[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2016 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
AWESOME!!! story ;) thanks for sharing ;D
Date: 08 Jul 2015 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
It will be a realy good life if Aro doesn't screw it up for them. You wrapped this up quite nicely and it sounds like they all will be happy and together forever!
Date: 08 Jul 2015 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 22
That actually went better than it might have. At least Aro touched no one, so their secrets are safe for the moment. One thing about Aro, he pulls no punches, telling them what will happen if they mess up!
Date: 08 Jul 2015 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 21
I wish Bella felt a bit more confident. This chapter had a lot going on, most amazing being Penny and her power/gift. The older this magical wolf child/vampire hybrid grows, the more amazing she is!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2015 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 23
:) loved this story
Date: 22 Jan 2014 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
So, Penny has a gift similar to her mother and aunt and it only manifested after she drank blood. Maybe Carlisle is correct when he thought the venom healing Claire after the birth was what caused her to get lost in her mind. Whatever the cause, now we just need to know what the bright light was and where Penny and Claire are! Edward will have a stroke if his Bella is stuck in limbo as Claire was!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2014 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 20
:) Congratulations
Date: 10 Jun 2013 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 19
What an extremely strange happening! Sleeping, eating, instant baby! What next? I have my fingers crossed that the pain that made Claire pass out was a second baby, not something horrible! I love your imagination for this story!
Date: 01 Jun 2013 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
Okay, Isle Esme was the perfect place to have the wedding, and I'm tickled Charlie is doing so well and got to give Bella away. Better, too, that Bella gave her sister such a pep talk about Renee's death. Claire's guilt may never completely disappear, but I hope it does. All this sharing of gifts and being able to talk to each other in their heads is really cool! Edward and Bella being happy and in love is the best!
Date: 01 Jun 2013 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well, at least Jake and Claire got things straightened out ! I'm sure when she bared her throat for his kill-bite, that was the proof he needed that she really wasn't responsible for deliberately killing Renee, it just couldn't be helped! The great part was Claire saving Bella and then taking her pain from the change! Their connection is amazing now they can share so much. This is lots better than it could have been!
On another note, congratulations on your happy news! It's wonderful to experience what you are going through, warts and all. You really will kind of forget the painful parts when that little blessing is in your arms! Take real good care of yourself and have a healthy, happy baby, who sleeps throught the night right away ! p.s. Nurse if you can , it's great for you and the baby!
Date: 27 Jan 2013 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
OMG!!! Poor Claire :( Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 25 Jan 2013 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 16
It's bad enough to have drained Renee and bitten Bella to save her from dying, but the crowning blow was Jake's reaction. What in the world will Claire do if she has lost the love of her life, because of her nature? It's not lik she could have resisted, plus Renee would have died anyway! I sure hope Jake can get past this really major happening.
Date: 10 Jan 2013 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great couple of chapter... uh oh the end there sounds not so great for Claire, I am guessing it may have something to do with Italy :)
Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 10 Jan 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
It wasn't very amusing for Claire, but I had to chuckle a bit over the truancy issue. Charlie and Carlisle combined to make a formidable father duo! She more than learned her lesson and that's what they both wanted to happen! What is going to upset the apple cart next, I wonder?
Date: 10 Jan 2013 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 14
Claire is doing real well, the only problem being Leah's nasty attitude. Of course, it didn't help that Jake pulled that little stunt, witholding the truth of their imprinting. That was just a bit stupid, just sayin'! I hope Claire is going to be okay going to school, even if Newto is a total ass!
Date: 14 Nov 2012 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter! Loving the more relaxed Edward :)
-Kate
Date: 08 Nov 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
I get it, bribery is your weapon of choice! Whatever works, I say! This was a really good chapter, as far as moving Edward and Bella's relationship along, goes. Sure surprised me that Renee got as upset as she did over the wedding news. They better watch out she doesn't show up on their doorstep soon! Looking forward to the next two chapters, see you soon!
Date: 16 Oct 2012 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it!!! :)
-Kate
Date: 16 Oct 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
Even though it took a second round, I'm sure glad that Christian is finally dealt with, permanently! Claire is settling in to her new existence nicely, I would say!
