[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2014 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Plz update soon .Dont level us hanging :( :))
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 24
STUPID!!!! Stupid, stupid boy!!!!! Ugh so mad, are these fictional characters. I want to find this guy and kill him. Her father is DYING and he's telling her he's in love with someone else. Lie or no lie this guy is shit. I still love Edward ya know cause he's Edward but damn, what a stupid boy.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 22
OMG!!! If this is the reason he left her then he does not deserve her!!!! And to leave her just before her father dies, there better be more i'm missing here.
Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 52
what is up with this newton thing?
Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 51
more answers so i can like bella
Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 50
answers i so want to understand bella
Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 48
no we want answers from you bella not ed!
Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 47
can we please get to it?
Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 45
hummm intersting reaction...
Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 44
i think i will pout i am not getting what i want..
Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 43
not that easy ed not that easy... i want bella's story spill!!!!!
Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 42
oh yes let's go bella i want to hear
Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 41
0h jake the forever protector
Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 39
ed you are making me jump to conclusions stop it
Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 38
wow this is really f-ed up!!!
Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 36
huh he already told her.
Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 35
okay bella i still don't see why you would become the town ho!!
Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 34
okay i like jacob and that is saying a lot!!
Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 32
damn it go talk to her
Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 31
boy you sure know how to get the reader jumping to conclusions!!! arghh!! ed you are driving me CRAZY
Date: 06 Jan 2012 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 30
so she went crazy? ahhhh tell us!!!!
Date: 06 Jan 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 29
what is up with her please please please spill i can't take it!!!! ARGHHHHHH
Date: 06 Jan 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 27
really can't feel for either one of you cause both of their desisons suck ass!!
Date: 06 Jan 2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 26
yeah she is resting she had a kid!
Date: 06 Jan 2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 25
oh she was pregers when he left.. but still? okay maybe this isn't how it seems? you got me jumping to conclusions
Date: 06 Jan 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 24
okay but still how does that make her the way she is now?
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 23
i am still clueless i know why he left and lied but still i don't get bella's actions
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 22
okay so he lied to leave her i still don't get how that turns her into a ho bag
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 20
oh okay that is not a big deal i don't understand
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
what is it!!! spill i can't take it
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
hummm i wonder what that is
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
yeah but you did something to turn her into a ho bag!
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
oh bella.. ed don't like you much
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
oh bella you little horn dog!!
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
oh boy what are you doing bella.. please tell me she isn't a whore... yuk
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 12
yum... love bella and ed
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
ewwww bella not mike!
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
oh you must have really screwed up if you were living with her and then broke up
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
oh lauren you are always so trashy
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
oh ed what did you do?
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
oh boy he was f-ing bella? no way..
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh charlie you are sooo funny
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
okay spill sooner why did they break up?
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh ed what did you do it blow it with bella?
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
four years is no biggie ed...
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
i don't really like drabble but i like you so i will try!
Date: 04 Jan 2012 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 52
This story is fantastic. Although the angst is almost to the level of unbearable, by starting where they recconect pretty much is helpful in balancing it enough to hang on by the tips of my fingernails.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 52
Glad they made it throught the ceremony, but can't wait to see what the reception is like. Still curious what Bella's explanantion is for how she has acted since Edward left her...
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 46
Well, it seems it's out in the open at least with his parents. When is this wedding?
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 43
Well, let's hope he got through to her!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 42
Ha, I love Bella! Can't wait to see what she says next!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 40
No, there aren't any aliens in Forks...only vampires and werewolves!
I hope that Jake answers the door and punches Edward again!
When is the wedding? Isn't the rehearsal the night before usually? Has he been standing out there all day and night?
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 37
Wow, this is so sad. Bella was with Mike and he cheated on her too? I don't believe that she loved him, though....it doesn't add up. I wonder if she really did try to kill herself after Charlie died, though?
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 36
Yeah for Alice! She's not letting him off the hook - and she shouldn't! I just hope that he gets the chance to tell Bella what really happened.
