really knew she did it. AHH
Date: 17 Oct 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 71: Missing Pages and Photographic Evidence
OMG I loved it so cute. Thanks so much
Date: 17 Oct 2014 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 70: This Must Be the Place
Loved it so glad I went back to finish this is one of the great stories thanks so much. I love how the bitch came back and is misserable and Bella told her off.
Date: 17 Oct 2014 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 69: Full Circle and Spiraling Ideas
That was perfect he got her family and friends together for her so sweet. They are moving fast I waited almost a month before I moved in with him lol
Date: 16 Oct 2014 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 68: From Deflowering to Blossoming
Good things happen to good people and they have been very good lol
Date: 16 Oct 2014 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 67: Afterglow and Afterthoughts
I love dunch that is good. Edward is so sensitive and sweet
Date: 15 Oct 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 66: The Necessary, The Obvious, and At Last
That was perfect
Date: 15 Oct 2014 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 65: Loose Lips, Sinking Ships, and the Following Fix
That was the best I love the potted plant truck how could she refuse lol. I love the I love yous at the same time to to cute.
Date: 15 Oct 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 64: Mister and Mis(s)Communication
I knew she would be hurt but he needs her to know he didnt make them read it. What is he planing cant wait.
Date: 14 Oct 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 63: The Kickoff, the Huddle, and the Fumble
Busted how is she going to deal with them all knowing that she is writing that story lol.
Date: 14 Oct 2014 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 62: Approaching The Obvious
That was priceless a banana and google lol.
Date: 14 Oct 2014 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 61: The Momversation
Priceless and I must say sounds like something I would say maybe not that forward but around about I loved it.
Date: 14 Oct 2014 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 60: Just B(&)E-ing
That was one great date they just need to let go and say the words. That must of been one great talk with her mom lol .
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 71: Missing Pages and Photographic Evidence
i was a story-ho, i am sorry. i found your story a few nights ago and i was hooked. i couldn't stop after chapters to review each one because i was so excited to keep reading. wonderful story, great characters. i love that there were lemons but more so there was a real story not just a paragragh of nonsense in between sex scenes. fantastic work!!
~danie
Date: 28 Apr 2014 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
I'm one of those readers that never review but just felt like saying I thoroughly enjoyed this. Was rather insightful hearing from a fanfic writers thoughts.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
amazing writeing keep it up
Date: 11 Mar 2014 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 65: Loose Lips, Sinking Ships, and the Following Fix
I LOVE the Potted Plant and their ILY moment!!!
I tried to guess all through the chapter what they were doing to that truck, but I never would have come up with something that good!!! Good thing you're the writer and I just get to enjoy it… ;-)
Date: 26 Jan 2014 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 71: Missing Pages and Photographic Evidence
Love it
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 71: Missing Pages and Photographic Evidence
This initial epilogue was just as enjoyable the second time around as it was the first time on FFN.net
I'm going to miss our little author and her Muse!
Thanks for a wonderful journey!
Date: 23 Jan 2014 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
First time commenting asi only read completed EB fics. Great story. Enjoyed every minute of it!
Date: 04 Jan 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 22: Angela Weber and the Mexican Mandate
This is just one of the best stories I have read in a very long time. Your writing skills are beyond excellent and I cannot stop reading. This Edward is so hot. He is the perfect man looks wise, but personality wise he is even better. Love how he is realizing he is not the kind of man he really wants to be and that he wants to change and become a better man. He doesn't yet realize it is because of Bella. Love your Bella too. Sweet and dorky, she is exactly the kind of girl Edward wants and needs. I have to move on now as I MUST read the next chapter. Great job girlie! Great story!
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 70: This Must Be the Place
This whole journey has been in-freaking-credible!!!!!!!!! Loved every minute of it!
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2013 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 69: Full Circle and Spiraling Ideas
Awwwww!!!!! Loved this to pieces!!!!!!
you are such a fun, creative, awesome writer! Love reading your stuff!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2013 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 44: Dirty Laundry
what else can I say, but AWESOME AND THANK YOU!
