[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2016 4:55 PM Title: Epilogue
Wow!!!! This was one of the best stories I have read on this site. Please tell me the story goes on and who does Heidi plan on taking her revenge on?
Author's Response:
THANK YOU!!!! This review made me smile so much, just knowing that someone had that connection to something I've written, it means alot.
Now, I can answer your question about the story continuing, the sequel, Re-Taken has just posted!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2015 9:29 PM Title: Epilogue
amazing story;) emotions all over the place!!!! i don't understand this epilogue? i think i know that it's meant to be heidi? are you going to write o/t, f/t or a sequel? thanks for sharing it on here for us ;D
Author's Response:
Hi,
SO sorry for not replying, I have only just seen this! The epilogue left it open for people to try and work out who it was. In fact it WAS Heidi. There is a sequel, and I've just posted the first chapter tonight :-)
Date: 12 Jun 2014 2:54 AM Title: Epilogue
This was a great read. I hope to read more of your work on the future.
Thank you for sharing your talent, it's been a pleasure.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words, it has been a pleasure to share this with everyone and hear how much they have loved it.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2014 9:51 PM Title: Epilogue
This truely was such a heart wrenching ending which saddens me of how much she had suffered & endured.... I hope she has her vengence!!!
Author's Response:
THANK YOU! Maybe she will, maybe she won't. I am not ruling out a sequel, there will be an out-take which I have in my head.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2014 1:55 AM Title: The Longest Journey
I can't believe this jouney is comming to an end!! I have truely enjoyed reading this beautifully captivating story!! I will be looking forward to the GRAND FINNALLE!! Untill then...
Author's Response:
Thank you for sticking with me on this, I has been a hard journey for me too and I am proud of the result. Hope you liked the finale.
Date: 29 May 2014 12:48 AM Title: Back Down To Earth
Feels like Aro got off easy. Hope there us more follow up on that whole organization.
Poor Edward, he does need help to cope. Kudos to him for being brave enough to ask.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I suppose it does, but could you imagine him standing trial *shudders*
Date: 21 May 2014 6:37 PM Title: Visting Hours
Love it!! I can't wait for your next update!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!
Date: 17 May 2014 11:06 PM Title: Question Time
Just glad the torture is over. Now let's see Aro pay and Carlisle & Edward reunite.
Date: 16 May 2014 3:44 AM Title: Fight Night Revisted
Pissed, that's what I am.
Date: 11 May 2014 12:18 AM Title: Hell Revisted
This torment is almost unbearable. End the suffering.
Date: 10 May 2014 11:23 PM Title: Hell Revisted
Can't wait until the next chapter!
Date: 08 May 2014 2:33 AM Title: Revenge Is A Dish...
Oh crap Edward. Someone really needs to rescue him. And, it's time to take the whole lot of them down. Please let Bella be alive.
Author's Response:
I have it all in hand, but I cannot gurantee any quick fixes here. Remember, he is on the run...
Date: 04 May 2014 12:34 PM Title: The Storm
Nah, you don't need to run away...yet. Lol.
We knew bad stuff was coming. What was really frustrating was why didn't Carlisle tell him Bella was alive. That would have stopped him from running. Clearly his family didn't understand his trama. Maybe they didn't want to or maybe they really thought he was capable of hurting her. Now Edward is left, scared, panicked, incredible pain at his loss. I fear revenge will be his only focus and not care about dying himself.
Im curious who he called for help, Laurant??
Author's Response:
PHEW!! I was slightly worried to be honest. The reason Carlisle didn't tell him is... ARGGH just realised, I can't say too many plot spoilers if I do.
Who was he calling? That will be revealed on Wednesday in the udpate. :-)
Thanks for reading and reviewing x x
Date: 03 May 2014 7:54 PM Title: The Storm
When is the next chapter????? This chapter is good!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! Updates will be Wednesday and Saturdays until we are done :-)
Date: 02 May 2014 4:46 PM Title: The Calm Before
I keep waiting for the next bad thing to happen while praying it doesn't.
Author's Response:
Well, things are gonna get rocky from tommorows update. So yeah things are gonna get bad dependant on how you look at it. :-)
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2014 6:43 PM Title: Dreams & Nightmares
Finally at last they came together as 1!!! I have loved reading this story & can't wait 4 next update....
