[Report This]Date: 14 May 2014 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 20 Forever
wow! what a story! ;) thanks so much for sharing it with us ;D
Author's Response:
Quick thanks twirob13, it was great to click onto my emails and read your lovely reviews xx
Date: 14 May 2014 4:13 PM Title: Arrival
i love it the word quim was cool! so these vamps are different than canon how much so? ;)
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 20 Forever
Such a great story - I really enjoyed it!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 20 Forever
Yummy ending. Glad Charlie led a good life like the Cheney's
Thand you for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing every chapter and leaving the great GIFs
Date: 13 Dec 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 19 Battle
Aww poor Charlie. Jake deserves to die. Liar. What a wanker. At least Billy was honorable.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 18 Surprises
Glad Charlie came to his senses. Crowley is a moron. Wolves would just kill him too
Date: 13 Dec 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 17 Parting
Crowley betrayed them all for a horse....lovely. Hope edward rips his hands and lips off for touching her
Date: 13 Dec 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 16 Visitors
Ah Alice arrives and we figure out who the traitor is. Wonder why Crowley turned on Edward?
Date: 13 Dec 2012 8:06 PM Title: **Christmas Desire**
Yummy Christmas
Date: 13 Dec 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 14 Impasse
aww thier first fight. cant blame her for wanting to make sure her dad is ok
Date: 13 Dec 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 13 Revelations
She took that well.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 12 Wolves
Oh Jake is going to get people killed for a lost cause. Ah well.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 11 Erotica
oooh reading her erotica....naught E. Yummy though. Lemon dance for you.
Author's Response:
FANTASTIC! Thank you love the lemon dance xxx
Date: 13 Dec 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 10 Awakening
oooh Bella is blocking all thoughts or is something wrong with Eddie. Interesting. now who is the evil presence in the beginning I wonder.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 9 Forceful
Poor confused b. Lonely and ignored to taken in the heather. ah well.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 8 Memories
Guessing that was Alice in the beginning..... hmmm Destiny huh? guess free will means nothing. ah well
Knew Jake wouldnt take it lying down.
Wonder if Charlie will remember after that flicker?
Date: 13 Dec 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
Aww poor shy B. Mrs Cheney must be paid well. oooh E kissed her.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 6 Conform
Ah the beauty and the beast theme. Wonder how Jake will react to Charlie's forgetting him. Wonder if Jake will be able to track Edward by his smell? At least Eddie thought to get her things for her.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
hmmm Charlie has Amnesia now or did E hypnotise him? Thought for sure Jake would be killed or the acutal attempt made.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 4 Curiosity
oh wow. She seems to be reciprocating. Naughty peeping Jake
Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 3 Feelings
oh Jake you are delusional to think B will be yours. Guessing Eddie was watching?
Naughty B. what would Mrs Weber think.... hee hee
Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
Good chapter. Poor Charlie.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:36 PM Title: Arrival
interesting start. Hmm a Darkward.....lets see where this goes.
Date: 18 Nov 2012 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 20 Forever
More please!
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2012 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 20 Forever
Great story!!! I loved the instant pull she and Edward felt for each other.
Author's Response: Thank you xx
Date: 21 Jul 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 19 Battle
idk if its the site or what but a couple chapters arent readable towards the end
Date: 11 Jul 2012 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 20 Forever
I really enjoyed reading your story and look forward to reading more in the future. Always love Edward and Bella together forever.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the reviews. I like B&E together forever too, we're all romantic's at heart.
Date: 11 Jul 2012 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 19 Battle
Glad Jacob got what was coming to him! Too bad he had to bite Bella's father first, but at least he has a home with his daughter and son-in-law. If that doesn't work out, he can always hang out with the rest of the werewolves. Bella better make it back to Edward. That was a close thing, with Jacob breaking her neck to get even with Edward.
Date: 11 Jul 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 18 Surprises
Well of course they got married, no one denys Alice an occaision! Bella's sincereity finally got throught to her father. Now, if she can just get back to Edward in one piece!
Date: 11 Jul 2012 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 17 Parting
I'm not enjoying Jacob forcing himself on Bella, any more than she is. I onloy hope Edward can rescue her somehow, before Jacob rapes her!
Date: 11 Jul 2012 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 16 Visitors
No two ways about it, that is damn hot! Too bad they have to turn their attention to the wolf problem. It doesn't make for a very happy holiday season!
