Date: 12 Mar 2012 5:18 PM Title: House or Home
Your characters are wonderful here- natural and original. I hope you continue one with it and are just taking a breather. It would be especially fascinating to finally see Bella and Jasper reconnect again. Thanks for a wonderful read.
Date: 01 Jan 2012 2:40 AM Title: House or Home
Well, I don't know the circumstances of your 'waiting room camping', but I hope things are better for you now.
As for this chapter... Favorite chapter moment - Bella's Forks goodbye. Made my heart clench.
But aside from that, Bella seems suddenly different. Bitchier? Perhaps it's a stage of her grief, or getting over it just a bit, but it took me a little by surprise.
And, forgive me, but I noticed it, so I have to mention it - I'm a bit OCD that way, and don't have a mute button - 2 chapters ago Jasper said that Alice had gotten Bella a laptop and filled the closet with clothes when she was getting her room ready for her eventual arrival. Those details, minor though they were, weren't supported here. Just a heads up... and now I'll shut up.
I hope you have a happy New Year, wherever you're spending it.
CM
Date: 31 Dec 2011 10:23 PM Title: Never the Same
Seattle, here she comes! That means you, Edward!
Date: 31 Dec 2011 9:47 PM Title: Breaking the News
Forgot this from Ch 4- I briefly considered letting her, half-hoping one of those cops would just shoot her, but Bella never was one to handle blood very well. --- LOVED!
And... HELLO, EDWARD, I'M A GROWN UP!
Date: 31 Dec 2011 9:32 PM Title: The Outsider
I'm still undecided on Jasper, but I can be won over. If he tries hard enough. Or introduces me to his neighbor.
Date: 31 Dec 2011 8:51 PM Title: Facing the Past
Yes, human... WITH A NEIGHBOR NAMED EDWARD!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2011 4:47 AM Title: House or Home
Jesus, what's wrong? I hope u are ok, or whoever is in the hospital. thank you for updating. I just started reading this story today and I absolutely loved it. I hope the new year brings u and your family joy and good health. Take care of yourself and thank you
Date: 27 Dec 2011 10:11 AM Title: House or Home
I hope things are going well and thank you for thinking of use . Alice is a bit much to take poor Bella is on Alice overload lol.
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 5:02 AM Title: House or Home
For whatever reason I'm not getting my update notices. Glad I didn't miss the chapter.
Date: 21 Dec 2011 10:30 AM Title: Never the Same
Life goes on she just needs to figure out how to go with it.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 8:37 PM Title: Never the Same
Poor Bella! But I'm glad she will be meeting Edward soon!
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 11:06 AM Title: Never the Same
I'm glad to see Bella's kind of coping. She's right though only teenagers would treat a bereavement like a infectious desease.
Date: 13 Dec 2011 4:49 AM Title: Never the Same
looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 4:00 AM Title: Never the Same
seems bella has had to grow up fast. i guess now she sees who her really friends are. what a shame
Date: 08 Dec 2011 10:57 PM Title: Familiar Things
Oh, no it's not!
Sooo... like Bella, adore Wes, HATE Renee, and Jasper... we'll see.
Date: 30 Nov 2011 3:57 AM Title: Breaking the News
looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2011 2:59 PM Title: Breaking the News
I loved this chapter so much. I'm excited for Bella to go and stay with Jasper and Alice. I'm sure that she will be anything but excited when it comes to the move though; I'd like to think that Bella will at the very least, be looking forward to starting college.
I look forward to your next chapter. =) Kelly
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2011 4:55 AM Title: Breaking the News
ahhh alice you have such a big heart
bella will be surprised by how much alice has done. i hope bella gives her chance. seems alice has had a strange upbringing and she wants better for bella. jasper needs his own shrink to get things figured out for him.
love it and can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2011 4:28 AM Title: The Outsider
wes is a good guy. one of the last good guys. i am glad charlie had a friend like him and bella is benefiting from his kindness.
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2011 4:05 AM Title: Facing the Past
jasper had alot to deal with. mom a flake, real father and loser and someone who raised him and loved him but was openly affectionate it seemed jasper wanted more. he wanted more from the people who where his parents and they didn't know how to give more. he left to look for more and grow. but instead his relationship with his sister suffered. now time to start over or to try to make her life better that what he felt he had.
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2011 2:35 AM Title: Familiar Things
wow bella so many things to deal with. i'd be pissed at jasper.it does seem as if bella is an inposition to jasper. thank god for wes. seems he is a 2nd father to bella and without him she'd be lost. i am glad she had someone. when losing a parent it is beyond words when you are close to them. it takes time to get through that loss. bella not having enough time with her dad and him truly being the only family she loved and knew is rough
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2011 1:49 AM Title: The End
wow what a way to end the night.
here bella thought tyler was going to rock her world and it is intereputed by a cop and pastor.
to know you had a mom at there but can't depend on her.
man my heart goes out to bella.
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2011 11:23 AM Title: Breaking the News
Great job!
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2011 11:21 AM Title: Breaking the News
I love Alice, she is so thoughtful!
Date: 25 Nov 2011 7:22 AM Title: Breaking the News
Alice is excited you think lol
Date: 25 Nov 2011 6:15 AM Title: Breaking the News
How old is Edward?
Date: 25 Nov 2011 4:29 AM Title: Breaking the News
Great update
Date: 16 Nov 2011 5:58 AM Title: Facing the Past
great chapter,update soon
Date: 16 Nov 2011 5:47 AM Title: Familiar Things
Excellent!
