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Reviewer: mickey777 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2023 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

LOVED it! I've read most if not all of your stories. I decided it was time to read them all agin. :)

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2022 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2022 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2022 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2022 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

I keep getting a error when I try to comment. 

I enjoyed your story. I wish it could have been longer. I really liked your Peter and Charlotte. But I love anything with P,B,J&C. 

Thank you for sharing your time and talent.

Erica O

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Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2022 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed your story. I wish it could have been longer, I really liked your Peter and Charlotte. But I do love anything that has P,B,J&C in it. Thank you for sharing your time and talent.

Erica O.

Emo4

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2022 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed your story. I wish it could have been longer, I really liked your Peter and Charlotte. But I do love anything that has P,B,J&C in it. Thank you for sharing your time and talent.

Erica O.

Emo4

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2022 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed your story. I wish it could have been longer, I really liked your Peter and Charlotte. But I do love anything that has P,B,J&C in it. Thank you for sharing your time and talent.

Erica O.

Emo4

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2022 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed your story. I wish it could have been longer, I really liked your Peter and Charlotte. But I do love anything that has P,B,J&C in it. Thank you for sharing your time and talent.

Erica O.

Emo4

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2022 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed your story. I wish it could have been longer, I really liked your Peter and Charlotte. But I do love anything that has P,B,J&C in it. Thank you for sharing your time and talent.

Erica O.

Emo4

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2022 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed your story. I wish it could have been longer, I really liked your Peter and Charlotte. But I do love anything that has P,B,J&C in it. Thank you for sharing your time and talent.

Erica O.

Emo4

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2022 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed your story. I wish it could have been longer, I really liked your Peter and Charlotte. But I do love anything that has P,B,J&C in it. Thank you for sharing your time and talent.

Erica O.

Emo4

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2022 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed your story. I wish it could have been longer, I really liked your Peter and Charlotte. But I do love anything that has P,B,J&C in it. Thank you for sharing your time and talent.

Erica O.

Emo4

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2022 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed your story. I wish it could have been longer, I really liked your Peter and Charlotte. But I do love anything that has P,B,J&C in it. Thank you for sharing your time and talent.

Erica O.

Emo4

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2022 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed your story. I wish it could have been longer, I really liked your Peter and Charlotte. But I do love anything that has P,B,J&C in it. Thank you for sharing your time and talent.

Erica O.

Emo4

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2022 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed your story. I wish it could have been longer, I really liked your Peter and Charlotte. But I do love anything that has P,B,J&C in it. Thank you for sharing your time and talent.

Erica O.

Emo4

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2022 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed your story. I wish it could have been longer, I really liked your Peter and Charlotte. But I do love anything that has P,B,J&C in it. Thank you for sharing your time and talent.

Erica O.

Emo4

Reviewer: HelenW Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2020 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very good .  I love the couples.  The rest idiots.  Thank you.   

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2019 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice!

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2018 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really good story!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2017 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

I had to re-read this one for the unknown number of tmes.  It really is great.  :)

Reviewer: inlovewithSethPaulJasper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

I loved it, just like I love all of your stories. I have finally moved over to this site from FanFiction.net..

It's bullshit what there doing to everyone over there on that site.

Hope you update soon on your other stories.

Reviewer: ALewis Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love your stories. Keep em coming.

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2011 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hahahaha, what a great way to start my Friday!  THis is hilarious so far...but also, I would like to tell the Cullens off.  I ahve a feeling that Bella will do so :)

Haha, you haven't said his name yet, but just by the way you described his grin I know who the mystery vamp in Bella's room is :)

Wow, that was quite a twisted story!  I love how you paint Mike to be a cool guy worthy of vamphood :)



Author's Response:

Oh, I'm so happy that you enjoyed my fluffy, little one shot. The idea for the story just popped into my brain so I pulled my notebook out and just started scribbling away while my kids frolicked on the beach. 

As you can see, Bella, in this story was dazzled to the point of being unable to speak up for herself until the effects of the dazzling wore off. Obviously, something snapped in her as soon as Edward broke up with her a second time. She realized, at that point, that her life was worth preserving. She also realized that she was dealt a raw deal by Edward and his family, and was determined to find a way to be changed into a vampire. Fortunately, Jasper who was thinking ahead, along with Peter, was able to save her.

Since this is a one-shot, I only skimmed the surface of any deep-seeded feelings that any of the characters had. I just wanted to make this a short and sweet read. Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for taking the time to review. XOXO mama4dukes

Reviewer: elmarie1123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

AWESOME!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  XOXO

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved this! :)



Author's Response:

Yay!  I'm so happy!  XOXO

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2011 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great one shot hun.    Funny as hell with Fuckward and Mike



Author's Response:

Mike was terrified of Eddie boy and rightfully so.  XOXO

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good 1 MAMA..



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  XOXO

Reviewer: pamikulski Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really liked the story, I laughed so hard....and

I really love Life Happens....I hate that is going to

end soon.......

Thank You Pat



Author's Response:

Hi Pat,

I'm so happy that you enjoyed this oneshot.  I had a blast writing it.  I have more in the works.  XOXO

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

i loved this!!!!!! usually one shots leave me wantin more and not really lovin it but this was perfect! i was soo excited when i saw another story post by you heehee hope you do more as i love the way you write  and love your versions of peter, char and the major!!!!!



Author's Response:

I've got tons of oneshots in my brain that I'll eventually write.  XOXO

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