Date: 11 Jul 2012 5:23 AM Title: **Christmas Desire**
A very merry Christmas, indeed! Edward is besotted with his Isabella, and she with her vampire. I have a hunch the traitor is Tyler Crowley. That's why Edward couldn't find him in the stables. He's hiding and hatching nefarious plots!
Date: 11 Jul 2012 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 14 Impasse
I believe that big fried breakfast as set out on a sideboard, and kept hot in chafing dishes. Very British, I think. Bella is fast learning her power over Edward and so they will have a few arguements.
Date: 11 Jul 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 13 Revelations
Didn't take Bella long to decide she wanted all of Edward, no matter what he was. Brave girl and hopelessly in love with him forever!
Date: 11 Jul 2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 12 Wolves
This pack of werewolves is sure different than those we usually read about. Jacob should have listened to thepart of his father's conversation where he said"if it's not too late".
Date: 11 Jul 2012 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 11 Erotica
Damn right it warmed me, and this is not good, it's been 100 degrees again today! I kind of hated that Edward bit her just then. There will be hell to pay now!
Date: 11 Jul 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 10 Awakening
Your research into sexual synonyms was very interesting. Some of those terms I've read before, others, not so much. So, Edward has a spy in his home, and one who wishes him ill. That can't be good, IO hope his family comes to help him if need be. He seems to be doing okay with Bella all on his own.
Date: 11 Jul 2012 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 9 Forceful
Well, now that Edward has taken Bella's innocence, I guess that Jacob is out of luck with his plan to make her a wolf. That will probably upset him no end. I think Edward has developed feelings for his beautiful captive, too.
Date: 11 Jul 2012 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 8 Memories
I see that not only is Edward is different , but so are the wolves. They seem to be more traditional werewolves in your story.
Date: 11 Jul 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
I am kind of surprised that Edward hasn't yet hypnotized Bella into accepting him. Maybe his pride won't allow it? She sure finds herself drawn to him without that being necessary, so far.
Date: 10 Jul 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 6 Conform
It would serve him right to fall in love with this girl he plans to hold against her will. Then she would have the upper hand!
Date: 10 Jul 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
Looks like Edward has managed to wipe Swan's memory clean of Jacob. This ought to be really interesting. Charles Swan is home, his daughter is missing and he no longer recognizes his apprentice. Of course, Jacob, being a wolf should have no trouble following Bella's scent, if he can pick it up.
Date: 10 Jul 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 4 Curiosity
I see where this is leading now. Jacob has staked his claim and wants Isabella for his wolf bride. Edward seeing her face in her father's thoughts, wants her too. This can only lead to a fight, perhaps to the death.
Date: 10 Jul 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 3 Feelings
Jacob must be thrilled with what he got away with, and Isabella has discovered what her body can feel . I'm thinking maybe Cullen was checking her out from the treeline, maybe? Since her father is imprisoned at the manor house, maybe he thought of his home, and that gave the vampire directions?
Date: 10 Jul 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
It seems his daughter has saved Charles Swan's life, for the moment.
Date: 10 Jul 2012 11:00 PM Title: Arrival
A very traditional vampire, how unusual for Edward to be more Dracula than sparkly. He's sure different to read, I think I'll enjoy this story. He's a selfish monster, I must say, but not totally evil I think!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 6 Conform
it is very similar to Beauty and the Beast except more grown up
Author's Response:
Yes I was going for Beauty and the Beast/ Wuthering Heights (with lemons) combo.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
is he really evil?
Author's Response:
You'll have to keep reading to find out, **cue evil laugh** mwah ha ha
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 4 Curiosity
that is a bold Bella
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2012 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
is this kinda like beauty and the beast?
Date: 22 Feb 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 20 Forever
I love it! What a wonderful story. I love knowing those moments in time and what they plan on doing next. They seem to have a wonderful life together. I am glad Edward and Charlie came to a truce and Chrlie found someone to share the rest of his life with. I just love it all!!! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed and you've taken the time to review...you've had a busy afternoon and I appreciate it very much.
Date: 22 Feb 2012 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 19 Battle
I really thought a vampire would have to save Charlie and he would be one of them. I didn't think Jacob would bite him. Jacob became crazy. It is sad he thought that if he couldn't have her no one could. That tells me he didn't love her. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 22 Feb 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 18 Surprises
Wow...they are married! I love it! Jacob would have been so mad if he knew that before he left. I am glad Charlie realized she has to live her life just like he got to live his. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 22 Feb 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 17 Parting
I had a feeling they were set up. I am so nervous for them. Jacob has to delt with. I don't like what he is trying to do to Bella, but I love how Bella is fighting back. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 22 Feb 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 16 Visitors
I was a little worried about Alice when she showed up. I hope and Bella will become friends and Bella isn't always a little afraid of her. Now it makes sense that Crowley was not around the stable. I love that Bella and Edward are protecting the other even before Bella is changed. I also like that he can feed from her. That is so intimate. Great job...thanks!