Date: 16 Oct 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love your story. Thank you.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
I HAVE TO WRITE YOU A REVIEW IT'S SO YOU KNOW I AM SO HOOKED ON YOUR STORY I REALLY LOVE IT I DON'T KNOW WHY IT TOOK ME SO LONG TO GET TO IT BE MAN AM I EVER GLAD I DID AT LAST GET TO IT. I REALLY LIKE THAT EDWARD HAS OPENED UP TO THE FACT HE AND BELLA CAN DO MORE THEN TOUCH AND KISS BY TOUCH I MEAN HOLDING HANDS NOW THEY HAVE GOTTEN EACH OTHER OFF AND SHOWERED TOGETHER SO HOT I REALLY THOUGHT BELLA WAS GOING TO GIVE EDWARD A BLOW JOB IN THE SHOWER BUT A HAND JOB WAS BETTER BECAUSE THEY ARE BOTH FIRST TIMERS ON EVERYTHING, HOW EVER I THING A BLOW JOB WOULD BE OK BEFORE MARRAGE IN ANYCASE I JUST HAD TO TELL YOU I LOVE CHARLIE'S SECRET ALSO YOUR NEW TWIST OF A SISTER FOR BELLA WAS SO GOOD. YOU LEFT ME WANTING A LOT MORE PLEASE DON'T STOP YOUR STORY AND LEAVE US ALL HANGING LIKE SO MANY PEOPLE DO IT WOULD BE A SHAME TO LEAVE THIS STORY UNFINISHED.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 9
SO I'M GUESSING CLAIRE IS A SHEILD AND THATS WHY SHE IS DOING SO WELL
Date: 29 Sep 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
OH SHIT WHAT IS HE GOING TO DO TO HER? HE HAD TO OF SEEN HER WITH JAKE WILL CHRISTIAN HURT HER OR KIDNAP HER? DAMN I HAVE TO GO TO YOUR NEXT CHAPTER TO FIND OUT WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
I THINK IT'S GREAT JAKE AND CLAIRE ARE IN LOVE BUT I CAN'T HELP THINKING WHO'S SIDE SHE WILL BE ON FIR THE WOLF'S AND THE CULLEN'S GET IN A FIGHT BECAUSE BOTH SISTER'S LOVE A VAMPIRE AND A WOLF IT WILL BUT THEM IN THE MIDDLE WON'T IT?
Date: 29 Sep 2012 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 6
BOY DID THAT EVER FLOOR ME SHE IMPRINTED WITH JAKE AND HE WITH HER WOW. WHAT IF THE BOY FRIEND COMES BACK WHAT THEN? BELLA AND EDWARD HAVE GOT TO KNOW HER SISTER'S BOY FRIEND IS OR WAS A VAMPIRE. I WONDER WHAT BELLA WILL THINK OF JAKE IMPRINTING WITH HER SISTER.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'D ALREADY GUESSED CLAIRE'S BOYFRIEND WAS A VAMPIRE LIKE EDWARD BUT WHAT HAPPENED TO HIM DID HIS VAMPIRE FAMILY STOP HIM FROM COMING BACK TO CLAIRE? DID THEY KILL HIM BECAUSE HE DIDN'T WANT TO LIKE KILLING PEOPLE ANY MORE LIKE THEM?
Date: 29 Sep 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
WHY DO I FEEL LIKE CLARIE ISN'T TELLING THE WHOLE TRUTH ABOUT HER BOYFRIEND
Date: 28 Sep 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
CLAIRE IS CHARLIE'S DAUGHTER ISN'T SHE? HE'S THE ONE PENNY SLEPT WITH WHEN SHE WAS DRUNK.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
This just gets better and better! Claire has amazing control over her bloodlust, Bella's blood didn't bother her much at all. It's not surprising that she wants to drink wolves, though, as she's imprinted on a giant one! It's totally cool that Bella's shield can help with Claire's talent. I'm beginning to see why the Volturi want the Swan girls to be vampires and under their contol, they sure have powers, even as humans! I really liked that Edward and Bella are getting closer to each other, sexually speaking. That shower scene was lovely, and hot and just right! Oh, by the way, I'm real glad to see you're posting chapters again, welcome back!
Date: 19 Sep 2012 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
Dear Charlie, I sure love what a good dad he is! Now that he knows Claire will be alright, he feels better, I'm sure. He still is trying to digest all the supernatural information learned in the last couple of days. He can't quite bring himself to be at ease with the knowledge that both his daughters are in love, let alone with non-humans. Claire's gift is truly amazing, not to mention real handy!
Date: 19 Sep 2012 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
Good things outweigh the bad this chapter,mainly that Christian is dead and burned, and Claire made it through her change okay. Better than okay, she is an amazing newborn! It's so sweet that Jacob still loves and wants her, despite the vampire thing! Good ole Jake, just as long as his imprint is still with him, that's all that matters!