Date: 23 Apr 2014 7:48 PM Title: Runaway
Poor Edward. Can't live the test if your life afraid. Fight!!
Date: 20 Apr 2014 9:56 PM Title: This Night Is Ours
I see more trama before this ends but, Edward needs to take a stand and work with the authorities and take this bastard down. Or else, he will never be whole. Nor could he accept being worthy if Bella.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2014 8:30 PM Title: Getting By
This has truely been such an intriging story!! I look forward to the next update soon. Thanks for all ur hard work.
Author's Response:
Thank you SO much! I cannot tell you how much it means to read this. The update will be soon and I hope not to dissapoint.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 7:23 AM Title: Getting By
Humm, confused. I want them to be ok but can't hide the feeling something bad is coming.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading... I must admit that I would think the same if I was reading :-) I am so evil not revealing anything aren't I? Lou x
Date: 06 Apr 2014 12:14 AM Title: Absence Makes
Too short. I feel like something bad is gonna happen. Like Edward said, too quiet.
Author's Response:
I am debating making the next chapter longer, so hopefully that will be better. Thanks for reading, and yes Edward is quite right.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2014 6:40 AM Title: Night Visitor
Thanks again 4 all ur hard work & dedication in writting this amazingly wonderfully well written story!! can't wait for next update!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2014 7:59 AM Title: Night Visitor
Thanks good chapter
Date: 01 Jan 2014 9:25 PM Title: Night Visitor
Wheeew! I can only imagine how heavy the weight of the world feels on Edwards shoulders. This is so intense! Love it.
Date: 01 Jan 2014 9:23 PM Title: Night Visitor
Why doesn't Edwstd go to the police or FBI. Now that it's known he is stl alive it's time he retaliated "correctly." If only to sAbe his family & Bella.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:48 AM Title: Questions, Questions
Ah! My heart skipped a beat! Dont leave us hanging in suspense too long. What a cliffie.
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2013 9:27 AM Title: Questions, Questions
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2013 10:33 PM Title: Onward & Updward
Thanks for updating this beautifully captivating story!! Have a very merry christmas!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:48 AM Title: Onward & Updward
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2013 9:05 AM Title: Moving Forward
Thanks good chapter
Date: 09 Dec 2013 11:19 AM Title: Moving Forward
Great chspter. How dies one recover from this. He will never be whole while those people are still around. Why aren't tegu protecting Bella? Or do those people really think he is dead? It woukd be good to hear their point if view?
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2013 3:56 AM Title: Moving Forward
Great chapter. My heart breaks for Edward. I cant imagine the terror of always looking over your shoulder.
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2013 6:09 PM Title: Prologue
From the lurker: Sorry I said Paul instead of Sam see? this is why I lurk
A really great chapter I'm glad Bella didn't have sex with Aro not that it would matter also I'm guessing the Reily comment is a jab at Edward's infidelity and possible Fatherhood With another woman while he and Bella are childless so if she did do Reily it pales in comparsion to his actions.So that's it I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hello lurker! I really don't mind people lurking, but it's also nice to hear from you too. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Nope, Bella did NOT sleep with Aro she wouldn't have dreamed of it. Riley, well I am keeping that under my hat for now...
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2013 7:23 AM Title: Picking Up The Pieces
Thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing x x x x
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2013 11:15 PM Title: Picking Up The Pieces
Thanks for updating again so soooooon & not making it be a long wait!!! Thanks again for the UPDATE
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and sticking with me!
Date: 24 Nov 2013 7:51 PM Title: Picking Up The Pieces
Another intense chapter. I hope by Bella staying on her apartment that she doesn't get taken next. Does Aro know he's alive yet?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Bella is safe... for now... Aro? *Rubs hands evilly* all will be revealed
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2013 1:00 AM Title: Truth Is Out
Thanks for the long last update finnally!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, I am hoping that I will be able to continue with the quicker updates on this. Alot of it is pre written
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2013 5:46 PM Title: Truth Is Out
I normally don't review cause I'm a lurker but this time wow!!
