Date: 21 Jun 2013 1:56 AM Title: Chapter One
In this story going to be finished? I really LOVED the beginning and how it ended!!
Date: 24 Jan 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter One
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! I wanna read more!
Date: 01 Jan 2012 6:06 AM Title: Chapter One
heyy
really great!
sorry thet there isn't more...
the two r really cute, but every child in kindergarden is cute, right...
it's sooo nice that Edward even get his first sight of Bella and thinks then.. she was perfect and perfection needs protection...
bye
Lil
Date: 20 Nov 2011 6:26 AM Title: Chapter One
I hope there's more! This was a really great start.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
At the moment the story is complete. xo
Date: 03 Nov 2011 3:33 PM Title: Chapter One
will there be more?
Author's Response:
Not at the moment... Thanks for the review!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 10:48 PM Title: Chapter One
so cute
Author's Response:
:D
Date: 04 Aug 2011 8:54 PM Title: Chapter One
very cute, different tact and character
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 4:58 PM Title: Chapter One
I really like this story... Why Edward is so mean to others??? And he become obssest with Bella??? I'm really happy that she was brave enough to go to him...
Author's Response:
(: Thanks!
He doesn't want people to take he's crayons. :P
And ya. :P
Date: 04 Aug 2011 11:53 AM Title: Chapter One
looking forward to reading more :)
Author's Response:
:) Thanks for your review, but at the moment the story is complete. :)
Date: 24 Jul 2011 6:34 AM Title: Chapter One
hey i am liking it...please continue it...
Author's Response:
:) Thanks for your review, but at the moment the story is complete. :)
Date: 23 Jul 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter One
great start seems really good
Author's Response:
:) Thanks for your review, but at the moment the story is complete. :)
Date: 21 Jul 2011 8:12 AM Title: Chapter One
Really good beginning, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
:) Thanks for your review, but at the moment the story is complete. :)
Date: 21 Jul 2011 12:52 AM Title: Chapter One
Sounds interesting I hope you find a good Beta.
Author's Response:
:) Thanks for your review, but at the moment the story is complete. :)
Date: 20 Jul 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter One
id love to read more of this story.
Author's Response:
:) Thanks for your review, but at the moment the story is complete. :)
Date: 20 Jul 2011 1:56 PM Title: Chapter One
cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
:) Thanks for your review, but at the moment the story is complete. :)
Date: 20 Jul 2011 11:42 AM Title: Chapter One
How sweet of Edward to share with Bella. When he say that Edward's sick what kind of sickness does he have? Great start love it so far.
Author's Response:
:) He's not "sick" per say, just has different mental functionings. :)
:) Thanks for your review, but at the moment the story is complete. :)
Date: 20 Jul 2011 11:40 AM Title: Chapter One
what a cute freaking chapter!
Author's Response:
:) Thanks for your review, but at the moment the story is complete. :)
Date: 20 Jul 2011 9:56 AM Title: Chapter One
Love it so far.... very interested to read more. Keep up the good work and update soon!
Author's Response:
:) Thanks for your review, but at the moment the story is complete. :)