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
wow! Loved the last few chapter... so happy that her change went well and that her and Jake are ok! and that Charlie knows everything now... oh and so much progress for Bella and Edward!!! Can't wait to read more!!!!
-Kate
Date: 12 Jul 2012 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 8
I had a feeling things were going too well. Sure enough, Christian suddenly appears right in the back yard, and Jake just left for patrol. I sure hope this turns out better than I'm afraid it will!
Date: 11 Jul 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
uh oh!!! Can't wait to read more! :)
-Kate
Date: 22 Jun 2012 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
It's good to know for sure that Christian is a vampire. Poor Jake, he must think he's cursed to have both Swan girls involved with vampires!. With him imprinting on Claire, at least he's got to be very sure of his forever this time. That spider thing was cute, and Bella's right, she'll probably be teased about it for a while. Even Edward can't resist, along with a few other things!
Date: 22 Jun 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter!! Can't wait to read more! :)
-Kate
Date: 13 May 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
Now that Jacob and Claire have imprinted on each other, I suppose that means that life will become more difficult for them. Christian probably shows up and throws a monkeywrench into the works! Nobody gets to be this happy this early on. It's cute how Claire caught Edward in Bella's closet, by the way. I'm crossing my fingers that love will run smoothly, and bracing for worse!
Date: 13 May 2012 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
OMG........I just know one of the wolves would imprint on Bella's sister. Didn't see it being Jacob though. How's that going to work........Bella marrying a vampire and sister marrying a wolf? They have to get along now. The 2 humans are blood related ;-)
Date: 29 Apr 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
just found this and I am loving it!!! Can't wait to read more! :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2012 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
I got my answer to my last thought, LOL. She looks like Bella, your banner. Real genius.
Date: 27 Apr 2012 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great cliffhanger.
Date: 25 Apr 2012 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
I knew Christian was a vampire, as soon as Claire told Bella how much he resembled Edward. It's kind of funny that they're both waiting to find out if the other knows what the Cullens are. What's not so funny, is that Jake and Claire have imprinted on each other. Since Christian is the son of Marcus, maybe he's been forced to stay in Volterra. Whatever the reason, he won't be happy to know that his love is now bound to a wolf!
Date: 25 Apr 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ok I was right on some parts. Now big question is where is christian. I also wonder who taught him to drink animal was that a lil foresight I caught.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2012 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 4
I am curious about Bella and Jacobs picture on your banner. Is this their story? Thanks for correcting the chapter too! I was a little scared that it was to easy to kill Vic. BTW always great reading.
Date: 10 Apr 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
My suspicions are confirmed! I was wondering if Claire wasn't somehow related to Charlie and Bella. That's actually pretty nice for Bella to have a sister, and probably Claire is okay with it, too. That description of Christian sure sounds like he's a vampire. These Swan girls must attract them! Yay, that Victoria is dead and Bella knows!
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow I wonder how bella is going to take it when she finds out claire is her half sis. I now think christian has been turned, now i wonder if he will come for her and be able to tell claire the truth. I thought edward was going to take her in shower.
Date: 09 Mar 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love it! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 09 Mar 2012 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
Bella has had an eventful day, helping Claire settle in and offering comfort as she could. Edward kind of surprised her with the ring, but probably no more than she shocked him by eagerly accepting. Big changes are in the wind and I sense that they haven't all shown up yet.
Date: 26 Feb 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait to see what happens when Charlie gets home with Claire. I love the time Edward and Bella spent together. Great job...thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2012 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am so nervous about the secret still. I have been trying a few things in my head. Loving this story so far.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
wow so billy knew. hmm interesting story. I haven't figure out the whole penny thing. I do wonder does claire know who her dad is and told not to tell. I also wonder if alice knows and they are not telling her either. update again.
Date: 25 Feb 2012 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
Typical Cullen thoughtfulness, Esme remodeling Charlie's house to accomodate Claire. Bella still hasn't decided how to deal with this loss, but it got her attention when Billy reacted so strongly to news of Penny's death. Probably a lot of adjustments are in store for all involved. It will be interesting to see what those might be.
Date: 23 Feb 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting. It sounds like Charlie has another daughter. I can't wait for more. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 18 Feb 2012 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ideas are buzzing around in my head! What could Charlie's secret be? I had a brief thought about maybe, Claire is his child, with Penny? It would have been after Bella was born, and Renee was being difficult, and Penny wasn't related by blood, after all. Then, I thought , naw, that's just crazy, must be something else! Can't wait to find out what it really is! Bella at Edward's house for a week, that should be interesting!
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting so far!
Date: 18 Feb 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it looking forward to reading more.