[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2018 1:01 PM Title: 58 I Do Times Two
thank you both for sharing this incredibly amazing story with us ;D
Date: 16 Dec 2016 12:40 PM Title: 19 Diving Deep
I'm glad bella stay..
Date: 16 Dec 2016 8:29 AM Title: 18 Nudger Strikes Again
Where is Alice.
Date: 16 Dec 2016 1:51 AM Title: 17 Course Correction
Oh my god.. It's not just quick shark attack. It's like a battle.. And bella lose
Date: 15 Dec 2016 10:15 PM Title: 16 If You Only Knew
"You're gonna eat those words and I'm gonna enjoy every single bite."
I'm with you Lee
Date: 15 Dec 2016 11:16 AM Title: 14 Egg McMuffin
Oh masen.. :-$
Date: 15 Dec 2016 8:52 AM Title: 13 Can't Touch This
I enjoy every word.
And i Google sea creatures
Date: 15 Dec 2016 5:53 AM Title: 12 Friggen Epic
I almost forgot about esme
Date: 15 Dec 2016 12:39 AM Title: 10 Wanna Skiff With Me?
“Failure is giving up in the face of adversity...
Date: 08 Oct 2016 9:31 PM Title: 58 I Do Times Two
Suspending a bit of belief never hurt a thing! I loved this story, probably one of the best I've read recently! Thank you so much!
Date: 08 Oct 2016 8:27 PM Title: 57 California Dreamin
It's darling how Edward is enthralled with his little sister! Knowing the way he loves his kapu, I never had a doubt.
Date: 08 Oct 2016 8:32 AM Title: 56 A Fighter and A Queen
They all should get some kind of an award for pulling off the perfect secret wedding!
Date: 08 Oct 2016 7:48 AM Title: 55 Secrets & Societies
Gopher is doing as good a job as the planners of D Day! I can't wait until Lee gets a load of all this! Sweet how much Bella and Edward missedeach othe, too!
Date: 08 Oct 2016 7:07 AM Title: 54 New Addition Old Wounds
That was probably the best Thanksgiving anyone could have, even with the pain Alice caused her sister. I am sure they will work it out!
Date: 08 Oct 2016 12:18 AM Title: 53 With A What
I'm just not real sure why they are keeping this wonderful news a secret !
Date: 07 Oct 2016 11:40 PM Title: 52 Octopus Overlords
Funny how like Lee was sceptical of Bella, Jacob started out the samr way with Edward!
Date: 07 Oct 2016 10:50 PM Title: 51 'Ohana of Characters
Still wish I could meet and get to know all these great people! I love the bonds that tie them together!
Date: 07 Oct 2016 9:52 PM Title: 50 Traditions Old & New
I don't blame Bella one bit for feeling as she did when the shark decided to swim along with Edward and Whit! It was no surprise that Carlisle put a ring on Esme's hand. What was surprising was Lee's reaction to that. Glad Edward reassured her.
Date: 07 Oct 2016 9:07 PM Title: 49 From Predator to Prey
Two things, I really was happy Bella and Edward settled their disagreement. The year-end tradition was quite lovely and very touching!
Date: 07 Oct 2016 8:19 AM Title: 47 Say Cheese
Unexpected events aside, that really couldn't have gone much better! What a difference in attitude, compared to how she started this journey!
Date: 07 Oct 2016 7:34 AM Title: 46 Tshirts & Talks
Great, great chapter!
Date: 07 Oct 2016 6:42 AM Title: 45 Decisions Are Made
Talk about progress! It looks like they have the best of futures before them, full of work and love and family!
Date: 06 Oct 2016 8:56 PM Title: 44 In Tandem
They make the best team together, plus being part of the bigger team! I always knew Bella was smart but that was a sure sign.
Date: 06 Oct 2016 8:12 PM Title: 43 Holding On & Letting Go
Big decision and a flurry of activity. This should be an eye opening trip on the boat, with Alice and Lizzy. Loved Carlisle's talk with Edward and Whit.
Date: 06 Oct 2016 8:56 AM Title: 42 Got Lucky
It could only happen with this couple and this family!
Date: 06 Oct 2016 8:25 AM Title: 41 End of the Line
Hallelujah! I just knew they would be wonderful together, not perfect, but wonderful! Thanks to a storm, they are exactly where they should be!
Date: 06 Oct 2016 7:45 AM Title: 40 Doubt vs Desire
Truly amazing , every single one of these people. It's so neat to read about how they interact with one another! I'm excited to see if Esme's wisdom works on him like I think it will!
Date: 06 Oct 2016 7:03 AM Title: 39 Trapped In A Rip Tide
I guess learning how to have a relationship is a slow, painful process for Edward. If he keeps not making the same mistake twice I suppose he'll make it!