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 43: A Date With Fate
I hope Bella goes over and sits right on Edward's lap! crosses fingers
Date: 30 Nov 2013 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 70: This Must Be the Place
Wow, I do not think I have laughed, cried or done more aww's or omg to any other story!! Thank you for putting your story up on fan fiction n allowing me to slack off on all the work I should have been doing!! Ur story is one of the most original I have come across so from the land down under (Australia, just in case u weren't sure) thank you, thank you, thank you
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2013 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 29: Word Processing
OMG I LOVE THAT! Thank you for writing this story! You are a awesome writer, can not stop reading!!!!
Date: 29 Nov 2013 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 70: This Must Be the Place
Love these last chapters but sad to see itgo.
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 23: McCarty Party of Five
ohhh sh*t I'm so excited to see what happens * stands with excred eyes
Date: 27 Nov 2013 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 65: Loose Lips, Sinking Ships, and the Following Fix
Cannot believe that is has taken two + years to get to the ILY's! Or 13-14 ish days..
But I do like how your chapter worked out. Looking forward to more :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
I love your story!!! I can not stop reading* holding hot coffee* can not wait to read more
Date: 26 Nov 2013 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 63: The Kickoff, the Huddle, and the Fumble
please update
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2013 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 5: From Bad to Unimaginably Worse
I freakin love your story, CAN NOT WAIT TO READ MORE!!!
Date: 04 Sep 2013 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 63: The Kickoff, the Huddle, and the Fumble
Omg...bellas going to be embrassed
Date: 06 Aug 2013 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 62: Approaching The Obvious
Love it and the progression of their relationship
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2013 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 61: The Momversation
LOL
This just gets better and better! :D
Date: 18 Jul 2013 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 61: The Momversation
Love both chapters
Date: 18 Jul 2013 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 61: The Momversation
Nice. LOL...
Date: 18 Jul 2013 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 60: Just B(&)E-ing
Is this still day 12, or are we on day 13?
What did Renee say to Edward?
Date: 07 Jul 2013 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 59: Dream Date
I read your authors note at the top. In two years of writing has only been 12 days of FFSGSG's time frame...
WOW!!!
So Edward is in love with Bella. Bella cares for Edward but is it love?? I think so.. ( two years = twelve days?? REALLY???) I think that she will think its too soon.
Him dreaming that he needs to tell her.. the ILY's Can not wait to see what happens next. And Bellas truck? Will she get a new one?
Wow..
Looking forward to more. ( still trying to get my head around the whole 12 days= 2 years RL!)
Looking forward to more of this wonderful story! :)
Date: 06 Jul 2013 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 59: Dream Date
That is the cutes and funest chapter I love him trying to get info from his mom to funny. The picnic what can I say that is perfect.
Date: 06 Jul 2013 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 58: Hugs and Gropes
They are so cute together. I love the groping and hugging.
Date: 06 Jul 2013 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 57: The Trucker
He is buying the site he is so excited to be involved in anything she is. Her poor truck it is time to let it go.
Date: 06 Jul 2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS
What a dream lol. Her poor truck it died Edward will come to her recue :)
Date: 05 Jul 2013 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 59: Dream Date
Love it, to me it seems longer than 12 days that they've known each other
Date: 28 Jun 2013 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 58: Hugs and Gropes
A cold shower! Yummy!
Date: 20 Jun 2013 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 58: Hugs and Gropes
Loved Gropella and Huggyward.... or is it Gropeward and Huggyella??? I loved both chapters. Looking forward to more
Date: 19 Jun 2013 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 58: Hugs and Gropes
Awww i bet u the sleep talk is abt him loving bella...loved the shower scene cant wait for more
Date: 02 Apr 2013 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS
Awesome chapter. Keep up the great work. You are wonderful.
Date: 02 Apr 2013 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS
so sweet and just perfect for them.
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER AND I THINK IT'S PERFECT FOR THEM EDWARD DOESN'T WANT TO PUSH BELLA AND WHAT THEY DID WELL THEY BOTH GOT THERE " O " AND EDWARD WAS NOT EXSPECTING IT AT ALL. I HOPE THEY KEEP UP THE FORPLAY EVERY NIGHT UNTIL BELLA WANTS TO GO ALL THE WAY AND I'M SURE SHE WILL WANT TO VERY SOON HELL I WOULD.