Date: 16 Nov 2011 5:34 AM Title: The End
Great first chapter
Date: 15 Nov 2011 3:27 AM Title: The Outsider
Awww.. It is probally a good thing that Bella has all of those guys around to protect her because she would have had a big fight to try to stay and not leave with jasper.
Date: 15 Nov 2011 1:51 AM Title: Facing the Past
Wow that is alot on Jasper's plate now isn't it?
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2011 6:06 PM Title: The Outsider
WOW, Jasper side seems a little better now!
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2011 12:42 PM Title: The Outsider
I'm a little confused; I thought Bella was going to stay in Forks to finish the semester and graduate, then go to Seattle to live either with Jasper and Alice or the dorms, while she attends Udub.
Oh well, no matter which it is; I'm looking forward to more of your story. I really like it. Thanks for writing. =) Kelly
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2011 12:29 PM Title: The Outsider
While it's nice to see Jasper's version of events, he was still a bit of a dick, even in his head.
Are all therapists crap at relationships or is it just the fictional ones?
Date: 14 Nov 2011 8:06 AM Title: The Outsider
Wes is such a good guy. Jasper is a lost little boy I feel sorry for him he will alway regreat not being there more often. Renee is a piece of work good thing she left.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2011 6:53 AM Title: The End
Exceptionally written. Wonderfully, though sadly, intriguing. I will definitely be back.
Date: 14 Nov 2011 5:53 AM Title: The Outsider
looking for the next chapter
Date: 14 Nov 2011 5:23 AM Title: Familiar Things
Well I guess Renee and Jasper coming now is better than later.
Date: 14 Nov 2011 5:01 AM Title: The End
It is really sad that Bella had to find out about her dad right before she was suspose to go out of town for spring break.... At least she wasn't out of town.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2011 10:05 AM Title: Facing the Past
I'm so hooked on your story. I think you're a really talented writer, and I love how detailed your story and characters are. I'll look forward to your next update. =)
Date: 25 Oct 2011 3:46 AM Title: Facing the Past
Wow, Jasper sees the bad in everything. I don't know if I would want him as my psychologist, he has enough issues of his own that he doesn't have worked out it seems. Look forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2011 2:55 AM Title: Facing the Past
You can tell Jasper hasn't given much thought over the years to Bella. To step up now with the tragedy of Charlie's death hanging over them...yeah I see fireworks (not the happy, pretty kind either) in the near future as he tries to be the big brother now.
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2011 9:55 AM Title: Facing the Past
Awesome summany of thier lives. It was sad to hear their story through Jazz' mind. I hope they form a relationship soon!
Date: 21 Oct 2011 9:39 PM Title: Facing the Past
Great chapter. Good to see the dynamics of the other characters.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 9:30 PM Title: Facing the Past
Brilliant story!
Date: 21 Oct 2011 9:14 PM Title: Facing the Past
He is going to be living with regret for a long time.
Date: 21 Oct 2011 8:00 PM Title: Facing the Past
you said it... only human. We all make mistakes, especially with family. I understand him better know but I think the not communicating thing will add some more drama before all falls into place.
Date: 21 Oct 2011 7:00 PM Title: Facing the Past
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2011 2:29 PM Title: Familiar Things
Brilliant!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2011 10:26 AM Title: Familiar Things
*Grins* This is so good already; I can't wait to read more! =)
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2011 10:11 AM Title: The End
I really love the way you write. You are a great storyteller, and you know how to pull your readers in. I'm looking forward to reading your story, and meeting all of your characters. =)
Date: 14 Oct 2011 8:28 AM Title: Familiar Things
poor Bella her world is turned upside down. do we get Jasper POV????
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2011 10:36 PM Title: Familiar Things
She has a little mouth on her! LOL
Date: 13 Oct 2011 10:22 PM Title: The End
This seems like it will be a good story. Hope you update soon.
Date: 13 Oct 2011 5:19 PM Title: Familiar Things
lkooking forward to the enxgt chapter
Date: 13 Oct 2011 4:20 AM Title: Familiar Things
Wow is Jasper delusional? Does he not realize that the way the and Renee have been would cause Bella to have issues with them and make them seem to only "deal" with her is because they have to not because they want to. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 08 Oct 2011 6:26 AM Title: The End
You never know when your life will change compleatly and the one you love is no longer there. How sad
Date: 25 Sep 2011 11:46 AM Title: The End
OOh, this sounds like a good one, I'm looking forward to the next update! :o)
Date: 25 Sep 2011 11:39 AM Title: The End
Great chapter. Can't wait to read where you take this.
Date: 25 Sep 2011 6:21 AM Title: The End
This story has my interest. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2011 4:20 AM Title: The End
Story sounds really promising. Do you have an update schedule yet or will it kinda be random for awhile?
Date: 25 Sep 2011 4:10 AM Title: The End
oh poor Bella, bring on the rest of the gang, she needs them
Date: 25 Sep 2011 3:58 AM Title: The End
looking foward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2011 3:34 AM Title: The End
Oh, my, I am feeling it for Bella! I can't wait to read more of this, I'm hooked already. I love that she's not the shy goody-goody with no friends and has experienced a little bit more than canon Bella. I am intrigued that Jasper is her brother and also some sort of therapist. Ironic that he's spent so little time with his own family though. What made him leave his father's house? Why do they have no contact with their own mother? Can't wait to see where you're going to take this!
Do you have an update schedule? I hope you'll post more soon!