Why didn't Carlisle tell Bella the truth after Charlie died? It was really his fault that Edward saw that file and he could have helped smooth things over if she knew that Edward was only trying to protect her and keep her with her father as long as possible before he died.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 35
Well, that went better than I expected! I didn't think she's talk to him at all. And, Edward isn't dead! I really would love Bella's POV - how accurate is Edward's summation of Bella? Is she a drunk? Is she a druggie? Is she really the big of a slut?
She's obviously filling some very big voids with other vices meant to numb the pain...if it's all true.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 34
Ok, let's hear the real truth again...what stopped him from coming to the funeral and what stopped him from coming back for her?
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 33
Well, well, well. Is Edward finally going to say something worth listening to to Bella? He's opened the door...will she slam it in his face and run away?
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 32
So, are the rumors exaggerated? Has she slept with everyone in town or is that just small town gossip?
I really hope that Bella isn't the slut druggie she appears to be!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 31
Wow, something tells me there are either an awful lot of rumors about Bella going around, or that there are an awful lot of truths that people are ignorning. What is her real story?
Edward does need to talk to her, but my guess is that she won't be very receptive!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 30
What's wrong with Bella? Is she mentally ill? Anxiety? Some fatal condition? Ha, I could go on...
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh no, she's high!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 28
Thanks for that recap, it was good to see how little things changed for Edward and how much they stayed the same. He's been totally disengaged from his former life, his family and his friends. He can't just walk back in and have it not change. Bella has moved on in all sorts of bad ways, but I would love to hear her POV too...
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 27
I don't even know what to say..it's so sad, but you can't go back and change anything...
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 26
Yeah, right, buddy! Go tell her now that you lied and there was nobody else. Tell her you left because her father was dying and you couldn't let her leave him...Tell her at her father's funeral. Yeah, she'll be thrilled. Oh Edward!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 24
Damn, he broke her heart by lying to her, but telling her there was someone else was the worst possible thing he could do. Oh, man, poor Bella!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 23
You can't save somebody who doesn't want to be saved. I just feel badly that Bella had to watch her father die alone. I hope she wasn't alone...
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 22
Edward's is stuck, I can see that. He can't tell Bella because then Charlie will pursue ethics violations against Carlisle. That woud be bad. Poor Edward, Poor Bella, Poor Charlie.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh god, I would be dry heaving too! What is wrong with Bella? Doesn't she feel anything at all for herself? Her own self-esteem or self-worth?
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
They're in love, why did it go so wrong?
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh shit! I dont' want Bella to be the town slut!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, that's pretty hot!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 13
Holy shit, so Bella blows Mike....does he pay her? Oh my gads, please tell me she's not a hooker now. Town slut is one thing, but please tell he he doesn't pay her! Oh, my, how did Bella end up like this!?
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 12
You don't have to respond to my reviews, just keep writing more! So if Edward works in a gallery, he must be an artist or something?
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh crap! Please tell me she's not screwing Mike Newton?! He's married, and he is obviously hanging out with her ex-boyfriend, Jasper! Please tell me Bella isn't the town slut!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 52
try and win her heart again edward
mike is married you are not
fight for her
you have told her everything. you have nothing to lose anymore
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 51
well edward you have lost so much
i would think you wouldn't want to lose anymore time
let things go
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
OH, they moved in together...this sounds like it's going to be really painful for Bella, because he leaves her. Again, I'm dying to know why?
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh my gads, he's sending Lauren to Emmett's house! That's pretty funny!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
Aw, things started out so sweetly between them. What on earth happened?
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh no, so was Bella dating Jazz when he met Alice? Did Bella introduce them on purpose? Can't wait to hear this story!
Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 52
He is going to chase after Bella???
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
So, is this still prom night? So, Charlie must be watching out the window if he knows exactly when to turn the lights on!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, so Edward walked away from Bella...but why? He apparently found fame and success and money in L.A., but why did he leave her?
Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 51
Jasper is a good guy.
Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 50
She has to fall for that
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
Why would Edward have been such a disappointment? I want to know everything, like right now! Ha, I am so impatient but so glad I just found this story and there are lots of chapters to read!
Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 49
She doesnt know what to do how does she feel besides confused??
Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 48
what can he do to make her believe
Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 47
She needed to kick his ass
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 50
wow so profound