Date: 31 Mar 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS
Love the slight lemon...i have a feeling edward will be driving bella to work.cant wait for next update
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
55 chapters in and they might have sex soon. Wow loooong foreplay much. Thanks for the update.
Date: 14 Mar 2013 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
AHHHHHHHH, I so want to read the next chapter. I love the story, I was cracking up at some of it. I can't wait for it.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
That was perfect lol. Poor girl was going to have a strock and then I think Edward almost lost his mind. He is a gentlman his momma will be proud lol.
Date: 08 Mar 2013 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
loved it!
Date: 08 Mar 2013 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
Oooo i want more
Date: 08 Mar 2013 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
Im loving this story..also the book reference but in EPOV..that was priceless!
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2013 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
I don't know what to say but if I was a man... I'd be grabbing the lotion and Kleenex. If this was American Pie, it'd be a sock... but, alas, it will just have to wait.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
Amazing Chapter. I can't wait to hear his response to her!!!!!!
Date: 01 Mar 2013 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
love it now he is in shock.
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 53: Correspondence
love it
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
Yep Kismet. Hope Ed does't wet himself.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2013 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
Excellent! This is a delicate issue but I just want it to be that night! Right frikkin now and maybe softcore this time but the next time? HOT AND DIRTY. Did you love that last sentence as much as I did?
Date: 22 Feb 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
I love it cant wait for bellas 1st time w edward
Date: 22 Feb 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
One of the best and favorites so far :)
Date: 15 Feb 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 52: Emergency Contact
I started reading your story about a week ago and I'm finally all caught up. I like your story very much but looking at your proflie page I'm alittle worried because I noticed a pattern of stories not being finished. I would be very sad if this did the same. Do you update regularly and if so how often?
Date: 10 Feb 2013 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 52: Emergency Contact
Ahhhh.....loved it!!!
Date: 08 Feb 2013 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 52: Emergency Contact
hahaha Dartmouth shirt! Love this chapter and hope that you post again soon. Can't wait to see what she says when she finds out everyone else knows.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 52: Emergency Contact
that went better than I thought I am so glad he told her all
Date: 07 Feb 2013 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 52: Emergency Contact
Oops, good cliffie. Thanks for the update.
Date: 07 Feb 2013 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 52: Emergency Contact
He is such an amazing man. You have created such great characters with depth. I love your story and look forward to each update.
Date: 07 Feb 2013 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 52: Emergency Contact
Oh does this mean next chapter edward finds out thats his sweater and he met bella before he left forks like he keeps wishing had happened
Date: 07 Feb 2013 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 52: Emergency Contact
well, now they gotten most things out in the open, they can become more relaxed in the new blooming relationship. No more secrets. Love that they may be finding out how Bella came to be the owner of the Darmouth sweatshirt.. Guessing it just goes to show, Edward and Bella were meant to be. Fate plays a fat hand in destiny once more... Pam b.
Date: 07 Feb 2013 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 52: Emergency Contact
Ahhh! He's gonna kno it was her! They were meant to be all along.. Yay'
Date: 29 Jan 2013 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 51: Dinner and a Show
Go get her Edward and make it good!!
Date: 27 Jan 2013 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 51: Dinner and a Show
Shit that didnt go over very well everything else was perfect. He better go after his girl cant wait for next chapter.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 51: Dinner and a Show
Oh no poor bella probley thinks edward was using her for payback.....im glad hes gonna use the key you left it on a cliffy
Date: 26 Jan 2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 51: Dinner and a Show
It sure as hell is an emergency Mister!!!! What a perfect evening...he better fix it ;)
Date: 26 Jan 2013 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 51: Dinner and a Show
Oh no! They were doing so good. Bella should be forgiving since she snooped in edwards house to learn about him.. he was only trying to learn about her.. and look how much he changed! Oh you've got to update sooner.. i have to know what happens!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 50: Shades of Pink
that a/n is so sweet!!