Date: 06 Oct 2016 12:53 AM Title: 38 Confession & Contrition
The first thing that came to mind reading this was thak God, maybe they can all begin to get along!
Date: 06 Oct 2016 12:04 AM Title: 37 Tsunami of Emotion
I hope Alice's dream wasn't anomen of things to come! As for the rest, I loved this whole chapter!
Date: 05 Oct 2016 11:06 PM Title: 36 Mermaids & Moonlight Kisses
I just bet Lee wanted to strangle Alice for hurting both her brothers! That little brat must be half crazy to say what she did! I felt especially bad for Whit, then Bella and Edward.
Date: 05 Oct 2016 10:20 PM Title: 35 Little Sister, Big Annoyance
Except for Alice being the fly in the ointment, the team is getting even better than they were to begin with! They are a great bunch of people and it would be fun to know them in real life!
Date: 05 Oct 2016 7:20 PM Title: 34 What Do I Stand For
I suppose it was inevitable that it would come to this. Alice has a lot to work through and better get started if there's any hope for her and Whit. It's bound to be tough for all of them, really.
Date: 05 Oct 2016 7:56 AM Title: 33 Thumper Owns All Horns
I'll bet Esme is thrilled to have Carlisle back with her! There seems to be a bit of hope for Alice and Edward, if she keeps trying, that is.
Date: 05 Oct 2016 7:06 AM Title: 32 Right Thing Hurts
Good for Whit, he deserves it and I'm glad Alice was brave enough to stay!
Date: 05 Oct 2016 6:39 AM Title: 31 Rewards of Trusting
Looks like Gopher is gaining ground with Edward. His plan pointed out something Mase hadn't thought about. Now we just have to work some more on Alice.
Date: 04 Oct 2016 7:48 AM Title: 30 Along Came Thumper
This was just a great chapter, for all of them!
Date: 04 Oct 2016 6:55 AM Title: 29 Reunited
Can't imagine what Alicw will think when she sees her sister go into the water.
Date: 04 Oct 2016 6:13 AM Title: 28 Change of Plans
I'm glad Alice has decided to stay with Bella and the team, for the summer, I hope! Crossing my fingers they all get along!
Date: 03 Oct 2016 8:33 PM Title: 27 Rhombus & Other Surprises
Well, well, things are definitely looking up! Gopher was so thoughtful, giving Edward the means to talk to and see Bella. It was just a bonus that Alice is being a bit nicer to him and cute that Esme got flustered!
Date: 03 Oct 2016 7:19 PM Title: 26 Twinkle Twinkle
It is so great to see the developing relationship between Esme and Carlisle! Edward sleeping in Bella's bed on Galeos was darling! Things may not be perfect, but they sure are good!
Date: 03 Oct 2016 6:31 PM Title: 25 For Love & Tacos
I'm glad Bella and Alice are making up, it just won't be instant. The bond between Whit and Alice is not the same as between Edward and Bella, but it's neat to watch grow. The one forming between Esme and Carlisle is getting pretty interesting, too!
Date: 03 Oct 2016 7:27 AM Title: 24 Band Together
Alice and Whit are special people, I can tell from their connection to each other. I hope he gets her to reconsider and change her feelings about the water. Edward and Bella are almost to the point of mutual declarations, oh joy! They are just so perfect for each other!
Date: 03 Oct 2016 6:43 AM Title: 23 Knock Down Drag Out
At least it wasn't a shark! Too bad it ruined the great time they were experiencing. When Bella's family arrives, I'll maybe have an answer to my theory about her being Whit's dream girl. The icing on the cake would be if there is a spark between Carlisle and Esme.
Date: 02 Oct 2016 8:52 AM Title: 22 Came With Cape
One of the best birthdays I've ever heard of! It's kind of cute that that neither of them think the other is in love yet, how silly!
Date: 02 Oct 2016 8:10 AM Title: 21 Are We There Yet
And a damn fine birthday is seems to be!
Date: 02 Oct 2016 7:02 AM Title: 20 Sunken Shark & Parachute Jump
Doesn't matter what you call it Mr. Masen, you are in love with that woman!
Date: 02 Oct 2016 1:23 AM Title: 19 Diving Deep
Kind of makes me want to sing"Hallelujah"!
Date: 02 Oct 2016 12:49 AM Title: 18 Nudger Strikes Again
Loved the dialogue between Bella and Lee! I can also see Bella is slowly losing her fears!
Date: 02 Oct 2016 12:09 AM Title: 17 Course Correction
The sharing of those painful memories seems to have shifted Edward's thinking to where it should be!
Date: 01 Oct 2016 11:23 PM Title: 16 If You Only Knew
Things are definitely looking up!