Why did Edward think Bella would be so forgiving he cheated with a married woman and alledgely got her pregnant I say that because if she slept with Edward then who knows who else she slept with?but also he blew his cool when he thought Bella was cheating on him with Paul thus sleeping with aro's tramp of a wife putting the whole family in danger and his comment about her being a one night stand that he was never suppose to see again wow what a great guy huh?
he does not get to accuse Bella of Sh-t or be the victim he caused this nobody else so no poor me for Edward,also since when did Aro's mouth become a bible like he would tell Edward the truth Aro's creepy enough to have bugged her apartment and watched her while she was naked and as for Reily we know that was crap but for him to accuse her trying to get rid of him he sure belives every lie Aro fed him, in the beginning of this mess he had no trust in Bella to begin with an old friend once told me for a person to belive you to be guilty of something then they must be guilty of it first! Well having said this I think it's great story and you are not scum in fact I think you're great also if Bella cheated on him he had it coming after the things he's pulled.I love the story can't wait for the next chapter please hurry!!!
Author's Response:
Hey there!
Thanks so much for not lurking, I know alot ot people do lurk, but you are more than welcome to do that. I am pleased that this chapter helped you step out of the shadows.
Edward is confused, he expected a different reaction to the one he got so that came as a shock to him. There is alot more to come and I have the end of this one in my mind, so I just need to get them there.
Lou x x x
Date: 17 Nov 2013 4:59 PM Title: Truth Is Out
I read this in Fan Fiction. This story has been so good. You deserve awards for it. Yes I want to strangle Edward and now he attacks her with words. Did she sleep with Riley or Aro? She thought he was gone for good but why keep looking if she was replacing him?
Author's Response:
Thanks again x x x
Date: 17 Nov 2013 3:56 AM Title: Truth Is Out
Good chapter. Was hard to be mad at both Bella and Edward for their mistakes. Not the typical love story for sure. Only hope EdwRd can recover.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad that this isn't the typical love story, I wanted this to be different and not the norm. Edward has along way to go yet, but stay with him... and me.
Lou x x
Date: 17 Nov 2013 3:32 AM Title: Truth Is Out
Loved it..Like I said over in FF..this is an excellent story the courage had to have to fight his way back to his family only to be hurt by his only familky and wife... sorry that the guest over there was so rude towards you
Author's Response:
Thanks again x x x
Date: 25 Sep 2013 2:59 AM Title: Homeward Bound
Excellent. Looking forward to seeing him heal.
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2013 9:11 AM Title: Homeward Bound
Thanks good chapter
Date: 10 Sep 2013 6:57 PM Title: Fight To Freedom
Astounding piece! I have to tell you that upon discovering it, I read it straight through to this point! I could not put it down, skipped lunch, and it is now 2:54pm and I stopped only now because I ran out of chapters. I love that you are telling the story in 1st person and Edward is recounting what happened to him for his family. Brilliant! Those two things draw the reader in as if they are on that beach, at that fire with his family. I look forward to more!
Author's Response:
Why thank you! I still get such a thrill when people find this and seem to be loving it. I am grinning like a fool so much right now, hope missing lunch was worth it. I love telling Edward's story he certainly has been through alot. There is more to come, I have the next two chapters heading towards three done. Look forward to hearing what you think to what's to come Lou x x x
Date: 10 Sep 2013 5:25 PM Title: Fight To Freedom
Finally! I hope. But he was close before and it backfired. Was James really trying to kill him, or just make him lose the fight? Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey sweetie!! Well I could answer you but... You know me ;-) Love Lou x x
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2013 9:04 AM Title: Fight To Freedom
Thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, More to come soon x
Date: 19 Aug 2013 6:29 PM Title: Freedom Beckons
Oh Edward, hold on! This is getting so good and exciting! Awesome job!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2013 7:00 AM Title: Return To Hell
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2013 12:49 AM Title: Return To Hell
This story is not showing up under most recent any longer!! It showing u haven't updated since Jan 18th which I know is untrue because u were only at ch 20 not 21!! Many people who are reading this story is not going to realize it has be updated or new chapters have been posted since then PLEASE FIX U PROBALLY HAVE CHANGE DATE 4 IT SHOW UP UNDER MOST RECENT BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSE FIX THIS AWSOME STORY!!! I had to do a search for this story to even check if it had been updated. Thanks 4 all ur hard work!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2012 6:27 PM Title: Moving on
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2012 8:31 PM Title: Moving on
Please,Please don't doubt ur abilities as a writter beacause u truely are a very amazingly gifted writter & u most definately earnered ever bit of 2nd place!!!!!!!! Trust me on this from all of us who voted as ur readers we understand what it takes to write a story!!!! Thanks for all ur hard work & dedication to this story!!! I really appreciate everything u give of yourself to make this poosible!!! I look daily expectantly just for ur next update because that is how much I love reading this story!!! DON'T DOUBT UR ABILITIES AT ALL IN ANY FORM OR FASHION AS A WRITER EVER!!!!!!! I espessially love those such as yours which are very captivating and intriging & have the ability to write long chapters along with an awsome plot/ storyline. I espessially look for that in a writter!!!!
