Date: 16 Feb 2021 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
So glad that I am reading this as a completed fic.
Thanks for sharing!!
Date: 16 Feb 2021 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice intro and some of it was unexpected.
Thanks for sharing!!
Date: 16 Feb 2021 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good intro. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Date: 16 Feb 2021 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good intro. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Date: 16 Feb 2021 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good intro. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Date: 16 Feb 2021 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good intro. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Date: 16 Feb 2021 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good intro. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Date: 16 Feb 2021 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good intro. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Date: 16 Feb 2021 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good intro. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Thanks for sharing!!!
Date: 16 Feb 2021 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good intro. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Thanks for sharing!!!
Date: 16 Feb 2021 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good intro. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Date: 16 Feb 2021 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good intro. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Date: 16 Feb 2021 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good intro. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Date: 16 Feb 2021 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good intro. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Date: 15 Feb 2021 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good intro. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Date: 15 Feb 2021 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good intro. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Date: 07 Jul 2016 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've started to read this one too in addition on the MatM. Love your historical fics!
Date: 19 Dec 2015 4:30 AM Title: Outtakes Part 1
Loved the story!
Date: 20 Feb 2015 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Unfortunately I can't read this as I am using a kindle and for some reason (maybe you are imposing a font size on the work?) the print is so tiny it can't be read. Even using the text size + button does not change the size of the letters like it does on other stories. :-(
Date: 19 Nov 2014 12:13 AM Title: Outtakes Part 1
amazing story;) i loved the o/t and am looking forwad to f/t as well ;D
Date: 10 Apr 2014 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
Edward is so sweet!
Date: 25 Mar 2014 3:27 AM Title: Epilogue
This has been a fantastic story! I have read many historical novels without one-tenth of the detail you have put into this! Congratulations on anexcellent job. I look forward to readingmore of your work.
Date: 19 Jan 2013 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
So what are edwards uncles plan? To kill off bella once they have a child so edward can rule?
Date: 19 Jan 2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
Why do ppl have to witness the consummation of the wedding?
Date: 19 Jan 2013 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
I wonder why the king and queen never shared chambers
Date: 05 Nov 2012 11:52 AM Title: Outtakes Part 1
great outtakes
Date: 04 Nov 2012 9:42 PM Title: Outtakes Part 1
Thanks loved them.
Date: 03 Nov 2012 10:13 PM Title: Outtakes Part 1
:) love getting to be in edward's mind!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 9:58 PM Title: Outtakes Part 1
It was nice to read a few inside thoughts from the King.
Date: 03 Nov 2012 9:18 PM Title: Outtakes Part 1
I am so glad you are writing outtakes. These were wonderful. I was glad to hear you have your power an heat restored. My family did well this time. In Eastern VA and NC it can be tough when power can be out for a couple weeks after a big storm.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 10
RED FLAG!!!! Anytime James has an "intensity about [him]", things are about to get bad...
Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:03 PM Title: Epilogue
Aw - cute ending!! :-P Any chance of a future-take or two?
Date: 20 Jul 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
What a surprise. Miss Spitfire, Alice took issues imto her own hands and married her true love in the process. Exciting stuff.
Date: 20 Jul 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
Exciting news. It is another great chapter and the thickens. Thanks for writing this story.
Date: 19 Jul 2012 2:25 AM Title: Epilogue
looking forward to more
Date: 18 Jul 2012 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
Another wonderful chapter. It is no wonder I look foward to updates. Keep up the great work. Awesome plot so far.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
So they are married an the deed is done. Greatjob writing it.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
I really liked the end of this chapter. Excellent as ever.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
Interesting chapter as the plot thickens. Edward's gentleness and care are so like the original one. Excellent job catching the essence of Edward Cullen.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
They keep getting better and better.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Another ten. Wonderful first meeting and rescue.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great begining. I look forward to the next chapter.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 7:25 PM Title: Epilogue
I am so sad to see this story which is really a book end. It is beautifully written. It isan incredible love story with lots of excitment. I hope you some future takes to show how the children's lives progess and the King & Queen enjoy or are challlenged by their retirement. I really hate to see it end. Thank you for writing it.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 44
Thank you for such an adventurous piece of historical fiction.
I will miss the Royal Family.