Date: 01 Oct 2016 8:24 PM Title: 15 Just A Feeling
I'm impressed with the research you guys put into this story. Of course, I'm also frustrated with Edward's denial, but what can you do?
Date: 01 Oct 2016 8:03 PM Title: 14 Egg McMuffin
Good for her, laying it all out there!
Date: 01 Oct 2016 7:35 PM Title: 13 Can't Touch This
I think Bella handled that just right! Let him stew in his own juice for a while, he'll get the picture!
Date: 01 Oct 2016 6:59 PM Title: 12 Friggen Epic
Don't know what I loved more, Edward sleeping with Bella and Lizzy, or the talk he had with Whit!
Date: 01 Oct 2016 7:36 AM Title: 11 Shattered
I suppose you can't really blame Edward for getting the wrong impession of the friendship between Whit and Bella. I just wish he was a bit smarter than that.
Date: 01 Oct 2016 12:52 AM Title: 10 Wanna Skiff With Me?
It won't happen too fast, but I can picture Bella easing into looking at sharks in the water. Things are going smoothly, so far.
Date: 01 Oct 2016 12:21 AM Title: 9 Tempest In Me
I think they both are swimming against the tide, trying to fight this pull bringing them together.
Date: 30 Sep 2016 8:13 PM Title: 8 Do You See
THE MORE i READ, THE MORE i LOVE THIS!
Date: 30 Sep 2016 7:42 PM Title: 7 To Be Or Not
I am curious as to why Bella falls asleep with the light on. I also think Whit is right in what he told Edward.
Date: 30 Sep 2016 7:10 PM Title: 6 Hot & Cold
The more I learn about these two, the better I li9ke them! I'm not worried that Bella may be Whit's dream girl, I have a hunch it's Alice he's dreaming of!
Date: 30 Sep 2016 7:20 AM Title: 5 Another Side
The more they are together the more I like how they get along! It kind of looks like the team will accept Bella fairly quickly, also.
Date: 30 Sep 2016 1:15 AM Title: 4 Confuse Me Mister
Wonder how long it will take for either of them to figure it out? This is a good story, I can tell already!
Date: 29 Sep 2016 11:51 PM Title: 3 Let Me Introduce Myself
Maybe there is hope for them to get along okay after all!
Date: 29 Sep 2016 11:31 PM Title: 2 Change My World
There sure seems to be an instant attraction between Bella and Masen!
Date: 29 Sep 2016 7:48 PM Title: 1 Intro
Thanks for the introduction, they sound like fascinating characters!
Date: 11 Sep 2016 12:30 AM Title: 58 I Do Times Two
I'm so sad to see the end of this story. It's a great story and I couldn't stop reading! Loved the characters, challenges and the love they all had for each other.
Definitely going to bookmark as I will have read it again!
Thank you for sharing!
Date: 29 Jun 2016 10:09 PM Title: 58 I Do Times Two
Truly awesome and amazing story, thank you.....😁
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2016 4:07 AM Title: 54 New Addition Old Wounds
Wow! Normally Mase is the one with the bad reactions that make me smack my head. But Esme and Carlisle doing that without letting the kids know first... To me, it was wrong. This would have been the right time for him to be upset. Esmeralda and Carlise preach about family, yet they didn't include them at that time? Seems weird to me. Kind of disappointed in them.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2016 3:48 AM Title: 58 I Do Times Two
Absolutely enjoyed this story. A great story line with very well developed characters. A lot of laugs, a few watery eye moments, and a lot of fun. A great adventure and fun learning about marine life.
Author's Response:
Thank you! We are so glad you enjoyed the journey :)
Date: 13 May 2016 1:58 PM Title: 58 I Do Times Two
i so loved every word of this. to see bella come out of her shell and realize her fears were real but that she could hurdle over them. i have never ever wanted to bitch slap a character before but this alice omg...i was happy once she let go of everything but man selfish little twit lol
i just love this!
Author's Response:
Bella was absolutely amazing and we loved watching her grow, find her confidence in herself, and become the woman she had always wanted to be :)
LOL We are glad you loved despite your annoyance with Alice. She made some huge mistakes but in the end she came around, growing up and letting go and becoming a better person for it.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2016 5:30 PM Title: 53 With A What
Love it. It is also going to be a little confusing down the line for this baby. Masen is technically the cousin, but is a brother. Bella too is a cousin, but a cousin. LOL
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2016 5:03 PM Title: 52 Octopus Overlords
Glad that Jacob and Masen can get along with each other!
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2016 12:11 AM Title: 51 'Ohana of Characters
Awe!
So why does Whit get such expensive gifts, like a gopro, and Gopher gets a dvd?
Author's Response:
LOL Because Gopher never asks for anythign expensive. He wants DVDs and comics and considers them way more valuable than a gopro.
