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Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2013 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 9

i just finish reading the 9 chapters you have up i really like that alice and rose are willing to spend time with bella and the kids if bella feels unsafe the phone calls that are hang up have me worried it's jake isn't it? and sean's dream that is got me worried to i hope bella and the kids will be ok. how much time has passed now that edward and the guy's have been gone? i'm loving the story.

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 9

please more

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

Awww..... It is sad that Edward has to leave again but the sooner he leaves the sooner he gets to come back.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 8

so sad to see him go

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 8

I really love this story, even though it brings tears to my eyes. I know Edward feels he is trying to provide better for his family, but its got to be hard leaving for an extended period of time. Something tells me the drama is far from over.....

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2011 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 7

Off to spend the day with the kids at the zoo... I think that Sean may be hanging out with his grandpa a bit too much there...

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 7

they cant stay away from each other



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Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 7

Great, as always!!!  I;m guessing when Edward leaves this time it will be a lot longer between visits??  So much could happen, I just hoe they are strong enough......  :)



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Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 6

How wonderful is it that he got to come back for Sean's birthday!



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Date: 21 Nov 2011 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 5

Awww... Twins!!!



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Date: 20 Nov 2011 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 4

Awww... Poor Bella! And it is only day 1.



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Date: 20 Nov 2011 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 3

Awwww.... Now Emmett is in the same boat as Edward.....



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Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2011 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 2

This is sad that Edward is leaving but hopefully he will be back before Bella knows it...



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Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2011 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well That was just funny!!



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 6

I am glad Edward seen that she didnt want him to kiss her and I am so glad Edward beat the shit out of him.



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 5

What does Jake think he is going to do??  Tanya is an evil bitch.  Twins how cool to bad he is away



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Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 5

oH BOY......twins come early usually don't they? I hope Edward  makes it home for the birth.  Tanya will not give up easily, I hope she doesn't sneak in his hotel room and ya know......Bella won't get over it.



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 4

So hard to be apart and what is the deal with Jacob????



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2011 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 3

She is holding up pretty good so far but she is going to fall apart.



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 2

So sad so emotional how are they going to stay away from each other????



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Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 2

Grreat chapter, so happy for the sequel!!!!  I have a feeling that things will not go easy while Edward is gone.  And Bella will not let Rose or Alice tell Edward if anything was going on. I bet he doesn't get to come home like he thinks, new dates will be added to the tour and things will get crazy.  Just please keep them together!!!!! More soon PLEASE!!!!



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

They should have a fun filled night but it will also be sad with him leaving.  I am glad you are going on with this story Thanks



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