Date: 07 Nov 2020 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it! I don't like Jessica!
Date: 07 Nov 2020 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it! I don't like Jessica!
Date: 07 Nov 2020 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2020 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2020 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it! Poor Seth!
Date: 08 Oct 2020 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 16 Sep 2020 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it!
Date: 16 Sep 2020 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it!
Date: 16 Sep 2020 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it!
Date: 16 Sep 2020 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Date: 13 Aug 2019 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would have loved to have read this story but the printing is too small and the plus for text size is not working. Sad that I can't read it, I started to but was straining my eyes so bad I got a headache. 😭
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2018 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thank You it was a joy to re-read a good ole favorite. I always hoped for a sequel......maybe one day..... soon : )
READ YOU SOON ; )
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2018 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thank You it was a joy to re-read a good ole favorite. I always hoped for a sequel......maybe one day..... soon : )
READ YOU SOON ; )
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2018 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Here I am re- reading an all time favorite.
Date: 02 Aug 2015 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 24
That was a really nice place to leave them all, so thank you very much! I really enjoyed reading this story, and wouldn't mind reading a sequel, either!
Date: 02 Aug 2015 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 23
A really unusual situation, between Seth, Heather and Derrick, but like Edward said, as long as they are all safe and happy, it's okay! Kind of funny when Carl made Edward make nice with his mother!
Date: 02 Aug 2015 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
I hope this opportunity will work out for Edward and his brothers, and their wives don';t kill the three of them! I think Esme should tell Carlisle about delivering the twins, then she can share that horror with him instead of carrying it all alone! By the way, what the hell has happened to Aro? Has the cancer killed him or what?
Date: 02 Aug 2015 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
Derrick is so sweet, trying to do the right thing for Seth and Heather! I wonder if Jasper knows that somehow Alice will be able to see her family one day? This plot has moer twists than a snake!
Date: 02 Aug 2015 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
So far so good! Now we just need Jasper to find all the Cullen men in one piece!
Date: 02 Aug 2015 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
How awful for Derrick to come home and find his momdead in the pool and everything trashed! Aro is definitely crazy, and they are going to have a hell of a time getting out of thi9s alive! Mike just couldn't keep to the straight and narrow and thus has screwed it all!
Date: 02 Aug 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 18
This is about the craziest mixed up mess you could think of! Always thought Aro was a nut job, but I see he's also a greedy, power hungry bastard! What could Edward be thinking of to get them all out of this?
Date: 02 Aug 2015 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
I had a bad feeling this was all just too damn good to be true!
Date: 02 Aug 2015 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
Crossing fingers, and toes, for this all to turn out okay!
Date: 02 Aug 2015 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
Man, trouble just seems to follow these guys around! I hope this trip to see Elisabeth isn't the wrong thing to do!
Date: 01 Aug 2015 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 14
That was pretty messed up, so I don't blame Bella for calling Edward's mother for help!
Date: 01 Aug 2015 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 13
This turniung into the Gordian Knot of fan fiction, I'm thinking! Jasper isn't going to know which end is up here pretty soon! Jacob hurt his siter's feelings with that crack about the kids, but I can kind of understand where he's coming from!
Date: 01 Aug 2015 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
Cool idea to have Charlie be a retired cop who is a bounty hunter on the side. Of course he won't do anything to hurt his daughter and grandchildren! It's kind of inevitable that the next generation is drawn into the family business. Rose isn't very happy about it, either, just as Bella wasn't!
Date: 01 Aug 2015 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
I guess Edward was smart to say he thought Jessica was dead, because it looks like she may have survived! Funny how things turn out! Now the Cullens are in jeopardy once more! Looks like Edward put the fear of God into Derrick, then turned around and asked him to spend the weekend with them!
Date: 01 Aug 2015 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edward has that right, about Alice being ruthless. It didn't bother her a bit to watch Jessica being disposed of by the Volturi. It can't be good news to the Cullen family that Aro is back, either personally or professionally.
Date: 01 Aug 2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
About had a cow when Jessica found those photos of Alice and Edward! How are they going to explain those away? The FBI must be desperate, if they have an agent like Jess, she's half stupid , calling out the family on being in a mob! The three boys sure didn't hesitate agreeing to be "made' men, it must be in the blood!
Date: 01 Aug 2015 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
So, Emmett and Rose are into threesomes? There seems to be a little something for everyone with this family! It's going to be kind of funny trying to keep all the stories straight around this new agent!
Date: 01 Aug 2015 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
Seth is a lucky boy, having the understanding parents he has. Since Ben knows about Derrick, it's probably not too big a deal to him, either.
