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Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

I really wanted to see how they do the job, it will be interesting, I would not accept as well, but Bella is happy. I think a relationship is unhealthy to three, there will always be preferences and jealous, I want to see how they do it.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

Edward should have talked to Bella before, I feel betrayed to learn that way, Bella really surprised by accepting me and shit was hot girl ...

Reviewer: samic Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 2

awwwww a HEA just what i needed!

a little bit of uhoh she touched him, whats he gonna do?? then the HEA :)

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 2

Great job.  Loved it.

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 2

Excellent!!!!! Thanks for writing

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it would love it more if you made it a longer story hehe xx

Reviewer: VioletVirgo79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

I didn't see this 2nd chapter when I left a review for the 1st one. 

I'm so thrilled with Jaspers revelation, it's what I was hoping for.  Please say that there will be more...please?!

~LauraLeigh

Reviewer: VioletVirgo79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed that very much!  They could be a lovely family. 

What do you need Mistress to continue?

~LauraLeigh 

Reviewer: Koshivuh Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2012 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 2

Yes, definitely unexpected. I don't know, I liked this story, and it was very, very well written, I guess I'm more of a romantic (monogamous romantic...). I've read, and do read stories that include relationships involving more than two people, but I guess this was somehow different for me. Maybe it was because it involved a dom/sub relationship (even though I've read stories with that as well.). I'm honestly not sure, but it wasn't that bad. Although, I was surprised with the ultimate outcome. Not bad.

Reviewer: Koshivuh Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Deffinitely new for me. I've read things similar to this in a general sense, but I'm not used to this Bella. I can't say I didn't like this, but I also can't say I loved it, only because of how Bella reacted. I guess I was expecting her to be more indignant that Edward just left her in the middle of the night with no warning beforehand of what his true lifestyle was. However, I respect that this is your story and it is your choice on how you write your characters, and I believe I'll continue to read the next chapter (or more...if there's more.). Hopefully I will come to enjoy this more :)

Reviewer: sam11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 2

wow love it

Reviewer: sam11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

more please

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 2

okay cool.. wish there was more... pretty HOT!!!!  bella is a lucky bitch!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2012 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

very intersting that she was that willing to be with both of them no questions asked! 

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2012 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 2

Well well, are you going to take this to the next level?

Reviewer: bownbey Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

I really enjoyed this! It is good to see them work through their insecurities and grow past just sex.

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

I loved it!  I just wish there was more coming...

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 2

Great story!  Sorry to see it end, so few good D/s/s stories out there. Thank you -- Cheri

Reviewer: jillapet Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love it!!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

OMG I love E/B/J stories and this is a good one!!  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yep, it was good.  have my legs crossed & squirmming - good.

Reviewer: ECullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

Definately should continue...wow :)

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

By all means please continue... That was smokin.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

PLEASE, and Im down on my knees begging, PLEASE continue. This was beyond hot, having both Edward and Jasper hello wetdreams do come true. Love this, cant wait to see if you continue or not, but Im hoping you do.

Reviewer: grace1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed it lol Hope u continue it :)

Reviewer: TG100 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

I say continue it. So HOT. Can't wait to maybe read more.

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

HOT HOT HOT JUST FREAKIN HOT!!!! yes please more - loved it ;)

Reviewer: Ladyros Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

I guess Jasper is more than a old friend,LOL !

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was a pretty little diddy dear ;)

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting. Bella had heard of Edward's best friend. She had realized there was a unique connection between them, she hadn't been able to understand it yet. Seeing them together made her see the power of such bond, but still little clue to it.

The answer, or part of it, came in the middle of the night, in a rather unexpected way. Bella found both guys and was both shocked and aroused by what she discovered. Her arousal won and made her a willing participant.

The next morning, things seemed to be just as they were before they went to sleep. Are they really like that? What will Jasper organize for the day? Will it take them back to "that room"? Or is it just reserved for night time?

I do hope you continue this.

Reviewer: ENAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it - won't complain if there was a lemon filled follow up. Edward, Jasper and Bella's a great combination! C x

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

omg, that was really hot, wow. i think u should continue with this little diddy as u called it. we need a Epov for it as well. lol hope to read more.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

she's so damn lucky!!!

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Talk about a shocker....I wanna know what Jasper decides to surprise them with...

 

I really hope you continue this.

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