Date: 22 Feb 2012 6:37 PM Title: **Christmas Desire**
Sounds like a perfect Christmas to me! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 22 Feb 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 14 Impasse
I love these two! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 22 Feb 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 13 Revelations
I am glad they talked and got everything out in the open. I am sure Jacob is going to have something to say about their happily ever after though. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 22 Feb 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 12 Wolves
Very interesting. I like the story behind the warewolves, nice twist! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 22 Feb 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 11 Erotica
Awesome chapter! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
This has got to be one of my favourite chapters to write....wonder why? ;)
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 9 Forceful
I'm sorry, but if hubs referred to my orbit like that, especially in "dirty" moments, I would laugh till I peed myself, then be angry at him for ruining the mood. Goo! Bleck! Thanks for the research time, people from way back intrigue me with the language!
Annie B
Date: 21 Jan 2012 9:34 AM Title: Arrival
I love this story, you are such a fantastic writer.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 20 Forever
loved it! thanks!
gonna check out some more of your writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you, my pleasure, hope you enjoy the rest.xx
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 17 Parting
i am truly surprised that edward didntnthink it was a trap
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2012 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 11 Erotica
oh yummy!
Author's Response:
YEP! This was one of my favourite chapters to write, loved researching victorian erotica....it's made me more of a perve!!
Date: 09 Jan 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 20 Forever
I am sooooo happy that things have worked out for them. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. I have truly enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response:
Absolutly my pleasure, I loved writing it. xxxx
Date: 09 Jan 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 19 Battle
OMGosh!!!!!! I can not believe that Charlie just went charging into that battle. WOW!!!!!! He really did love his daughter. I am hoping that Bella will be ok. How is it going to work with a werewolf and 2 vampires living together. And one of the vampires is a new born. That could get very interested.
Date: 09 Jan 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 18 Surprises
OMGosh!!!!!! Their wedding did sound beautiful. I am sooooo glad that Charlie is letting her go. But what can she do????? There is no way that she can get there in time to help with any thing. I am sad that this story only has 2 chapters left. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.
Date: 09 Jan 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 17 Parting
I am surprised that Edward did not make sure that she got to her father safely. I am still wondering why Edward and Alice let her go by herself. What is Crowley's story??? Is all of this because Edward had his horse beat???
Date: 09 Jan 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 16 Visitors
Love how Alice and Whitlock came in. lol. I figured that Edward not hearing peoples thoughts had something to do with being with Bella. Ok, I know that Edward is not drinking to much from Bella because she is not weak when he gets through. Is it enough for him to keep his strength up??? Will Bella be able to drop the sheild that she has over Edward before he fights the wolfves? Especially since she was not aware that she is doing it.
Date: 09 Jan 2012 12:39 AM Title: **Christmas Desire**
Love how you have included the Cheney's in this chapter. I hope Bella does get to see her father again before she is changed. At least to say goodbye of some sort.
Date: 09 Jan 2012 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 14 Impasse
What will they do, what will they do??? I am thinking a compromise is in the near future.
Date: 07 Jan 2012 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 20 Forever
I loved the story and loved the ending. They have lived happily for a long time. Everyday they are ore in love with eachother, enjoy each other's company and keep wanting more.
They've seen those they loved leave, thankful for the happy lives they lived.
Now a new life in a new world. The only thing they need is each other.
Thanks for sharing this lovely story with us!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your continued support, I did love writing it, think I will miss it. xx
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2012 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 20 Forever
Great story! Looking forward to reading your next one!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks ;0) xx
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2012 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 20 Forever
even as I am sad to see this story end, I am so glad you wrote it an shared it with all of us. It was a very unique story, set back in the days of castles an horse and buggy. it had love, lust, drama, all the things that make-up a great story. the lemons were great and gave just enough spice. thank you for sharing!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, really glad you enjoyed xx
Date: 07 Jan 2012 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 20 Forever
Thank you for a wonderful ride! Look forward to your new story, till then, once again thank you for sharing your story! ~ Cheri
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed xx
Date: 07 Jan 2012 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 20 Forever
I enjoyed your story and your regular updates was a nice change from other authors.
