Date: 25 Dec 2011 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
I just love this story.
Date: 25 Dec 2011 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 25 Dec 2011 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
He is in love with her and his uncle is going to freak out when he finds out he will have no power over Edward anymore.
Author's Response:
They're a lot more zen than that, but when they do figure it out, it wil be a very bad day. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2011 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward is so sweet and protective in this story. How sweet and farce he can be!
Author's Response:
He is protective and its because he knows exactly who could hurt her.
Date: 25 Dec 2011 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 4
Good Chapter....
Date: 25 Dec 2011 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
awww so sweet! they are getting closer and jacob is going farther away from her :) yes!
Author's Response:
I love that you're excited that Jake is back out of the country. thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2011 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
I hope that this is the Edward that is falling in love with Bella and not the scheming asshole who is trying to steal the throne.
Thank you for the update. I hope that you have a wonderful Holiday season.
Author's Response:
thanks for the holiday wishes and the true edward is the one you see now, loving his queen and trying to figure out how he will keep his uncles happy.
Date: 24 Dec 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loving this story so much. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
thank you so much, thanks for the review!
Date: 21 Dec 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 19 Dec 2011 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
So where is Jacob and what will happen when he shows up???? Edward is talking the truth to her right???
Author's Response:
An explosion happens when Jacob arrives, but it will be too little too late. And i promise edward is being genuine.
Date: 19 Dec 2011 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
He likes what he sees and she likes him to and then he saved her
Date: 18 Dec 2011 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
Good Chapter.....
Date: 17 Dec 2011 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
aaaaa!will edward ever stab her in the back?or will he defy aro,for her?udate soon
Author's Response:
he is stuck in a tough spot but i promise that he's being a good guy here. thanks for the review
Date: 17 Dec 2011 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
Realistic! Very good!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2011 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a scalawag......deep down, I see a conscience.
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
You've got really good vision! Thanks for reviewing, I love it when your name pops in my inbox!
Date: 12 Dec 2011 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter
Author's Response:
thank you so much for the review!
Date: 12 Dec 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh wow so now edward is out for himself he wants to know bella as bella not as her majesty update soon
Author's Response:
Edward is being real with her, I promise!
Date: 12 Dec 2011 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
Good Chapter.....
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love it, Edward has his own mind. Thank goodness.
Author's Response:
His own mind, and is own heart. Thought it will get harder for him as time progresses.
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is a twist with Aro and Edward being related. Sounds good so far!
Author's Response:
I wanted to play with the character connections and who was on who's side. It keeps you guessing with all the intrigue. Thanks for the reviews!
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2011 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
Of course, we know that Bella will pick Edward over Jacob. It seems that Edward may already be falling for Isabella and she him.
I still cannot wait for the story to take off.
Author's Response:
I'm taking a break from chapter 22 to reply today and its so interesting looking back to the initial reactions...thanks for all the love!
Date: 11 Dec 2011 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
love it so far!! and love the banner how u have the tudors ann and looks like u manip the pics of robs face in with the king henry...and loved hidin eric northman from true blood as cauis!!!
Author's Response:
thanks for the love on the story and the banner. Rosalynn made exactly what i wanted!
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2011 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
This story is shaping up to be quite interesting.
So, I hope you will update more than once a week.
Author's Response:
Sorry, but if i updated it more often, i would run out of banked chapters and then there would be a much longer delay. So far I'm still doing well with keeping up. Thanks for the review!
Date: 11 Dec 2011 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 07 Dec 2011 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good beginning. Interesting plot. update soon.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review, i hope you're enjoying the developments!
Date: 05 Dec 2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds very interesting! <3 Can't wait for more! <3
Author's Response:
thank you so much! It really means a lot that you like this new one.
Date: 05 Dec 2011 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
sounds good so far :)
Author's Response:
thank you for reviewing the first chapter!
Date: 05 Dec 2011 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love it. Glad to see that you already wrote more :) Can't wait!!
Author's Response:
yeah, i have to pre-write or i wont get anything out with any real consistency. thanks for the review!
Date: 05 Dec 2011 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
That sounds wonderful and I cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
I always love seeing reviews from you. Thanks for the suport!
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well, this Edward is a cad. I know he will not always be, but he is a pompus, promiscuous, prick of a man currently.
We already know that Bella is going to fall for his game. I just hope that he falls for her quickly after they are married. Please do not let him cheat. His is not the true King. Isabella has more power than he does or ever will.
Author's Response:
Well, you know by now that many of your wishes and hopes did come true. Sorry it took so long to reply, tanks for all the reviews, they mean so much.
Date: 05 Dec 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
I hope this has a happier ending than King Henry and Anne Boleyn.
Author's Response:
It should definitely be happier, though there will be some heavy drama in the middle. Thanks for the review.
Date: 05 Dec 2011 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
looking forward to seeing where this goes
Author's Response:
thanks so much for all the reviews. they really make me feel great to see the email alert.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so excited! You are good already, but here you are writing a historical piece! I appreciate the extra time and effort it must take, and I can tell yours will be worth it. I just love historical romance's, so thank-you for writing!
I love the beginning of your story, I can't wait to read more! It always cracks me up that the men from around this time period were such big whores. :P Edward is worried about being bored on the way to court, but I'm pretty sure he won't be complaining once he sets eyes on the princess.
I could go on and on, but I'll just say that I'm really looking forward to reading your story. Again, thanks for writing. =) Kelly
Oh and I wanted to mention that the text is really teeny, and is hard to read, it won't size up any bigger. Just thought I'd mention it. Thanks =)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review! Yes, he is a bit of a whore, but its part of his charm. The research is fun and I enjoy playing with the language.
As far as the text issue, I don't have much control, but there is a text +/- button on top that should help that issue.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Boo! Only one chapter so far?! I love it already. Your writing is perfect for the period piece. At least, I imagine it is. Im looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Yes only one chapter, but it will be updating regularly, so there won't be too bad of a wait for the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!