Date: 01 Aug 2015 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 6
That must be a very confusing thing to go through. It's tough enough to be a teenager, let alone unsure of your sexuality. I wonder if Seth is right and his dad would be okay with it, as long as he was happy?
Date: 01 Aug 2015 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
I guess Edward has to be tough so his son doesn't get in more trouble than he can handle. It sure is hard on Bella, that's her first born son, but I wonder if she knows it's just as hard on Edward?
Date: 01 Aug 2015 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
This has to be the most unusual mob family, putting up with a member who is a federal officer, plus her husband! Can't wait to see where this is going!
Date: 01 Aug 2015 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
I must say, I'm kind of shocked that Bella would ever cheat on Edward, let alone with his brother! I hope she was kidding about his other brother and dad, that just sounds gross! Now, who was it that asked Alice to roll down her window and called her Allison?
Date: 31 Jul 2015 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Sounds to me as if Bella is kind of ambivalent about another baby. Alice is still a mystery to me, what with being undercover and yet liking the family she's supposed to be watching! The bigger mystery is why they all seem to accept her so willingly!
Date: 31 Jul 2015 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Alice has some connection to this family that has nothing to do with her being FBI, and I'm at a loss as to what that connection could be! I kind of like everyone, so far, they seem pretty much like anyone else.
Date: 21 Jul 2015 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 24
This was good! Thankx!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2015 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 24
Just read whole story,. It was great.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2015 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 24
I love the story I hope there is a sequel
Date: 15 Jul 2015 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved your story. Thank you for writing and posting it.
Date: 08 Jul 2015 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved the chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2015 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
:) loved this story
Date: 08 Jul 2015 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 24
The end? Loved the story. It was different from the others I have read. Edward needs to get the snip. Lol
Date: 22 Sep 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 23
great story love it
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2013 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
CONGRATULATION!!!!!!! A BABY IS SUCH A BLESSING. UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN IT'S ALWAYS WORTH THE WAIT.
Date: 13 Sep 2013 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 23
Congratulations! Stay healthy for the little baby. Thanks for the update, loved it and can't wait for more.
Date: 09 Feb 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
Fantastic fic! Really well written storyline!
Just one piece of constructive criticism; please learn how to use your vs you're. It is really irritating and unnecessary mistake that will distract from the story. Thank you for sharing your story with us!
Date: 19 Dec 2012 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 22
smh this is bad isnt it?
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 22
love it can't wait for more chapters
Date: 18 Dec 2012 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
looking forward to more
Date: 18 Dec 2012 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
You're ready to create your own stories and characters, too. Keep writing!
Date: 28 Nov 2012 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 21
Never say never!
Good chapter.
Date: 27 Nov 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2012 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
jdngkknsjdag....pleaseee update soon. I came across this story by accident and I started reading, thinking I was going to drop it after the first few chapters...yeah didn't happen. So two hours later (that I was suppose to use to work on my assignment) I'm done the story and honestly can't wait to read more. Please don't leave me hanging for too long :)
Date: 14 Nov 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
Really great chapter!!! but where's Edward?!?!!??!
Date: 14 Nov 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 20
Where are the Cullen men? Did they catch Aro? Update soon.
Date: 14 Nov 2012 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
looking forward to more
Date: 10 Oct 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 19
looking forward to more
Date: 09 Oct 2012 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
oh no!not the boys mother!!!!!!
Date: 23 Sep 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
wow bring on the drama!
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2012 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
Welcome back to the story! :-) Missed your writing.... Interesting turn of events in the story
Date: 19 Sep 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 18
looking forwrd to more
Date: 19 Sep 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
Okay.. now please update sooner..
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh boy what is Edward planning???
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
Hmm...what is Edwards plan. Hope it includes knocking out Jasper. Traitor.
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wow Bekki, you really outdid yourself with this chapter !
Sorry it took me so long to get around to reading it.
:)
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2012 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
wow the kids have alot to learn
i am glad they are letting them explore and see if it is want they want
everyone is free to love who they want and if it is a trio let them be.
my son just recently came out. 18 and it is hard on him at times but i love him and am proud of him. he has the right to be happy and be with whom it wants. everyone has the right
love it
Date: 13 May 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
looking forward to more
Date: 13 May 2012 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 15
really great im curious to find out y derrick was crying
Date: 12 May 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 15
Well everything is fine but the teenage 3 some bothers me. On many levels. His parents get he is bisexual. They are relieved he is not gay. This is tough territory for me. You could forbid this and in a way they have but then they start sneaking around. I think I would really get them some information on sexually transmitted diseases and mental health issues surrounding this. They are too young for all this.
I know story.
I am just glad Bella and Edward are solid. His love for her and those children over ride my disgust in the illegal activities.
Date: 01 May 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 14
looking forward to more