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2016 11:34 PM Title: 50 Traditions Old & New
Yea! Everyone is in love and happy, and making progress!
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2016 11:04 PM Title: 49 From Predator to Prey
WoW!!! The season is over. I feel like I need a long lap, like it was me out there on the boat! Love it!
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2016 9:24 PM Title: 48 The Iceman Cometh
That was a perfect proposal from Mase! As soon as he slipped it on her finger, I knew where we were headed. Giggle!
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2016 5:47 PM Title: 47 Say Cheese
Love it!!! I love how the team is together for missions. Gopher is the heart of this time, IMO. He is all about protecting his family, just like they all are, but to me, he is different.
Author's Response:
We agree. Gopher is invested in the overall health of the family, both on and off the boat. There's no separation for him because he's already looking at how things will affect them later on where the trio fully separates on and off the boat.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2016 5:07 PM Title: 46 Tshirts & Talks
Great Chapter. I really like the progress that both Alice and Bella area making. Heck, Mase too!
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2016 4:26 AM Title: 58 I Do Times Two
Wonderful end to a superb story. Thank you for writing and sharing with all of us.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and letting us know you enjoyed. Also, we love the typewriter. :)
Date: 09 May 2016 3:51 AM Title: 57 California Dreamin
Love seeing E with the baby. Too cute
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2016 10:48 PM Title: 5 Another Side
Awesome job.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2016 10:29 PM Title: 4 Confuse Me Mister
Wonderful
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2016 9:49 PM Title: 3 Let Me Introduce Myself
Wonderful
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2016 9:12 PM Title: 2 Change My World
Awesome
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2016 9:09 PM Title: 1 Intro
Awesome start I love it.
Date: 07 May 2016 4:03 PM Title: 58 I Do Times Two
Sad to say goodbye to these beautiful characters but you gave them an amazing ending. Definitely a story that will stay with me forever. Thank you. XOXO,Cheri
Author's Response:
Thank you!! We are so glad you enjoyed :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 7:08 PM Title: 43 Holding On & Letting Go
Great chapter. Excited for Esme. She will have a wonderful time!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 1:52 AM Title: 42 Got Lucky
ok, I am beyond grossed out. Enough with the nosy people. There are not two people in Bella and Edward's relationship, there are at least 5. Seriously, Whit, Lee, and Esme need to back the hell off. It's not normal or healthy for people to be that involved in someone else's relationship. Even being best friends/family. It is getting to the point where it really is warring on me.
Author's Response:
Every family is different. This one just happens to be an open book. It works for them. Doesn't matter that it might not work for many others, the important part is it works for them.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 1:26 AM Title: 41 End of the Line
Awe. And ah! And EEEEE! And squeal!!!
Author's Response:
I think this is our first review of just sounds. LOL Glad you enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 12:54 AM Title: 40 Doubt vs Desire
Ouch! A rough chapter. But hopefully, it will put things on the right path!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 12:21 AM Title: 39 Trapped In A Rip Tide
WOW! Edward went for a ride on the Alice train! But, saved it in the end. I know there will be a lot of work ahead of him to fix it, but it's a start.
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 10:50 PM Title: 38 Confession & Contrition
Well, she is making amends. Let's hope, for the sake of Whit, Bella, and the entire family, that she truly does see what she did wrong.
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 5:47 PM Title: 37 Tsunami of Emotion
So happy for Guppy. She made great progress today!
That damn line!!!
If it wouldn't crush Whit, I would say that Alice needs to go away, FOREVER!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 4:53 PM Title: 36 Mermaids & Moonlight Kisses
AWE! Mase & Guppy are so cute. Go Whit! Glad that he has finally hit his limit with Alice. She is toxic, and needs to go!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 1:44 PM Title: 35 Little Sister, Big Annoyance
Dang! Everyone thinks it's their right to be all involved in Mase & Guppy's relationship! It's not happening o me, yet I am annoyed as hell.
Don't think Alice has hit rock bottom yet.
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 1:09 PM Title: 34 What Do I Stand For
Yea!!!! Bella is going to finally put Alice in her place. I hope she does it before Alice announces her own decision.
Glad to see Mase & Guppy making some advancements! ;)
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 2:25 AM Title: 33 Thumper Owns All Horns
Mase, don't do it. Don't let Alice off of the hook! Her actions deserve MAJOR consequences!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 1:51 AM Title: 32 Right Thing Hurts
Thumper took that a lot better than I thought she would.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2016 5:39 PM Title: 31 Rewards of Trusting
Good progress with Alice. Love that Gopher stepped in before Mase blew his lid.
It is good to see Mase relaxing a bit more.
Still think that Lee needs to learn to mind her own business more. She is always forcing her self into Mase's business. I know she means well, but UHG, it sure is tiring.