Thanks for everything & yes u truly are an amazing writer don't doubt yourself again because it's true!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2012 10:01 AM Title: What's Up Doc?
Thanks good chapters
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2012 6:57 AM Title: What's Up Doc?
This story truely has captivated & intriged me!!! This truely is an amazingly beautifully well written story!!!! It has kept me looking daily to see if it has been updated. I t would be great if u could update this story more often!! U truely are an amazing writer thanks 4 all ur hard work I really do appreciate it.
smileya987
Author's Response:
OMG - you have seriosly put the biggest smile on my face this morning. I feel bad that I have been a bt of a failure on the updates but am going to try and get a couple of chapters banked so I can keep updating more regularly. If you are on Facebook I have a group over there - you are more than welcome to join just let me know your FB name and I will add you.
I post teasers etc in there, and will also post in there when I update - so hot of the press.
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2012 10:32 AM Title: Fight Night Part Two
Thanks good chapter
Date: 28 Aug 2012 1:42 AM Title: Fight Night Part One
oh .........ugh..
We know he does not die since the prologue he is clearly living.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 12:14 PM Title: Training Day
thanks good chapter
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:22 AM Title: Training Day
Well we know he doesn't die thus the prologue?! So why pack a bag? Funny.
Honestly this hole story is hard in every way. What she said to him is exactly what he did. She knows where he is. Will SHE help him?
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 8:39 PM Title: Meetings & Lies
Thanks good chapter
Date: 21 Jun 2012 10:45 PM Title: Meetings & Lies
I don't know that I believe all that Aro said. He is trying to make Edward defeated and mad. He wants him to fight for something and to what this end is I wonder, if Edward will never get out?
Date: 21 Jun 2012 10:30 PM Title: Tonight's The Night
well, he has to fight and if this was Emmett I would think he had a chance but Edward nope not so much.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 8:01 PM Title: Meetings & Lies
Great update.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 7:59 PM Title: A Night To Remember
this is when they took him.. Yes you did.
Author's Response:
I know, I know, I was looking at this tonight and trying to work out what had happened! Sorry my bad!!
Date: 02 May 2012 1:03 AM Title: Texts & Voicemails
They can use him anyway they see fit. He is a prisoner. So! He screwed Bella over and she did not make him pay this hard. Aro well he is taking his anger out on Edward, wonder what he did to Heidi? Other than aborting the pregnancy.
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2012 10:35 PM Title: Prologue
I'm not sure about bella in this one. I'm probably being far too sympathetic towards edward but I can still see how he believed she was having an affair and she doesn't seem to acknowledge this at all.
great chapter, looking forward to the next one
Author's Response:
He he he! You are like me, a sucker for Edward and can almost forgive him anything! I am so glad that you are enjoying this. There will another update this week too! Thanks for reading and reviewing x x
Date: 04 Feb 2012 7:57 PM Title: Confrontations
Great start, you've got me hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2012 3:00 PM Title: Confrontations
thanks good chapters
Date: 30 Jan 2012 2:10 PM Title: Confrontations
I can't wait to hear about what happened to Edward. It's really good so far.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2012 10:54 PM Title: Prologue
Very interesting beginning! I can't wait to find out why Edward is being held captive and who is holding him. I'm also curious about what he has done that would make Bella not want him back. You have me intrigued!!
Date: 16 Dec 2011 7:40 AM Title: The Morning After
Poor Edward, he has been through so much. Exactly what that is, I'm sure we'll discover as the story progresses. I do hope Bella can stick with him. He really needs her to be strong for the both of them.
Author's Response:
Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes he has been through so much, and that will all be revealed as the story progresses I promise. They actually have both been through alot with this. There will be a seperate story posting which will be BPOV of the events too so that way you will get a balanced view. x xx