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Reviewer: 1tinac Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2018 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 48

This story was amazing. Tears cheers fears. Wonderful. Thanks for sharing 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! It was a pleasure writing this story. It was one of my favorites to write. 

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2017 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 12

This ch make me cry 😢

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2017 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 4

Just found this story and its so good. It really play with my emotion. I feel sad for edward but i cant blame jasper for doing that



Author's Response:

Hi, so sory for hte late reply. 

It was a hard write for that scene but it had to be done. 

I'm happy you found my story and liked it. 

Reviewer: JDRAST Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 44

Hello.  This was a wonderful story.  I am wondering if this is the end or are you going to continue it and have a chapter about the actual wedding?  That would give us closure to the sequence of events.  But I loved it!  Thanks, Suzan Noerr



Author's Response:

Yeah, it will be continued for another three or so chapters to get the closure you're talking about. :)

Glad you loved the story!

Reviewer: Natissimo Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 35

WTF...give these guys a break, please!



Author's Response:

Will do...eventually. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Natissimo Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 20

I would normally say..."to little to late" but now knowing Carlisle's story I'm gonna have to change it to "finally a step in the right direction".

 

 



Author's Response:

He didn't want to continue on that path and be forced to watch his son live a happy life without him. Edward is his only child and it came down to living by foolishness or wising up. He chose the latter. 

Reviewer: Natissimo Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

Holy shit...this is seriously messed up. Why is it that the sins of our youth always seems to rear its ugly head?

Reviewer: Natissimo Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

OMG...that was incredibly hot ;)

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 24

Love his mom!!



Author's Response:

She's awesome..Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: mFrank Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great story so far.  Love the charcters and the drama.  Trusting you that Dmitri's insistence won't end up killing E and J's love, have a feeling I know where this is leading.  Can't wait for the next installment.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'll make it good..

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 23

I knew I loved Jasper's mom!!

Author's Response:

She's awesome!

Reviewer: maryhell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 22

Found you - Brilliant.



Author's Response:

Yep! :D

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 21

Garrett is working for Edward's mum...

Love how Edward adores Jazz:))

Read already the next chapt on FFiction 2 minutes ago!! LOved it!!!

Rash



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you loved it!

Garrett is a man that does what he wants. Esme is a control freak. They make a great team. ;)

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 21

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 20

Another great chapter.



Author's Response:

THanks a lot! I'm working on another chapter. Hope you'll like!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 19

I got caught up with your story. You are an amazing writer and this is a really great story. Keep up the hard work.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much for reading!

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 16

I love this story and am so glad that you decided to cotinue their tale.  It's so interesting how you have weaved their various backgrounds into a very intriguing story.  An anxious for this to continue and hopefully get their happy ending.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

I love this story and have every intent granting these boys a happy ending. They've come so far.

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 19

omg...wow



Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

:)

Reviewer: tiina Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2011 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hello my Dear,

I guess, you are a women. If not, you don't have to read this review.

Okay, so you are a woman. Want I really want to know is, why is it so interesting for a woman to write about a gay Edward and a gay Jasper? I can't understand it. Please enlighten me.

Lol - Tiina



Author's Response:

Firstly, yep, I'm a female. And secondly, the interest has to do with fiction. I love to read and I am open to all genres and characters. While solely reading in the fandom, I became attracted to slash(guy-on-guy) because of my exploration with my choices of stories. To me, it's different. It can taboo at times and familiar and exciting in others. For me, I write it because I like it. To me, it's fantasy which in some way can at times reflect on reality, but I hold nothing against it. It's the difference for me, it's looking at the paper and thinking "okay, I'm gonna make two guys do it, what do I know about that since I'm not a guy nor gay. So how can I achieve this?" Answer: imagination. Slash genre is exciting because it's different and I love that.

So that's why I do it.

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 6

OH my hotness!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 6

This is a hot story, can't wait to read more.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm working on it.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 5

I am glad they are both taking the chance! I love their time together. I love Alice and Bella! I hope they spend more time with them...welll all four of them. Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

They will. Later on.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 4

I actually felt bad for Edward. He does need to prove to Jasper he has changed. I think only time will do that. I can't wait to see what happens. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 3

This may be a long road, but I think Jasper would be happy if he got to know this Edward. Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

You're right. This Edward is so different from that boy, and it will serve good for Jasper to get to know him more.

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 5

yay progress!!!!



Author's Response:

Yep, and so much more to come.

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 2

yummy!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

OH my Edward is so wrong!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, he isn't a nice person in this chapter.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 2

I am glad that Jasper knows the truth. I love their time together. I just hope it wasn't all to soon. I can't wait for the date. Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

It kinda was a little too soon. But it'll work out.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow...Jasper has been through so much! Edward was a jerk. All because he was afraid of his feelings. I can't wait to see how these two have changed. Great job...thanks!

Author's Response:

Yeah, Jasper has been through so much with Edward and it'll be hard at first to accept that Edward has changed.Read on as I will be adding more chapters! Thanks for liking it.

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