Can't wait to read your out takes.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 43
A bit surprised that Jacob was called in for the birth of prince Edward, but he was as knowledgeable if not more so than the nursemaids.
The Earl of Whitlock is too humble.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 42
Diplomacy played out rather well.
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 44
they are so loving and generous,i love HEA
Date: 15 Jul 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 44
looking forward to more
Date: 15 Jul 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 44
Awwww....these characters own my heart.
Date: 15 Jul 2012 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 44
so much less drama.. thankfully
Date: 13 Jul 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 43
looking forwrad to more
Date: 12 Jul 2012 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 43
I enjoyed this chapter very much. Glad that most of the major drama seems to be behind them. So glad that Edward stepped up & delivered his son & very happy that Jacob stepped up as the best friend & helped.
Date: 09 Jul 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 42
looking forward to more
Date: 08 Jul 2012 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 42
Good Chapter......
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 41
I like the determination Jacob holds on to in order to assert his decision to escort his Queen to the summit.
I will miss this endearing period piece.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 41
looking forward to mroe
Date: 25 Jun 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 41
yay, now I think I am caught up to you
Date: 25 Jun 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 40
what a grewsome way to die, ad we complain about lethal injection or the electric chair
I am curious why does your banner not show Kristen Stewart?
Author's Response:
The reason that I don't have Kristen Stewart as Bella is because from the beginning, Natalie Dormer is how I saw this Bella. It was always her image when I was writing it and when I told my banner maker that she didn't have to edit that picture if she didn't want to, she chose to manip Rob in, but keep her. This is one of the few times I've seen someone other than Kristen as Bella. Thanks for asking, it is truly a unique question.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 40
Not that they didn't deserve every lick of pain....but I cannot even fathom being able to be witness to something like that. *shudders*
Excellent chapter.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 40
er... that last update... somewhat disturbing. Although i did enjoy the story so far an am looking forward to more :D Thanks
Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 40
What a gruesome way to die!
Why did The King hide himself from the execution?
I knew Bella was overlooking the obvious. Her pregnancy was displaying all her usual symptoms.
Poor Charlotte, losing Peterwas unexpected.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 40
Wow, what a chapter. I had a feeling that Isabella was pregnant again and I'm so glad that the war has finally been won. But, my goodness, I'm glad Jane and Alec are gone but what a horrible way to go. That is definately not something I'd ever want to witness!!!
Date: 16 Jun 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 40
Good Chapter......
Date: 16 Jun 2012 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 24
*waves* Hi! I've read 24 chapters in one day and so far it's very addictive. :D One little nit pick i caught in Chapter 24 the phrase, "I am there Queen" should be "I am their Queen" because there is a place and their is belonging. You did get it right in the sentence following this one.
Thanks for the great story so far. :D I hope to finish it tomorrow :D
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 39
Awe, young love blossoming in the nursery between Prince Lee and Lady Tia.
Queen Isabella is right she could use a break from all the caos and destruction.
Could she be pregnant? Is that part of the reason for her exhaustion?
Date: 14 Jun 2012 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 39
Good Chapter....
Date: 14 Jun 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 39
looking forward to more
Date: 13 Jun 2012 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 38
Wonder what they will do with the babe once it is born? I'm glad she took heed in Maria's words.
Excellent chapter!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 38
I know it is ruthless to think this way, but why leave an heir of Aro alive? Will the stories of the child's parents demise not fester through the years into another disloyal resident wanting revenge against the royal family?
Emily was a brave little girl, well deserving of a hero's honor.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 38
Wow what a great chapter.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 38
Awesome, finally the 3 brothers are no more...time to wrap this war up now
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 38
Good Chapter....
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 38
Yea for Bella and Venessa.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 38
looking forward to mroe
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 38
Fantastic!!!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 38
Great chapter - Riley, huh? Didn't see that. MAy have to reread to refresh my memory
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 37
Things seem to be moving toward the breaking point quickly. I only hope that everyone comes out of this okay. Really love this story
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 37
Maria needs to stay closer to Isabella to maintain the consistency in her visions.
I'm sure it will be Jane that tries to kill the Queen.
Maybe a little more training with Leah is necessary.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 37
Another cliffhanger! Arrrg! Great chapter.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 37
Good Chapter......
Date: 06 Jun 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 37
looking forward to more
Date: 06 Jun 2012 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
I want Rosalie to be the mid-wife!