Author's Response:
Thanks glad to hear you enjoyed it and appreciated the regularity. ;0)
Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 20 Forever
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it! I will be working on Sinful shortly :)
Author's Response:
;0) Thanks hun xx
Date: 06 Jan 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 20 Forever
thanks for the update.. i am sad to see it's over. i loved it a lot!!! thanks for the great story.
Author's Response:
My pleasure. xx
Date: 06 Jan 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 20 Forever
Loved it.
Author's Response:
Thank you xx
Date: 06 Jan 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 19 Battle
Charlie there sure will put a damper on things ;)
Author's Response:
Ha, Charlie and Jacob do like to spoil Bella's fun don't they!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2012 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 19 Battle
Amazing chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you xx
Date: 05 Jan 2012 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 19 Battle
It was an intense battle, one that could have been prevented. Sadly Jacob lied and tricked his tribe and it cost him his life.
Bella as a human had impressive talents and gifts, as a vampire they will be even more. We just have to wait for her to wake up.
As for Crowley, he got what he deserved.
Author's Response:
Great review, appreciated. Thanks. Love the fact that Bella, small and fragile has the ability to protect big strong Edward.
Date: 05 Jan 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 19 Battle
Interesting battle..jacob as always the a- hole...poor charlie. Can't believe it's almost over!
Author's Response:
I can't believe either, I feel a little sad! Thanks for your reviews and support throughout.
Date: 05 Jan 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 19 Battle
Amazing chapter!! Glad that Jacob is dead and that there will be no problems from the pack for it either... Can't wait till the next one... even if it will be the end :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, I've enjoyed the journey. Jacob had to die, there are some pretty strong feelings towards Jacob....not many, good!
Date: 04 Jan 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 19 Battle
Oh wow, that was amazing and intense all at the same time. So happy Jacob is gone! YAY! I never liked him anyway, hehe. ;) Cannot wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much....for EVERY THING! ;0)
Date: 04 Jan 2012 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 19 Battle
awesome chapter! can't wait until the next one
Date: 02 Jan 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 18 Surprises
Loved this... and they are married! :) Can't wait to read the next one! :)
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 18 Surprises
Love it!
Date: 31 Dec 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 18 Surprises
OH SNAP! They are married?! YAY! I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Date: 30 Dec 2011 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 18 Surprises
Love it love it love it! <3
Date: 30 Dec 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 18 Surprises
Whoo Hoo they got married. Thank you Charlie for letting her go to her husband. Hopefully she can make it to Edward before Jacob and his pack of dogs does.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 18 Surprises
Finally her father listened to her, but I don't think it is safe for her to return to Edward just yet. The fight will be brutal, she will be in the middle. Waiting for more.....:)
Date: 30 Dec 2011 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 18 Surprises
You sly devil! Glad Charlie saw the light you said he would! She is safer with though for right now! Ed is so HOT!
Date: 30 Dec 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 18 Surprises
Good to find out they married, a bit sad we all missed it. But it was what Bella likes, so it was more than okay.
Charles loves his daughter, it wasn't easy but he realized what she needs, loves and wants...
Happy New Year!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2011 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 18 Surprises
Bella is just going to get in the way, is she not? How can Edward fight and protect her at the same time? I am ready for the fight. I want the pack of werewolves to be decimated! Of course, I also want Jacob dead. I kinda think that I would like Bella to do that after she is turned into a vampire. That would be fun. Just rambling....
Author's Response:
Very perceptive, all will be revealled next week, must say I'm anxious at releasing the last two chapters. Thanks for your reviews very much appreciated, til next week... Happy New Year
Date: 29 Dec 2011 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 14 Impasse
I should have seen that coming. Of course there would be a condition. How is Edward going to pull this off, unless he just does it without her consent. But he would like her to willingly want the change.
If he lets her see her father then that would cause all kinds of problems, right? Oh things are getting more complicated, and the wolves will be descending soon. I just love your story so much!
I hope you enjoyed your holiday, and I wish you a Happy New Year too! =) Kelly
Author's Response:
He's still a very selfish creature and doesn't want to share her, even with her own kin,that's something he is going to have to learn.
Love an enthusiastic review, thanks xMichellex Happy New year to you
Date: 28 Dec 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 17 Parting
Can't wait to read the next one!! :)