Date: 22 Oct 2011 11:37 PM Title: Beauty and Strength
Yeahhhh she yelled/whispered hatefully at Jacob=) So they made it through the final sketch. I kind of pictured it differently but you're the amazing writer so I'll just keep reading anxiously to see what happens. This was a great chapter and it is a great story. Please update soon!=)
Date: 08 Oct 2011 10:46 AM Title: Shaking Off the Haze
I'm glad everything is out in the open now:) I love the line, "now can we discuss where I want you after I you take off your clothes" lol. I'm glad that they are having Fun with the sketches and also being serious together. Great chapter, please update again soon!!!
Date: 14 Aug 2011 12:27 PM Title: Space to Think
Your story touches on something that's very real in society today. My heart wrenches for both Bella and Edward...Bella for her suffering and Edward for wanting to help her and not knowing exactly how. He took the most important step and that was telling his parents.
Excellent telling of Bella's and Edward's struggles. Please continue forward with this story. I've read one recently and gotten wrapped up in it only to find out that it was based on true life events and the author was unable to continue. Some times writing really is therapy.
Date: 13 Aug 2011 2:33 AM Title: Space to Think
WOW.....I HOPE BELLA OPENS HER EYES BEFORE ITS TO LATE. OPEN TO SEE THE LOVE EDWARD HAS FOR HER, ON THE OTHER HAND EDWARD SHOULD HAVE TOLD HER HOW HE FELT BEFORE HE LEFT TO GO OVERSEAS,. MAYE THIS BIG PROBLEM WOULD HAVE NEVER HAPPENED. NOW EDWARD HAS TO LIVE WITH THE FACT BELLA GAVE HERSELF TO SOMEBODY ELSE, BELLA REALLY DOESN'T DESERVE HIS V-CARD. MAYBE THIS STORY WILL OPEN SOMEONE ELSE EYES TO GET HELP.. DEATH IS FINAL...NO GOING BACK,
Date: 16 Jul 2011 12:18 AM Title: A Rash Decision
I feel bad for Edward and for Bella. She's spiraling out of control & I'm hoping Edward is strong enough to stop her. Only the scum of the earth takes advantage of an obviously distraught & disturbed girl. No matter if Jake has "real" feelings for Bella. He shouldn't have done it!
Good chapter....have a feeling it's going to get rough before, I hope, it gets better!
Date: 08 Jul 2011 9:08 PM Title: My Girl
My Girl was such a good movie.
So far, I'm not seeing the drama. I get that Bella is in denial & trying to cope the best way she knows how. I hope Jake doesn't become a problem. Sounds like a familiar theme; Jake likes Bella more than a friend & is jealous that Edward is back in the picture while Bella is a bit clueless regarding both of them.
Date: 04 Jul 2011 8:30 AM Title: While You Were Gone
Esme was wrong. She should have let Edward come home when he said that he wanted to. The theory that Esme stated that Bellaa eill be ok until he gets back from Europe was proven false. Bella porbably sees Edeard as selfish, and Edward is probably pissed at his mom for talking him into staying in Europe. Basically, he will blame his mother for Bella's actions. I kind of do blame her in a way.